Date: 27 Mar 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it! Amazing ending!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it thanks so much
Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
They are back to happiness love it
Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
So happy he is coming around just like her
Date: 05 Feb 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG Phil is crazy someone shoot him. Edward finely gets the girl back and shot at the same time not cool.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
That is the turning point for her she will let him back in???? PLEASE
Date: 05 Feb 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love Esme she is a good momma :) I think Bella is getting the idea
Date: 04 Feb 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
She has a lot to think about can she live without him the answer is NO. He is such a good man and he is taking resposobilty for what happened
Date: 04 Feb 2016 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
So much pain. I like the way Alice said that so you fell in love with both of them
Date: 04 Feb 2016 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Shit has hit the fan OMG
Date: 04 Feb 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bella knows what to do good girl.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aro is a creeper but I think he will respect Edward enough to keep his hands to himself
Date: 03 Feb 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Phil is creeping me out he can not take NO for an answer. Edward needs to come clean
Date: 03 Feb 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
She has to see how alike they are once she thinks about it but what a great time
Date: 03 Feb 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
It is getting closer she is going to freak out.
Date: 03 Feb 2016 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope she understands when she figures it out . Love the wet dream poor girl but it was good.
Date: 03 Feb 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
That is going to be a fun trip ;-)
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love your comment lol. I for one am loving this story. I think Edward is getting himself in deeper in trouble when she finds out it is him
Date: 02 Feb 2016 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
She is thinking about how well he is taking care of her the way Anthony did. He has to tell her son
Date: 02 Feb 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
Stephen is lucky the cops showed up or he would of got his ass kicked.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love it he is going for it I just want to know when she finds out who he is.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
He feed her lol and they both got what they wanted I am loving it thanks
Date: 31 Jan 2016 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
They are both thinking of each other in both forms
Date: 31 Jan 2016 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
That is just so hot but I am worried when she finds out it is him how will she react
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
How long is he going to be able to keep himself secert ? That is hot as hell
Date: 28 Jan 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
He is changing her life more than she thinks.
Date: 04 Dec 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
The text is going to freak her out. Alice unloaded wow
Date: 22 Aug 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
You got my attention at chapter 1.. sold me on the story by chapter 2. Love it love it
Date: 29 Jun 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
Now that is an interesting marriage proposal!
But very fitting for these two sexual deviants! Haha
Date: 29 Jun 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 28
Edward's healing time frame was quite rapid for that level of physical activity.
They are so good together.
Date: 29 Jun 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm hopeful that justice is served for Edward. Phillip is sentenced to a long term in prison.
It's a very good thing that Carlisle is able to explain what is happening.
He is waking up from sedation!
Date: 29 Jun 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
Of course Bella's dreams were foreshadowing this situation! Esme's greatest fears take place on home soil. Thanks goodness that Edwards father is a world class physician. Where did the bullets enter his body?
Date: 29 Jun 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
You're right, I liked this chapter very much. Edward finally expresses his feelings for Bella to both Alice and Jasper. The best part is Bella finally heard what he was saying.
Take that Phil!
Date: 29 Jun 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm happy that Alice gave Edward a tongue lashing for wanting to run. Leaving Bella once again to deal with the fallout. Jasper is wise not to further involve himself in this mess Edward created.
Bella received the words she needed to hear from her mom's presence. I hope she is able to ward off Phil when he just materializes in Seattle. Or maybe he will just miss her as she heads to her other galleries.
Esme is going to make Bella cry with her story. I can sense it.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh Edward, you had better work fast. The vultures are circling!
Bella, the girlfriends are right. It's time to analyze your true feelings about Edward's actions. Is this about feeling duped or about falling in love and feeling hurt by the man that returns that live?
Date: 28 Jun 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
The road up hill is always the longest!
The fact that Rosalie and Jasper have used a pseudonym for Edward's photography will be another huge setback for Bella!
I hope Phil will not be at this Galla. It will send Bella over the edge.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
Lies always catch up to the deceiver!
What will she do now?
Will Edward run, taking the South Africa Mendela job for Time Magazine?
Date: 28 Jun 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Huh, Aria shows up just as E&B are settling into a good place within their new found romance. I agree with Bella, call Aro and request his assistance in retrieving Aria's husband and son. That's not cruel, just smart thinking!
I wonder how much publicity Bella's portrait skills will garner in the art world?
Date: 28 Jun 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ado is definitely creepy but he would not disrespect a guest in his house by physically abusing them. Bella is making inroads with Aro's wife. That's a positive note.
Has Bella teased Edward to the point of Anthony making an unexpected appearance?
Date: 28 Jun 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
At least Edward didn't get overly frustrated and call Bella to accuse her of lying about her not being with anyone else. I'm sure the words of Alice and Rosalie are ringing in his head.....she doesn't take the time to date. There has been no one for a very ONG time. This information should be a relief.
But his photos in Bella New York gallery will be a bigger hurdle!
