Reviews by janefanatic
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311964
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

That was amazing!! Although, I'd be more pissed about the Emmett's severed head if I were Rose, especially if it were as authentic looking as it sounds. I would be the one to fall for it, and I'd probably bust a brain vessel freaking out, thinking my fiançé was dead! Of course, I think they entered the apartment together, so Rose knew it was a prank... Regardless, it was freaking hilarious!



Author's Response:

i think she was over it by then...I'd probably scream , cry, and then laugh, in between peeing my pants of course.  Thanks!

Remember Me by NoelleSeven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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One love.  One destiny.  Can you change what's meant to be?  AU/OOC NOT related to Rob Pattinson's movie of the same name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126600 Read Count: 8254
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: No Faith In Medicine

I'm extremely excited about this story! I hadn't read it until now, and the feeling I have right now is like the feeling I had when I started reading Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone for the first time. Like something wonderful was beginning. I am beyond fascinated with what you've done with Alice's perspective. I feel a bit like Aro, and I can understand completely how wonderful he found reading Alice to be. I'm a bit smug at the confusion and irritation Alice is feeling for the first time in a very long time. She's always been possibly my favourite character, but she does get a bit annoying when she decides that no one can fight her decision because she's already foreseen that it's going to happen. I also love what Edward's lack of presence has done to the Cullen dynamic. I can very well believe that without Edward, Alice (and thereby Jasper) wouldn't be quite as close to the rest of the family as they are in canon. After all, in Midnight Sun, Edward talked about the particular bond they shared as fellow freaks in the vampire world, and how they managed to have their own sort of communication technique. I can see how without Edward there to reject her (and really hurt her feelings, even if she'd never admit to it) as she awoke from the change, Rosalie could possibly find more satisfaction in her vampiric existence. In Eclipse, she's rather smug when she tells Bella of her superb control, how she was considered the second-most controlled, after Edward. If she were a bit less defensive, and (due to the absence of Edward) she held the mantle of "The most controlled" in the family (after Carlisle who shouldn't count anyway, because he's been a vampire for over 300 years), I could see her putting her medical knowledge to use through practice. Okay, so with all that said, I thoroughly am enjoying yourr story, and I thank you for writing and sharing with us!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Dead and Gone

I enjoyed the Spanish. It was nice, because there was nothing too difficult in there, and since I speak took one semester of intensive Portuguese in college, I understood it all. Who knew? I love the idea of Jasper just telling the truth to be subjugated in a Psych ward. I'll be interested in seeing what Emmett's backstory will be.

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Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: What I've Done

Oh, dip! The scar was a great touch! I kind of wish he'd found some sort of mention of Maj. Jasper Whitlock, but I suppose the Cullens would take care of that for themselves. I know this isn't from this chapter, but I fell in love with this line: "If there was one thing I learned from my privileged upbringing, it was that life is too short to drink shitty alcohol."

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Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Time Is Running Out

YAY FOR ROSE!!! I was so hoping she would show, but when Emmett didn't call her or anything, I didn't think she'd know to come home in time! Of course, there is still the question of Edward/Murato/Robert/What's-his-face... Crossing my fingers!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: I'll Know You

Love!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella pretends to be a coma patient's fiancee just to be able to keep seeing him. What happens when he wakes up from coma? What will she do when his brother begins to suspect she's lying? AH, AU, OOC, Cannon, E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52812 Read Count: 15308
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Understandings

Aw, I loved Carlisle's reaction!!! Edward was so nervous for nothing!!

Summary:

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Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?

Thank you, JennJenn, for this lovely banner!

 

Thank you, TammyAZ, for this beauty!

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~ What Drives Her has been nominated by you!! ~

-Nominated in the Sunflower Awards for "Best Vampire Story".

-Nominated for a Faithful Shipper Award for "Best Alternate Universe/Canon Story"!  (Update: TKegl got the well-deserved win for her story, "Beyond Time". I highly recommend reading it, if you haven't already!)

-Nominated for a Vampie for "Best AU Story" in the Newborn Round, Winter 2011.

-Nominated for a Shimmer Essence Award for "Best Dazzled Moment", in the 2010 Snowflake Quarter.

