Reviews by Twi-Mom2005
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127474
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG im in tears reading this chapter. You captured such a heartfelt moment. Great job. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh fuck.....

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter, I love how he planned this whole night just for them two. Loving every minute of it. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Awwwwwwwww

Figure Eight by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a nationally ranked paired skater with Jacob Black. Edward Masen is beautiful British skater paired with Tanya. However, both of their partners fall into hard times. These two try to navigate their way through life, both on and off the ice.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235336 Read Count: 144329
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Drugs and Death

This sounds promising so far. cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Pizza and Beer

Um, yeah great chapter

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Foundations and Nightclubs

oh shit this isnt going to be good

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Halloween and Bad News

I just want to give Bella a big hug and A BIGGER hug to Eward for standing by her.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Past and Future

I love the 'talks' they have with their lower regions. Great job.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Finals and Proposals

Great chapter. I love how he proposed to her. Loving it so much.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Exhibitions, Lemonade and Wedding Bells

Great job. Loved this story since I started it. I hate to see it go, but all good things come to an end.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

Awwwwww, so cute. The only question i have now is the newest addition boy or girl? what did they name it. love how you wrapped up their journey. Great job.

Ride With Me by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Bella is a badass valet at the coolest eatery in NYC, Rosie's. What happens when her favorite regular asks her to take a ride with him? Written for Fage 4 for Chartwilightmom!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8105 Read Count: 897
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Car sex, i thin is a must atleast once in life. Great job.

Script Fun by FFLoverLaura Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Bella is missing her long time boyfriend, having to edit and writescripts doesn’t help matters either. What will happen when Bella gets drunk and Edward surprises her by coming home early? Rated M for lemons and yumminess. E/B Written for Fandom4Children. Banner inside.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3849 Read Count: 935
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE IT, great job bb.

Elf on Holiday by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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Four months have passed since Elf met her Sir and they returned to England. That time has been spent training and preparing her for the next leg in her BDSM journey, which happens now, in the Chelsea Gardens in London. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5043 Read Count: 3293
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy hell Bella, I have missed these two but damn. Need MORE asap please.



Author's Response:

LOL... I'll get to it as soon as I can Dawn... thank you!

xoxo

tb

People Change by kuntrygal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was the bane of Bella Swan's young existence until her mother unexpectedly moves her away. What happens years later when she moves back? Do people really change?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82271 Read Count: 32257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 11 and 12 are the same chapter, just letting you know

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Again chapters 14 and 15 repeat themselves

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know! Don't know how I did that, but I'll fix it right now!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know! Don't know how I did that, but I'll fix it right now!

A Good Thing by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

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After Bella graduates from college she thought her dream job would be waiting...fate had other plans. When her brother Emmett asks her to join his band, she agrees. What happens when music isn't the only thing that sparks her interest?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36264 Read Count: 20824
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ok off to start another story of yours, and the first chapter sounds prmoising cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

great little story keep up the awesome work.

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312649
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Alice probably though it was just one of Edwards many girls no biggie, but oh boy did Japser take the words out fo Eddie boys mouth. Atleast i guess you can say he has a pair of balls that Edward doesnt have at the moment ;) Great job, and Im so HAPPY your going to keep going with this and AToH, I know all the hype over at FF will eventually die down like always. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Oh how i have missed these two, Im glad your mojo is coming back with these two.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Are we getting some sexin next chapter? Loving it doll.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324291
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

Holy Hell, fucking LOVED it. Cant wait to see how she breaks the news to Charlotte and how Edward takes the news as well. She is going to tell him befor she tells her right? Great job, keep up the awesome work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93554
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Please please update today if its possible. I have to know what the hell was said in the others letters, and what made Jasper run so fast ;) great job so far enjoying every minute of it, keep up the awesome work.



Author's Response:

Lol hjopefully update tomorrow. And as they say.... paybacks a bitch!

Summary:

Bella has always lived in the shadow of her twin brother, Edward. But on a graduation trip with their friends to a secluded cabin, she starts to develop feelings for his roommate Jasper. How long can they explore their feelings while keeping Edward in the dark? Non-canon pairing.

