[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 5: epilogue
Great little ditty. Would love to see it expanded someday.
TY for writing and sharing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! And for looking through my stories. I do appreciate it!
And who couldn't use a Jasper and a Peter?
Date: 10 Apr 2018 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hope she gives Nessie her truck. Yumminess in this chapter too. I could use a couple of these guys in my life too. Sigh
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
DAYUM that was HAWT HAWT HAWT
Author's Response:
Oh, yes. Jasper. Yum. Peter. YUM
Date: 10 Apr 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love Bella finding herself and realize E and A were wankers.
Date: 10 Apr 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome first chapter. Love her using the ATMs for cash first. lOL
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 5: epilogue
Love it
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad ya liked it.
Thanks for your review!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
more
Author's Response:
Hello! Thanks for your reviews, hon. I appreciate it.
More? Well, I do have more stories posted here on the Writer's Coffee shop. Give them a look, if you're of a mind. Now this story, Prelude to a Sunset, ended pretty much like I wanted it to.
Again, thanks!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Date: 03 Mar 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 5: epilogue
Loved it! The epilogue was wonderful! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 5
thank YOU! I was hoping to try and wrap it all up pretty well and throw in crop circles.
LOL
Thanks for reviewing!
Rick
Date: 01 Mar 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 5: epilogue
That was novel and so entertaining. Hope you continue to write.
Author's Response:
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I'm going to try and keep writing, Sweetie!
Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Rick
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 5: epilogue
Loved it....whines cause i want more.....lol
Author's Response:
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Yay! Glad you liked it. I enjoyed it, too.
I always want more Jasper, too. We can hope, in a parallel universe, we get plenty of Jasper, and then some.
*sigh*
Thanks for your review!
Rick
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: epilogue
Hate to see it end
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 5
I kinda hate to see it end, too, but the stories have to stop somewhere.
Thanks for your review!
Rick
Date: 20 Feb 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Words can not express how much I have been enjoying this fiction! It. Ay have been part of a challenge, but WOW did you make it work for you - and us! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 4
Thank you so much! Thinking about a wet Jasper is just ... inspiring! *whew*
Just ... whoa
Thanks for reviewing!
Rick
Okie dokie! Here's a little bit of the epilogue:
Prelude to a Sunset
Chapter 5, epilogue
She loved making love to him outside under the wide open sky. And she loved what came after-the soft touches, the quiet words of bonded devotion. One of her favorite positions was where she was at that moment-her naked body sprawled across his much larger one, the setting sun casting their shimmering skin in warm shades of gold, yellow, and red.
She hummed contentedly and lazily traced the scars over his heart with a single finger. "Jasper, tell me again how we all lived happily ever after."
"I already told you, Babe." One corner of his mouth curved upward in a soft smile, lifted his head to kiss her silky hair, and dropped back to look up at the first stars in the darkening sky.
"But I was an exhausted human riding off into the sunset in a gigantic black four-door truck the first time you told me, and Peter wouldn't shut up." She chuckled lightly, though the memory was foggy as if seen through an ice frosted window. "You kept asking me about Nessie and then I fell asleep. I still think you did that." She squinted her dark red eyes at him accusingly. "The second time you told me, I'd only been a vampire about a week."
Jasper blew out an appreciative breath. "That first week was pretty damn good, too. Insatiable. I think that was the first time I'd ever been tired as a vampire." He hugged her and kissed her forehead. "It's a good thing you have two mates." A small laugh rumbled through his chest. "The second, third, and fourth weeks weren't half-bad either. All the sex, and the promise of more, kept you nice and close. It was pretty damn difficult to keep clothes on you, too. Not that I really minded that part so much."
..
Date: 20 Feb 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Prelude to a sunset, ch 4
thank you, Hon! I've been busily typing away on the epilogue. Lots of dialog. Difficult to make it not boring.
