Date: 13 May 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 40
so very wonderful!!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it!! Chaos is so unique! Great job!
Date: 13 May 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 36
Charlie thinking that the twins were hers would upset any dad. Like hawk would let Edward let that happen.
Date: 13 May 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 40
Lmao!!! This is fucking fantastic!! :)
Date: 13 May 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 40
He is a prolific babymaker our Stark. Lol. Loved this story and so sad it is over. I loved Tanya it was a nice change her being good.
Date: 13 May 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 40
Well, we could all see #8 in their future. Thanks for the great story. It was a fun read.
Date: 13 May 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 35
James is crazy wanting to get shocked. I love that they call her boss's wife.
Date: 13 May 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 40
You guys are my favorite authors! This was another great story and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for your readers!
Date: 13 May 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 40
Sasha doesn't give up does she. Skank. 8 kids. Way too many. Loved reading it. Brilliant Bella was fun to read.
Date: 13 May 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 40
I love this story!!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed this story, as I do all your stories.
I loved how smart Bella was and the twists and turns of the plot were inventive and well executed. It was a pleasure to read :)
Date: 13 May 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved this story and can not wait to read more from you!!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it one of the best I have read in a long time.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 39
I can't believe it has come to an end.
Date: 13 May 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 40
*Sigh* as always when a fun, good fic ends. I can't believe Tanya is with Charlie now, but awesome and that they all get along. I absolutely adore how Tanya & Bella get Sasha going, lol, that is so freakin' good. Ha, seven and now eight kids, wow, they've been busy............for sure. When they got back from their vaca and she was stating how tired she was I wondered and sure enough, ha ha ha. thanx so much. ;o)
Date: 13 May 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 40
This was really good. I enjoyed every chapter. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh I loved it wow all those kids but if anyone could handle it its them hehehehe and wow empty head needs a beat down and Tanya is still awesome hahahahahahaha too funny and Charlie with her is perfect but wow Edward really knows how to make babies heheheheh thank you I loved it all and you keep coming up with more and I love them just as much thank you it always makes my day when I see an update
Date: 13 May 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 40
Too framing hilarious. I just had a feeling that he was going to knock her up again.
Date: 13 May 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 40
Sasha needs a real beatdown. My lord.
At least Chaos didn't call it a parasite again. LOL
TY for writing and sharing ladies.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it! Can't wait for your next project!
xoxoxoxoxoxox
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 40
THANKYOU for an amazing fic which I have thoroughly enjoyed reading
Date: 13 May 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh my gosh did not see that coming. Charlie is alive wow.
Date: 13 May 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you for a wonderful ride.
Date: 13 May 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved this story! 8 kids! Yikes!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 40
What a wonderful story! Again ;-)
Keep on writing! I love all your stories! Big Thanx!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 40
I love this story. I think the two of you should publish your stuff I would buy your books. If nothing else put up a blogspot with all of the PDF versions of your stories. Keep up the great work. Can't wait till your next story.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 40
As with all your stories - loved this
Date: 13 May 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 40
It was a wonderful ending for a great story. There were some things that could ve seen as loose ends, which I guess might be future takes, hopefully. :)
Date: 13 May 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 40
I hate to see a great story end.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 40
Bravo!! Loved it!
Date: 13 May 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 39
Awww........twins again. Makes sense to me. And as for Tanya, yeah, it was very good to see her so good natured compared to other stories. I liked that. As for skanky Sasha though..............ugh! Can't wait to see what ten years brings. ;o)
Date: 13 May 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 33
Awesome no wonder she felt so close to the kids. Love the new living conditions.
Date: 13 May 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 32
I love that the wristbands shocked them. The kids new wristbands are cool.
Date: 13 May 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Jasper got his bumm handed to him and needed Edward to call it quits for him. Love it.
Date: 13 May 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh yes loved the steamy bathroom. I love they want to call her mommy.
Date: 13 May 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 39
Great story! Thank you so much.
Date: 13 May 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 39
Love love love it!!!!!!!!! I laughed at Chaos always answering for Bella. Lol
Date: 13 May 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh gosh that was so funny. Jasper having to hear about the iron man and the hawkeye. Edward got hawk out of the bedroom easily. Can't wait to see Bella kick Peabody's butt.
Date: 13 May 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 39
I love this tanya, and I love this story
Date: 13 May 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 39
Kanga is the perfect name! Great story.
Date: 13 May 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 28
Finally he gets to make love to his Bella. Peabody finally get a glimpse of how smart she really is. I understand his want to apologize to Bella but he was born to protect Edward so it is understandable.
Date: 13 May 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 39
such a great story!
Date: 12 May 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG that is crazy. She is Dora I love how they thought he was a fifty year old man with gray hair. Hawk is Jasper's dad no wonder she is so good. Taught by the best. It is funny when she took hawk down and the faces jasper and Edward made. Poor Edward hawk wanting to shoot him in the balls.
Date: 12 May 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 39
I liked the change you made for Tanya, it's always a pleasure to see some friends in former evil characters;)
Oh I'm pretty sure the babies are so cute! It's very sweet to see Cullen and Cassie with their new siblings, ad I loved that they got them the soft toys to have something from them as well
Date: 12 May 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad she build the panic room. She is bad ass. Scorpia knows not to mess with her now. Jessica is messed in the head. I bet mike pooped himself when he found out he was masen lol.
Date: 12 May 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love space balls yoghurt is my favorite. This is a wonderful chapter. I love Alice she is so cute.
Date: 12 May 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 39
This has been such a phenomal story.
I loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 39
It is over so sad I am going to miss this one too. Loving Tanya giving it to Sasha. Lol Stark is too funny freaking out and then wants more kids right after she pops those two out.
Date: 12 May 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hehehe poor Edward keeps getting cock blocked. Jasper is funny kept trying to get in the house. Not telling him who chaos is was too funny. She took Emmett down quick I bet that just turned Edward on even more. Scorpious loved that and the way way she told her how it is.
Date: 12 May 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 39
Tanya and Bella bonded intently loved it. I love the C names and what a happy family they have become
Date: 12 May 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
I glad he never had sex with that nasty whore. Love the computer and how smart she is. Jasper is so serious all the time Bella is going to give him a heart attack.
Date: 12 May 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 39
Kanga, as in carrying babies in her pouch, I get it! Good one, as are they all! So soon this story ends....so very unique and enjoyable it is! Hilarious that Chaos thought the baby was a virus, but with no frame of reference, what else could it think? Can't wait to see what is happening 10 years down the road for them in the epi. Thanks so much for giving us this story!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 39
I gave a hearty chuckle when Bella called Tanya, Kanga. Very fitting indeed! And who wouldn't love to take pot shots at Sasha any chance they had. She is just so easy to razz.
Cagney, like in the TV show from long ago.....Cagney and Lacey?
Charlie gets the chance to be around his grandchildren. How luck he is.
Date: 12 May 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 39
I knew it!!! I knew she was pregnant!!! Finally!!! Great Chapter!!! I hate the story is coming to an end :(
Tanya was hilarious I iked her, and her nickname is awesome!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 39
Oh I loved it hehehehe damn 3 hours for a first time mom and with twins but how funny and sweet everyone is but Tanya was cool hehehehehehe update soon
Date: 12 May 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
I just thought it was her computer program that turned off the lights. Of course he was ready to bust a nut he was all riled up from Bella then that skank had to ruin things but I guess it was good they did not go all the way. So is the cottage her dad got killed at the cottage Edward takes the kids to.
Date: 12 May 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 39
I love this so much!! I am excited for the epi but I am gonna miss it when it ends!
Date: 12 May 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 39
Great chapter. I thought it was funny that she threw the knive at Rock, lol. I'm so sad that it's the end. I'm going to miss these wonderful characters that you created.
Date: 12 May 2014 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 39
Love the way this story has played out.
Date: 12 May 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 39
I loved this story! It is one of my favorites. I am sad that it is over, but I can’t wait to see what you ladies do next!!! Thank you for sharing this with us.
Date: 12 May 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
Love Tayna messing with Sasha. Woo Hoo Two more babies!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 38
She may be pregnant? This story is brilliant and I don't want it to finish just yet can't wait to see what more u guys are going to create for us to read 😊
Date: 12 May 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 39
I will hate to see the story end.
Date: 12 May 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 38
Someone needs to shoot that Sasha, for crying out loud. Anyhoo, I have a feeing our Bella is pregnant.......maybe? tee hee
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 38
Dun Dun Dun... ANNND Baby makes five..
lol
p.s I love you Chaos...
E/k
Date: 12 May 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh wow. Jacob really is a dumb ass, all these guys trying to claim his girl is not good. Some much info flowing between the two of them love it. Can't wait to meet ms. Honey and guido.
Date: 12 May 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 38
She's pregnant!!!!!!! Right? It has to be! Haha I hope I get it this time! :)
Date: 12 May 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 38
Is this unknown parasite a BABY. LOL
Date: 12 May 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 38
Is the parasite a possible baby that is now twins?
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 38
I love how you incorporated Chaos in the announcement of Bella's pregnancy! A parasite, hahahahah! Albeit true!
This should have Edward higher than a kite. After his freak out is over.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 37
This unique family is just the remedy for Bella's weary soul. She has been given an amazing set of friends as well.
Date: 12 May 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 38
She's Pregnant!! Right??
Date: 12 May 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 38
OMG! That is so funny!!!
Date: 12 May 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 38
She is pregnant.....that is my theory, one cell splits into two and so on it goes ;)
Date: 12 May 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 37
Love this! I remember my wedding and getting ready to walk down the aisle towards my husband.
Date: 12 May 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 38
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 12 May 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
I like James also when he is written as a good person with an edge. Let's face it, outside of playing James in Twilight, Cal is pretty easy on the eyes.
Date: 12 May 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 38
Yikes!
Thanks.
Date: 12 May 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 34
If a heart was stopped for 24 hours, no way Charlie is alive unless the bullet had properties to oxygenate his body.
Date: 12 May 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
Not well for the Blacks, that's for sure.
Date: 12 May 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow she is Bella's godmother and Renee would be Edwards godmother. I love the IM and Edward was wanting to see it. A ironman one and then him being a ironman nickname nice.