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Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: This is My Hell

Another excellent chapter. Let's hope Sam has a cooler head than Jacob. Although, jacob was fairly controlled but his delusion of his HEA with Bella clouds everything. Can't wait to see what you do with Paul. I really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks.

Author's Response:

I believe his delusion of his HEA with Bella was the only thing that kept him controlled in those moments. And they are completely a delusion. Paul and Emmett are....entertaining. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Rounding Second

WOW!  What's not to like?  Seriously good fun with your nickers on!



Author's Response:

Haha - thanks! Bella needed Edward to understand that there are things they can do without killing her. ;) She isn't letting him limit their relationship any longer. Somehow, I think he'll agree to continue this exploration.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Your chapters have been such a joy to read it is impossible for them to be too long. While acknowledging the cost of all the hours and the certain consternation each chapter brings with it, you have to know the end result is pretty much perfect.  I do admire Bella's maturity in handling each of the Cullens. As Jasper stated she is already a successful tactician.  Both her inventiveness and lack of vindictiveness is refreshing.  After all, hurting her family and Edward only causes more hurt to herself and ultimately delays the healing process.  Again, a wonderful read.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for continuing on this journey, and for taking the time to leave me a review. I appreciate it. And yes, Bella's "revenge" was all aimed more to teach the Cullens that they could interact with her and think of her as a part of their family even though she is not as durable as them.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

This emotional rollercoaster ride lived up to all my expectations of your creativity and writing.  Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you! This chapter was a roller coaster between laughter and frustration and tears and heartfelt moments. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Fists and Fur

Firstly, let me offer you condolences for the loss of your Loved One. No words can make this time easier. But, hopefully with time, you will wrap their loss in fond memories and remember with smiles and not tears.

Secondly, you didn't disappoint with this chapter. I am quite liking your Sam and Charlie. So pleased that Charlie has recognised the devotion Edward has towards his daughter. Perhaps this will be a new start to E&C's relationship. Loved the ...interaction between Emmett and Paul. Lol. Would have paid real money to see that. :D I thought the way Carlisle and Sam regained control of the parley seemed sensible. I do love that Jerkob saw the thin veneer of calm demeanour disappear and the predator take its place in the Cullens. Jerkob's casual assessment of Rosalie shows his true immaturity. What insignificance would be place on Pixie Alice? 'Know one's enemy' a lesson Jasper could teach him. I can't help but wonder if Bella will be OK. Yes she is awake but... So looking forward to the next chapter when you have time and the inclination. Thank you for updating. Best wishes, Bridie.

P.s. There are a couple of stories, at least, on FanFiction where the relationship between the Cullens, and also the Pack, is explored in greater and original detail. While the premise of canon is recognised these two delve further into relationships and include more action and suspense. JAM11 has a WIP called Red Dawn. TrillionSchiffer has a completed story called New Eclipse and it's sequel (WIP) called Horizon. New Eclipse is not up to your grammatical standard but the plot makes for a page turner. Perhaps your hubby might enjoy the read.

Author's Response:

You're correct, no words can make this time easier, but we are relieve he is no longer in pain and is finally at peace. Thank you for your condolences and thoughts. I greatly appreciate it. This chapter was full of personalities that don't necessarily get along at all, but are definitely trying to make the best of a difficult situation and stay on somewhat peaceful terms. I would've loved to see the Emmett and Paul showdown in real life as well. It would've been highly entertaining. Jerkob (that made me laugh a bit) is certainly acting like quite the brat right now, not only with his attitude, but also his arrogance of believing he can "boss" Carlisle and Edward around about not being around Bella without him. As if....

I would be interested in checking out the stories you suggested when I wrap my own up. I prefer to not read other's when I'm writing my own as I don't want to inadvertently use something I read somewhere else, or have any of it cloud the voice in my own head. But thank you for the suggestions. Promise to update soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

Lol.  This was so much fun.  And then it was Hawt!  LOL. 



Author's Response:

Oh it gets hotter. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

So much fun.  So relate to Emmett singing out loud at Christmas.  We even have an old guy go around the neighbourhood on a motorised pushbike (WT...just don't get that) ringing a bell wishing everyone Merry Christmas.  Glad Bella tried to shut down Edward's spiral into self-loathing.  Loved it.



Author's Response:

I can picture Emmett as that neighbor you have. Hilarious!!!!!