 

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Banner featuring pictures of the cosplay group, The Olympic Coven, used with permission. Photo credit for Rose and Emmett photo to @andywryly

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25705 Read Count: 13721
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds good cant wait to see where you go from here.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Cant wait for more, loving this little story.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great way to end this little diddy. Thanks for sharing with us. I find it Ironic that the little girl at the end is the girls name we have picked out for if and when we have a girl. While we were thinking of names when i was preggers with our little boy. Natalie is a name not in the family yet and my middle name is Rose so its funny that you choose that name. Look sorry for rambling on. Great job, cant wait to see what you throw out next to us.



Author's Response:

you aren't rambling at all, I love the little glimpses of my readers lives that I get through reviews. Thank you for the support, and besides finishing up some of my older fics so i can move onto the new ones i posted at the beginning of the year, i have a little surprise for you. I'm writing a drabbler based loosely on former jobs and my current one called "Loose Screws" so that should start posting after Pretenders is completed.  Thanks again!

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107087
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Outtake: The Note

LOVE it

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great job doll.

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158406
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

i love this story so much, and Im glad we could twist your arm to post it early. Ok first off Bella is not in her right frame of mind no matter how you want to spin it, Edward just beat her ass (even though not intential) Jasper has come in to save the day, yeah shes not all there ATM. I see why she stopped and Im glad Jasper stopped when he did. They need to really talk about EVERYTHING and no damn sugar coating. Edward needs some serious help and PRONTO. cant wait for more doll. Keep up the awesome work. Just know if you post more teasers on FB we will beg and plead for you to post, its our way of showing how much we <3 you.



Author's Response:

Well, I just circumvented your begging by posting 43.... hehe.  The "talk" is coming.  

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

is edward getting whats been coming to him? Yes but not in the way i thought. He still needs to come to terms with his past and why hes the way he is. As for the Bellsper moment at the end, umm yeah she said ILY or atleast thats whats im gathering from the last sentence, i WANT to know what Jasper thinks and will he say it back? Great job as always bb.



Author's Response:

love ya darlin'!  thanks for helping me stay sane with this...lol

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

Now your fucking with my emotions damn it. I want to HATE edward but with the way your painting him at the moment i cant, all I want to do is hold him and love him. As for belsper i think getting away is just what they need, and i cant wait for more. Keep up the awesome work doll.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

Im loving the Jasper and Bella time, but Im dying to read more with Edward atm. Im doing a 180 on him and Im not sure i like it, you know where I stood with him from the start. and now hes changing and making me care ;) Great job doll.



Author's Response:

next chap is underway and opens with EPOV... in fact, the whole chap may end up being his... not sure yet. and you aren't the only one that is suddenly seeing him in a different, more forgiveable light.

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

HELL YES you take it and start talking. If you want the girl to stay then start talking. So the Edward plot thickens, Alice just had to slap him and i cant say I blame her. I know you said this is in the home stretch, like how many more chapters are you thinking doll? Keep up the kick ass work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"The difference between men and boys is the price of their toys" unless you're Toyward...and you decide to share your toy box. When Jasper wanders into Edward's adult toy store...his life will never be the same. TrueEnglishRose/texasbella E/J

 

 

Also up for Best Humor in the Non-Canon Awards

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46510 Read Count: 32428
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I feel bad for our boys, but maybe since jasper so 'politely' let the truth out then maybe its one step closer to them being together? love the story so so much. Ya'll have made me crave more slash, and i was such a prude to this type of thing befor, so THANK you. Great job ladies, cant wait to see where our boys are next week.
Im doing what was asked of me, and reposting my reviews from over on FF for it here. I forgot I didnt start reviewing under the new name til then, so I have ne reviews for chapters 1 through 9. But you Ladies know how I feel and Edsper.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor guys *hands over tylenol and plenty of water* love the story, hopefully they get some sexy fun times soon. Keep up the awesome work ladies.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love how Jasper's parents are so supportive and are willing to stand by him no matter who he chooses. AS for Edward i just want to hug him, he's been head over heels since he first laid eyes on him. And why do i get the feeling that Em is up to no good? and Im certain he changed Edwards voice mail, so now Edward is going to have to straighten that out with Jasper befor we get some sexy fun times ( which i hope are in the next chapter or two) hint hint... Love it keep up the awesome work ladies.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh Jasper Jasper, what have you done, and im sure Edward will LOVE it once he gets to see it. Is the next chapter an all Edward POV? Love this story ladies, keep up the awesome work