Rick
Okie dokie! Here's a little bit of the epilogue:
Prelude to a Sunset
Chapter 5, epilogue
She loved making love to him outside under the wide open sky. And she loved what came after-the soft touches, the quiet words of bonded devotion. One of her favorite positions was where she was at that moment-her naked body sprawled across his much larger one, the setting sun casting their shimmering skin in warm shades of gold, yellow, and red.
She hummed contentedly and lazily traced the scars over his heart with a single finger. "Jasper, tell me again how we all lived happily ever after."
"I already told you, Babe." One corner of his mouth curved upward in a soft smile, lifted his head to kiss her silky hair, and dropped back to look up at the first stars in the darkening sky.
"But I was an exhausted human riding off into the sunset in a gigantic black four-door truck the first time you told me, and Peter wouldn't shut up." She chuckled lightly, though the memory was foggy as if seen through an ice frosted window. "You kept asking me about Nessie and then I fell asleep. I still think you did that." She squinted her dark red eyes at him accusingly. "The second time you told me, I'd only been a vampire about a week."
Jasper blew out an appreciative breath. "That first week was pretty damn good, too. Insatiable. I think that was the first time I'd ever been tired as a vampire." He hugged her and kissed her forehead. "It's a good thing you have two mates." A small laugh rumbled through his chest. "The second, third, and fourth weeks weren't half-bad either. All the sex, and the promise of more, kept you nice and close. It was pretty damn difficult to keep clothes on you, too. Not that I really minded that part so much."
..
Date: 19 Feb 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't tell if my reviews are even showing up but want you to know I love the story.
Author's Response:
I'm seeing them! I get an email notification that a review has been posted.
Good to hear you are enjoying the story!
Thank you so much!
Rick
Date: 19 Feb 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to hear what Jasper tells her about Alice.
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 4
We'll get that in the next chapter!
Check your settings to see if you're getting notifications. I always try to respond to every review. I try. And I give a sneak peek of the next chapter!
Thanks for YOUR review!
Rick
Okie dokie! Here's a little bit of the epilogue:
Prelude to a Sunset
Chapter 5, epilogue
She loved making love to him outside under the wide open sky. And she loved what came after-the soft touches, the quiet words of bonded devotion. One of her favorite positions was where she was at that moment-her naked body sprawled across his much larger one, the setting sun casting their shimmering skin in warm shades of gold, yellow, and red.
She hummed contentedly and lazily traced the scars over his heart with a single finger. "Jasper, tell me again how we all lived happily ever after."
"I already told you, Babe." One corner of his mouth curved upward in a soft smile, lifted his head to kiss her silky hair, and dropped back to look up at the first stars in the darkening sky.
"But I was an exhausted human riding off into the sunset in a gigantic black four-door truck the first time you told me, and Peter wouldn't shut up." She chuckled lightly, though the memory was foggy as if seen through an ice frosted window. "You kept asking me about Nessie and then I fell asleep. I still think you did that." She squinted her dark red eyes at him accusingly. "The second time you told me, I'd only been a vampire about a week."
Jasper blew out an appreciative breath. "That first week was pretty damn good, too. Insatiable. I think that was the first time I'd ever been tired as a vampire." He hugged her and kissed her forehead. "It's a good thing you have two mates." A small laugh rumbled through his chest. "The second, third, and fourth weeks weren't half-bad either. All the sex, and the promise of more, kept you nice and close. It was pretty damn difficult to keep clothes on you, too. Not that I really minded that part so much."
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[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
didn't see that coming! lol an eternity of Jasper and Peter fighting and bickering (no matter the reason) doesn't sound so good to me. hehehe
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 4
Good to see ya!
"didn't see that coming."
Good! Isn't it nice to have a little surprise now and then?
I think an eternity with Jasper and Peter, even if they do fight once in a while, would be Heaven. *sigh*
Thanks for your review!