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Reality Check

A thoroughly brilliant chapter.  His introspection was interesting and enlightening although I fear he missed some bullet points along the way.  The biggest being her eventual ...renovation.  And the long term guarantee to success ...communication.  I really enjoyed the scene with Carlisle.  I thought that Esme would have more to say, but I'm pleased she didn't pollute the father/son talk. The tree scene should be memorialised.  Such fun.  Lol.  I love Edward, but his 17 year old arse would drive me to commit murder.  Thank you for writing such good entertainment.  FF, in general and your writing in particular, are the reasons I don't watch TV anymore.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I agree that Edward definitely missed key elements of Bella's speech - mainly the point that she will be changed some day even if she has do make it happen without him. I really love Carlisle and Edward's discussions as well as they have been together so long that they almost have their own language. I feel he really needed the medical analysis from Carlisle, even knowing it's biased. Your commitment to reading and reviewing my story kewep me humble and grateful. So thank you!

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

Wonderfully written.  Loved the humour and turn of phrase.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am very grateful that you are enjoying it and I hope to continue to hear from you as the story really starts to dig in now. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

A wonderful chapter.  Feel so in touch with your Bella 



Author's Response:

Thank you. This was by far the most difficult chapter for me to write, but it was necessary. I didn't agree with her method to cope with the pain, but I understand now why she did it. I fought with her about it for a while though until I realized I couldn't write it any other way.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

Lol.  Emmett thought he had the higher ground. Tactically speaking. But, Bella played her 'hit and run' maneuvers (even if it was instinctually) so well he didn't even realise he had been nullified.  Lol.  Well perhaps the wack to his jaw was a hint!  Lol.  I thought the talk between Edward and Charlie went better than I anticipated.  I earn in terms of emotional  anxiety.  However, I do belief they were well within their characters.  There is a mischievous part of me that is disappointed Edward realised he shouldn't 'date crash'.  Drat.  What fun.  For the readers.  Not the characters.  Brilliant chapter.  thank you

 

 



Author's Response:

Emmett is definitely the most fun to have mess with people. He doesn't care how much trouble it gets him into with Rose, or anyone, he will still do what he wants ruffling as many feathers along the way and you have to love him for that. What you see is what you get with him. And just because Edward doesn't plan to crash the date, doesn't mean he stays away. ;) I mean he is a bit of a stalker when it comes to Bella. Hahaha

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Pendulum

This is wonderful. The best I've read.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Hi there!!! I'm so humbled and honored that you feel this is the best you've read because there is amazing work out there. I hope you continue to enjoy this journey and I look foward to more from you soon. I greatly appreciate the review. I read and reply to every single one.

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

I am terribly biased against Jacob.  Canon Jerob just makes my skin crawl as an abuser in training.  So, with that in mind your Jacob wasn't such a jerk and he is only 15 or so.  The emotional ride of Bella was a joy (?!?) to read.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Jacob, when he's interested in Bella, bothers me too. When he can just be her friend he's okay and I don't mind him so much. So, while I can't promise that Jacob won't be a jerk, I can promise there is not even the possibility of a love triangle. I'm Team Edward all the way. Jacob doesn't know that though. Don't worry, Bella sets him straight. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

This chapter made for a compelling read.  I feel there are still things to be cleared but it is a great start to recovery.  Loved it thanks



Author's Response:

Yes, there are definitely a lot of things that still need to be sorted out, but the healing process can start now. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

 

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Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

Imaginative.  Original.  Compelling.  Intriguing.  *smiling from ear to ear*



Author's Response:

Wow! Such amazing words. Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the time you took to tell me. It made me smile from ear to ear. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

Fun.  And a little bit naughty but nice.  Lol



Author's Response:

Thanks. I couldn't resist adding in a bit of a lemon twist for Alice and Jasper. I just love them so much and really believe they are the most spiritually connected of all the couples. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

So pleased Esme insisted.  A wonderful heartwarming chapter. Thank you



Author's Response:

Momma Lion loves her kids. All her kids. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

From Esme to Bella's art subjects, to E&B's truthful communication, and even the bravado of the pseudo-hero Mike...I have no words.  Except to say 'Struth mate.  That was bloody brilliant!'  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed everything that went in to this chapter, even Mike trying to be the tough guy!

