Date: 31 Jan 2023 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
This was a very lovely story.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
I can't believe someone found slutty Charlie worth fixing and was able to do that. Good for Sue! What a woman.
I liked that they had another baby. The only thing I didn't like was that it was twins. That is so over written in fan fic. But oh well...... If that was the only problem I had it sure was minor. Congratulations!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
I still think Charlie is a shit for a dad. ugh....
Edward's sweet proposal holding the baby was adorable.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well Edward was sweet as hell in this chapter. And he was also Bella'as rock. That's really good since no one else showed up esp, her father the douche.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't believe her dad just expects her to take care of all his scummy crap and he doesn't even give a care about her health or the baby at all. I've written off Charlie.
I'm glad Bella and Edward talked before the baby started coming. That really didn't give them much time to realize they are now a couple though.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Every chapter I think Charlie has reached his lowest possible scummy level, but he keeps suprising me and getting more and more asshole like.
I'm really glad someone got rid of Mr Newton. He deserved more punishment though. I guess that whole family is trash.
And video games are the most stress inducing thing I could ever think to do. ugh....
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
That nurse was hideous. And she is working around pregnant mothers who need to be stress free??
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well Charlie went from scum bag to asshole really quickly. Edward was changing, but I don't know if he really understands what he is up against. And can't Mr' Fucking Newton get in trouble for shit like that?
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
If Edward is liking to 'play' with scum bag Charlie, that's not a good sign for his maturity. Maybe he is trying to be more mature by doing her mowing???
And if I was Bella, fuck it to hell if I would break up with Charlie's little twits for him.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
I know Edward is trying and seems mildly concerned, but there is something about him that seems soooo 'frat boy', immature, and rude as fuck. He rubs me wrong so far.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know what is sadder....Bella's love life of scum bags or Charlie's disgusting perv life.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know what is sadder....Bella's love life of scum bags or Charlie's disgusting perv life.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well Edward may have been interested in her, but he was rude as hell.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella having to deal with a spoiled crappy nepotism placed assistant.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
really cute little story thanks for sharing ;D
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great little story. Thanks for sharing it.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Had this one on my TBR so I'm just now getting to it.
Interesting start... reading on.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Seriously? She thinks Charlie is in his 30's AND thinks his *daughter* is in *her* 30's as well?!
Date: 29 Oct 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was a really sweet story and a fantastic ending. Mia's first day of school was more torturous on Edward than it was on either Bella or Mia. Funny stuff there. I love that Mia had a mini meltdown worried that they would be girls. Poor thing. They just don't understand when they are that young. The Sue/Charlie relationship was a wonderful surprise . . . as was him growing up and becoming a real man in lieu of a man-child. That was really nice to read about. Thank you for this story ladies, it was a fun one to read. :)
Date: 29 Oct 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well, I'm glad that Bella and her father had it out and spoke about all of it. It amazes me that he was that freaking clueless about how he was treating his own daughter. So glad Edward was there to stop Charlie from his own stupid self. Letting him know he was way out of line caling her old. Unbelivable! Go Edward and your proposal . . . that was really sweet. The dinner, the dancing, the including of Mia . . . so sweet. Younger man in her bed . . . you had me giggling with that. Fun stuff.
Date: 29 Oct 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
I loved his 'distraction' during her surgery . . . goodness that was a beautiful distraction. He's freaking adorable. Carlisle saying that Esme is eight years older that him was amusing too. Fun addition to this. Love the name Mia, that's super cute. I knew she'd be okay . . . YAY!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can get on board with her frustration over that game . . . I just can't play those. Seems like that would stress her out . . . perhaps not the best choice of past times . . . hehehe. I'm super glad she blurted that out and that they talked and will be together. Also, glad that she is acknowledging Charlie's awful behavior . . . 'Peter Pan lifestyle' . . . laughed so hard on that. Great analogy. Scary about the baby coming early . . . I was eight weeks early and that was nearly fifty years ago . . . baby girl should be tiny, but just fine. Positive thoughts. So glad she wants Edward there with her. Sigh.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad she slept long a while in the hospital . . . seems they are always waking you up to check on you. Loved that Aro said he would fire her if she came anywhere near work until after the baby was born. Love him. Not surprised on the Edward front. That makes more sense. Thankfully, I have that luxury too. What my husband makes covers the household and extras. I work simply because I love what I do. All of the money I make gets saved or used on our vacations. I could never sit at home and not work and I can see Edward working for fun, makes sense to me. Yes, videogames are certainly not what we loved when they were first creating game systems and the games you played on them.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is and has been wonderful through this whole thing. I just hope she can finally accept him . . . his younger age and all. Where has Charlie been the whole three days? Oh wait, silly me, probably leaving her voice mails on how selfish she is being with this pregnancy cutting into his dating. More importantly, his breakups. Carlisle seemed really nice. It was good to see that Bella actually does have a backbone and that she used it on that bitch ass nurse. Never would that happen in a real hospital . . . at least not around where I live it wouldn't. I'm glad she advised Edward and that she will tell Carlilse too. All because Edward turned her ass down. Geesh! At least she is eating, but should she be eating eggs, bacon and toast? Or, should she be eating the Cherrios. You made me crave Cheerios . . .
Date: 28 Oct 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Clearly Newton Sr. purposefully hid the file, only for Aro to find it. Much to Sr.'s chagrin. She was light headed before she even started that file hunt. Her father is a piece of crap and how dare he speak to her that way. What is wrong with Bella not speaking up to him? She lets him walk all over her and he treats her like something on the bottom of his shoe . . . and this is okay with her. I don't like it. Also, is it possible that Sr. slipped her something? I really hope it's just stress and nothing that criminal that he may have done. Did he mess with her car too? *shivers* Thank goodness Edward is there for Bella right now, as I imagine she will wake up in the hospital.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
I thought Charlie was fun the first time. Now, I realize, he needs to grow up, at least around Bella. He should be her father. I was a little disappointed that Edward was playing with Charlie. I love the fun-loving part of Edward and that he is a persisntent little bugger. Did not like that he was enabling Charlie though. That's on me, not you two ;)
Date: 28 Oct 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was too adorable . . . they cracked me up the entire time!
Date: 28 Oct 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Holy man-whore Charlie . . . WTH??? That's hilarious!!! Goodness, poor Bella having to deal with that all the time. I'd get sick too. Sounds like she made the right choice on the in-vitro and I'm guessing, sperm donor? Good thing! She wants children and the men she attracts are not good ones.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Mike and Jessica have balls. I hope that Mike's mom and dad have the money . . . as it would be truly unfair for everything they worked so hard for, was tossed away by their own son. How horrible. Edward's cocky, that's for sure. I would've pushed his out the office door too. Funny though.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well that was a different beginning. I wonder if that doll analogy rings true? I did not like dolls when I was little . . . preferred the arts and crafts route. Then when I got older, decided I never wanted children by the age of sixteen. Lucky enought to find a wonderful husband that was okay with the child free lifstyle we chose. We both adore children, just didn't want them four ourselves. Very happily married now for twenty-one years and have not regretted not having kids. We do get to borrow the nieces and nephews when we do want though. I thought the 'meet-cute' in this chapter was subtle and great. I like when they meet like that. Fun start . . . well, except for her pregnancy making her ill and her assistant not doing her job.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
This was a lovely little story and I'm glad I read it. I really enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
wow!
Google Translate. French.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
What a lovely story! Loved it. Well done. Thank you! :o)
Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it. Very well written.
Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
I didn't hate Charlie, rather I wanted to slap him upside his head a few times! At least he got his thinking straightened out and made himself a better man. This was a darling story and I sure loved reading it!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, Mr. Romance has got this proposal thing down pat! I think I'm so jealous! Bella truly is a lucky, lucky woman! It's wonderful that Edward loves her and Mia! Charlie needs to take grownup lessons from this young man!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
I sort of thought Edward's mom might be older than his dad, that preference had to come from somewhere. This is like the best kind of fairytale, because I'm seeing a happy ending coming down the road!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Just when things were getting good, now the baby wants to come out and join in on the fun! I could just kick Charlie's ass for the way he's acted since the last time they spoke!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, one thing is for sure, no one can accuse Bella of chasing Edward for his money, she never knew he had any! I really wanted to punch out Charlie a couple times there! What in the world is wrong with him? Never mind, don't care, Bella has Edward to look after her now and he's lots better at it than her dad!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Absolutely loved Bella putting that nurse in her place, there's no excuse for that, especially when stress is so bad for her! Edward seems to have siezed the opportunity to take care of Bella, and good for him! He'll just keep on making himself indispensable, which is just what he wants!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
The missing file was a put-up job, if ever I saw one, and Newton was just plain mean to take that call from Charlie in jail and deliberately not tell her! Of course Charlie is an ass for talking to his daughter like that in the first place. He didn't even have the decency to ask if his very pregnant child was okay! It sounds to me as if she is in serious trouble, like pre-eclampsia, perhaps!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can hardly wait until Edward figures out Charlie's B.S. It blows my mind that a man has his daughter break up with his young girlfriends for him! What is he, twelve? I get a sense that Edward is already more mature than Charlie! How sweet for him to mow her lawn, by the way, especially shirtless!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
Persistent little cuss, isn't he? I think he's trying to wear down her defences, and it might just be working! I really like that you have him living next door to Bella, that should aid in his campaign to become her"friend"!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
If Charlie and Bell's mom were happily in love until her death, then this crap he's pulling is "never having to deal with it" stuff! I don't blame Bella for feeling the way she does about men, her only mistake is dating guys like her dad. If she would find one who is a decent man, she might change her mind!