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMFG, THANKS so much for this bonus chapter *smooches* I cant wait for monday, between them both getting ready for a night out, and Jasper is more than willing to do anything for Edward. Ummmm yeah my mind is on over load. Loving it, keep up the awesome work ladies

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hot damn ladies. Fucking loved it, great song choice btw. Cant wait to see the tat. Keep up the kick ass work

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh My Edsper! great job, love the idea for the tat, and that Jasper admited he Loved him was awesome. Thanks for the road head, something told me these two would have some type of action befor getting to where ever jasper is going. What a way to throw charlie in the mix, cant wait to see how Jasper gets out of this. keep up the awesome work ladies

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter and surprise for us ladies. Congrats on the nominations. As for the posting I dont know which way to go. I kinda want to have it all in one go, but then i kinda want to drag it out. When can you post the sequel? Whichever way it goes i will be happy as long as my guys are together.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh hell, FUCKING LOVED THIS CHAPTER! You two are turning me into a slash whore and I thank you for it. great job ladies cant wait to read the rest this week.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Sounds like our boys are having some fun. And oh the fun they could have in Athens. Greatjob ladies.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Morning. LOVED the chapter, and from what I am gathering Edward is going with Jasper or atleast surprising him. I cant wait. I would really like to know how they broke the chair? great job ladies cant wait for the next one, and the pics on the blog are AWESOME.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

LOVED this chapter, Love my boys, Its sweet and Romantic in their way how they got here. Great job, I hate to see it end but I know got a little over a month to go and they come back with the sequel. Questions, I can think of some, can i give them after the last chapter? I would hate to ask something and it be answered in the story. So um yeah im just going to wait til tomorrow to read and review and see what i want to ask. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMEJ... Great and lovely chapter. Loved the vows, Em dressed as a woman (saw the blog, love the pics) the song choice was so them in the moment. Hate to see it end, even if its for a bit... Ok questions, will they ever have a 3some with Bella? Iknow edward hinted to it earlier on,also thay would be an out take I wouldnt mind to see. Does jasper or edward wear the cock ring as often aspossible? are there children in their future? Thats all for now, if anymore I will pm ya. Great job ladies, cant wait to see more from the boys. P.s. Tell JA she did awesome with the manips.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake #2 Jasper's Second Piercing

OMG, thats too damn funny... I still want my three some of them with bella, i think it would a very unique and funny lemon between them three. great job, keep up the awesome work. Thanks for sharing with us.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Outtake #3 Never Squat With Your Spurs On

LOVED it, great chapter and the visual um yeah it makes me want to go find my cowboy ;) that darn em showing up right at the most in oppourtune moment. Atleast they both were done, just enjoying the post moment. Cant wait to see what else your going to share with us. And CONGRATS on your win, ya'll deserve it.

Middle Ground by Mona Rider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 118]
Summary:

 

Banner by: Ellie Wolf

 

The Middle Ground is run by the most intellectual of mankind, and they run a facility that is known as Halfway Guild.

 

They take care of the sickly, elderly and control the procreation of the human species.

 

- June Drabble Wars -


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8111 Read Count: 22656
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This sounds very promising, and i cant wait to see what you have in store for this story.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

This is becoming very interesting. I have so so so many questions but I will just read on and see if they are answered.



Author's Response:

If any aren't answered I'd be happy to set anything you need striaght or even have a longer indepth conversation about it. I am on Twitter Mona_Rider and on FB as www.facebook.com/MoneRiderFF

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

I have noticed the dates are going backwards, im sure there is a reason behind it. but i want to know why this is?



Author's Response:

I thought I only had one date wrong, I am sorry for the error but it is supposed to go forward.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

Whose the snitch?

