[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 8:21 PM Title: Epilogue Blue Skies
Wow! What an amazing job you did with this story. I appreciate the time and energy you put into this story to make in so realistic. I really do appreciate a good fan fiction read. I hope one day you will amaze us with another story. Until then, Thank you!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 In Her Eyes
That was so sweet.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14 Dare You to Move
They have come so far and I think that they arepast all the hard stuff.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13 Ordinary World
I liked naughty nurse Bella.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 When It Rains
The kid's were so cute and I am so glad that he gotover caring what other people think.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place
I really love this story. I can't say itenough.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 10--Green Eyes
I'm so glad his sperits are so high.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
This chapter was great I'm glad that they have stopped putting their lives on hold.
THe end ort of sucked though.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength
Poor Bella.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 Keeping Me Alive
There are so many set backs, but he will gt through them....
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time
Wow! God for Edward's sake and Bella's I hope they don't have a lot of steps in the house....
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 5--Grace
God you hit the emotions head on. My man chanted over and over to just let her die after her surgery.
It is 2:30 in the morning here and I can't stop reading it is that good. I am going to be kicking myself when my daughter gets up but it is so worth it.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
Oh god that was hard. I think I went through a whole box of tissues. I know I'm a gultten for punishment becaue I know what is going to come next is going to be just as hard if not worse then what's already happened.
You are a brilliant writer and I love this story. I also love the fact that you are not skimming over the medical facts. You are either in the medical field, know someone who is or you do amazing research.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day
God that is horrible. But he was lucky it didn't kill him right away. I hope that Bella can stay strong throught this.
Amazing story, I was crying like a baby..
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please
Thank god Edward was around Family when he blacked out and not by himself.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?
Oh no! Those symptoms sound really familiar. My mom has a acoustic neuroma (a rare non cancerous brain tumor.) I hope that Edward is okay and does play tuff guy and not get himself checked out right away. My mom's a nurse and she waited forever before going to a doctor. They say people in the medical field make the worst patients.
Love the story..... I'm actually a little glad that I found it after it was completed. This way I don't have to wait to find out what happened.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 11:35 PM Title: Epilogue Blue Skies
Beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:09 AM Title: Epilogue Blue Skies
Wow, just wow. I had to stop reviewing after each chapter because I felt I was being too repeatitive. I have loved the roller-coaster you have written and look forward to reading more of your work.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength
Wow, I really can't compliment you enough on how you are writing this story. It's painful to read, but too good to not read.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 5--Grace
Yep, another tissue worthy chapter. Love the attention to all sides of the story you are showing as everything unfolds.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
I have not been teary-eyed this often in a fiction in a long time...good job!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day
I can totally sympathize with the family having gone through this type of situation before. Nothing can prepare you for the devestation a stroke can cause. Definately tissues needed...great chapter.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:14 PM Title: Epilogue Blue Skies
a lovely end to a lovely sweet story, thanks for writing it tracy
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 10:11 PM Title: Epilogue Blue Skies
I love happy endings thanks for sharing this one with us all! Very sweet story.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:19 PM Title: Epilogue Blue Skies
Awesome!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 10:43 PM Title: Epilogue Blue Skies
Awww lovely ending to a great story. I'm so glad Edward and Bella got their happy ending.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 15 In Her Eyes
what a beautiful service, edward walking and playing the piano was the best gift he could give bella, what with rose and emmett having a baby things look very rosy for the cullens right now, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14 Dare You to Move
nice to see edward with such a positive outlook it has taken lots of hard work but he got there, and little aro is a blessing he can sense edward seizures giving everybody ample warning as edward feeling off just dosent alert him, cant wait to read about the wedding, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 13 Ordinary World
greart chapter, more of things going well for edward just how we like it, the puppy what a nice idea, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 When It Rains
great chapter, glad to see everything ticking along nicely for edward, especially in the bedroom thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place
edward is still making great strides despite his argument with his siblings, hopefully he can work his brain and forget less, great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 10--Green Eyes
another good chapter, after all that nice to see edward so positive joking with bella and slipping back into his depression, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
i'm so pleased they had a great night at the hotel it was a lovely idea of edwards and they connected again sexually that will help with them staying positive with each other and getting their relationship back on track, edward had another seizure i wonder will he be diagnosed with epilepsy? great chyapter thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength
his recovery is hard going coupled with the depression, no wonder he had a meltdown his emotions have got to come out somehow, they are lucky to have such a supportive family, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 Keeping Me Alive
edward is experiencing some big mood swings and thats expected, he's mourning for all that he has lost, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time
another emotional chapter, edward recovery is far from simple but at least he is going home that should help him feel better, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 5--Grace
i cant imagine how conflicted edward is his whole existance is changing and he does not know how he fits in with that, bella is never going anywhere thouigh that much is definate, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
oh thank godness he's waking up but will he be ok? great chapter very emotional poor elizabeth i dont suspose she quite knew what to do with herself, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day
oh my what a sad chapter, it is unusual thing but young people do have strokes, god i hope he makes it, the whole family is distraught thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please
oh there is something not right with edward he realises that now, he made it through the party only to collapse, i hope he's going to be ok, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?