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sounds like Bella dodged a bullet there, since she uploaded all her records and Jess was too lazy or too stupid to change those. She and Mike have stolen quite a bit of money from the firm, I hope they are caught and jailed! Edward sure put his foot init, right off the bat!
Date: 31 May 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
When your day starts like Bella's did, it's the icing on the cake to find her office in such a mess! It sure didn't stop her from documenting all the crap Jessica left behind, or from noticing how handsome Edward was!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
This was a nice story. I like how Edward kept trying even after she said she was not interested & pregnant. It was sweet how he kept trying without seeming creepy or stalkerish. I also love how he told Charlie off & that he hit him for being a selfish self-right-prick.
I liked how this was written, it flowed very well & made me want to read the whole thing rather than skip around.
Date: 21 May 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is a really lovely story. I enjoyed reading it. But Charlie was so selfish I have meet men like him and they are really pathetic
Date: 10 May 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was sweet! I liked it.
Lula
Date: 07 May 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good story tanks for sharring :)
Date: 07 May 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
I have a lot of work but hell I can stop reading :) Yeah I am at the office
Date: 07 May 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
He is amaizing :)
Date: 07 May 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
And this little one is going to make the diference
Date: 07 May 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
is good she have him :)
Date: 07 May 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella"!!!!! :(
Date: 07 May 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
I wouldn`t mind to wake up with that vison.... hell My yard do not have grass, lol
Date: 07 May 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
How casusal to have him as a neigthbord...
Date: 07 May 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh I see how she has a baby :)
Date: 07 May 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ah!!! But She is all bother and Hot and Horny :)
Date: 06 May 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
I came over here just to re-read the unedited chapter. Thanks for writing. Yáll never disappoint.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
This is unedited? Why is this rated NC-17? Even on FF, this story would be at least a T rating. There's no sex or even language. Weird.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
This was such a cute story.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
i finally was able to read the last chapters...
love it.
nicole
Date: 26 Apr 2014 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
love it
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
I was born 3 months premature and had to be born by C-section. I was immedently stuck in an incubator. The doctors didn't think U would live. But I pulled through, getting out with only being there 2 out of the 6 months they thought I would be there. If I hadn't been boorn early both my mom and me would have died.
Date: 17 Apr 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the fantastic ride. Loved every minute :)
Date: 17 Apr 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I have very much enjoyed following along with your story. It was a pleasure to read.. Thanks for sharing .. Pam b.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved this nice short story, it was very sweet.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love ed it! Great work gals!
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad that Charlie finely became the dad and grandpa he should of been all along better late than never. Edward is a dream I love him.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh I loved it how sweet but Mia is awesome hahahahahaha thank you
Date: 14 Apr 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was so sweet and so cool that he did it with Mia.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this story. I hate to see it end. I love little Mia with everyone. Smart little girl!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!! PERFECT!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
So sweet. He sure doesn't waste time!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
charlie has been redeemed
hell of a dream which came true
love it
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
i need edward at my house, he is perfect
glad charlie and bella seem to be on the road to a compromise. i am glad it seems he is seeing he was wrong as to what he asked bella to do. maybe there is hope
engaged hot damn. these to are going to have a hot marriage and love life
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yes, Sweetward was a precious version of our darling boy but Playboy Charlie was abominable.
Each of your characters grew in depth allowing the wished for outcome of a HEA to evolve.
Thanks for sharing your gifts of storytelling.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
This was a cute story. Really great!!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Such a wonderfully sweet story....always love a HEA.....and although it's fiction it's lovely to read that it's not your biology but those who raise you that are your parents xxx
Date: 13 Apr 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for writing this!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for this sweet and fun story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Something with angst and hot sex is preferrable. Lol
Date: 13 Apr 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great story and I loved the ending!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
At least Charlie is coming around slowly.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another good one. Thanks
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awww i loved the ending
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very protective Edward, I like it. Video games have always seemed stressfull to me. My husband and kids always loved them.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
I loved c this story very much. Thanks for sharing!