Date: 23 Mar 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
Demon is right.. Run Bella run. He is putting another mask on your face. You think your winning but you are loosing.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
So looking forward to the next one you post...
Date: 22 Mar 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Your story reminds me of the story of Presphone and Hades. Really intriguing. Im not sure if that is your motivation but its seems cool so far.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
With each chapter the story becomes more
intriguing and just as one question is answered several more are pop up. So looking forward to the next chapter as
I'm enjoying the story very much.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
I swear one if if not the most intriguing tics I read to date I can't get enough
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
An amazing chapter. I wish Bella would have gotten more answers out of him though.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder what alice thought when she witness what bella saw?
Date: 22 Mar 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a beautiful scene you ended this chapter with. The whole time I really thought Edward was going to make her more like him. Now I'm thinking she is going to soften his devilish ways.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was incredible! Thank You! Update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter can't wait till the next one
Date: 22 Mar 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! Another great chapter. Half of the chapter I tell Bella to tell him to "go to hell" (ljterally) and the other half I root for Edward... So good!
Date: 22 Mar 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
SO excited about this update! Loved it!
Date: 22 Mar 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
mmm how is he going to manage to explain what he is ?
will she change him for the better of except him for what he is ?
Date: 22 Mar 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Intriguing story for sure! Beautiful ending for this chapter
Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Where r u dear ? I hope all is good on your end. Stay safe and preety plz update soon.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for next chapter!
Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
This story is so dark, but good.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am really iking this story
Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Shit what has she gotten herself in to she cant figure it out.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Satan in all his glory. Run let him have his whores because they give their souls to him. run
Date: 19 Feb 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Absolutely amazing one if if not the best fig I've ever read and I've read hundreds
Date: 19 Feb 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Rose is a cruel biatch huh? ewww Skankya and her sister....just ewww.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is one of the most well written stories I've come across in along time. It's intelligent and I thoroughly enjoy the Art and History. Edward is extremely dark, sexy, provocative, unforgiving and unapologetic. He is everything one would expect from The Devil and your not afraid to cross the line with him and I respect that in a writer. Bella isn't getting on my nerves by impersonating a carpet and letting Edward walk all over her. She is smart, she questions everything even her attraction to him but he is The Devil and she merely a human so honestly what chance would she have? So how does one fall in love with the devil? Better question, how does the Devil learn to love? I look forward to reading what happens next especially to Rosalie.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
It wouldn't be Bella if she wasn't curious. Loved that she found out. And now run Bella, far away. Hopefully he can't erase that part of her mind or something. That whole ritual is just barbaric.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Crazy people. Is he a Devil himself? Thank you!
Date: 19 Feb 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
do you enjoy torturing us??????? (he he he) read you next week.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my, this is wonderful!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow! Amazing chapter! I kept hoping she would find out, and she did. I can't wait to see her reaction with Edward! Though I can't wait to find out how much Alice knows of all of this as well. xx
Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
What is Rosalie to Edward? Whybwould she care that Bella was wearing his mask and cloak? Is Edward sleeping with other women while trying to get Bella too? If so what an ass he is! Rosalie did that on purpose didn't she!? What will Edward say when he finds out Rosalie saw Bella in there and did nothing to stop her from going in there? Please update soon!
Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful update dear. It's always amazing when he gets trapped in his own doing. Wonder what Bella do. It's always hard to let go off your love but more harder to letting go off all your ethic and beliefs to be with him. And let us not forget how will u trust something sinister. Sho had never confined you.It's always great to read your story waiting no craving for next chapter.thank u very much for updating.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am so obsessed with this story!
Date: 19 Feb 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Geez, what a chapter! You wern't kidding. Bella is so over her head.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well that would be a hard one to get over. Pretty sure he'd have to completely erase her memory for it to ever work out between them. Ha
Date: 19 Feb 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
I would run as far away from him as possibly, plus he has many women he plays with now....
Date: 19 Feb 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter .
Date: 17 Feb 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great Chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh goodness. That was hot.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW I am loving this story... I can't wait for the next update : )
Date: 17 Feb 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE ,LOVE,LOVE IT! MORE PLZZZZ!!!!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
HMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK NOW I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
She is a smart girl but nothing is going to stop this but she will make him a better what ever he is.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hope she keeps calling him on stuff.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
This just keeps getting better with each chapter. Thank you!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
He's so bad. Like it.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow I really love this story, she can bring him back to the light or maybe he can bring her to his side.....which will win
Date: 17 Feb 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Devilward is sooo yummy! What did he mean that Victoria won't put up with her smart mouth? Would he allow Victoria to hurt her?
Date: 15 Feb 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hot dam that is HOT!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Not sure what to make of it. It's very well written. But I think I would like to see Bella with a stronger back bone
Date: 06 Feb 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
This story only gets better & better! I would have to say the Devilward is the hotter than vampward!
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
well it got a little bit more serious, almost to the point where he was taking what he wanted with her saying NO!..well they always said never trust the Devil.
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy shit what kind of powers does he have, freezing people with the ablity to talk and putting someone to sleep by just blowing on them and saying sleep....
Date: 04 Feb 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella has yet to realize how lucky she is.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank goodness he stoped he doesnt know it yet but that is love silly devil
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I have a good feeling about this one!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ugg uf u updated on the hour id be strung out
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sorry,, I am worried for her. Alice is nuts of course. We know Edward is just bad news in a nice suit.
Run Bella
Date: 03 Feb 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ooo, pants on fire! I think he won`t wait too long)) Hihi. Thank you!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
OK! NOW I'M HOT AND BOTHERED. ( HE HE HE ) NOT KIDDING.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter as always! Can not wait until the next one:)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
LOVE IT,MORE PLZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ooh. Edward doesn't like blue balls to go with his violet eyes. Heh
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
E is being a dick. Ugh Alice knows something and she's still letting B get involved? Hope bella can find the strength to resist him and his manipulations.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
All I can say is WOW!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
whew is it hot in here
wicked edward naughty demon
well done
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
What a presumtuous arse. Demanding she be ready in a note? Angela sounds more like Rosalie. Don't like Carlisle being scared like that. Sneaky sod with the breath thing. Hope she keeps challenging him.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
And he laughed at Jasper.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad she called him on his arrogance. But she def capitulated to easily to go back to dinner. ugh don;t like E having so much power over her. Hope she continues to challenge him
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
B was right to walk away. What a jerk he's being.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmmm I'd be worried about Alice as well.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
He's a tease. The devil. Temptation. Makes sense.