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 61 - Epilogue

This was a very interesting story a little crazy but good none the less. Thanks for taking the time to share this with us. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review and saying such kind words!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407545
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok Im now able to start this drabble and Im looking forward to it.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Cant blame a daddy, let alone a single dad at that.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

What a way to throw your brother under the bus Em. Loving it so far.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Keep telling yourself that Bella. Love the pic BTW.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loving the pics to go along, the shower looks fun and apparently Bella is about to have some fun in there.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Im a puddle already and no lemons yet......

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh sweet jesus, J and B know each other and now E would like to get to know B alot better or atleast his DICK would.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love the sassiness of Bella.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

oh FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well now we know what happened between Bella and Jasper, and I think that jasper still has feelings for her, and Edward, boy oh boy what can we say about edward? hes in for a long and kinky ride.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

OMG....... Too damn funny shes either playing drums or landing a plane?

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

Loved it from the start. Why not fill in the seven years in a following drabble war, and if there's anything thats not covered or if your readers feel theres something that could use a little more back story, or a futrue take on then add to that. Either way you go with it, im up for it. Great job.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

great to see this being continued doll. I went back and re read what was already posted so i can keep up. Loved it teh first time around, and Im Loving this even more now.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Bitchella is back and better than ever.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Well, are they going to join in or just stand there? LMAO

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

She thinks shes training them, they think they are training her to a point. To me they are all just getting FUCKED and in a very good way.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

nice visual ;)

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Uh oh, shes already teaching the next generation to be a bitc like her. Great job loving it.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Loving it, they wanted Bitchy Bella well they got her and then some. Poor Charlie, hes not going to have a heart attack is he?

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Awww, edward's just pissed, he can always jack off, sheesh. Grow a pair boy. LMAO

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Nice pic.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Papa Charlie just wants to see that his baby is good, and meet the grandbaby who he's going to spoil rotten.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Cute name

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Bella still wears the pants and the guys are still ok with it. Loving it doll. Im so glad you decided to give us another dose of these three.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

uhoh, why do i sense a showdown is about to be happening, which in turn is going to get the guys all worked up and they are going to want fuck Bella...... Why am I worried about that damn it, they  need a good FUCKING.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

damn it, I thought she was going to kick her ass.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Just go for it, always has to be the voice of reason. Damn him, hes cockblocking and thats not good.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

oh shit, a pissed off, horny bella. I dont think this is going to go over well.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

I swear i love the pic.........

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Bella is marking her territory i would back off lady or get your ass kicked.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

So there's going to be a part three to this? Sweet. Great job as always doll. cant wait for the next round to start.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 418903
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yeah, im glad Bella stood up for herself. now if opnly Jasper can grow up. I love that your doing a story that kind of reflects on my real life. im a 'big' girl, and the hubby is active duty airforce (so he's like all healthy looking). Great job, keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter, and as for this story I think its sending out a great message. Im a bigger girl and I FLOVE this story. People just need to move on if they dont like it. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

WOW, alot happened in this chapter. Great job. Im glad to see that this Bella and Edward are more like a RL type couple than most fake couples. Loved it, keep up the awesome work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028218
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Hot damn

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Me likey, and I want MORE...... Great job so far.



Author's Response:

more coming up!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh sweet jebus. the suspense is killing me.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great job, keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

holy fuck

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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34722
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great job, loving these boys so much.



Author's Response:

Aw, we're glad you love them so much :D

tb & true

xXx

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Of course women WE LOVE it, and im looking forward to teh sexy fun times these two will be having while in Greece. Glad to finally get to read this little diddy. great job as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much darlin'!  We really hope ya'll like this installment as much as the first!

xoxo

tb and true

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Welcome to the mile high club................Great job ladies.



Author's Response:

:D thanks!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hell yeah a no COCKblocking honeymoon is in order. great job as always ladies. Keep up the kick ass work.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Twi-Mom.. glad you're enjoying the second installment of these two love birds!

 

xoxo

tb and True

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love my guys sos so much. They are getting very kinky. Keep up the awesome work ladies.



Author's Response:

:D  Kinky and frisky... that's what this honeymoon is all about! Thanks for reading!

xoxo

tb and True

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loving it. great job ladies



Author's Response:

Thanks babe :)

TB & True x

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hot damn...... I really love these two, and i cant wait for more from them. Keep up the awesome work dolls.

 



Author's Response:

More to cum soon babe :D lol

True & TB