Date: 28 Jun 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Neither one of them could hold out any longer.
I'm a bit worried that Jasper has opened Pandora's box. Edward's secret identity will be exposed on all fronts!
Date: 28 Jun 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Why has he never mentioned an ex-fiancé? He mentioned being in love but not engaged. This should be a good story!
Phil is going to be a problem.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
Is Bella not as embarrassed about her nocturnal activities as she lead Edward to believe?
Did Edward just confess to Bella he is more emotionally involved than she thought?
Date: 26 Jun 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm thinking that Bella has put the pieces together and she is pleased that thus man has multiple sides to him. But, she calls the shots! He always gave her that power.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Anthony makes an appearance as Edward? Will they come face to face and deal with the truth?
Or more lies?
Edward is taking such good care of her needs.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
It was a subconscious thought, verbalized in her drug induced state. But I'm sure Edward will stiffen up at the sound of his alter who's name.
Will he question his chances of winning her over as Edward? Since he seems to be competing with himself as Anthony. Such a tangled web he has woven.
Did Edward catch Bella's association of the subway with Anthony?
Date: 26 Jun 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
Stephen has turned into an obsessed stalker. Will Bella need a restraining order against him?
Both of their histories will need to be discussed at some point if they plan on a future together.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm guessing Bella won't be getting any more massages from Stephan in her future.
Did Edward really give Bella a silent command to back away from Stephan with just a small shake of his head. And did she automatically acquiesce? Wow. An action that she probably didn't even consciously recognize.
I like how she made the decision for her and Edward to go for coffee as an escape from the party.
Edward has become very possible. How will Bella take that?
Date: 26 Jun 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
The pictures are a nice touch!
If Edward already knows he is in so deep he won't be able to leave Bella, how will he reconcile his change to Edward in order to win her over?
I wonder if Isabella was thanking Anthony for so much more than the physical release he always provides? Is she getting ready to say good-bye to Anthony?
He fed her this time! :)
Date: 26 Jun 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
How is Edward going to transition his new found affection for Bella from his animalistic lust for Isabella's bold blind faith in Anthony?
It would seem that they are both feeling the pull away from the dramatic secrecy of sexy hook ups and are ponder the possibility of an actual relationship. Will the hit a wall of confusion before moving in a positive direction?
I can't believe that Rosalie knows!
Date: 25 Jun 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Anthony is creating a very different Isabella. She is seeking her own gratification through him.
I'm sure Edward is aware that his double image will eventually cause a rift between him and his beautiful muse, Isabella.
I'm confused as to when he uses Tony Masen. Bella recognizes his photojournalism name as E. Cullen. But the concierge of his building uses Mr. Masen. Jasper referred to his pen name as Tony Masen.
Date: 25 Jun 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
The differences between Edward's actions on the train, when they were together at the penthouse, and being with their friends must be taking its toll on him emotionally. How long can he keep this going?
Now that Edward and Bella are attempting to be cordial will she piece together the similarities in Edward's schedule and Anthony's time away? Will the tingling sensation she feels when they touch eventually be another trigger?
Date: 25 Jun 2015 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
The experience is thrilling, the reality is frightening!
Is Edward truly the dominant type or is he playing the part to increase the anticipation and exhilarating responses?
I wonder how Bella will reconcile her desires and need for Anthony when her mind is getting ready to start dating. Her body now belongs to Anthony.
In their future I see them us ring these alter egos names Isabella and Anthony to play out all kinds of sexual fantasies! :)
Date: 25 Jun 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Will Edward have to blindfold Isabella in order to use the tantric chair?
Yeah, Alice will be funded by a private investor!
Who will be replacing Alice as personal assistant to Bella Swan?
Date: 25 Jun 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
If I were Bella I'd be asking myself his he acquired my number. Does he know some if the same people I know. If so, who is the connection? She has so many business associates that it would be difficult to track down. Let alone revealing to those she spoke to the nature of the meetings with this stranger. They would probably tell her to call the police!
I feel sorry for Alice. She needs to become her own business entity. Get her dreams of designing out in the fashion world. She should also ask Bella to arrange meetings with people they have met a cross the country to help get Alice established. Wow, enough ranting on Alice's behalf. Hahaha
Date: 25 Jun 2015 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
There is something to be said about the forbidden or secret desires that begin to override the mundane rules of life. It's the fallout that causes despair and regret.
How long before they give in to the pull?
Date: 25 Jun 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well two of the three pairings have found their way.
I'm of the impression that Edward thought the brunette beauty was attached to the guy her tongue was buried inside.
Her exit at the same time as his was interesting and confusing at the same time.
Bella played the part of a floozie tonight even though it's not her true modus operandi.
The foundation of intrigue and frustration.
Will Edward's new train ride obsession backfire?
Date: 04 May 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
seems phil might be buying e's condo
Date: 04 May 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
ex-fiance . . . hmmm?