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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 40

awww sweet honeymoon

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 39

woo Hoo they're married!!!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 38

Fabulous!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 38

I thought it was funny that Edward told his dad that all they did was sleep. Bella is already pregnant and they have been sleeping together for months, They already had sex that day. It was not like they were abstaining.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 38

awww so cute that they couldnt sleep without the other.   Ugh Skankya again.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 37

Alice is really over the top today,  jeez.   Glad b put her foot down. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

I think Bella and Edward forget that they are living in an apartment. I bet Carlisle and Esme's home has better insulation than their apartment. If they get too loud, people will still hear them. Bella would be mortified if the neighbors complained about the noise.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 36

Ugh Alice is really being an annoying PITA.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 35

They need to come up with some other activities to do together besides lovin'. Reality is going hit them in a few months when there is college and a baby that will take there time.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 35

Glad they found a nice place. LOL for gay Jacob.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 34

Great chapter. Soon they will have to start looking for an apartment and get settled before the wedding and school starts.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 34

wow  Alice is being bratty.   yey for E telling off Skankya

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 34

Well Tanya didn't even know it was his Birthday..

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 33

Edward and Bella are so lucky that Carlisle and Esme have the means to support them while they are in school. They are also fortunate that they have the emotional support.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 33

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Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 33

What ever happened to her mother and stepfather, and didn't Charlie's will leave anything to Bella..or the police pension

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 33

glad she stood up to alice

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 32

I am glad they are getting married. They love each other and having a baby together. It is for the best, but they have a hard road ahead of them. They are so young.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 32

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 32

Glad someone smacked Skankya.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 31

I guess they need to turn Bella's room into a nursery. They can get married and to college in Seattle. Bella can take online classes. It might make things easier.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 31

Hmm. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 31

Glad they talked things through

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 30

Sweet. Too young, but sweet.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 30

Cant blame B for being scared considering her life, but I can understand E's being hurt as well.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 29

wowser  ALice is quite annoying when she wants to be.  Uh oh for the tummy.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 28

I knew this would happen. Edward was suppose to love her enough to keep it covered. He knows how this pregnancy thing works. I hope Carlisle and Esme are ready to be grandparents. Edward and Bella are going to need a lot of help if they are going to go to college and be parents.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 24

I hope Edward is still using condoms. They don't need to be having a baby.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 28

Just curious where this story is heading. More angst, drama, I see pregnancy in the future and prom.  What else??



Author's Response:

There will be drama, a bit of angst.. but will have a happy ending.. a wedding and college... a beautiful baby. :

 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 28

SOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! BABY ON BOARD HUH? I HOPE THEY STILL DECIDE  TO GO ON TO COLLEGE IT CAN BE DONE. IT'S NOT THE END OF THE WORLD!! PREGNANCY IS NOT A REASON TO NOT GO ON AS PLANNED. I HOPE YOU SHOW THE POSITIVE SIDE TO THIS SITUATION. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 28

dun dun dun.   Guessing we know why she's grumpy and puking.  LOL

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 27

READ YOU SOON. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 27

Wow  Renee is a real piece of work.   Someone should get the survellence tape from the store.  Have a feeling they'll need it someday.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

Sounds like everyone is accounted for, is this story coming to an end?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

:) sweet

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

SIMPLY AMAZING!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

awww  for Prom.   lol for Tanya getting some of whats coming to her

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

Sweet

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love it ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

yummy beginning and awww poor Bella for end

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

Good. Will Phil be back or us he done with?



Author's Response:

he will be back

 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 24

MORE PLEASE!!! SOON!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

awww   Glad B is doing so wel.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2014 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad Rose stood up to Skankya.  Hate bullies.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

Sweet

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

awww!!!!! waiting for the next update is always hard. read you soon.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

Glad she stood up to Alice about the clothes.  Love Esmom.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 21

awww!!!! don't be too long. read you soon.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

Go Esme. You rock!!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

Uh oh, did something bad happen at the house while he was in school?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

ugh Jessica and Tanya need to be expelled for sexual harassment.  blech

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW! THAT'S REALLY SAD. I CAN'T IMGINE CARRYING THAT MUCH PAIN AROUND. I WAS HESITANT TO START READING BUT NOW... I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

Glad she's gone home with E and family.   Alice needs a volume control muzzle.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

Glad Edward went looking for her.  Hope Phil goes down hard and becomes someone's bitch in prison.   Although coward that he is, he'll probably kill himself.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

Alice is such a goof.   Oh no Bella noooo.  Hope she presses charges this time.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

Glad he is being responsible with the condom.   aww for Em asking her to dance.  Hate HS cliques.

happy dance for nice first time.

dl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad phil wasn't there to ruin B's fun weekend

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

Phil really needs to die, or better yet a quaddrapalegic who has to live in a nasty nursing home becuase Renee the drunk wont care for him.   Evil SOB.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

surprised they even let her have a car or drive one.   Poor B.   She really needs to get out of there before Phil rapes and/or kills her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad her "parents" didn't come home and catch them.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad Em and Rose are being nice to her.  awww for the limes.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh skankya..... you are really pathetic.   Need to turn her in for bullying too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

ugh  Phil is going to move into sexual abuse next I'm afraid.  Wonder what the papers E got from C were.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8

what a wonderful date.   Hope Phil doesn't take or break the necklace.  Surprised he even let her go for the whole day.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

ah so now she knows.   Ugh for phil.   She's gonna be unconscious one of these days.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

ugh   looks like Phil is getting sexual intentions.   That sucks.

Glad they had a nice first date.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

ugh skankya is utterly pathetic.  Hope she doesn't have a broken rib.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow  poor b.  Wonder if Renee knows or not?   Glad E is there for her.  Hope she isn't mad when she finds out its him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

poor B.  Surprised Phil just doesnt throw her out since she's18.   Skankya is so pathetic.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

poor B.   Glad E is trying 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

hmmm I have a feeling skankya is going to get her in trouble either at school, with her step-abuser, or both.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

Slime. He needs to pay!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

I hope Edward goes back ASAP!!!!

Reviewer: Alexa TWCS Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my god!!!! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Really good

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

It was tender, sweet, perfect for them.

i hope Edward does find a way to help Bella out of that house soon.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Ahhh. Sweet.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

You show us Bella's insecurities in nuances, not overtly and that makes all the difference in the world.  Well done!

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