 

*If you know, or hear of, any other noms for this story, please feel free to send a DM my way as I'm not terribly active in the awards and contest circuit anymore.*

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 258430 Read Count: 27261
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Deals Off

Aw, I loved how joking Jared was, and Embry's astute observations. What the hey is going on with Jacob's lack of presence in this story this far? I hope he's just been detained, not otherwise absent...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Entry for the Scene Stealers Contest on FFn, NM Chap 3. Edward's attempt to leave Bella doesn't quite work out the way he expected. His cruel words don't have the intended effect and this Bella isn't crumbling in the dirt. BPOV, AU

Won Judge's Choice - chosen by Katmom

Beta: Bella's Executioner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8022 Read Count: 635
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2010 Updated: 17 Nov 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: That Day He Lied

I loved this!! I've often wondered what, if anything, Bella could have said to make Edward stay. I think this was perfectly done, because it embraces all of the issues in their relationship that caused Edward to be able to leave; that caused him to make all of the decisions in their relationship, forcing Bella into this passenger role on the sideline. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Hi,

thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I tried to stick to canon as much as possible, meaning I didn't change the inherent characteristics of Edward and Bella, I just gave her a little bit more backbone. It always struck me as odd, starting in NM, that the girl who told off a vampire would then be reduced to a sidekick. I also thought it was rather strange, despite Bella's tendencies to put Edward on a pedestal, that she didn't see the lies for what they were - a desperate attempt to keep her safe, at least in Edward's mind. The fact that he is leaving not three days after the birthday party, not three days after he told her how he envies Romeo the ease of death, because he once had to contemplate how to find his own during the James debacle, and she just believes that he suddenly doesn't love her anymore? Seriously? Where was her head that day? Where was the girl from Twilight who wouldn't take crap from a broody, moody Edward?

So this was my attempt at fixing that. Glad you liked it. I'm thinking of maybe extending this for a few more chapters if and when inspiration strikes.

Thanks again.
TMoT

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night. Because of mysterious circumstances surrounding the death of his mother, Edward is raised by Carlisle Cullen, legendary former F.B.I. agent. Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice. Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man. Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward. Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself? Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?

 


 

Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready! This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon. Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery  Warning This story is going to be very violent, and in a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason, but will have a HEA.

Banner by me and the awesome blinkie is by Betti Gefecht

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42561 Read Count: 6949
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 ** Beginnings **

I love Dexter!! And it's adding an interesting dynamic that he actually has helpers in the form of Carlisle and then later Emmett. That automatically makes your Dext-ward more emotional than Dexter himself is. And I'm interested in the fact that Carlisle is (presumably) alive. I only started watching Dexter during the second season, and by that point Harry was dead, and I have no idea if he was ever alive during the series, so the idea of a Code of Carlisle while Carlisle himself is still alive is intriguing to me. I'm looking forward to meeting Bella! 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 ** The Cullens **

Perfect response to blood. "I think you have some blood on your neck." Nothing else. I'm glad she attacked Newton; he deserved it.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: ** Disguises **

Oooh! Now Dextward's protective instinct is going to come out! I can't wait for next chapter!

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Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ** The Stalker **

OH DIP!!! I thought it was either Edward or Michael, but wasn't sure which one until she called him. Even before she asked him if he was in her backyard, I thought that with Bella's luck, she'd most likely call when she wasn't in danger and then choose not to call when she was! I am super-excited about next chapter!! Hopefully Edward is still stalking her...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129709
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Uh, oh! I think Edward might just give in and actually kill Jasper this time... Thanks for sharing; I appreciated the further insight into Charlotte and Peter's thoughts and treatments toward Bella, as well as the understanding that's dawning in Bella's mind of just what Edward is feeling towards her. "I don't want you to feel like this..." was so telling. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! We're happy you enjoyed this chapter.

We'll have part 2 posted soon. Hope you'll enjoy it as well.

Thanks again,

Jells

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

AAAHHHHH!!!! I don't know what to say. All of my would-be questions are already answered by the AN at the bottom. Well, next to the bottom. I have no words... for the photo or for the writing. Except perhaps to say both "Wow!" and "MORE!"



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command. 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

So it's pretty funny that the only vampire who hasn't been a complete abomination so far is Tanya. I expected to hate her; that's usually the standard, isn't it? Thus far, she's nice. Jasper. Man, what a bitch! Of course, I have hopes that he'll have trouble sentencing Bella to death; doesn't he empathize with humans too? If he feels her confusion and pain, maybe he'll develop some type of Lima Syndrome for her? Here's to hoping! Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Sorry for the ubber late response. It's been crazy here, but I'm happy to say that I will have the next chapter completed very soon. =)

Yeah, def wanted Tanya to be different since she's always the bad one of the bunch lol. Jasper is a bitch! lmao he really is! Jasper hates humans unfortunately, he thinks he's better than them since he sees them as food, cattle. Buuuuuuuuuuuuut you never know. I won't burst your bubble for hoping. lol You gotta have some hope. Thank you for reading and commenting. Hope you'll like next chapter.

