Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Donkey. Hahaha, love it.
She's gonna have to tell him.
It's gonna get bad before it gets good.
Donkey really needs to go
I'm intrigued to see what Bella may find on her.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm guessing marmaduke is Jacob. Lol
Isn't it also the name of a dog. Lol
Or could be Mike.
So she says it could blow her cover.
That's not good.
I'm trying not to think the worst cause this is Bella and Edward were taking about and it has to work out. Lol.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the chemistry these two have. It's funny to watch.
But it could get messy.
The kids love her though.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm sure he didn't mind coping a feel. Haha.
No matter how much they try and stay away they just keep bumping into each other.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
That's gonna go down well.
Not.
Seems there is just as much for Bella to loose as their is Edward right now.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
So is the little cabin the same one Edward took his kids too?
Seems there was more to Charlies death. Could it be mob related.
Edward is feeling a little guilty now.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really not trusting Jessica.
Maybe Bella could be the new nanny.
Let's face it the kids seem to like her.
As for her taking them. I think he needs to be more grateful and up his security for his kids regardless. Bella obviously knows who he is.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
She sure knows about them.
It's a mob fic it should sounds alarm bells which in a way I guess it does, but it's also intriguing. What has Bella got up her sleeve.
Not trusting Jessica.
Kids aren't always wrong. I'd go with the kids instincts in this situation.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm, that was interesting.
I first instinct is to not trust her.
But I'm sure there is more to it.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
This could be interesting.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Still intrigued.
Edward is kind of like a lost soul.
I want to hug him.
Bella is a character.
Date: 10 Apr 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I'm intrigued.
Confused. Kind of but it's the start of the story so plenty of time to go.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 40
Wow, I love your writing. I saw this rec'd somewhere and just had to sit down and read the whole thing. I loved it. These two and their snarky relationship. I loved the whole other aspect of it with Bella's abilities. That's just amazing. It would be so fantastic to have her intelligence. And I wouldn't mind having my very own Chaos either. Cassie and Cullen were so cute. I'm going to miss these characters.
Date: 21 Nov 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 40
I love you girls keep up the amazing work. I say there is nothing you can't do! Thank you thank you!
Date: 20 Nov 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
God I forgot how much I love the nick names. Enjoying this so much on my rainy Sunday afternoon. Cheers!
Date: 26 Sep 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 40
They need to invest in a t.v.
Date: 26 Sep 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
Am I the only one that feel weird about ur father in law checking the goods?
no thanks
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2016 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
This is such a great and wonderful story. Another of my VERY favorites. Love it to pieces!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 38
What could possibly act like a parasite in a woman's body and multiply in 24 hours? It's totally a baby Bella!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2016 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 40
I freaking liked Chaos.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2016 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 39
Great chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2016 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 38
Great honeymoon. Unknown parasite... I'm thinking she's pregnant.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2016 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
Hawk and Charlie are hilarious.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 36
That went more quickly than I thought it would.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm curious to know if Charlie is really alive. Bella has a lot to deal with, but she's still badass.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 34
What a chapter... a lot of distrubing infomation was uncovered.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 33
Reading on...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 32
Rut ruh...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
Bella is quite the badass.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
I loved the scene with the kids.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love Hawk.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
Reading on...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 27
Bella has had a troublesome life.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is a badass.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella is definitely a mystery.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm loving this Bella more and more each chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella's helluva smart. Edward may be pushing her too much. I'm hoping as I read on Edward confronts Sasha for her actions; who is Penny?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh hell.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
Jacob is god-awful.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Interesting twist that Esme was childhood friends with Renee.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
The nicknames are getting hard to keept straight, lol. I like she's opening up to him more and more.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm liking that they are opening up to each other.
Shery
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
It's good they talked and discovered a bit more about each other. I think its Jacob that sent the flowers and note to Bella. Mike is definitely working for him. I'm also starting to think that Guido and Miss Honey know Edward's grandfather.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
Finally, she's gonna be the kids nanny. Something is off about Mike.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Their attraction is so clear. I'm wondering what's up with Mike, he didn't seem to like Edward much and he said Edward was dangerous. Does Mike really know who Edward is?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm getting a kick out of Bella.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Let Bella beat the shit out of Donkey.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter. I laughed at Jessica's nickname, Donkey.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm thinking Marmaduke is Jacob.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
I don't blame Edward for being over cautious with his kids, but I'm wondering if Bella really doesn't know what kind of business Edward is into outside the public eye.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Something is up with Jessica. I love the kid's mischieviousness. They sure know how to play their Daddy. I think Bella is in for some changes.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
This makes for an interesting turn of events.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm interested to know who Charlie crossed.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
I wanna slap Jessica for loosing the kids.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Something isn't sitting well with Jessica. There definitely is something up with Bella's childhood.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have my suspicions that Edward or his family had something to do with Bella's father's death.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
They're worlds are about to clash.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking Edawrd's family man ways. Bella, lol, she's a little con-artist. I can hardly wait for Edward to meet her.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Gald Edward found a way to get his family. Though, Bella has me a bit confused.
Sherry
Date: 23 Apr 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it! Uh-oh!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it! Bella is amazing!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! Mike is crazy!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! I really don't like Jessica!