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Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wow! 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hot damn i love the and the lemon

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

So i put off reading the ending cuz i didnt want to see this go. I feel for eddie Dimitri manipulated him, and i guess bella was wrong edward didnt love eddie deep down. I would wonder if anthony can do anything that will make edward kill him? I get it eddie was a child conceived out of rape, i imagine id have a hard time seeing a child that was conceived if i was raped. I admit i was hoping edward would have had someone Rape Dimitri, that would of been my revenge before i killed him.

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi i want to read the first want but I can't find it :(

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wow. Could not find the first one, but the sequel was great. Meg

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it as always!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

I think that they are exactly where they need to be as a family. One child is more than enough to fulfill their needs. The cousins can fill in the other times when Anthony requires interaction with other children.
The three if them have made if through the rough start and can now enjoy life.
Nice wrap up to their story.

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

Awesome 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great story. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

Absolutely perfect! Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 22

I really love this story and can't wait to read others.  

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 22

; )

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 22

Anthony is too funny.   TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for that last scene with them.  It wouldn't have been complete w/o it. 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Perfect ending. Thank you

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 22

Absolutely perfect Cristina.

Thank you for sharing your awesome talent with us. I appreciate and love every word you have wrote to form this amazing story.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

Love little AnthonyI am sure he is going to keep Edward and Bella on their toes. Love Nonna.  

I am sad to see this story ending.  I have truly loved reading your story. Thano you for sharing it with us. 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 22

Fitting ending.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

I am so sad this is over!!! I loved this story and i'm sure i will go back and read both of them again!!! Thank you for sharing this with us!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

like I said last review. I will miss this story. Please don't stop writing.

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

AWESOME STORY

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

it was a great journey

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you.

I enjoyed the journey so much that I'm going to start all over.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 22

Really enjoyed this amazing story. Thank you for sharing. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

well done loved these two

edward and kitten

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great ending 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) loved this story

Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 22

thank you very much.... 

 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

love,love,love.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 21

I have loved this story and hated it because you have left us. Not an update since Jan. Please don't just leave whatever the problem  none of my business but your stories are always different and well written.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 21

I didn't think Eddie should have been killed. He was a brainwashed, naive child.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm not thrilled that she's leaving after having the baby but I don't judge her. As long as she doesn't ignore her child.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

hmm Wonder why Sam is just walking away.   Yey for Dimitri finally being dead.   

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

wow

edward shocked 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow!!! So excited to get this update. Glad Bella and the baby were both ok. Glad Edward got his "freedom" from Demtri. I was just a little surprised that he killed Eddie so easily since he was Edward's son. Sam really surprised the hell out of me. Can't believe he would just walk away and let Edward go.

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

wow what a chapter....I usually don't review but this chapter is the end of something new and can be wonderful for Edward......he finally got he's revenge and what a reward.....To be able to love his family without any strings.....painful strings to hinder his life.....if only real life was like that.....

This really would make a great ending!!!!

This Edward and Sam I like after all the animosity between those two and Sam giving him a pass, I would assume that Sam knows the reason for all the pain and anguish that Edward went through....

KIdnapping Bella, for Dimitri and Eddie was the beginning to the end....there is now bigger pain for anyone to have their family almost taken and the only relief is to kill them......and for Sam to acknowledge that was a heck of a closure for Edward.....He would be happy in his life now and be the mob boss we all know and love....lol

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

; )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter  

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

was that the end

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 21

Did Sam just save his own life or what?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Excellent climax.  This was worth waiting for

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 21

I wanna hug Edward. He's grandfather was an awful man. He deserved to have the life choked out of him.

What an honor to name their son after Bella's brother.

I half expected him to allow Eddie to live. I bet Bella is gonna have a hard time excepting Edward killed his own son, no matter the circumstances.

Awesome chapter Cristina.

Sherry

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm glad Edward could kill the ghosts hunting him. Hopefully, he can move on now.
And Bella being well again is such a relief.

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Another great chapter.  I have truly enjoyed this story.  I don't know how I feel about Eddie's death though.  Although I understand Edward's anger,  I feel really bad for Eddie.  His life was sad and tragic. The only person who loved him was a pedophile and he never fit in anywhere.  Ronnie's death hurt quite a bit too, but overall I love this.  Can't wait to see where this goes. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21

Sam let the inherant evil within this twisted family cleanse itself of the most vile member. I'm surprised but not concerned. Sam needed a clean break and the timing of all this allowed for the perfect story to complete his career.
Will Sam keep Edward apprised of his current location and status in the future?