~Jells

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: All ABout Losh!

What a great cause! I don't think I'll be able to choose what you should write; you are a talented writer, and whatever you choose will undoubtedly be great! I suppose, in the interest of practicality, you should choose to write an outtake from whatever story has the most readers. The more popular the story, the more valuable the outtake. Can you moniter which story generates the most traffic?

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

IT LIVES!!! Yay! Thanks for the update; I am, as usual, interested in the Tanya angle. She made him keep her secret, wich was...? Her telekinesis? Or something else?

Thanksand have a great new year!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I'm glad Tanya isn't dead? I'll admit that you've got me hooked onto the idea of whatever Tanya's family's backstory may be; the hints were nice, but it makes me all the more curious!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

Oh, dip! Demetri is half-human!! ...Or there's another answer. I'm not going to ask, as I'm certain all will be revealed in time.



Author's Response:

Yup *grins*

 

 

We’ll have more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Unbelievable Right?

Well, I was about to report the story, so I clicked on the link when lo and behold! The link doesn't work! I think this is good news, right? It means it was taken down...? I am sorry that your work was abused in such a manner.



Author's Response:

That is very good news. FF.net took it down. =)

 

Thanks for your support!! We appreciate it! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71662
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Best line of all time goes to: ". He was foul mouthed and sarcastic, he was purposefully messy, he pushed my buttons, and he ate people." Thanks for updating!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Summary:

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Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Divine Miss Hale

Aw, I love Rosalie! She's so fierce. She taught Tyra the word. Thanks for sharing!!



Author's Response:

Yes, she is quite the girl! I am happy she came through for Bella!

 

Happy New Year and thanks for your review!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Bitch Slap

I LOVE this plotline. I always thought Bella could have seen what Edward was doing if she had just a tad more self-confidence, and with Alice (and Rosalie) on her side, she has just the things she needs to make this work out for her! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: EPOV In which I find my voice

AHA!!! THIS right here, ladies and gents, is what we in the fandom have been waiting for. The moment that Edward Cullen finally admits to himself that he is absofuckinglutely clueless when it comes to love, and particularly Bella! I am glad he's on his way over to Bella's house; she can punish him some more!



Author's Response:

Let's hope that Edward has wised up enough on his own so that her punishment won't have to be too severe! We need a LOVE story, and not a bunch of EMO angst. Sigh...this story is writing itself girls, I am only channeling it... Here's to hoping that Emoward finally gets a clue!

 

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts and Broken Thongs

Yay!! I'm all for righteously pissed-off Bella, but who can resist a begging Edward?

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Last chapter

HAH! Rosalie's last line was effing hilarious!



Author's Response:

Indeed it was !

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40590
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Bare

Hah!!! I love the threat to tattle to Alice! What a clever last resort!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Red

Anything I say will be inadequate to express how I feel right now. This chapter (nay, this entire story) has been superb. The action is enough to make you eager to continue reading without overwhelming, the emotional backdrop is exquisitely portrayed. Last chapter, I felt the betrayal of Charlie. I felt that moment where Bella's heart dropped into her stomach with the sudden and complete knowledge that the man she always loved as a child never really existed. This chapter has gone so far in so much as displaying Edward's emotions goes. The small signs, the fact that he called her a beautiful dork and baby, the fact that he had never before made such a face as when he finds the guns pointed to Bella... all of these add together to paint such a complete image of emotion. It's quite fantastic. I am eagerly anticipating your next update, but more importantly, I thank you deeply for this one!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Fury

I can't handle it. Please no? Oh goodness, I need another update like, yesterday. Stat!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Guardian Angel

Oh  my goodness, what a wonderful chapter! Adventure, helicopters, beautiful gowns (yes, I admit I AM one of those girls), and hope for the future? It's like a two-hour action hit packed into several pages! I desperately hope that Sue is right, otherwise I will hate her too for giving hope... Thanks for sharing!