Rick
Okie dokie! Here's a little bit of the epilogue:
Prelude to a Sunset
Chapter 5, epilogue
She loved making love to him outside under the wide open sky. And she loved what came after-the soft touches, the quiet words of bonded devotion. One of her favorite positions was where she was at that moment-her naked body sprawled across his much larger one, the setting sun casting their shimmering skin in warm shades of gold, yellow, and red.
She hummed contentedly and lazily traced the scars over his heart with a single finger. "Jasper, tell me again how we all lived happily ever after."
"I already told you, Babe." One corner of his mouth curved upward in a soft smile, lifted his head to kiss her silky hair, and dropped back to look up at the first stars in the darkening sky.
"But I was an exhausted human riding off into the sunset in a gigantic black four-door truck the first time you told me, and Peter wouldn't shut up." She chuckled lightly, though the memory was foggy as if seen through an ice frosted window. "You kept asking me about Nessie and then I fell asleep. I still think you did that." She squinted her dark red eyes at him accusingly. "The second time you told me, I'd only been a vampire about a week."
Jasper blew out an appreciative breath. "That first week was pretty damn good, too. Insatiable. I think that was the first time I'd ever been tired as a vampire." He hugged her and kissed her forehead. "It's a good thing you have two mates." A small laugh rumbled through his chest. "The second, third, and fourth weeks weren't half-bad either. All the sex, and the promise of more, kept you nice and close. It was pretty damn difficult to keep clothes on you, too. Not that I really minded that part so much."
..
Date: 19 Feb 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great update
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sweetie! Hope you like the next one!
Rick
Prelude to a Sunset
Chapter 5, epilogue
She loved making love to him outside under the wide open sky. And she loved what came after-the soft touches, the quiet words of bonded devotion. One of her favorite positions was where she was at that moment-her naked body sprawled across his much larger one, the setting sun casting their shimmering skin in warm shades of gold, yellow, and red.
She hummed contentedly and lazily traced the scars over his heart with a single finger. "Jasper, tell me again how we all lived happily ever after."
"I already told you, Babe." One corner of his mouth curved upward in a soft smile, lifted his head to kiss her silky hair, and dropped back to look up at the first stars in the darkening sky.
"But I was an exhausted human riding off into the sunset in a gigantic black four-door truck the first time you told me, and Peter wouldn't shut up." She chuckled lightly, though the memory was foggy as if seen through an ice frosted window. "You kept asking me about Nessie and then I fell asleep. I still think you did that." She squinted her dark red eyes at him accusingly. "The second time you told me, I'd only been a vampire about a week."
Jasper blew out an appreciative breath. "That first week was pretty damn good, too. Insatiable. I think that was the first time I'd ever been tired as a vampire." He hugged her and kissed her forehead. "It's a good thing you have two mates." A small laugh rumbled through his chest. "The second, third, and fourth weeks weren't half-bad either. All the sex, and the promise of more, kept you nice and close. It was pretty damn difficult to keep clothes on you, too. Not that I really minded that part so much."
..
Date: 17 Feb 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Exceptionally romantic and erotic! You make their connection quite palpable and leave us wanting so much more! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 3
thank you very much! Jasper and Bella being attached made sense to me, but it's good to read that others can believe it, too.
Thanks!
Rick
Here's a little taste of chapter 4.
"I'm Peter. Ain't this a purty picture? Jasper in a bubble bath with a human and smellin' all sweet and yummy," he said, waggling his eyebrows. His rough voice was filled with humor and dripping with curiosity. He waved his hand toward them. "Who's this? Or should I be askin' if she's in the marinade before dinner?"
..
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
well that was unexpected. Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 3
Well, Jasper doesn't want to waste anymore time!
Thanks for giving it a read and a review!
Rick
Here's a little taste of chapter 4.
"I'm Peter. Ain't this a purty picture? Jasper in a bubble bath with a human and smellin' all sweet and yummy," he said, waggling his eyebrows. His rough voice was filled with humor and dripping with curiosity. He waved his hand toward them. "Who's this? Or should I be askin' if she's in the marinade before dinner?"
