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Reviewer: LBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 27

This is such an incredible story. It's so different, intelligent, and entertaining. What an amazing twist. I'm just wondering if someday, you might finish it? 

Reviewer: Crazyinagoodway Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 27

Ahhh love this! It's a great mix of Twilight and Greek mythology.  I can't wait for the next chapter! How often do you normally update??

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

I do quite love your story and the story itself is written very well.

I appreciate your efforts in researching the mythologies to bring

about this unique story.

it seems you want to garner as many allies for Bella and the kings against this

unforseen evil we have yet to see.

this certainly is your story and I am not faulting any of it.

just saying that I wished that Bella would have sort of thrown a bigger fit

against the companions to the kings a bit more since indeed they

have been together for millennia before Bella. They also have continued 

friendship with benefits with these women and I would have liked bella

to be pissed about that as well. I would also liked to have seen the kings 

be more contrite and asking for forgiveness from Bella. I realize it is unrealistic for the

men to be without sex for so long and it would be quite petty for Bella but 

she is after all a woman who is their true mate. What woman wants their mates past 

lovers to remain so close to them, even as supposed friends?  Also, I feel it somewhat unrealistic for all 3 women to the kings to be so friendly and understanding of having to give up their positions so

easily after millennia of enjoying having power....



Author's Response:

While I acknowledge the validity of jealousy, I don't really feel it fits with the certainty of such a strong mate bond. Bella was warned about them ahead of time, even if all the details weren't given, and she was told that they had left the castle at her birth. They certainly did not continue to be 'friends with benefits' after Bella's birth (or if they were, it was for a very, very short time) - they have been celibate since then. Probably longer for Marcus.

As for women who have husband's past lovers around and vice versa - I know and have absolutely no issue with a few of my husband's exes, and we are both very good friends with one of my past lovers and his wife. In fact, I'd consider that particular couple among our best friends, even though we all know that her husband and I have dated.

I suppose it all comes down to trust, and though Bella and the Kings have not had a great deal of time to learn enough about each other to truly earn trust, in my mind the bond provides surety.

The Sisters, on the other hand - well they've had 1500 years to get used to power, true, but they've also had 1500 years to get used to the idea that it wouldn't be theirs forever. Perhaps the bitterness and tantrums have been fought and dealt with in that time. It would be more unreasonable to me to have them start to be bitches now. At the very least they should have got all their bitchiness out in the last 18 years.

I do thank-you for your comments, and hope you continue to enjoy the way the story progresses. I hope to update again soon.

 

J

Reviewer: texasgal14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 25

Awesome story! Update soon😁

Reviewer: Kritty67 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 25

WOW!  I love this story.  Way to mix it all up and make an exciting new playground for our minds.  You have a gift, and I thank you for sharing it.  I look forward to seeing where you take us.

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:10 AM Title: Interlude II: Vampires and Shifters and Mates - Oh My!

WOOTWOOTWOOT!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

WOOT!

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 24

HAHAHAHAHHA!!!!! OMG THAT WAS TOO FUNNY...LOVED IT 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 2:36 AM Title: Interlude IV: Reactions & Relationships. Part II: Relationships

What a fantastic chapter :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 1:28 AM Title: Interlude IV - Reactions & Relationships. Part I: Reactions

Poor Emmett but I can see Rose did have valid concerns.

Carlisle,I can understand why he was angry after loosing his mate but he invited evil with how he acted. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh Jake and Esme :))

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

This is just too good...really loving it 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 18

The meeting between the vamps and the rez went well. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

Their mating was beautiful!!



Author's Response:

Thank-you. It was incredibly difficult to write. I appreciate your reviews.

J

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am really am enjoying this so much :)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 1:37 AM Title: Interlude IV - Reactions & Relationships. Part I: Reactions

Very good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

Another great update

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great update

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

Please update soon!! Love the story

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 20

I love is story. You are a very gifted writer

Reviewer: TheWhitlocksGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 20

WOW!  Love the way this is going.  Having Edward arrogant, but not evil is a nice change :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

That was fantastic. Really really looking forward to reading much more if these 4 ;)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

in a way this chapter was cute and sweet. i really love these 4 together. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

Enjoyed this update. Really excited for the next one :)

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

i'm so glad you updated:D and ahhh i want my own marcus ^^

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

Very very good

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really hope the villan isn't one of the kings former companions :(. But not really sure who else it could be. 

Really enjoying your story and excited to get the next update. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved the explanation about the frequency of feeding 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

I loved that chapter

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:03 AM Title: Interlude II: Vampires and Shifters and Mates - Oh My!

I didn't think I Leah would be disappointed....lol

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

WOOT

Oh poor Leah...lol. I am sure she will love having two mates ;)

 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love how you have described the bonds all through your story

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Lucky jake was thinking clearly. Aro would have lost it 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:59 AM Title: Interlude: The flight over

Of jane you fiesty thing....lol

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

They are going to get their girl. I am glad they see Seth as n asset

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well it is certainly getting interesting 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

Glad Bella told jake. 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really enjoying it 

Reviewer: HappyExecutioner Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

Dun dun dun, lovee itt, moreee pleaseee

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love it!! update soon, can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love the story!! hope you update soon.. 

Reviewer: TheWhitlocksGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love this!  Neither the Wolves nor the Kings are the "Bad Guys" and it doesn't feel like a forced situation(If that makes any sense)
Can't wait to see where you take this. :)



Author's Response:

It does make sense, and thank-you :)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

Very very good

Reviewer: Zamar22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loving it!  

And appreciating the consistent updates.  ;)

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 7:42 PM Title: Interlude II: Vampires and Shifters and Mates - Oh My!

Perfect

Reviewer: dz0316 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

Woot!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great update

Reviewer: Zamar22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Woot

Reviewer: Isabella Mare Swann Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

This story was so awsome. I loved every part of it and I hope you continue to write this story.

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love the story, hope you update soon!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

Very good

Reviewer: Terass Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

Im glad they are together now and it will be interesting to see if Charlie becomes a vampire or remains human

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you! T

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love this story

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

Really enjoying it :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading more :)

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you! this is a new and interesting read...looking forward to more. T

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

Really really good. Can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great storyline

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

uhoh ... Laurent doesn't realize that he almost killed the kings mate  ...  should be interesting what Caius does

Reviewer: HelsBells Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loving this so far.....next chapter pleeeeeease?!?

Reviewer: sam11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow

Reviewer: sam11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh oh

Reviewer: sam11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting

Reviewer: sam11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

You have something that is in the beginning something really great and has so much room to grow into something beyond amazing. I'm looking forward to this story, truly.

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