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Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I thought I had read everything, but somehow I missed this.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I thought I had read everything, but somehow I missed this.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2018 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

You guys are the best. I always know it will be a good story when y'all are the authors.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2018 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

You guys are the best. I always know it will be a good story when y'all are the authors.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2018 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

You guys are the best. I always know it will be a good story when y'all are the authors.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2018 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

You guys are the best. I always know it will be a good story when y'all are the authors.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

AWESOME!!! o/s thanks for sharing ;) i loved how you made alice bad because thats how i've always seen her ;D 

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great story.  It's been a lazy Sunday here in Georgia.  I haven't done anything but read and nap!!!  Tomorrow everyone goes to work!!!  Maybe then I'll be able to start one of the longer fics.

Thanks again for writing for our fandom.

Elaine - sparkledamnu 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

What is it that you guys have against Alice?lol  She sure was the villain of this story! Regardless, this was really a cute little tale and a heck of a lot of fun to read!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can totally see Alice being a bitch like this.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great job. Alice was such a bitch in this one. Made hating her easy. Loved it.

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story, ladies! Quite a different take on things. So, Jasper never married bitchy Alice? What happened to her? She was just awful!!!

big hugs,
Sus

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

You two rock writing together! Loved how you wrote Alice in. LOL. Great story! Thank you! :o)

Reviewer: shorty1773 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love love LOVE THIS STORY! You guys are great writers! Looking forward to reading more of your work!!! :)

 

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

aww that was so sweet, I loved it so much! Even though I am a A&J fan this one really didn't bother me, womderful job!

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well another great story from you...THANKS SO MUCH - Xanath

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad someone has made Alice into a bitch. In all the stories I have read she just does as she likes and does care what anyoe else wants. But you just come out with it very bluntly.

But I did find it a bit distubing that Edward had sex with his teacher.

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story I love it

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story! Thank you

Reviewer: Lulabell2875 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was great. Loved it!

Lula

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

FANTASTIC STORY!  I'm so glad Alice didn't come back at the end & crash the reception! 

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful story!

Reviewer: bettyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awww...thank you for the sweet story. You two always do such a great job.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is the first story I've read where Jasper ends up with Maria.
I think Alice experienced a mental break-down.
The twenty year vow renewal was a delightful touch.

Reviewer: SandytheSandstorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

it was a glorious story and I loved it every minute.  Owned meall day.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

good

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was such a wonderfully written story.  Alice was awful in this story.  So nasty!  Thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story was so good.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks good story

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awe I loved it what a great love story but damn Alice was a crazy self centered spoiled bitc*h well she got hers and Edward and Bella have a great family and friends and they a4e beautifully happy thank you

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it but Alice was a psycho. It was great.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully put together, a real gem.

Reviewer: MaluTara Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awwww

I liked that this was a different Alice :)

Cute fic :) and so romantic!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was perfect they where meant to be. What ever happened to Alice

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it :)

Reviewer: wildcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story about needing citizenship and a best friend's brother as a way to get it was a great short love story. Friends finding love that always existed. What a twist with Alice, or as Edward called his sister, a spoiled rotten bitch. I liked the OOC, Alice version you created, even though I didn't like her! 

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story, it was great even without the zest of lemons. Alice was a real psycho, I'm happy she got what she deserved and lost everything. It ended so wonderfully. Debbie

Reviewer: majoppo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it all, another great story from you. Thank you Nikky and Kasi for sharing your amazing talent with us, and please keep sharing with us this amazing stories.

Reviewer: aca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, I really love it.

However, if is not too much of me to ask. A second chapter would be nice?

Love all your stories so far.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story.  Glad their family and friends supported them.  Boy your Alice was different and hateful.  Alice went to jail bit what happened. But what happened when she got out?  Did she ever accept Edward and Bella's relationship?  

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thoroughly enjoyed this story! Bella and Edward were, of course, wonderful to watch fall in love so quickly. Alice's attitude was completely different. I swear that girl has a screw loose, otherwise you'd never know she came from such a lovin' home! Very glad Jasper saw the real Alice in time LOL!

Reviewer: Yvette Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this one shot. Truly didn't know what to expect and was so pleasently suprised. You have done it again. Great story. 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story love to see some more of there life in other shot story's

Reviewer: archy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a sweet story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us.I enjoyed every word,even though sometimes I felt like strangling Alice for being so selfish,rude and hurtful.How can people do that to their family members and friends?I had hoped that she would see her mistakes,but it seems not.

 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story. It would have great as a multi chapter. Great work as always. 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely amazing!

Sadly Alice was once again such a jealous and hateful person:(

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it!

Reviewer: lain67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story ,I also loved that you made Alice an insane cracker 

well done

Reviewer: pinay_samurai Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good short story. Loved it. I'm sad Alice had to be bad, but I guess there must be drama. 

You are a very talented writer. Please keep writing. I'll definitely keep reading.  :-) 

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love u work and i absolutely loved this fic .. esp the way u depicted alice who i really dislike and find it difficult to tolerate her controlling selfish ways ... about time she got what she deserved .. and edward/bella i love them as a couple and am so grateful that they admitted their mutual love early on and managed to make a wonderful life with friends and family beside them ..

thanks for sharing

xo

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

aaaww i love it :)

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Super good

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aww I LOVED IT!!!! :D

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story. Loved every bit of it. Too bad Alice was such a jerk though. She was the one truly missing out on things. Loved the banner too. thanx for EPOV too. I swear I'll read anything with that. ;o)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is awesome!! I love it!! :)=)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a delightful story!  It's like a fairy tale.  I loved it! Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story!

Loved it!!

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is the best O/S ive read.
Oh my, fantastic.
the way everyone reacted to Alice is a precise human reaction. I mean no ine can tolerate that all year round like most fics depicts.
Esme sticking up for them was so sweet.
Edward and Bella were so sweet. Im so glad that they fell inlove before getting married, im glad they got go stay despite Alice's evil shit.
I would so fangirl if its continued #js
Thank you for this wonderful stofy!

Reviewer: Angeldolphin01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a lovely little story. :)  I am glad they got their HEA without too much trouble and no separating. :)  Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonder what happen to alice..i loved this story

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great story from y'all. Awesome!!!!!

Reviewer: Twiwheat02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, absolutely loved it....couldn't stop reading once I started. Loved this version of Alice....well didn't love Alice but loved the difference in the way she was written...BITCH!!!!! Always a sucker for HEA and this is such a sweet one xx

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just enjoy everything you write, you are both such creative and gifted writers.
Thanks!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely LOVED this! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it. The only thing that could add to it is Bella beating Alice to a pulp. :)

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story! It was sweet and I enjoyed seeing their love grow.  Also, I always like to see a bitchy Alice and you nailed her!  Hehe!  Thanks for sharing!  :)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this sweet and complete one shot. Thank you ladies!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

love it so much

good ridings to alice man she was a bitch and I am glad she is gone and jasper got rid of her. who sleeps with there father in law-yuck

 

so glad bella and edward gave each other a chance and wow 20 years later and 3 kids. so happy it was a worht it. they have great friends and their dreams came true

 

love it, thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved this

Reviewer: Duvi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

So freaking cute!! I loved it!! Alice was a psycho. I'm glad everyone saw it and she disappeared from their lives...good riddance. 

Reviewer: ficfangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a sweet story!  I love it when bitchy Alice gets put in her place.  It would be so fun to see the story from her POV.

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