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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella has to realize that people would bow towards the man who owns the World Bank. He has so much power that they would automatically show him respect.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

Looking forward for the next chapter

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

He`s a tease. Thank you!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

inticing and very enjoyable.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

You are always keeping us on the edge of our seats! 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter!

Love that Carlisle is in your story... makes me wonder will dhe be able to resist Edward?

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 4

VERY INTERESTING!!!! HMMMMMM!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

Satan is beautiful and charasmatic so the Bible says. You seem to be right on it.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Lol sounds like Bella is going to start teasin him. LOL  I love it.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm so is he a vampire that can eat??? Lol I am loving this story.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is a very intriging story.  I cant wait to read more of the mystery.

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Woohoo, a little spooky but sounding good.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

She is getting in deep

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh, this is so very good

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

great so far very mysterious

well done

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

This was great!   Love this story.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

I LOVE his powers! Bell is in sooo much yummy trouble! 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Cristina.. what a tale you are weaving.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: BigEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love love love it

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

WOW!!! stunning.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

What the hell is he? Thank you!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

This story is puzzling.

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

huh.... he blew on her to put her asleep. Sounds like magic dust to put your memory to forget except this is to sleep. Interesting. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

I LOVE IT MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

He has the power wow

Reviewer: kaytlynn93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

I am loving this story! Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: antemi3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Omg omg omg....i love him.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow!  Another great chapter.  Edward is kind of creepy in this story.  It's really good though.

Reviewer: Prillylove25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

I am so intrigued. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

This story sounds interesting.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am hooked as usual when you write a story. I hope you update soon my dear. lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

demon.. well is he a vampire demon? or is he just a nasty demon?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

What is he is he the devil himself??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

freaky ;)

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

And WOW, what a slip Jacob!

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ooh Christina

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it!

Wonder what he is, are you staying with vampire or going literal with the Devil? Can't wait to find out. 

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

Awesome

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

So hooked! Love it! Thank you!

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting so far.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm hooked after only two chapters.....  damn.  good start

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thank you! He`s really a strange man. What is his problem? And what creature is he?

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

very mysterious but its captured my interest

well done

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

intriguing

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

mr mysterious, cant wait to see what Bella uncoivers about him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

Be careful what you wish for Bella.  Enjoyed this chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh great start...I am excited to read. Cant wait for an update.

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Great beginning. I like it. Thanks.

Reviewer: lujuromeostar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good :) I can´t wait to read more.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good

Reviewer: Jad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG, I'm being pulled in. Need more.

Jad

Reviewer: oh my Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I cannot wait for an update!!!!  This story has got me hooked!

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my.....I have to wait a week for an update?!?!? DAMN IT ALL TO HELL!!! I have no idea how the hell you did it....but You have my full undivided attention with this story!! PLEASE TELL ME THERE IS AN UPDATE IN THE MAKING!! I SO NEED MORE!! LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking foward to reading more!

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting so far.  I look forward to reading more  

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Intrigued... More please. 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow ... I agree great job with this one. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is amazing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading this

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ooh Demons this should be very interesting.. can not wait for more

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

can't wait for more

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok I'm hooked!  Not that I would expect anything less from one of your stories.  I was so excited to get an alert that you had a written something new!  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking  forward to more

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh this sounds delicious! Indeed!  Looking forward to more!  Have a wonderful day

Reviewer: Angelmagnet Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Devil you say. Can't wait.

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