..
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
love it. I cannot wait to find out how Jasper knew she was his mate then meet peter and char.
jukie.
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 3
No Charlotte here! I hope you're not disappointed.
"I cannot wait to find out how Jasper knew she was his mate"
A bit more will be explained in the next chapter.
Thanks, Jukie!
Rick
Here's a little taste of chapter 4.
"I'm Peter. Ain't this a purty picture? Jasper in a bubble bath with a human and smellin' all sweet and yummy," he said, waggling his eyebrows. His rough voice was filled with humor and dripping with curiosity. He waved his hand toward them. "Who's this? Or should I be askin' if she's in the marinade before dinner?"
..
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 3
thank YOU!
Rick
Here's a little taste of chapter 4.
"I'm Peter. Ain't this a purty picture? Jasper in a bubble bath with a human and smellin' all sweet and yummy," he said, waggling his eyebrows. His rough voice was filled with humor and dripping with curiosity. He waved his hand toward them. "Who's this? Or should I be askin' if she's in the marinade before dinner?"
..
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great update
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 3
Thanks for reviewing, Hon! I do appreciate it.
Rick
Here's a little taste of chapter 4.
"I'm Peter. Ain't this a purty picture? Jasper in a bubble bath with a human and smellin' all sweet and yummy," he said, waggling his eyebrows. His rough voice was filled with humor and dripping with curiosity. He waved his hand toward them. "Who's this? Or should I be askin' if she's in the marinade before dinner?"
..
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm sorry about the storm but glad you updated early. Usually am faithful to Edward but with the background you provided I'm all for Jasper in this one.
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 3
OMG it's snowing!
But besides that ... I'm afraid the power and cable Internet will go out again like it did last week and I wouldn't be able to post on the 14th!
Well, I'm almost always FOR Jasper! So thank you!
Rick
Here's a little taste of chapter 4.
"I'm Peter. Ain't this a purty picture? Jasper in a bubble bath with a human and smellin' all sweet and yummy," he said, waggling his eyebrows. His rough voice was filled with humor and dripping with curiosity. He waved his hand toward them. "Who's this? Or should I be askin' if she's in the marinade before dinner?"
..
Date: 11 Feb 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story so far! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 2
Next chapter will be up in a few days! fingers are crossed though. We're being threatened with 12 inches of snow. I hope the power doesn't go out again. *groan*
Thanks for giving it a read!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Plan on posting chapter 3 on the 14th if the power doesn't get knocked out again. Here's a little preview of it:
Movement in the dark foyer caught her eye and she jerked to a stop, nearly falling over. There was a tall man standing next to her cart by the door. She hadn't heard anyone come into the room.
His face was in shadow, but she knew he wasn't one of the bell boys. He was wearing a cowboy hat, a solid black western-style shirt, black jeans, and worn black boots.
All black? In this heat?
"Oh! I'm sorry, sir. I was just finishing up the suite and getting ready to leave. I'm sorry, really." Nervously, Bella wrung her hands together and tugged at her uniform. She didn't realize it had gotten so late. The housekeepers were supposed to be out of the rooms before check-in time at 4:00. And why wasn't one of the bell boys with him? "I was just making sure everything was in place and-"
"It's all right," said the deep voice. The man stepped farther into the light from the living room. "I'm a little early."
He reached up to remove his black hat and ran his fingers through his hair. She couldn't help noticing his wide shoulders and how his blond hair curled just above his collar.
After removing his hat and lowering his arms, she saw his red eyes.
Red eyes.
..
Date: 10 Feb 2014 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am hoping you update often and no poly..
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 2
Hello! No, Sweetie, no slash in this one, but the plan is for Bella to belong to both Jasper and Peter. They'll both "know" her, in the Biblical sense, but the boys won't be having sex with each other.