Summary:

 

 

Edward loses the best thing in his life due to his addiction.  Bella cannot take the lies anymore.  Its over.  There would be no chance that Edward could get her back as his Special Forces Unit was shipped out to Afghanistan.  Nearly a decade passes by and Edward decides to call Bella where they reconnect and Edward tells her he has only loved her.  Bella is thrilled but stunned when Edward refuses to meet with her in person.  How can you tell someone you love them and yet not be with them?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6847 Read Count: 566
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was great! I loved the song in it; I could see where the inspiration came from. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Blind is one of my fave song. Thanks for reading and commenting!

It's You by duhitsangie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

A Locket, A Picture, A Dream.. What if someone you thought didn't exist came into your life when you had given up? B and E are 2 college kids in LA who meet and feel like they've always known each other, is it more than just a feeling? Fluff/Humor/LemonsBanner by Mehek18

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150715 Read Count: 25531
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Jun 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aw! He fixed the clasp! Love.

Summary:

Neurologist/Knight in shining armor Edward Cullen is called upon by a tiny fairy to save a damsel in distress. Disney makes it look so easy. Entry for the 'Who Doesn't Love a Fairy Tale? Contes on FFn.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26057 Read Count: 4879
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Bella's Emails

Aw, I loved these! Thanks for adding them to the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84269
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One

Uh oh!! Someone's talked to Edward about the publishing deal... and poor Bella! But, it'll be good for Edward to see a break in her cold façade. I love Renée and Charlie, by the way! They are so complimentary!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two

Hah! I love how Edward's resolve to mortify Bella just slowly melts away, until he has to justify his non-reaction to himself... This was a great chapter! Thanks for sharing with us, and thanks for showing more Charlie and Renée; I'd love to see more of them!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Player

Oh man, please say that the Daffodil Festival is a real thing?! That sounds amazing, and exactly the thing I would love to see Charlie grumble for being forced to go! I am already dreading the embarrassing hijinks that appear to be ensuing at Jacob's wedding; I really hope he changes his mind or plan before then...



Author's Response: It's real,believee it or not!! It's this Saturday, 9 April and kicks off in Tacoma! :) Hahaha!

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Paragon

Hehe. Bella has girl balls! I read that somewhere, and I have no idea where, but it sounds like an Emmett... Thanks for updating; I can't wait for whatever deserving punishment Edward receives, as well as what his retribution will be!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid

Oh, you KNOW he wasn't asleep!

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Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Pretender

Oh, dip! Hoping for a resolution (or at least the reveal of) the Jessica Situation (it deserves to be capitalized, IMHO) next chapter? Thanks for sharing; it was wonderful, as always.

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Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Prevention

I loved the mixture of adult and teenage behavior! It ranged from "work work work mode" to "oh wow! He thinks I'm hot!" again and again; I found it utterly charming and unassuming. Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One

Oh, hot damn! I loved Bella's instant respect to Rose, combined with her refusal to be intimidated by her. I also found your description of Bella's envy towards Edward as far as her parents are concerned.

"[...]it’s like wanting your parents to like your best friend and later resenting your friend because your parents like them too much…feeling like they like your friend more than you."

It was very well put! Thanks for sharing with us!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two

Hm... I's absolutely impossible to tell who's winning right now! They both keep outdoing each other, the score is getting ridiculously high. Still, it was nice to see Alice thrown in the mix, and have all their friends witness firsthand all of the UST flying around between the two.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (or not)

I appreciate you letting us know.

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Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow

This just goes to show why exactly Emmett is awesome! He sees through the façade and gets straight to the point. I'm glad Edward is finally considering that more than just Bella's pride may end up getting hurt if he goes through with everything.

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Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line

I love this turn of events!! Every time one of them takes control (or thinks they've taken control) of the exchanges, the other person rises up and shows they've been in control the whole time... I really do hope Bella comes clean to the truth of Edward's manuscript recommendation before the wedding. Unless Jessica's the one who was lying?! I mean, she's clearly been lusting after E for some time, but has gotten nowhere (pre-haircut grab, that is); maybe she's just looking for brownie points? Not likely, but it would be interesting if the resentment E's been showing Bella has been misplaced this entire time. Thanks for sharing! I love that Edward has succeeded in making Bela admit that she wants him, but somehow, she still won that game/contest!

