Date: 14 Jan 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for sharing this story. Narrative was strong and characters stayed consistent. In my opinion deserved the interest and kudos. I will watch for additional work from you.
The idea has been explored by some others but you bring a fresh and intriguing perspective to it. Interesting yet not surprising (so strangely satisfying) interpretation of Quinn. Always thought he was another narcissist Hope you consider a sequel if only to explain what Niall hoped to gain and what wooing the public was meant to accomplish Pam also has a story and character that seems poised to evolve Thanks again
Date: 30 Dec 2014 4:48 AM Title: Epilogue
Glad he gave her the time to find herself. Also glad Niall didn't interfere, but I guess he got what he wanted out of the deal so thats all that mattered to him.
TY for Writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 34
Glad eric found the CD in time. Wonder if Niall will still try to take her since she's a "giver". They both need therapy I think
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 33
niall is still a wanker. glad dermot showed up though
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
Ack You are killing me. So glad I have another chapter already waiting for me. Claudine I assume was the fairy?
DEA was DOA. Stupid cow screwed the pooch. And Seal Sex...ewwww
Happy Belated Birthday
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh wow Witch made out and Quinn would have if he didn't go to her. Glad they are going to eat him. Oh my....she's going to try to die.??
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
awww the mutual
Sweet of her to plan the anniversary. Still think Niall has some stuff to answer for.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wowsers. at least she came to her senses. Hmmm I'm wondering if he'll have cameras and misjudge what he sees. He really needs to tell her about Quinn.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh wow. At least Ocalla is dead and can't hurt him anymore. Batanya isn't going to let this go on his part huh?
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
hmmm Seems that she needs a wake up call soon. Wonder if Batanya is going to be the one to nastily tell her about Quinn. At least they had a nice date or so.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
hmmm so illeta did a Godric? aww poor Pammy. Wonder why she did it though. She didn't seem depressed or anything.hmm we need a Sookie POV to see where her brain really is now. Hope this is a genuine offer.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh wow jason really went too far. Ugh Scumbill appears. Can't blame her for being mad. wow wonderful presents from Eric. He said the ILY?!?!? Wowsers
Date: 29 Dec 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
Does she not think that Pam or Illeta would retaliate if she were to kill him? He really needs to have a serious talk with her and soon before he or she does something really bad/drastic. hmm So Claudine and Niall are STILL hiding crap from her. Ugh.
lol Hard to get a straight answer from the shadows huh? hmmm Jason at a vamp club huh? that doesn't bode well.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sigh These two really need to have a long talk. He needs to show/tell her how Quinn was using her. At least Alexander is pushing him to have the hard talks. It really is needed badly.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
AN: Why would Sookie ever want Eric is a valid question as well. Giving stuff and ignoring her other than when he needs her in public doesn't a marriage make, esp when she doesn't consider herself married by customs accepted for the majority of humans which she considers herself to be. Granted she was wrong for "cheating" but I can't say I wouldn't do the same if I was kept in a guilded cage.
Yea I wouldn't trust Claudine either. sigh for Dermot's words. See Eric.....that is what you should have done from the beginning...not wait till she is looking for a way to kill you. She's probably not thinking about the ramifications of that though to herself or Jason. Don't really care what it would cost Niall.
Why do I get the feeling neither of them is going to like the consequences of the sex? He's going to think she cares and her that he doesn't...just for sex. Sigh
They really need to have a long talk
Date: 29 Dec 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
How exactly did he show her that he loved her? Stuff? ignoring her? constantly leaving her alone. Doesn't sound like they had any true conversations. You really never knew anything about her if you thought you wouldn't break her (comments to Eric).
Duh yeah you should have told her about Quinn. Its obvious he was doing it to get back at Eric. " It had begun as a desire to make her obey me" That was the second strike against him. The first was forcing the marriage in the first place.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh wow. He has no idea how much his actions have solidifed her hatred. I do find it hard to believe he hadn't screwed any of the donors or others in all that time.
Hope she thinks about how he found out. There is obviously no one she can trust in the house.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can understand her wanting Quinn. Her upbringing doesn't see them as married either. Wonder how he found out. The shadow wraiths or Quinn blabbing.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm Changed her guards and sent her on vacation..... considering the Quinn thing, it probably going to bite them in the arse at some point. hmmm Dermot huh? Wonder why he decided to give her the CD?
Date: 29 Dec 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
How does he, or any of the supes, not get that she doesn't consider herself a supe and doesn't know or care about their rules when they are opposite of her upbrining. A guilded cage is still a cage.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
ROFL for Nancy. What a twit. He actually listened to something she said. Surprise Surprise. Why wouldn't she be pissy at him. Not like he cares or shown her he does. He's stated many times that he's only in it for his convenience.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
He deserved every curse and yell she gave. Nancy is really in for it. Sucks that Jason's life is now messed up due to Niall's crap.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
oooh Eric. You are up against a stubborn southern woman. You have no idea what you've gotten yourself into.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
Don't blame her for leaving. How did Rene find her though? At least Jason is home. Glad she left Illeta. Hope she continues to challange Eric.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well at least I think a little better of Eric for not forcing the consumation on her. LOL for her leaving. Freyda is such a skank to pull rank in someone else state.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hating Niall more and more. Also not thinking well of Eric, esp with forcing her to consumate the marriage as I'm assuming he'll do.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Absolutely NO sympathy for Niall. Don't care what he thinks he is "owed" for her grandmothers choice. Niall and whatever fairy is messing with Jason need to die for all they are doing. He had no right to offer something that is not his.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow Niall and now Eric have a lot to answer for. Not happy that he disregarded her that way.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow Alcede is a wanker. Screw Niall. I'd go smelling however I wanted. Make sure Eric knows she's not truly willing. At least Claudine now knows she's not willing.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
At least she is asking questions and not just jumping in. I'd be wanting a way out and a way to get back at Niall.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved her telling Niall off. He deserves every syllable. I'd be figuring out a way to make him pay when Jason was safe.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
oooh Niall needs to die if he's blackmailing her this way.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jason is always Jason. lol.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow niall going to sell off his kin. What a wanker.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm Wonder what favor Niall wants?
Date: 28 Dec 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take it. I have no problem with changing the SVM or TB worlds, so long as Eric doesn't rape or abuse Sookie, I'm cool with it.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 31
I still don't like Nial, but Quinn became my least favorite character, so hateful, I love what Sookie let her Shadow Wraiths do with him. Bastard.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, Jason's so selfish that it makes my teeth hurt.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
I always hated Nial, he always is so mean, not my favorite character.