I hope that clears it up for you?
Thanks for your reviews!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Plan on posting chapter 3 on the 14th. Here's a little preview of it:
Movement in the dark foyer caught her eye and she jerked to a stop, nearly falling over. There was a tall man standing next to her cart by the door. She hadn't heard anyone come into the room.
His face was in shadow, but she knew he wasn't one of the bell boys. He was wearing a cowboy hat, a solid black western-style shirt, black jeans, and worn black boots.
All black? In this heat?
"Oh! I'm sorry, sir. I was just finishing up the suite and getting ready to leave. I'm sorry, really." Nervously, Bella wrung her hands together and tugged at her uniform. She didn't realize it had gotten so late. The housekeepers were supposed to be out of the rooms before check-in time at 4:00. And why wasn't one of the bell boys with him? "I was just making sure everything was in place and-"
"It's all right," said the deep voice. The man stepped farther into the light from the living room. "I'm a little early."
He reached up to remove his black hat and ran his fingers through his hair. She couldn't help noticing his wide shoulders and how his blond hair curled just above his collar.
After removing his hat and lowering his arms, she saw his red eyes.
Red eyes.
..
Date: 10 Feb 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love Peter and Bella. I will not be reading if this is a poly whatever.. I hope not..
Date: 10 Feb 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very good
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 2
Thank you! Thanks for reading and writing a review, too.
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Here's a little preview of chapter 3:
Movement in the dark foyer caught her eye and she jerked to a stop, nearly falling over. There was a tall man standing next to her cart by the door. She hadn't heard anyone come into the room.
His face was in shadow, but she knew he wasn't one of the bell boys. He was wearing a cowboy hat, a solid black western-style shirt, black jeans, and worn black boots.
All black? In this heat?
"Oh! I'm sorry, sir. I was just finishing up the suite and getting ready to leave. I'm sorry, really." Nervously, Bella wrung her hands together and tugged at her uniform. She didn't realize it had gotten so late. The housekeepers were supposed to be out of the rooms before check-in time at 4:00. And why wasn't one of the bell boys with him? "I was just making sure everything was in place and-"
"It's all right," said the deep voice. The man stepped farther into the light from the living room. "I'm a little early."
He reached up to remove his black hat and ran his fingers through his hair. She couldn't help noticing his wide shoulders and how his blond hair curled just above his collar.
After removing his hat and lowering his arms, she saw his red eyes.
Red eyes.
..
Date: 09 Feb 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like where you are going with this.
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 2
Thanks! And thank you for reviewing.
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Here's a little preview of chapter 3:
Movement in the dark foyer caught her eye and she jerked to a stop, nearly falling over. There was a tall man standing next to her cart by the door. She hadn't heard anyone come into the room.
His face was in shadow, but she knew he wasn't one of the bell boys. He was wearing a cowboy hat, a solid black western-style shirt, black jeans, and worn black boots.
All black? In this heat?
"Oh! I'm sorry, sir. I was just finishing up the suite and getting ready to leave. I'm sorry, really." Nervously, Bella wrung her hands together and tugged at her uniform. She didn't realize it had gotten so late. The housekeepers were supposed to be out of the rooms before check-in time at 4:00. And why wasn't one of the bell boys with him? "I was just making sure everything was in place and-"
"It's all right," said the deep voice. The man stepped farther into the light from the living room. "I'm a little early."
He reached up to remove his black hat and ran his fingers through his hair. She couldn't help noticing his wide shoulders and how his blond hair curled just above his collar.
After removing his hat and lowering his arms, she saw his red eyes.
Red eyes.
..
Date: 09 Feb 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it. I love this Bella and the hating on the mutt cannot stand that dog. Cannot wait how this plays out. Keep up the awesome work better than my stories.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Prelude to a Sunset, ch 1
Thanks, Hon. Hope you like the rest of it!
And thank you for taking time to write a review!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench