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Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thank  you  for  writing  and  sharing  your  story! Another  great  reread.

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it!!

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 38

Still my absolute favorite mafia story, I'm not even sure how many times I've read it now but I like to come back every 5 or 6 months and read it again. Thank you for putting out all these wonderful stories that I just love to read.

Melissa

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hate to admit that I have never heard of Paul Sheldon. Is there a hissen meaning?



Author's Response:

paul Sheldon was the name of the fictional character who was a writer in the movie Misery.

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 40

Absolutely love the story. Look forward to your outtake should will post when you get a chance

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 40

Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: lizlovelullaby Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

I'm starting to hate these nicknames, really, it hurts my brain, i love your story, truly, but the nicknames are too much 

Reviewer: Loveulots Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 29

nooo no fading out lemons ;(

Reviewer: Loveulots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 26

lol i love kate's nick name

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 40

Wow I could use more of story

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 40

Awesome story, thanks for writing it!

Reviewer: 3moons Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well i have to change my presomptions, if Guido and miss Honey are Aro and his wife, then Hawk is Peter.... and not Eleazar..

Reviewer: 3moons Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

I think that Bella is a computer genius wizard, and i would not be surprised if she is Dora.... Then i'm pretty sure Guido and Miss Honey are really close to Edward as in familly, that means it should be Aro and his wife because it can't be Carslisle and Esme. Now Eleazar said that he knows Dora, but is he saying the truth about being a man or does he lie to cover for Bella and if so as there is only 3 persons knowing her true identity then in this case he is Hawk...

Reviewer: Maanas Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 40

I liked very much your story. I almost didn't read because I don't have good expierience with mafia stories, but this story is really good, congratulations, I loved it and thanks for share with us.

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 40

Such a great story. I've read it many times.

Reviewer: Qwhidbee10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 40

I loved every chapter of this story!!!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 40

this story was so good.  The humor, the drama, but not too much which is good.  this is a story I will be rereading often!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 30

What does BIM stand for? I know that IM = Iron Man (the vibrator) and BIM references Edwards cock, but what does the B stand for?

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow, I think this is the best story you ladies have ever written. It has EVERYTHING!! I have reads more than a thousand fan fiction stories and this one is truly in my top 10 faves. some of those faves are the BIG ones; Emancipation Proclimation, Master of the Universe, The Submissive series, Clipped Wings & Inked Armor, The Misapprehension of Bella Swan, The University of Edward Masen, etc. I fucking love you and your work. You are so imaginative - You Fucking ROCK!!

I'm glad at least some of my theories correct! 

Reading on... JDThorn

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 22

Ok, so I've had all day to think about it and I have a new theory. I thing the government wants Bella cause she's "Einstein" smart and they'll do anything to get her, even kill her parents. I have not figured out about who put the hit on her. Yet.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Could Guido be Edward's Grampa? Bella did mention that they knew him...

They are helping to protect Her identity too. 

Bella is a great actress, she could've pulled it off (I mean pretending to it know Aro).

And could Bella be this "Dora" the best that he is talking about?

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

My theory: Jacob (Marmaduke) found out Ursula fired Bella & had the crap kicked out of her. The 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

My guesses: Miss Honey & Guido - an older care taking Angela & Ben

Karma duke = Jacob & Kato = Sam

My guess for Bella is she is in disguise and running from whoever killed her father.

Am I even close? 

By the way, I'm working my way through every one of your completed stories & I'm loving EVERY ONE of them! You ladies are THE BOMB!!! Lurve you sooooo much!!!!!

 

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 33

This is my second time reading this story. I had forgotten about the hillbilly aspect of Bella's siblings being aunt and uncle as well as siblings to Edward and Bella's offspring:))

Reviewer: edwardslamb Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi!

I have never left a review on here before, but I tried the function to contact you and it wouldn't work.  I read this story a few weeks ago and totally fell in love with it.  My question to you is whether or not it is available in a PDF form???  I am a sucker for a good story and will read it many times.  It seems that more and more each day, I see many of my favorite stories disappearing :(  I am trying to download my absolute favorites to my Nook so I can read them again and again.  Would you be willing to send it to me if you have it in that format?  My email address is mommyjgv@gmail.com and I would LOVE to have it.  Thank you for sharing your talent with us!  The Edward/Bella of this story is one of my top faves.  I love that she is so smart and that he is so upfront and honest with her.  I get so tired of the "I'm not good for you....keeping secrets...waiting for the other foot to drop" storylines.  This was refreshing and proof that you can have an amazing storyline without conflict between E&B for 1/3 of the story.  I find it amusing that one of the more mature acting Bella's was in actuality a much younger one!  I truly hope to read more of your work.  Thanks again!!!  Jeanna



Author's Response:

Absolutely, Jenna. Are you on Facebook? If you are please go in and ask to join TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction there are PDF copies of all of our stories there. You can also use calibre and their downloader on here to download it yourself, but I am not super versed in the working of it. If you cannot get it by goign to our facebook group, than please email me at teamalltwilight@gmail.com and I will download it and send it to you. We love that you love our stuff so much. THANK YOU. We hope you enjoy some of our other stories and watch out for many more coming this year. Some really good stuff coming soon. xoxo- Kasi (and Nikky)

Reviewer: Paragod Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 40

I loved it..

thanks,

v

Reviewer: DeeBee7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

This story has got me completely hooked! I especially love the nicknames, very clever.

I just wanted to point one thing out though. It's not criticism (because you in no way deserve it!), it's just that I'm a bit anal about this kind of thing. When Bella said "...your feeble mind ELUDED you to believe is okay", she should have said DELUDED. Again, not a reflection on you, just a personal quirk of mine. I'm working on it...

 

Can't wait to finish reading the rest of this story!

 

:-D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 40

You have written one of the best Bella and Edward combinations I've had the pleasure of reading! Great story, great family, just loved it all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 39

There's no need for Tanya to be a crazy bitch when Sasha is doing such a good job of it! What a lucky woman to only labor for a bit more than three hours! Their lives are just about perfect now, especially with all the family they have!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 38

That may be the smartest computer in the universe, but I'm betting on a honeymoon baby, not some dangerous parasite! All that fabulous sex was bound to bear  fruit, no pun intended!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 37

This sounds like a wedding I would love to attend!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 36

Somewhere deep down they have to be saying, what a relief!The twins were darling in their questioning of Charlie! This is so nice for everybody.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 35

It is kind of fun to read about a James that isn't an evil sadist, just sort of a regular guy. This is going to be exciting, them hunting for Charlie! Badass Bella is going to lay waste to opposition if they don't cough up her dad!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 34

What a shocker! Charlie is alive, somewhere, and I'll bet they move heaven and earth to find him! It's great that Jacob and his minions are destroyed! If they can find Charlie then Bella will at long last have some peace in her life, perhaps!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 33

What a surprise, to learn that Cullen and Cassie are Bella's siblings, genetically anyway! Those slimy, big brother-type Volturi are evil!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 32

It has to be something about her parents or herself since she wants to kill people over it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella is amazing but even she is not perfect. The thought that Sasha is trying to take her rightful place with the children does not sit well! It figures that Alice wants to help plan the wedding.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 30

The twins are so smart, not to mention sneaky, listening to adult conversations. Kids always know more than we think they do!I'm  so looking forward to training tomorrow!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 29

That ring sounds gorgeous, and the history is fascinating, all of it! It's really cool that Bella has actually been a part of Edward's family all this time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow, Bella truly is amazing! It's kind of like living in the future, what she can do!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 27

There can't be too many more secrets from Bella's past, now that everyone is introduced by all their names! It's beginning to be clearer why the Volturi are after Bella! What a prize she would be for any group or agency!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'm pretty sure Edward will be okay with Bella's skills, eventually.Damn, the woman is a marvel, not to mention lethal! Good thing, too or there would be a bunch of dead people that are related to Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 25

I love that her intelligence turns him on more than her looks! Probably not by much more, I'm thinking. I'm dying of curiousity about the rest of Bella's past!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 24

Edward is my hero! He really laid it all out for Sasha! Thjis talk is going to be a doozy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thought for a minute Bella would successfully hold him off, but those soft words of love and lethal kisses finally got to her! That was some shitty trick Sasha pulled on Edward! Someone needs to slap her like she slapped him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 22

