[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am so hook with this story. Thank for another great chapter.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I certainly appreciate the update please do it again, much sooner!
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for this awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow!!! That was wonderful.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Omg unfuckingbelievable
Date: 20 Oct 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you! Just came accross this and enjoyed it very much! Keep up the great work! T
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMG! More please!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ok. I'm creeped out. And Bella doesn't need a man(a figurative term) of his nature, and who would never be faithful to her, no matter how sexy or compelling he is. He will destroy her, break her heart and soul, unless he changes immensely.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow. Guess I was right about his identity.
I absolutely love this story!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm Wonder till she finds out what he really is. and if she'll care later
Date: 20 Oct 2014 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
ohhh great chapter
well done
Date: 20 Oct 2014 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Why end it there?!!! Such a cliffhanger!!!! What a tease, plz update soon!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great writing and plot. I'm hooked! Looking forward to more chapters
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
He's kind of impossible to resist!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Is he THE devil? I am thinking of the lyrics to theRolling Stones song, "Sympathy For The Devil" :"Please allow me to introduce myself, I'm a man of wealth and taste"
Date: 20 Oct 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm. Wonder what is up with him.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
I get so excited when you update. Each new chapter is better than the last. I wish she had some power over him or enough to not always be influenced by him. But this last stand off with the four of them was explosive. But it is like someone hit pause at the climax of the movie. Please hurry and hit play. I am dying to know what happens next!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
excellent chapter!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
No, i love this story wish it had long chapters, but oh well. Hope to read more soon
Date: 20 Oct 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for the update! Can't wait for the next one!! Awesomeness!!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Omg soooo excited about the update! Loved it!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love it. Thank you for the chapter. Can't wait till the next one.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hello. What a different, unique type of story using the main Twilight characters. I have been fascinated or shall I say intrigued only to come to the final chapter to date. I am anxious as to what will happen to Bella, what will Rosalie try to do, and what will Edward continue to do? I look forward to when you update more chapters. Thank you for the "dark" entertainment. Suzan Noerr
Date: 29 Sep 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, you have really caught my interest with this story
Date: 18 Sep 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it but I liked if Bella had a more strong will to say no at some point and mean it. Above all else I loved it update soon!!!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad you posted again. I love all your stories but this is by far my favorite :) Thank you!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
This chapter was so creepy.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella better watch her back!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
surprised Bella has not thought about going home not that HE would let her I am sure
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
he is kind of scary
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow interesting start, will you be finishing Dark lies
Date: 30 Jul 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
IF AT ALL POSSIBLE PLEASE DON'T BE TOO LONG IN UPDATING,
Date: 29 Jul 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ahhhhhhh this story! I love it. Although I wish it were updater more I totally understand real life comes first, but my goodness I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
"...and she proved that she could be trusted" Hmm, guess Edward isn't all knowing!
"The woman gasped and fell back. She scurried away from Bella as if she had seen a ghost" Bella has somehow been 'marked'.
Rosalie needs to be destroyed!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
Do you think she knows he sees everything???
Date: 28 Jul 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Fucking amazing
Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story. I cannot wait for the next update.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad there was an update. I do love this story but what is going on with Rosalie? As a matter of fact what is Rosalie? Wouldn't Edward be able to just know what she was up to like he does with everyone else? I thought that Alice knew more now. Her mind still seems a bit clueless. I know Bella is good but will Edward allow her to remain so? I want more! Please!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow Rose is going to be a big issue in the future I think.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love your story ,can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hope Alice keeps Bella away from Rosalie.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Rose is definetly one of Satan's minions. Edward is Satan himself? Beautiful and very charasmatic. I think that is what the Bible tells us.
Bella needs to run. Alice bless her heart is just stupid, drawn in by the beauty
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
I LOVE THIS FICS SO MUCH! THANK GOD YOUR BACK! UPDATE SOON PLZ!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Death is what she deserves
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh fuck, i hope edward stops rosalie before bella ends up dead or hurt.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well, this chapter was kind of creepy... good, but creepy. Rosalie is a piece of work. Can't wait until next time. Thank you!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Is that how Rosalie keeps her beauty by swimming in pure blood? How does Edward not know what she is planning. Maybe bc he trusts her?
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
So glad you got back to this story. It has a way of sticking in your mind! Ha
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story!! Hope you update soon.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm starting to suspect Bella is more than just an ordinary human woman that Edward randomly came across. Bella may not 'know' anything but I suspect their meeting was somehow planned by a currently unknown someone (his 'father'?).
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm going to enjoy watch Edward deal with this predicament:)
Like Bella, I'm wondering where Alice was during this ceremony(?).
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
What I've read so far makes me think Bella only recently got on Mr. Mason's radar. But, I started thinking about how her father acts regarding 'boys' taking an interest in her. I'm sure I'll find out eventually but I'm now wondering if Bella's father was knowingly keeping Bella protected/pure for her future meeting of Mr. Mason.
Date: 20 May 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Each chapter brings up more questions than answers.
Date: 20 May 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Uh oh. Rosalie is in bitch mode. The girls better watch their backs.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
"...he drove all the way to Chicago just so he could threaten the poor boy, and Ben ended things with Bella that very night." Whoa! Nasty:( I suspect Bella's dad will have a deadly stroke about Mr. Mason::))
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nasty, nasty, don't thinks it is going to go the way she hopes.
Date: 19 May 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Date: 19 May 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
hmmm B is in over her head and rose is her usual nasty self
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
So glad you're back, I've missed this intriguing story!
Date: 18 May 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
I so look forward to your updates-- another great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
bitchy rose.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG!!!!!! It seems I have waited forever for this update and now I regret being so greedy to read it right away. I love the mystery of this story. Can not wait for the next installment. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
Omg,I love your story can't wait for more.great writing ,this should go for best book seller.
Date: 18 May 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
DOES ROSE WANT EDWARD FOR HERSELF? LOVE IT, MORE PLZ!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! PLZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!
Date: 17 May 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh oh, Rosalie will be in deep shit if Mr. Mason finds out what she has plans to do. Great chapter. Love this story. Bella not so much......
Date: 17 May 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait for the next chapter. Again great story.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Please tell me her plan blows up in her face? What a greedy bitch
Date: 17 May 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh oh bellas has trouble heading her way and edward wont be happy
Date: 17 May 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
another one of his f buddies.
Date: 17 May 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my! Glad to see the update
Date: 17 May 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 17 May 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Rose is a nasty bitch and she is going to get in trouble.
Date: 17 May 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh God I can't get enough
Date: 17 May 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well I am so happy about the update but ai think this is what we already read in the teasers.
As for Bella, she seems way too naive to me. I nean if I seen someone killed in a room full of peopke, I wouldnt forget that just because he gave me snow.
I just think Bella should demand more answers from Edward.
Date: 04 May 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Please update again soon! Love your stories!
Date: 17 Apr 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
JUST READED CHAPTER 8 4-17-14
Date: 30 Mar 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
He's a smooth one. Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love it!
Sometimes I wish that Bella would just run and leave... get on a plane and go back home. Just to see what Edward would do. Have her hold her ground ... would he change for her?!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
This story has me so torn. I love Edward, but I hate that he is a demon. I do love the story though.
Date: 24 Mar 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Date: 23 Mar 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great story! I'm so excited to see what comes next!
Date: 23 Mar 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
WOW he is trying but he doesnt know why he has to he is not as powerful as he thinks.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
noooooo B. Stand your ground!!!!