Reviews by BridieM
Summary: Past Featured Story

Post BD. A vision foretelling the Volturis return, a secret life revealed opens up a whole new world to the Cullen's.  A prophecy made decades before. Dumbledore convinces the Cullen's to join him in Hogwarts, but is this magical sanctuary a real safe haven or an even bigger fire for them to fall into?

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Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157747 Read Count: 28666
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
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Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17– A vampire calls.

Wonderful. Just love the way you play and weave your plot through the original. Always enhancing never detracting. Gotta go back and read again. Thank you so very much for this much appreciated and unexpected update.

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Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The High Inquisitor.

Oh! A cliffy! Lol. I was so absorbed by this chapter I was shocked to see the little box come up...Your description of the Toad huffing and puffing as she stomps around is spot on. Although she could be a comet...flashy with a tail of destruction. Thank you for a most enjoyable update.

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Date: 28 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Visions and prophecy

I dreaded that you would not allow us to read the prophecy. Thank you for an excellent, EXCELLENT chapter. So exciting. Can't wait to what happens next.

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Christmas

Wow. So looking forward to Draco being further humiliated. I know it's petty but it is fanfiction after all. I am really looking forward to reading more of this wonderful story and its characters. Thank you for writing. I hope you are well.

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12– Revelations.

So sorry I'm up to date again. This us such an enjoyable read I simply can't get enough. Thanks again

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Meeting the Order and Harry

Lovely chapter. Thank you again

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Welcome to Hogwarts - Ministerial Interference

Good chapter. I do like that you don't detract from Harry Hermoine and Ron. Thank you again

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Date: 17 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 – The Oracle.

You have an amazing imagination. I am in awe. Your update comes as I listen to the early morning rain fall upon the roof. Perfect start to a day. Thank you

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Date: 06 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Secrets always come out.

Truly I have no words for how exciting enthralling and compelling this AU is . Thank you for continuing to write your vision.

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Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 – First strike.

This was a surprising chapter. May I say 'WOW!!!'? So exciting. Bias yes, but I love to see the wolves whipped. Can't imagine Paul in 'anger management '. Is Sam beginning to realise their lack of knowledge and how dangerous that is? Won't the volturi add the wizards and dragon together with the disappearance of the Cullens and come up with 'let's join forces with Voltie' ? I can't imagine any long term alliance with the vamps would suit Voltie. Only he can be immortal and therefore unique.Regardless, of how this is going to play out, this chapter deserves another ABSOLUTELY BLOOM'N BRILLIANT. Thank you

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Date: 24 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 -Feeling Lucky.

Another wonderful chapter. We've covered quite alot of territory in this update but there is a lot of info too. Cormac is showing himself as a wa***r supremeo. Those scenes in the movie, where Ron is trying out for goalkeeper, always crack me up. It reads to me that Carlisle is still searching for the 'right' cure for Dumbledore's hand. You know Rose will, one day, have to bring the wizarding world into the space age. That should keep her occupied. So many problems so much time... ;D
Looking forward to seeing what Dumbledore has to say on Emmett's solution to the vanishing cabinet and the deatheater incursion. Another thoroughly enjoyable and brilliant chapter. Thank you for updating.

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Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 – Trains, visions and cocky teenagers.

Simply wonderful. Your use of humour, in parts, lightened the tone and released some of the stress. Portable swamps. Only the Weasleys! Lol. I'm guessing that Dumbledore will not experience the ongoing contamination from the Riddle Ring. So very good. Thank you

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Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17– A vampire calls.

I rather like Slughorn's resemblance to a niffler. Lol. And the caterwaul charm...what a scream! ;D I wonder, if the brothers gain access to the room of requirement will they smell the evil emanating from the diadem? Too soon? Hopefully they'll find or sniff out the vanishing cabinet. So excited as I really can't figure out, except in very broad brushstrokes, what you have planned. Thank you

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Date: 30 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Surprising Allies.

Another remarkable and surprising chapter. There is so much info contained here. We seem to be moving further from the original HP (even though I do love HP this is not a bad thing) and it is exciting to see where you'll take us. Leah and Seth's quick arrival and easy acceptance also surprised. Loved every word. Thank you

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Date: 07 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Sempra

Another enthralling chapter. Changes that enhance the original and changed major plot points make this a fresh imaginative approach. You use a delicate touch that is as sharp as a scalpel. Thank you

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Oh. Oh! OH!!! What a chapter! What a surprise! Oh My! Thrilling! This chapter could have been 50,000 words long and still it couldn't be long enough to satisfy every ounce of wonder and curiosity. I am flabbergasted. You've made my week. Thank you.

