Date: 01 Aug 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
Now I'm wondering who killed Alice. hmmm...... That was an obvious threat she made to Bella though. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Date: 04 Jan 2017 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
Well I definitely want to read more.
Date: 07 Jul 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
I wasn't expecting that. I hope it wasn't Jasper or Edward that did this. Poor Alice! Bad enough that her husband loved her best friend resulting in her losing her best friend but, the worst yet was losing her baby. How sad and lonesome she must have felt. Yet Bella, who killed several people including her mother, walks away free as a bird w/custody of her sister Aly and the love of her life, Edward. She's one lucky girl that the Chief of Police, a Police Detective and a FBI agent all love her and will protect her. Nevertheless, she's still mentally impaired and needs help because who knows what might set her off in the future. Hmmm! Be careful Edward.
I hope you continue this story. It's too good not to. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Angel
Date: 30 Jun 2014 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
I love it! I hope you will update soon!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
This looks really good. Are you going to stop here or was this the prequel and you are going to continue? =)
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
cant wait to see where u go with this i love this bella
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
Love it.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
I'm so happy to see your sequal!! I love it already! You begin with a conundrum and a more settled Bella....it seems. I look forward to your updates. They are always insightful, inventive and imaginative. Thank you!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Farewell
So Aly is their daughter?