Date: 04 Jun 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 27
This is such an incredible story. It's so different, intelligent, and entertaining. What an amazing twist. I'm just wondering if someday, you might finish it?
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ahhh love this! It's a great mix of Twilight and Greek mythology. I can't wait for the next chapter! How often do you normally update??
Date: 18 Jun 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
I do quite love your story and the story itself is written very well.
I appreciate your efforts in researching the mythologies to bring
about this unique story.
it seems you want to garner as many allies for Bella and the kings against this
unforseen evil we have yet to see.
this certainly is your story and I am not faulting any of it.
just saying that I wished that Bella would have sort of thrown a bigger fit
against the companions to the kings a bit more since indeed they
have been together for millennia before Bella. They also have continued
friendship with benefits with these women and I would have liked bella
to be pissed about that as well. I would also liked to have seen the kings
be more contrite and asking for forgiveness from Bella. I realize it is unrealistic for the
men to be without sex for so long and it would be quite petty for Bella but
she is after all a woman who is their true mate. What woman wants their mates past
lovers to remain so close to them, even as supposed friends? Also, I feel it somewhat unrealistic for all 3 women to the kings to be so friendly and understanding of having to give up their positions so
easily after millennia of enjoying having power....
Author's Response:
While I acknowledge the validity of jealousy, I don't really feel it fits with the certainty of such a strong mate bond. Bella was warned about them ahead of time, even if all the details weren't given, and she was told that they had left the castle at her birth. They certainly did not continue to be 'friends with benefits' after Bella's birth (or if they were, it was for a very, very short time) - they have been celibate since then. Probably longer for Marcus.
As for women who have husband's past lovers around and vice versa - I know and have absolutely no issue with a few of my husband's exes, and we are both very good friends with one of my past lovers and his wife. In fact, I'd consider that particular couple among our best friends, even though we all know that her husband and I have dated.
I suppose it all comes down to trust, and though Bella and the Kings have not had a great deal of time to learn enough about each other to truly earn trust, in my mind the bond provides surety.
The Sisters, on the other hand - well they've had 1500 years to get used to power, true, but they've also had 1500 years to get used to the idea that it wouldn't be theirs forever. Perhaps the bitterness and tantrums have been fought and dealt with in that time. It would be more unreasonable to me to have them start to be bitches now. At the very least they should have got all their bitchiness out in the last 18 years.
I do thank-you for your comments, and hope you continue to enjoy the way the story progresses. I hope to update again soon.
J
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome story! Update soon😁
Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
WOW! I love this story. Way to mix it all up and make an exciting new playground for our minds. You have a gift, and I thank you for sharing it. I look forward to seeing where you take us.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:10 AM Title: Interlude II: Vampires and Shifters and Mates - Oh My!
WOOTWOOTWOOT!
Date: 15 Oct 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
HAHAHAHAHHA!!!!! OMG THAT WAS TOO FUNNY...LOVED IT
Date: 15 Oct 2014 2:36 AM Title: Interlude IV: Reactions & Relationships. Part II: Relationships
What a fantastic chapter :)
Date: 15 Oct 2014 1:28 AM Title: Interlude IV - Reactions & Relationships. Part I: Reactions
Poor Emmett but I can see Rose did have valid concerns.
Carlisle,I can understand why he was angry after loosing his mate but he invited evil with how he acted.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh Jake and Esme :))
Date: 15 Oct 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
This is just too good...really loving it
Date: 14 Oct 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
The meeting between the vamps and the rez went well.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
Their mating was beautiful!!
Author's Response:
Thank-you. It was incredibly difficult to write. I appreciate your reviews.
J
Date: 14 Oct 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am really am enjoying this so much :)
Date: 07 Sep 2014 1:37 AM Title: Interlude IV - Reactions & Relationships. Part I: Reactions
Very good
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Another great update
Date: 14 Jun 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Please update soon!! Love the story
Date: 10 Jun 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love is story. You are a very gifted writer
Date: 09 Jun 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
WOW! Love the way this is going. Having Edward arrogant, but not evil is a nice change :)
Date: 20 May 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was fantastic. Really really looking forward to reading much more if these 4 ;)
Date: 19 May 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
in a way this chapter was cute and sweet. i really love these 4 together.
Date: 18 May 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Enjoyed this update. Really excited for the next one :)
Date: 18 May 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
i'm so glad you updated:D and ahhh i want my own marcus ^^
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really hope the villan isn't one of the kings former companions :(. But not really sure who else it could be.
Really enjoying your story and excited to get the next update.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the explanation about the frequency of feeding
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
I loved that chapter
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:03 AM Title: Interlude II: Vampires and Shifters and Mates - Oh My!
I didn't think I Leah would be disappointed....lol
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
WOOT
Oh poor Leah...lol. I am sure she will love having two mates ;)
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love how you have described the bonds all through your story
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Lucky jake was thinking clearly. Aro would have lost it
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:59 AM Title: Interlude: The flight over
Of jane you fiesty thing....lol
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
They are going to get their girl. I am glad they see Seth as n asset
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well it is certainly getting interesting
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Glad Bella told jake.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying it
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
Dun dun dun, lovee itt, moreee pleaseee
Date: 26 Mar 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love it!! update soon, can't wait to see what happens next!!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love the story!! hope you update soon..
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this! Neither the Wolves nor the Kings are the "Bad Guys" and it doesn't feel like a forced situation(If that makes any sense)
Can't wait to see where you take this. :)
Author's Response:
It does make sense, and thank-you :)
Date: 18 Mar 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving it!
And appreciating the consistent updates. ;)
Date: 17 Mar 2014 7:42 PM Title: Interlude II: Vampires and Shifters and Mates - Oh My!
Perfect
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
This story was so awsome. I loved every part of it and I hope you continue to write this story.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love the story, hope you update soon!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Im glad they are together now and it will be interesting to see if Charlie becomes a vampire or remains human
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really enjoying it :)
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you! this is a new and interesting read...looking forward to more. T
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really really good. Can't wait for the next update
Date: 01 Mar 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
uhoh ... Laurent doesn't realize that he almost killed the kings mate ... should be interesting what Caius does
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loving this so far.....next chapter pleeeeeease?!?
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
You have something that is in the beginning something really great and has so much room to grow into something beyond amazing. I'm looking forward to this story, truly.