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Date: 21 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - If Vampires could faint.

Oh. Wonderful. So exciting. And, in particular, relieved by Esme's quick action in regards to the escape. Beautifully written, well executed and tight plot. Believable characters (leaving out the vamps/shapeshifting /magic stuff of course😀).Thanks for a wonderful update.

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Vision

This story is so good I had to come back for a second look. Do you know how to put stories on alert?

Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews I really enjoy seeing the response to this story. As for alerts I believe if you click add story to favourites it should alert you every time I update. 

 

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Another Visitor

I had forgotten the theories on how the magic worked for the Cullens

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Moving on.

Wonderful. The intrigue is just beginning. Thank you

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Diagon Alley and setting up home.

Its just wonderful to see the imaginative world JK Rowling created enhanced by you. Thank you

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Date: 11 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13– summer sun and an update from Charlie.

I have to agree with Edward's stance on the lesson taught to Coyle. But don't we all do things, in retrospect, that could have used better judgement. Loved that Charlie was present for a end of year wind down. If you ever decide to do an outtake please consider doing Charlie's lessons with the pack and the elders. That would be fun to read. Loved every word. Thank you so much for updating. Don't be surprised if I do another re-read. :) Still can't get a notification of updates from this site. Um. Tis' a puzzlement.

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Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Swooping Evil, Caipora and Brazilian wizard shops.

A question. How far out and high up does the concealment charm cover Isle Esme? Thoroughly enjoyable chapter. Thank you

Author's Response:

As far as my understanding of concealment charms goes, the charm used on Isle Esme, essentially makes it entirley invisble to anyone not shown the island by the secret keeper (Charlie). It much the same way that Hogwarts, the hogwarts express and various other magical destinations are hidden from Muggles, although in those examples they're not covered by the need for secret keepers as I expect they used a disillusionment charm along with a Muggle repellant charm. According to JK and also the HP Wiki, Concealment Charms (incantation unknown) are spells used to conceal things from view and to obfuscate inherent magical properties of objects. Also In the 15th century, evil wizard Ekrizdis placed concealment charms onto his personal fortress Azkaban to conduct his Muggle tortures in privacy. After his death, the charms faded away, allowing authorities to acknowledge the island's existence for the first time.

So using that as my guide, I work on the premis that the whole island essentially disappears.

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Date: 18 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Swooping Evil, Caipora and Brazilian wizard shops.

This was an enjoyable bit of fun. Thank you

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Date: 25 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 – A Visit.

What a joy to read. The volturi are sniffing around. Do I sense drama ahead. Looking forward to the school year. Thank you for updating. Loved it.

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Vision

Just me again. I am wanting some high quality entertainment. :D

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Another Visitor

Charlie is so cool in this

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Moving on.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this again. Just a small thing that bothers me each time. The cave, the family observes the Denali's from, is 80 miles away. That's seems too far over the horizon. Edward's reading distance, according to some, maxs out around 10 miles for family. So he wouldn't be able to read the approach of the Denali's nor their reactions to the destroyed house. Perhaps 8 miles for the cave would fit in better with canon. Either way I love this story. Thanks again.

Author's Response:

LOL well spotted, I actually had written 8 miles in my original draft, but typed 80 when transfering it here. I've now fixed that. I would like to think that with age and growing stabilty/familiarity Edwards reading distance would continue to grow, although even I can see 80 miles would stretch it.

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Diagon Alley and setting up home.

Wonderful. Thank you

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Meeting the Order and Harry

Wonderful. Thanks

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Welcome to Hogwarts - Ministerial Interference

Excellent. Thanks

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - First term Umbridge makes her mark.

Toad does make my skin crawl. Wonderful chapter. Thanks

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8– An attack and shared minds.

I think it is wonderful how the Stregoni Beneifici comes into play. Thanks

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Christmas

Such a good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The High Inquisitor.

So good.

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Visions and prophecy

Still a thrilling read. Thanks

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12– Revelations.

So good. Thanks

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13– summer sun and an update from Charlie.

Love this chapter. I am actively trying to tame my comments about the mutts. Aggressive hatred is not conducive to having a balanced view. They,however, may loom large in the future with the prophecy and the libertines. But would you trust their input? Protectors of others or themselves? Thank you for writing

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Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 – A Visit.

Wonderful chapter. This chapter does raise a number of questions about the volturi their search and any magical abilities. Also the mutts and will they further draw the attention of the volturi. Seth and Leah? Just a lot of titbits . Will the volturi notice something different about Charlie. So good thank you.