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

You're right about Cullen family time and the sibling relationships.  You bring them alive with their banter.  So much fun.  Lol.  Thanks



Author's Response:

I want to be a part of the Cullen family. They seem to be hilarious when they're allowed to be themselves. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

In the original, poorly written, crater-sized plot holed saga, there were so many characters that were easy to hate on.  Especially if they were blonde  and good looking.  I really like all your characters.  They are individuals with their own foibles and voices.  An amazing talent you have Lisa.  Remember to tell us and you are published.  😀



Author's Response:

That is such a huge compliment!!! Thank you so much for the kind words. I promise to keep you in the know when I get my first publication out. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Unleashing the Lioness

I confess to being a sucker for a Charlie/Tanya pairing... But, I wouldn't like to get Edward stuck with an eternal FIL. Ouch! A wonderful chapter. Loving your characters. You gave Victoria an impressive insight into her thoughts. Esme was a mama bear steady, thoughtful, quick. Edward, was so mature and controlled. Loved every word. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I can't picture Tanya and Charlie - at least not in my head....but it would be interesting for sure. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 183825
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An excellent start...continuation. So pleased you didn't let outside influences stop you from doing what you love. Congrats for being strong and brave. Just like your Bella

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow. Excellent chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow. Go girl. Really enjoyable chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Such powerful male roles. They are thrilling to read. Not the crime. Just all that testosterone oozing off the page. Yum. Really enjoyed this update. Thanks.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 01 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So exciting the way things are playing out. Even though Edward is injured your other characters still keep the story interesting and exciting. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yep. Did guess they would be preggers together. I can't wait to see the Carlisle and the team in action. Thank you for a wonderful update.

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Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So happy. I guess this story is about to wrap up. I will miss The Family. Thanks

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOL. What a wonderful chapter. Poor Edward doesn't know what is about to him. He and Sean will be swapping F words. lol.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

A wonderful chapter. I felt like your I were preparing us for the end. However, Maria's new love interest feels wrong to me. I really hope I'm wrong. Thank you for your update.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

A lot of fun. I really enjoyed this chapter. Thamks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Excellent chapter. Thank you for updating

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Almost everything is coming together. Thanks

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Date: 23 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

An interesting and exciting chapter. Thanks

Summary:

 

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Bella had worked hard and studied hard. She graduated at the top of class. What would her first assignment be?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25483 Read Count: 6511
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Welcome to SPAM Ms Swan

Thoroughly original and absolutely enjoyable with healthy dashes of intrigue and excitement mixed in. So looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

Summary:

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Bella has her life planned out. Her business is sucssesful and she is surrounded by people she cares about, so why is she so lonely. Fate changes her life but will she follow the righ path.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76583 Read Count: 526926
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2016 Updated: 17 Oct 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A really good start. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good foundation chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice mix of characters.

Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter. Wish my gym offered those sorts of distractions.

Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying it x

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well what a first impression that made. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks.

Author's Response:

She was certainly made aware of him

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

A good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thanks. Looking forward to this story developing over time.

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it

Niflheim by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

 

An assassin sent to the land of Dagez to investigate the death of a King – not just any assassin, but an immortal who has remained alone for thousands of years and dreams of painting the palace walls in blood. Unexpectedly, his mission becomes more difficult and complicated as he discovers the one he has been searching for his entire existence. Companion piece to Ginnungagap. Recommend you read Ginnungagap first, but not required. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21754 Read Count: 1848
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2016 Updated: 26 Feb 2018
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Handmaidens

Sorry for your struggle but I know I will enjoy whatever you put on paper. Enjoyed this chapter. Thank you

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Nightmares

I loved this chapter. These insights bring the character into the light sooner. Don't know how you fit your RL in. Thank you for writing

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Meeting

I love how you include historical references but don't get bogged down with the minutiae. Thank you for writing

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Love this first chapter. So good to see his POV. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Meeting

I love the history notes. And I so enjoyed hearing from Jarpr. Thank you

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Date: 26 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Tyr

I definitely enjoyed hearing from Edward. The hoops he puts himself through. Fascinating. Thank you for updating

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Date: 02 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Maze

Just like Midnight Sun your version brings...Edward....out of the shadows and into the light. I love to read his view on the world and in particular his Little Queen. Thank you for writing and enjoy the Windy City

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 9028
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Fascinating. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So interesting. I do like the AU you are creating. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yeah. really different but very interesting. i am looking forward to reading more. thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

A wonderfully intriguing story. Just enough info to compel us to read on. Love it. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well that was a surprise. 🙂 Thank you for updating. I really enjoyed this chapter.