great opening chapter, lots of info on the family and who's who, saw this on featured stories and thought it loked good thanks tracy
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 15 In Her Eyes
Laughed when I read about Aro's wedding outfit. I will miss this story and I wii look forward to your next story!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 15 In Her Eyes
AWWWWW such a beautiful wedding! I'm laughing at the sight of Aro in a dog tuxedo carrying a pillow with the rings on it! *SNORT*
*SIGH* I'm gonna miss this story so much! Any ideas for a sequel?
Date: 30 May 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 14 Dare You to Move
Really happy that things are looking up for Edward. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Date: 29 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 14 Dare You to Move
OMG Aro to the rescue! What a smart dog! Where can I get one like that? LOL Poor Edward! Can't wait for the wedding! And then the honeymoon hehe ;-)
Date: 29 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 Dare You to Move
I wondered if Aro was sensing something about Edward's health. I'm glad Edward's fine and can't wait for the wedding.
Date: 23 May 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 13 Ordinary World
Some good news for Edward, thats wonderful. Looking forward to their wedding!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 13 Ordinary World
Awww, too cute! I'm glad Edward is getting better, and a dog now yay! I love labs, they're so cute!
Date: 15 May 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 When It Rains
I loved Edward going to Renee's class to see the kids and it was lovely to see Rosalie and all the guys being there for Edward with the incidents in the parking lot and the baseball game.
Date: 14 May 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 When It Rains
EDWARD GOT HIS FREAK ON!
Great chapter, as per usual!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place
Yay! Now, he's in a walker. aww! yay! I still want to see her shopping. hmm!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 10--Green Eyes
Hmm! Sponge bath?! Hot!!!!
So what else are you going to submit poor Edward into? Poor man!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
Well that was cute and sweet and interesting!
Date: 10 May 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place
Yey he's walking! I'm really glad the fact that he's been forgetting things lately isn't too serious.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength
Hmm! Seems like maybe that it's taking a step to a better place but I also think he might need to talk to a therapist or something. Someone else who might explain his behavior more. Carlisle may be a doctor but his area of expertise is not psychology.
Date: 08 May 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place
awww things are finally looking up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 08 May 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place
I love this story and I'm so glad he's walking again ^^
Thank you for sharing this fic!
Date: 05 May 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
Loved that Edward planned a special night for Bella! They both deserved a break. I was so worried that something was gonna happen during their time together to ruin it - Edward couldn't perform and would get self-conscious and feel worthless again or he would have a seizure and bring the good times to an end. So I was extremely happy that "life" didn't catch up with them until a week later. *phew*
Date: 05 May 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 10--Green Eyes
Really enjoying your fic so far. It sure does seem medically acurate! I saw in you AN that you've done a lot of research, well it shows. Had you not said that, I would have thought you must be in a medical profession.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 02 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10--Green Eyes
Spent all morning reading your story instead of doing household chores. Dishes are still in the sink, kitchen floor is not swept, and the grocery list is still in my purse. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Date: 02 May 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 10--Green Eyes
I'm glad he's not too down after this seizure, joking with Bella and Carlisle at least shows he isn't giving up.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
UGH! I really hate cliff hangers. But I did love this chapter! Update soon please.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
Now I can't wait for the next chapter...
I'm not usualy an impatient reader, but this chapter ending almost killed me !
Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us !
Date: 24 Apr 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
Now I can't wait for the next chapter...
I'm not usualy an impatient reader, but this chapter ending almost killed me !
Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us !
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
I enjoyed reading this chapter. Especially considering that Edward made some progress and talked to his family about his feelings. Now I can only hope, that his blackout isn`t a new setback.
I`m looking forward to your next chapter!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know
Oh no! Everything was going so well with Edward opening up more, and his surprise for Bella and setting a date for the wedding and now it looks like another setback. Please don't leave us waiting for the next chapter too long, I want to know if he's alright.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength
I just hope that was a turning point for Edward and things can start looking up.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength
I'm a crying mess, can't wait to see how this all plays out. I won't be embaressed by begging...please no cheating for Bella or Edward I don't think I could take it. Great chapter can't wait for the next.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 Keeping Me Alive
I Cried, alot. Poor Edward, but him and Bella will be so much stronger when everything is said and done. Please tell me Bella doesn't cheat on him I don't think I could handle that. Great chapter.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 Keeping Me Alive
Poor Edward!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 7 Keeping Me Alive
it makes me sad that he is taking it so hard!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time
Great Story, Great Chapter as usual update again soon.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time
Glad he's going home. Perhaps being in his own home instead of a hospital will help him feel better which will help motivate him with his therapy.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time
I thought auras happened only in seizures. My friend gets hers from seizures. Hmm! interesting. I read it online and it said an aura is a mental visual disfiguration occuring when you are about have a seizure or migraine.
What happened on his other hand? I know the other one was from the fall trying to go to the bathroom but what happened to other one?
Hmm! I can understand what edward is feeling. I would be too if that happened to me. Poor Edward!
So does Bella and jake have a history here?
Author's Response:
Edward's left side is paralyzed as a result of his stroke. Right now he's unable to use his left arm and leg and has no sensation on that side of his body.
I think you'll like Jake in this story. :-)
Date: 01 Apr 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time
im glad hes mad it this far cant wait to read whats gonna happen next
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 5--Grace
That was definitely a tear jerker. great chapter. Poor edward..so sad.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 5--Grace
This is a really fantastic story, very original and emotional. I can't wait to see where all this is going to go.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5--Grace
aww! Poor Edward. Aww! I feel bad for the Cullens. Aww! Poor Bella-boo. I love what Elizabeth and Emmett did. It was sweet.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5--Grace
Awww that was so sad. I really didn't like all that talk about how he wished he had died but hopefully Jasper's talk at the end really has made him see that he can't just give up. I love what Emmett and Elizabeth did to their hair so Edward wasn't alone.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
Such an emotional fic! I'm so glad he's waking up, I hope he's going to be ok. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
emotional story spent this chapter crying constantly.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
Yea! I'm so happy he's waking up. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Great story.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
i hope its not bad .. cant wait to read on !
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
i hope its not bad .. cant wait to read on !
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever
That was amazing chapter. I felt so bad for the family. aww! I can't imagine if that happened to my family. Though you captured Bitt's feeling's perfectly. She's a teen and in her world Edward was always been there to protect her and now he can't because he's sick. It shattered her world. That's why she didn't want to go see him. I get that. Sometimes we have to be in denial to be sane. It's our way of coping what we can't handle.
I'm glad he's finally awake. I was so happy. aww!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day
OMG! Post again soon!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day
Aww! Poor Bella and Edward. The poor Cullens. He better wake up soon. aww! Come on Edward Wake up! There's still the wedding!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please
Oh dear! I wonder what's up with Edward. Poor Edward. aww!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?
I'm starting to like this story. It's early but I like it. Hmm! I wonder what's up with Edward. hmm!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day
I still can't read this chapter with out crying. Emmett's reaction gets to me every time. *sigh* This story is so good :)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please
It still kills me to read that happen to Edward. He's so young and I just want him and Bella to have a happy, perfect, healthy life.
Thank god I didn't have big brothers like Emmett and Edward!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?
I hads meaning to go back and reread since you are almost done with WHT but you gave me the perfect excuse posting it here. Now I get to reread it and leave you some more love for Brainward :)
I just loved that Bella and Edward were so happy and in love.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?
Yeah I`m thinking brain tumor also.. I really enjoyed the first 2 chapters. I can`t wait to read more..when will the next update be?
Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please
great chapter kcant wait to read whats next !~
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?
im thinking brain tumor? cant wait to see whats going on next.