Author's Response:

I wanted to respond to this as you've been incredibly supportive since I started posting this story. So thank you for that, I get a real boost when I see that even one person enjoys my efforts. As for your questions, good grief I'm so mean, but I'm going to leave you hanging, because I don't want to give too much away and I know that if I answer them I will as I tend to get wordy. Lets just say, there are things afoot. <wink wink>

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 – Trains, visions and cocky teenagers.

I have no words to describe how fantastic this chapter was to read. Reminiscent of the excitement and anticipation associated with the end of a year long wait to read the next HP book. In the words of Ronald Weasley 'Bloody Brilliant'. From the Volturi and the growing threat to Charlie and the dumb mutt. Grandpa Newt's involvement, perhaps, in the ultimate sanctuary for the Cullens. To Emmett's destruction of the Riddle Ring (so hoping that Emmett isn't in any danger from the Essence of Voltemort). Wondering if Dumbledore's health won't be an issue and how that plays into the Elder Wand and everything you've got planned in that regard. Or not. Oh, and not forgetting Malfoy's imperius spell on Crabbe and Goyle. 'That's a trip to Azkarban that is' (channeling Hagrid there) if they could prove it. So exciting. Totally b***dy Brilliant. Hyperbole? Not a word of it!!! Gotta have another read. Forgive the spelling. Thanks. Can I only give 10 stars? Drat!

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 – Trains, visions and cocky teenagers.

In my excitement I totally missed Emmett's closing comment. Lol. Truly love this chapter. I hope they, Bellatrix and Draco, don't target Nessie. Anyhow, now that you've completed this chapter, no pressure or anything but just to let you know, I'm already looking forward to the next update. Thank you for writing.

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Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

Brilliant. Nice to read about Aberforth. The image of Mundungus as a buxom blonde...😂 . I wonder why the horcrux affected Edward so badly. Will Bellatrix and fenrir, if the vanishing cabinet is repaired, exit as doll sized figures? Thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter. I hope you are well. Thank you for updating

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Vision

Really enjoyed the playfulness of this crossover. Thanks

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Another Visitor

I just love how you've brought Charlie into this story. Loved it. Thanks

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Moving on.

Fantastic. Thank you

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Diagon Alley and setting up home.

You've made me remember how much I love HP universe and Edward. Thank you

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Meeting the Order and Harry

Thank you for writing this. I am thrilled to read these characters

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Welcome to Hogwarts - Ministerial Interference

I've never liked toads. But an other brilliant chapter. Thanks

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - First term Umbridge makes her mark.

Excellent. Thanks

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Date: 19 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8– An attack and shared minds.

Wonderful. Thank you. So looking forthwith toad being punished. Lol.

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Date: 30 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 – Fight or Flight

Thank yo7. So wonderful. You’re really amping up the action and tension. So good to read. I hope you’re not snowed in and can enjoy your New Year right from the start. Best wishes and thanks again

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Date: 06 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 – A dragon in the bank?

So very very good. Truly love how you’ve incorporated both worlds but still allow the characters to shine. The tension. The humour. The relationships. Thoroughly brilliant. Thank you.

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Date: 09 May 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

An exciting chapter. I am resigned to losing even more loved characters. Thank you for writing this amazing story

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Date: 09 May 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 – It could all go wrong.

WOW! WOW! WOW! Sorry for shouting but really...WOW!!! Thanks

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Date: 12 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

Thank you for this wonderful update. I, as much as I loath her, have always thought the Pink Peril needed a bit more of an airing in the Potter Universe. She’s not really they type to blend into the background. Would have paid real money to see her reaction to losing the pendant. Lol. Again thank you. My Saturday has started off perfectly.

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Date: 12 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

Forgot the stars...😀

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Date: 22 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 – This means war.

The prophecy begins to come into play. Wonderful and exciting to see these two worlds come together. Thank you

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Date: 29 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Vision

An exciting chapter. I am resigned to losing even more loved characters. Thank you for writing this amazing story

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Date: 16 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- The day they crashed the wedding.

I really enjoyed seeing the other side of the events. And knowing Molly and her family will be looked after both financially and emotionally is an added bonus. Edward really is a gentle soul . Another wonderful update. Thank you and enjoy your weekend.

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Date: 18 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – A History of Magic.

When I realised the content that would be covered in this chapter I, like a coward, exited your AU . I dreaded the consequences of the astronomy tower. I guess Harry’s Voldemort connection exerted its influence over him on this night. Allowing Dumbledore to live, and for Draco to receive help if asked for, makes so much sense. And shows a great deal of compassion for the Draco character. But, where was Snape? Keeping his true alliance hidden for now? 😉. Thank you for saving Dumbledore. I had completely forgotten about a Hokey. I wonder at Harry’s retrieval of Bellatrix’s wand. Something up your sleeve? 😉. Thanks for allaying my fears for Dumbledore . Looking forward to my questions being answered over the coming chapters . Thank you for writing this inspired and imaginative book.