Summary:

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Jacob doesn't get it! What can vampire Edward give human Bella that he couldn't?  Eclipse AU.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2478 Read Count: 1365
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Pack Mind

Good chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you xx

AAP

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Power Struggle

I am biased as I really do hate the canon character of Jerkob. So, having said that, I think you were a bit easy on him and he turn around too quickly. Good chapter though. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Thanks, yes I really dislike the character too, so maybe a little lenient xx

AAP

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 40946
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

a wonderful character building chapter. thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178440
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

At last. But...bullying doesn't stop so easily.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Summary: What if your soul lived in another and theirs lived in you? How would it affect your life until you meet? How would it change your life once you meet; “You are my soul without you I don’t exist”.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92457 Read Count: 10643
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2016 Updated: 27 Apr 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Lovely. Thanks

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Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - HISTORY

Good start.

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Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: CHAPTER 2 - NEW FAMILY

Lovely chapter. Thank you

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Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This chapter was so much fun and very interesting. I can picture Carlisle never allowing those boys to forget who scored all those points. I would image the 'reminder' would consist of a knowing smile and a raised eyebrow. Lol. Thank you. Yes. I'm procrastinating. Enough said. ;P

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Really good. Thanks

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Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Really good. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Nice

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sweet. I wonder if Charlie will mate with Tanya or Irina. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Sweet. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Lol. Testy hormones with Bella laying down the law. ;D

Author's Response:

You make my heart feel so good. Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: CHAPTER 3 GROWING FAMILY

Good chapter. Enjoying the changes in their backgrounds

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 4: CHAPTER 4 TWO SOULS MISSING (Year 2011)

A lovely sweet chapter.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 5: CHAPTER 5 MOVING TO SEATTLE

Sweet. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you so nuch. We appriecate your comments and taking the time to do so.



Author's Response:

Thank you so nuch. We appriecate your comments and taking the time to do so.

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Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 6: CHAPTER 6 MEETING YOUR SOULMATES (2012 January Semester)

Exciting and interesting. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: CHAPTER 7 SOULS’ GUARDIAN

Interesting research from Carlisle and Alice

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 8: CHAPTER 8 CONFRONTATIONS

Pleasantly surprised by Rose and Bella standing up to their parents. Good chapter.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: CHAPTER 9 RELAXATION AND PROCESSING

Sweet.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 10: CHAPTER 10 DECISIONS, WEDDINGS

Sweet. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Some nice excitement in this chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Really good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 03 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow. Good chapter. Good sense of humour. But all those mouths to feed. Thank goodness my name's not Esme. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Another good chapter. Thank you

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Date: 03 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Really good read. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Good chapter. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Really nice ending. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

You are an awesome reviewer. I've read your reviews on others too. You are so encouraging, even when giving helpful advise. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good. Thanks

Equinox by ordlas Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

One shot, AU. Edward's life has changed and he's not looking forward to the family's semi-annual trip.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594 Read Count: 214
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2016 Updated: 24 Jul 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Departure

nice

Summary: Past Featured Story

It has been a few months since the last encounter between the Cullens and the Volturi. Carlisle and Esme travel to New York for a medical conference. Alice has predicted that they will return to Forks with a new member to their family, a chronically ill human at that. With the Volturi battle still fresh in their minds, how will everyone cope with the new addition?

 

*Book 1

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93297 Read Count: 5700
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2016 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Tough read, in parts, but also enjoyable. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

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Date: 05 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Your Amelia is full of surprises. Plus, in the nicest possible way, she can play Esme! ;P Continue to love Emmett.

Author's Response:

I love the nature of their relationship. Emmett is just the best :)

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yeah. Thoughtless wanker. What a prick. Oops. Hope Esme doesn't go mad at me for my language, good chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

Esme would be unimpressed with your language! Haha. She'd surely wash my mouth out with soap if she heard me go off on a rant. 

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Amelia is so brave. a good chapter. Sorry I didn't realise that you had updated so frequently.

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Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

A lovely chapter. It does help to have a mind reader in the family. And, I'm so pleased Dani is turning out to be a good friend. Thank you

Author's Response:

It had its perks I have no doubt :) Dani is a very good friend :)

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Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I loved seeing Papa Bear Carlisle. I wonder if the Cullens will ever lean the identity of the perpetrator and will they stop him? Time will tell. Thank you for a wonderful update.

Author's Response:

All shall be revealed in later chapters :)

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Sweet. :D

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Lol. ;D

Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was fun. Thank you. It is so nice to read a vamp storyline.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter. Loved how C&E were not fooled by their 'kids'. Lol.