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it 😊

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

Yay!  Big pig Demetri is gone and so is Eddie, and Kittens awake and glad to be alive, yay!  Love the babies name.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love it

Reviewer: Madazz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 20

I cant wait please update love the story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!!!  I am so glad that Bella came back to Edward and her baby. Can't wait till she is awake and can hold her son. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know Edward is going out of his mind. I am soooooo off to the next chapter. Thank goodness I do not have to wait for an update right now. I would be going crazy if I were having to wait. I can not believe that Ronnie is really dead. I just knew that he would have on a bullet proof vest or something. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm sad that Riley was a casualty of the mess with Demetri.
Carlisle doesn't know that Eddie is actually Edward's son? I thought the family was informed of the abuse he withstood at the hand of his grandfather and that slut Heidi.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

Both POV's are great. Very dramatic.

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

["Procedure my ass, law boy," Victoria said patting him on the back. "Welcome to the dark side," she winked] lol lol I haven't been able to figure out Sam but there's something about him I like:) He doesn't seem dirty but how he is with the Cullen's is odd.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love your story can not wait for more.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Edward and Bella have been through so much.  I hope they find happiness now.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

yay

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

OK, you made me cry again!  But you are doing a great job with this long story!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 20

; )

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

glad the baby is ok.  Poor B

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE  !!!! AND WE HAVE A BABY BOY AND BELLA SAFE .... LOL UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank  you Cristina for another chapter quickly.  Now We all have to hope that Bella does not go back to wanting out of her marriage and leaving her baby. stick it out girl. This man made mistakes but he loves You and his son.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter.  Love Edward with the baby. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 20

Is the baby going to be named Reilly?

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm glad their little boy is fine and that Bella is supposed to make a full recovery! My heartbeat was beating double time through this whole chapter but I'm sure noe I'm able to relax - for their hopefully reunion and happy times;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

This was a real rollercoaster ride you took us on this chapter. But it was all worth it to hear that Bella wants them to be a family. Now she only has to wake up.

Reviewer: hey333777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 20

Fuck yeah! She's back!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thank goodness!!! They both made it!!! Yay!! it's a boy!!!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 20

If anyone can save Eddie from Edward, it will be Bella. As it is now, that boy is a dead one. I was wrong, I guessed the baby to be a girl. Edward will cherish his newborn son. I loved the part where Riley met Bella in the great beyond and told her to go back, that was very touching. I can hardly wait for Bella to wake and be reunited with Edward and their baby boy. I loved every word.

Sherry

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks so much for the update, OMG this story !

Reviewer: chris1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you thank you, for the update, I hope they can finally have a happy life together now with their son,  and I hope Edward makes them pay for what they did to her

Reviewer: ALIGAULT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

Great story keep the good work! can't wait for the next chapter.take care and god bless your beautijful talent, as a writer :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 19

THANKS FOR UPDATING. EXCELLENT CHAPTER,LOVE YA!

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter..but again with the evil cliffhanger. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

this isn't much further than last chapter, please don't make us wait long

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

I sure hope you have the next chapter ready to fly. My anxiety level is at an all time high where the health and safety and of an unborn child is concerned.
What are the chances of a live birth under this level of stress and injury?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow  knocked out for twelve hours.... Carlisle is going to pay for that I bet.   Aww poor Bella.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh dear Cristina don't stop now.. I am old  with limited days.

 

Great chapter.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

I shouldn't be surprised by another cliffie but once again I am.  I hope Sam doesn't take him to lock up. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

I hope Bella and the baby are alright

Reviewer: hey333777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks again for the best chapter yet,  OMG this was heart pounding!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 19

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

No, no, noooooo!  She has to be alright .   Edward  is going to kills Dimitri  and maybe even little Eddie . 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh no... finally he did get to her only to see her flatline? Thars so cruel:(

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

Another cliffie....ahh I'm dying here, cant wait for next update

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

THAT NOT FUNNY AT ALL  PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh, you're evil. What a bad, bad cliffie. I hope you won't let us hang for too long!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

THE ULTIMATE CLIFFIE!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

I'm holding my breath, everything has to be okay for Bella and the baby. Death is way too easy for Dimitri, he needs to suffer before he dies.

Fan-fuckin-tastic chapter.

Sherry

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

This is such a cliffhanger. Great chapter. Great author, ease don't let us hang for a long time 

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