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Bella is a single mom of two boys trying to make ends meet. Edward is a successful business man. Can he help her? Will she let him?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54251 Read Count: 71492
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2017 Updated: 23 Nov 2017
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Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

She really over-reacted but understandably so. Good cliffhanger. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing

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Date: 28 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Really enjoyed their first date. Thank you for fuelling my imagination for The Edward in a dark blue Armani! Lol.

Author's Response:

I am so glad i could help you out lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

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Date: 15 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wonderful. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

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Date: 24 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Lovely. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank You for taking the time to read and review!!

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Date: 24 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Lovely. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank You for taking the time to read and review!!

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Date: 21 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you for this insight. Really enjoyed it.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!!

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Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

An interesting turn. Didn't see that coming

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Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Lots of parents follow the Charlie Swan method of child development and support. :( Good chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

It is so sad to. I will never do that to my kids. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 12 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So pleased they sorted all of that out. Good chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!!!

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Date: 21 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Not shocked by that revelation. Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A good start. Thank you

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Sweet

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Very touchy. Thanks

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good one. Oh and the last review was supposed to read 'touching'. 'Touchy' is just a bit creepy. :P

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Another good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So good. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

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Date: 19 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wonder why she was worried looking at her phone. Good chapter. Thanks

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Date: 24 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So good to see her life coming together. Jerkob doesn't seem like the kind to take legal action quietly. I think she has every right to be concerned. A very enjoyable read. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!!

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Date: 31 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh! Different. Unexpected. Good. Thanks

Author's Response:

I try :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Enjoyable. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 10 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Nice. Will miss this family's

Author's Response:

Me too. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Shaky Ground by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
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Shaky Ground

Dr. Edward Masen lived a lonely, miserable existence as an emergency room attending at Harborview Medical Center. He ate, breathed and lived for his job. He refused to even think about women. To him, they were only distractions and he didn't trust anyone, except his mother. 

Dr. Isabella Swan just moved to Seattle, after completing her residency in Chicago. She was hired as a pediatrician at Harborview, becoming a pediatric emergency room fellow. She was not looking for a relationship, only focusing on her job. It was hate at first sight for both. Or was it? But, their attraction could not be denied. 

Unfortunately, a natural disaster rattles their lives ... the world was turned upside down when escalating earthquakes plagued the Seattle area. Will they able to survive the danger of being on 
Shaky Ground

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120201 Read Count: 123856
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2017 Updated: 01 Dec 2017
Reviewer: BridieM Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start. Thanks

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Earthquakes so rarely occur in the Pacific Northwest that the phenomenon causes the members of the Quileute tribe to investigate. They never would have expected to find her. She is stubborn, wild, and fiercely independent, and she willfully goes against everything they try to teach her. Especially when it comes to staying away from vampires. AU/Supernatural


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84901 Read Count: 40204
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2017 Updated: 30 Aug 2019
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Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

I really enjoyed seeing them stretch their legs. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. 

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Wonderful to see them together. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you, they work better as a team. 

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

These two are so caring. Some interesting bits and pieces in here too. Thank you for a re-readable chapter. ;D

Author's Response:

 That's wonderful to hear, thank you. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant start

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 Thank you!



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 Thank you!

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the meeting of these two. Peaceful. Quiet. I don't image that will last. Wonderful chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

 No, I don’t think it will. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your gift is powerful. So pleased you exercise your power on the written word. Your readers are the beneficiaries. Thank you

Author's Response:

That's really very kind of you. Thank you. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love your characters. I'm swooning. Thanks

Author's Response:

 Thanks! Edward is a romantic. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't mind the changes. They had to this beautiful story. Thank you

Author's Response:

 It was pretty necessary. Thank you. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

And I so want to take them home with me. Is this the quiet before the storm I wonder. Excellent chapter. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.

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Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Patriarchal societies...bring on the Amazonians! Lol. Good chapter. I so feel Bella's frustration and displeasure. So good . Thanks

Author's Response:

Yeah, they're awful. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wonderful. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wonderful. Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good chapter. Thanks

Author's Response:

 Thanks so much!

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Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Interesting. They've got a plan...of sorts...perhaps? Billy now there's a character you could do without meeting. Just saying

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 Billy is pretty horrible!

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Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Lovely. Thanks

Author's Response:

 Thank you!