Date: 28 Sep 2015 7:32 PM Title: Epilogue
great little story ;) i loved that edward was masen ;) the family dynamic was a bit weird though thanks for sharing it on here ;D
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 10:42 PM Title: Epilogue
:) Loved this story
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and reviewing ( all my stories)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:34 AM Title: Epilogue
Oh I loved it so sweet a little sad but oh so good thank you
Author's Response:
thank you :-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:17 PM Title: Epilogue
wow sucks that LIky won't get to know her gran. DD's should be charged with murder.
Lilly' reations was too cute. Like how she picked to tell people about the babies.
Think you made a boo boo. in ch 2, you said Alice and Rose were Cullen and Edward was a masen.
Cute end. Ty for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and all your reviews, loved reading them.
i'll check out the mistake, thanks for letting me know.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad they are going strong. Aww for him asking that way. Wonder what Bella's back story was though with her parents.
Author's Response:
<3 Edward and his creative mind
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sucks that she lost her job becuase of Mike. Glad they are talking and getting to know each other. Yummy wake up call.
Author's Response:
yeah well Mike .... i don't like him... hahaha
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm Hide from who I wonder as well. Love the sound of that house. Souds like Esme got what was coming to her. I usually don't get to say this in stories but Poor Aro. Glad E works on his own and is not a name dropper/slacker like those Paris Hilton types.
Author's Response:
Yes i know Aro is always a bad guy, so i made him the goodguy ... just to see how people respond to it
hahahaha
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm porn together. Wonder what her parents did to make her just leave? Will they be coming back into the story? Esme and Carlisle are bro and sis. Thats different. Wow Esme is a real biatch. Glad Edward told her off and got B out of there.
Author's Response:
watching porn together can work out just fine ;-)
Esme really is showing some colors doesn't she.... i am glad Edward has some backbones
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
glad he stayed. hmm meeting his mom already. LOL for Bella and porn. Porn is good.
Author's Response:
gotta love porn :-)
meeting a girl like Bella makes time dissapear.... so it is never to soon to move to the next level.. that being meeting the inlaws
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
ugh cockblocked by Mike. Muhaha love the lie E came up with. Go sexy Bella. Yummy lemon time.
Author's Response:
Mike loses Edward wins... just as it should be
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dayum. Go Bella!!! yey for reciprocation
Author's Response:
ha team Bella is here
hahaha
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmm a lap dance maybe? aww like that he is making sure she is sure and comfortable. Eek What?!?! a piercing maybe or just really big?
Author's Response:
LOL hahaha
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
aww Bella needed a little pep talk. ooh what did she do
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOL for uncomfortable men wi cutting. Hope he doesn't hurt our girl
Author's Response:
hahaha yes sissy men
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
aww shy bella with a litte naughty getting ready to come out.
Author's Response:
evertybody has a naughty side waiting to come out / break free....
you just need a little push some times
hmmm what would Santa think of it? :-)
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can just picture someone here in vegas making that cake. Aww no Em or Jazz joining the party too?
Author's Response:
i think if i lived in Vegas, i would be making those cakes
hell i have made a boobies cake.. if someone wants a dickcake i will make it...
but people are shy here....
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG that cake will give her a heart attack. Love it.
Author's Response:
hahaha you can see it don't you...
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just cakes indeed. hmm naught baker to deliver too?
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 01 Sep 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
THIS IS AONE OF A KIND LOVED IT
Author's Response:
well thank you.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:25 PM Title: Epilogue
I have to say for your first ever story I loved it.. I can't wait to to see what you next story is about.
Author's Response:
Thank you
My next story is called bad knight in shining armor?
It isn't ready yet to be posted here.
I'm working on it... it will be longer than this one and has more characters so it takes more work
So you will have to wait a bit longer for it.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
This I would love to see.
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is hilarious! His cakes beat Buddy's hands down lol
Author's Response:
Hahaha i don't think buddy will ever make a naughty cake...
Thank you for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:44 AM Title: Epilogue
I hope more people read and review
i so loved the story
laughed it was a hoot
i am glad they got their great family and an awesome business
loved it
thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your reviews and your love for the story
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
love it
these two don't waste any time
Author's Response:
sometimes the need is to big to stop.. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
go bella go
Author's Response:
lol
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
such a gentlemen edward
what a way to a girls heart by helping her out
edward ahs it bad for the b-day girl
Author's Response:
sorry for the late response..
he is raised well by his mom ;-)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
omg that cake is too much
poor bella i would be so embarrsed she handled it well
rose and alice are great friends
Author's Response:
I know i had a great time writing it, i saw i happen when i wrote it... in my mind... so i was laughing and writing at the same time
Author's Response:
I know i had a great time writing it, i saw i happen when i wrote it... in my mind... so i was laughing and writing at the same time
Author's Response:
I know i had a great time writing it, i saw i happen when i wrote it... in my mind... so i was laughing and writing at the same time
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh i am loving the story
it is a hoot
thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it and leaving my first review