Chaos must be her security system that it better than his, supposedly. I don't blame her for being hurt and upset and madder than hell, that looked really bad! On the other hand, it really wasn';t his fault, either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

I think Edward is in for a surprise when it comes to Bella's training.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

The more I learn about Bella's past, the more I want to know! That was some revelation that Edward's mother was best friends with Bella's mother, and she is Bella's godmother!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

These two seem to have no problem sharing personal information!Better they know most everything about their pasts, before embarking on their future together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

I figured all the really bad stuff was Jacob's fault, him or Mike, and sure as hell! I'm so glad they are being honest with each other.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm really, really not caring for Roscoe one little bit! He and Jacob Black vie for ass of the week, with their smug arrogance! Crossing my fingers that Bella and Edward continue to learn about each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

This ought to be really enlightening!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

Pretty funny the way she handled Newton! It's nice that Bella is sharing even a bit of herself with Edward, since he wants more with her, I can tell!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

I kind of like Bella talking to herself, it gives an idea of what she's thinking. I'm seeing progress between her and Edward and the kids love her already.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

Hearing that bitch threaten those children made what Bella did to her seem just right! I loved his response to her taking Donkey down!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

Bella may be calling her Donkey because she's an ass. I'm with Bella on this , there is something weird about Jessica and I can see her doing something to the twins, so hopefully she won't hurt them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

No surprise when Bella got fired, she wasn't about to let Ursula be mean to Cassie! I hope Edward gets a brainstorm and hires her to be nanny to his kids!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 10

She really is having fun trying to get his goat all the time! There is an unmistakable bond between Bella and the twins. Makes a person wonder why?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

Funny how they just keep running into each other.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

Cassie is okay and Cullen is with his grandma, wonder what has happened to the nanny? More to the moment, what is Edward going to say about Bella working at his club?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm getting a hint, that Bella is hunting her father's killer and thinks Edward is involved. I will put my money on the Blacks, because she won't fall for a guy who may have shot her dad! Poor kid has been on the run for a very long time.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

Jessica has an agenda from the looks of her actions. We know Bella does too, but at least she's not being mean to Edward's children!And yes, the New Age librarian seems a bit weird!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

She has to be referencing Tony Stark, Ironman himself. It just hit me that was it. What is she doing checking these guys out? Something hinky going on I'm thinking!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

There must be reasons for her calling him Stark and for her ability to hack into his security. She sounds like a very smart girl pretending to be someone who needs to work two jobs!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

Not a very auspicious beginning to what I hope will be an "interesting realationship! Oh yes, what's up with the hair dye and contacts?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really liked her taking that jackass for two hundred, and sharing it with the waitress! What a jerk! I'm sympathizing some with Edward, seeing his twins off to kindergarten and wishing for a soulmate.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting characters right off the bat I see. Looking forward to learning more about them both.

Reviewer: belladadiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 40

Well written. Despite how realistic it is :) I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Ayasama Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 40

Great story! I love this Bella

Reviewer: beachblonde2244 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 40

What a fantastic story! I so enjoyed reading their adventures in love and family. Y'all are amazing writers and I can't wait to read more of your work. 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampireGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 40

Great story!!!! LOVED it.  I hated for it to end. :(  You guys are fantastic story tellers and writers.  I had a hard time setting it aside to do RL stuff that had to get done.  Looking forward to reading more of your stories. 

Reviewer: EdwardsVampireGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

Interesting that it sound like everyone was pissed at Edward.  I am pissed at Bella for not staying and fighting for her man!!!  I figured he was so worked up it would be a matter of touch to make him explode. LOL.  I also figured it was her automatic reflex - run like hell.  I would have opened up a can of whoop ass on the beotch - I probably would have decked his ass too just because.  I am loving this story.  So much mystery and a kick ass Bella and kick ass Edward. LOVE that!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

He just can't help himself, she's a mystery and he wants to solve that.... but he's also already falling~ and his kids adore her and she them. I think he's the first place she has found where she had felt safe in a very long time... She trusts Miss Honey and Guido and I Kinda think maybe they are Harry and Sue.  Just guessing.  And Hawk ~ that one I am not sure of.  Felix is already with Edward so, maybe, Demitri... You shake up the characters a lot in your stories so he could be anyone of the regulars... just in a different role than usual. And protecting her before and after would seem to mean that he knew her father... I don't think it would be Billy but there are so many variables, I will just have to continue to guess until I have more clues.

Woo, mike is an arse~ he acted like he wanted her to be the one that hurt ursula, jerk.  That Edward knows him And laughs means he is not worth his time... now I wonder who beat up the old lady, Marmaduke?

Reviewer: SexxyWife Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 40

So, this is the first story that I have read on TWCS. I did read a few chapters to compare the editing FFN does vs. TWCS. Let's just say that I have a new found love for TWCS.

This Edward and Bella were great together. The supernatural / mystery portion was well written. WeeKittyandTat really wound all of the characters together very well; however, the nicknames made me to lose my mind. I still didn't have them all straight by the time I finished the story. I just adored the way that they fit Edward and Bella together, it was perfect from the start. 

Thank you for a great story WeeKatandTat.

Reviewer: pmws Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved this story. Great job!

Reviewer: SexxyWife Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 37

Forget the wedding, get right to the honeymoon. These two are hot hot hot.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 40

OMG THIS WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you so much for posting it here unedited ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 26

THAT WAS SOOOO COOL!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

hi is hawk and dora the same person? and was her dad a pi?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 40

A JOB WELL DON!!!! loved it

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

i think marmaduke and kato are jacob and sam?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

my guess Marmaduke is Jacob and Sam is Kato

but if he has Bella watched with the kids then why not Jessica then Cassie would not have gotten hurt

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 40

Love it!! Maybe Masen 8 is the mini-Bella?  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm soooo engaged in this story!! I love me an uber intelligent, funny and kickass Bella!!!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm thinking the Dora they know before is not the same Dora since Bella's dad died. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hysterical!  She's awesome!!!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

He called her baby.  Awww. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bad ass Bella!  I love her.  She's been missing in fanfiction for awhile.  

Reviewer: bookkeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 28

great chapter.  I m so glad Stark finally got laid.  Poor boy had to have blue balls the size of Texas

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 40

Great story! Loved all the characters especially Bella.

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loving the nicknames and your Bella she is awesome! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: soton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Don't blame Bella for being angry, hurt and disappointed with Edward... 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 40

Bwahahaha!! Dear God these two are fertile, they're going to need a bigger house especially if it's twins again, lol.

I've really enjoyed this story even though I nearly fried my brain trying to work out what was what. Thanks for sharing yet another of your brilliant stories.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 39

Tanya's brilliant she thinks Sasha's an idiot too, what's not to like, lol.

Edward was so shocked about the pregnancy, lol. Another set of twins, they could have a whole football team of kids before they know where they are. I loved Bella in labour, always a highly entertaining time for the bystander, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 38

Hah! I think she's pregnant, I love Chaos' description of what he found although it does take the excitement out of it. Will they be shocked? I will be if I'm wrong, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 37

Haha, I love Charlie and how he's slipped right back into dad mode like he's never been away. I can't believe it's escaped Edward's notice that his kids can read now, I mean the kidnap game was a complete give away when they read the light up words, lol, he got a bit of a shock when Cullen asked what strippers were, and Emmett, got to love Emmett.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 36

Lol, Edward's going to have a queue of people wanting to kill him if he hurts Bella, good job he's not planning on it. I hope that's the end of the Volturi and none of the weirdos survived.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow, Bella has the mom voice down and, of course, being your own lethal weapon helps, lol. God knows what they'll find when they go after the Volturi but I hope Charlie's there.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh my God! Charlie's alive. Where is he? Has he been watching over Bella from afar? I can't imagine what Bella's feeling right now.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

Well I didn't see that one coming. Once Edward and Bella are married Edward will become the twins brother-in-law as well as their dad, talk about keeping it in the family. The Volturi are evil to do a thing like this, trying to breed super soldiers.

Jane x

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