Date: 09 Feb 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great story, thanks for your efforts!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the compliment - I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope to write a sequel in a few months based around Alice's Detective Agency !! I had so much fun writing this, I didn't want it to end.
Best wishes,
Joan
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue writing your stories as you are an awesome story teller. You had me hooked from the start.
Love , love, love them!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - that's a great compliment. I'm going to start writing again soon, so please be patient! When you write a story you never know what the reaction is going to be - I have so many hits on FF.net but not many reviews (compared to some), so it is helpful to get feedback, good or bad, so a huge thanks.
Have a great weekend,
Joan xx
Date: 12 Jan 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I will be here when its done.....yes I stayed up till 3 each morning..
Author's Response:
Good heavens! - I'll make a note to let you know when the next one is ready to go. I was away over New Year and got caught up in a story and when I turned the laptop off discovered it was 4am - I have never done that before (or since). Lucky I didn't have to get up early next day. Reading is very addictive!
Joan xx
Date: 12 Jan 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
I just happened to be searching the most recent stories when I came across this one. It was everything you said you'ld hoped it would be. It had mystery, some comic relief, some sadness, but most of all, it was a great love story. I really hope you do come up with a sequel or maybe a couple of futuretakes. That would be great. I have one question though. Was the nomad that raped and changed Alice, the same one that Peter fought and killed trying to save Charlotte? I don't think you ever said.
Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria,
I'm glad you enjoyed the story xxxx
Aaaah! That would be telling about the Vampire(s). Ok, I hadn't actually decided whether it would be the same guy but I am planning to do a sequel to this, but later on in the year. I have another story rolling around in my head that I want to do first. The sequel will be based around Alice's Detective Agency, which should be good for a few laughs and I have about half the story planned out. I don't publish a story until it is complete.
Thanks for reviewing and your kind comments - they are much appreciated.
Best wishes,
Joan
Date: 11 Jan 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Not liking the twist... Good writing...
Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it....I don't think I have ever read a Bravo.....This story was intriquing and only took me two nights to read it....can not wait for your next story
Author's Response:
Hi again,
My God - you read quickyly ! Thanks so much again for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed this one as well. My next story won't be up for quite a while as I am just about to start it and I don't publish until it's complete.
Best wishes,
Joan xx
Date: 11 Jan 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hum... I bet Edward will be in the story again.... Sort of happy Jacob is gone, and Bells is not distraut
Date: 10 Jan 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
What a kiss... Sad they have to part.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ha.. Enjoyed Edward besting Mike
Date: 10 Jan 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cool start.
Author's Response: