Date: 10 Jan 2020 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope you continue this story I like it
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2019 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great stories
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well that was delicious! I hope Alice's pieces and the Cullens heard all of that as well. LOL
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad that Bella dismembered Alice the tramp. I wish Peter had let her go earlier though so he didn't have to get bit.
I don't trust Carlisle or Edward to do the 'lawful' thing. They are all lying punks.
I would junk punch Jasper for making his joke there at the end, making Bella think he still cared about the midget.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
I like when Jasper tells the Cullens to quit being dumb asses and reminds them he isn't their 'boy' in any way.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well that would be scary as shit.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
I like the teasing brother / sister vibe I get from Peter and Bella. And holy hell the sexiness between Jasper and Bella.....just ....dam!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hate that Jasper feels guilty over something that Bella wants. Hopefully, she will set him straight.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
I hope Vicky does become friends with them. Maybe you could pair her up with Peter.,
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Dam! I don't like the idea of anyone bossing me around in anyway, but Jasper is sexy.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love the sexiness mixed with the teasing banter. Jasper sure shocked her at the end of the chapter though.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well Jasper is the best home invader I've ever heard about. Yum!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well hell....Your Jasper is great at phone sex. ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wouldn't want to see Edward's ass ever again either unless it was to kill him.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Jasper and Bella's conversation / banter was too cute.
Date: 18 May 2016 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
Freaking hilarious l, adorable, and sexy all in one. That part about Rosabitch and the newspaper was priceless. Glad to see the Pixie Fun that finally get her just desserts. Keep up with the excellent work. Please update soon.
Date: 18 Oct 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well I've read this I don't know how many times and it just gets better. Can't find it on FFn anymore but I'm assuming it's because of the lemons. Had this story on my fav list over there and it disappeared and have been searching for it and just my luck I found it here. You have got to finish this. Love this Jasper/Bella and you know the Cullen's are not going to listen to Jas's advice and that will mean the Volturi will get involved (love those guys but Marcus needs a women. Just saying). Have you on my fave list here now so I will be looking for that update. Loved Chapter 13 but wish Bella had dropped a match on that bitch.
Date: 06 Jan 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Rofl for sputtering Malice
Date: 02 Oct 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Lmao! His couch? Love the story so far! Xxx
Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love it!! :)
-Kate
Date: 10 Sep 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
Lol. Ruined the couch!! Cracking up here. Love this story AND the lemons!
Date: 26 Aug 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
woo hoo Go Bella. Protect your man from Malice. Wonder if Carlisle will do the right thing this time..... probably not
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Brilliant concept! I especially love that Jasper and Bella are so connected that phone sex can make Bella implode! It makes me wonder what will happen when. They are in the same room! Kudos!
Date: 17 Jul 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
oooh Malice and Pussyward causing trouble again. Why in the world would they think Jasper would help them? Morons.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
awww poor B losing control
Author's Response:
Yeah, but with Jas to support her she can't go wrong. LOL
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start!
Date: 09 May 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
glad you arent dragging it out
Date: 09 May 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmm an interesting Victoria
Date: 09 May 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
for the A/N.
Peter is such a trip . Ugh Victoria.
oooh Domsper is hawt!!! 
Author's Response:
LOL, glad I could make ya chuckle with that A/N. When I saw this review, I admit, I had to go see what you were talking about. /grin/ What can I say? Sometimes I get in these moods.........but hey, what woman doesn't? With 5 kids to my name, it's a wonder to me that I can still fog a mirror.
I'm kinda partial to Domsper myself. I think we'll revisit him very soon. I feel a mood............LOL
Date: 09 May 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hawt Damn. You get a lemon dance for that first full lemon.
Date: 09 May 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
oooh I can just imagine the phone sex voice.
Date: 09 May 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
ROFL Love the interaction with Jazz.
Date: 09 May 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love her handing E his arse.
Date: 16 Apr 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well, hello, dirty-talking Jasper!! That boy is pure sin. And I'm asking the same question Bella is asking... When is he coming to visit her? Soon, I hope. I'm glad we are going to have Peter in this story. He's always been one of my favorite characters. But I don't picture him like the guy in BD2. Loved the chapter. I'll be waiting patiently for Jasper's visit. ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, the phone thing. LOL Thought I'd try something a little different with that. Glad it worked out! I really try to put effort into mixing things up so that the lemons don't all wind up being the same old thing every time. Don't want things to get boring! LOL
Thanks for reading and reviewing once again!
~L~
Date: 16 Apr 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Bella is going to be a hired killer!!! I love it! That's one way to take out your agression, and get rid of those hurt feelings. ;) I'll bet Edward had no idea what he was unleashing when he pissed off sweet, innocent little Bella. I'm laughing so hard!
Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the fun.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing and your fantastic commentary. I really love hearing (reading) your thoughts and reactions. Glad you enjoy it so far!
~L~
Date: 15 Apr 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished the first chapter, and I love it!! What a unique idea for the New Moon story. Plus I have a confession... I am a true Jasper h00r. Edward will always be my first choice, but Jasper is a very close second. I read every Jasper story I can find. So thank you for giving us a new one. Your writing is beautiful; and I can't wait to see where you take us with this.
Author's Response:
Oh goodness, thank you so much for your wonderful review and kind words. I am happy that you like it! Especially seeing as how I wasn't so nice to Edward. LOL
I hope you stick with me through this journey. It should be fun!
Date: 14 Apr 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
More than yummy!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
You're very welcome! Glad you liked it!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh shitski! Don't stop now! (That's what she said!)
Author's Response:
LOL ! Glad you liked it. So, knitting is out then?
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wonderful!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad you liked it!
Date: 30 Mar 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
HOT HOT HOT!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Glad you enjoyed it!