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Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Progression

Everything in their relationship is about give and take; but in their case, it's more of a taking on both sides that ends up unintentionally benefiting both parties. This new game? Perfect example. Edward doesn't mind telling her the truth about things, and he's able to slowly seduce her by discovering her hidden erogenous zones. Bella gets to discover both herself and him with the game. I was disappointed in Bella for not coming clean about her recommendation (or lack thereof) to Aro, and I was hoping she would disclaim this chapter, but plenty happened regardless. I loved the exclusively dialogue week. Dialogue is among the hardest thing to write successfully in my opinion, and it showed a clear passage of time without having to be explicit. Thanks for sharing; I think you grow as a writer wit each chapter!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE COMPLIMENT! IT SEEMS TO COME MORE NATURALLY WITH EACH CHAPTER,AND I'M REALLY ENJOYING IT! :)

I'VE FINISHED THE NEXT CHAPTER AND SUBMITTED IT TO MY BETA'S. IF ALL GOES WELL,I'LL BE ABLE TO POST ON SUNDAY.

I THINK YOU'LL BE RELIEVED TO SEE BELLA'S PROGRESSION IN THE NEXT TWO CHAPTERS. I WASN'T KIDDING WHEN I SAID WE'RE IN THE HOME STRETCH. ;)

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR REVIEWING!

XOXO

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Progression Part Two

Tell him, tell him, tell him, tell him right now (oh yeah)! I wonder how that'll affect E's plans... Oh, and big love for Emmett right now!

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Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Plumpkin

AW!!! My favourite line in this chapter: 

Call me a masochist if you want, but she’s like the TV in a bar–even though the volume is turned on mute and you’re surrounded by your friends, you just can’t seem to pull your eyes away from it.

We all have been there and understand the simile perfectly!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2669099
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince

Aw, they both have the same insane sex-thoughts!

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

HAHAHAHAHA!!!! This. Was. Effing. Hilarious. Everything about it, from Carlisle's ridiculous get-up to Edward not understanding anything about Harry Potter-verse, to that effed-up scene at the end (who's pointing a gun at who, again?)!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa

This chapter felt real. I don't know how to explain it, but you reached that place of writers' dreams, where all the elements converged to create something true. Spectacular.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Oh dip!! My heart is racing, vicariously experiencing the adrenaline rush from the demise of Fat Tony! Thank you for sharing!!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143205
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Damn. That last bit, with Charlie, gave me a very strong sense of... something. Ineffable. It was... haunting.

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Damn. Um, hug him? Eagerly anticipating news... Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Wow. I have nearly no idea what just happened, but... damn? That was just awful. Not in terms of writing or content, of course; you did made both wonderfully, but just in terms of raw emotion. It was just deeply painful. Thank you for sharing? I mean, thanks, but now I'm all sad and anxious for the next update! 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Okay, somehow he's managed to turn it all around onto her? That's not okay, but I have to admit, I'm impressed! He'd better come back and apologize again. I don't know if I could respect Bella if she were the next one to make an overture of kindness. He still hasn't redeemed himself. In fact, if I were she, I'd try to pay him back everything he ever paid before. With interest. Thanks for sharing. Just because I'm mad at your character doesn't mean I'm irritated with you! I always am excited about your updates.

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Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I don't have the words for this chapter. Intense sounds too vague, not strong enough. Fervid, but in a contained manner? A restrained vehemence? Whatever the word may be, this chapter was that and more. Much more. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow. This update blows me away. Just when we think we've got it all figured out, you've got to throw out the knowledge that his daughter is not dead, and everything we thought we knew flies out the window! It's very skilled. I'm in that odd position where the more I find out about your characters, the more I want to know. Every little clue is just a teaser, just enough to make me anticipate the next unveiling! Brava! 

Clinical Love by shpwhitney Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Bella finds the perfect man in Edward; what's not to love in a sexy, cultured, successful, rich doctor? Well, the fact that he is somewhat clinical in every aspect of relating!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1491 Read Count: 1568
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: C.L. O/S

HAHAHA!!!! I am laughing my ass off as I type!



Author's Response:

I'm glad! I was nervous that people wouldn't find it funny! Thanks for the review :)

 

- shpwhitney

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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This awesome banner made by the awesome DivineInspiration


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh no!!! I hope she's just being a delicate female, fainting from the shock and indelicacy of it all, not because she's been shot! It's interesting, this isn't quite the right time (a few years after), but your story makes me think of Ragtime (the book by E.L. Doctorow, also a Broadway musical). This chapter, with the race riots, in particular brought it to mind. Thank you for sharing! I'm rooting for these crazy kids, and I hope Edward finds Bella! ...After his newborn bloodlust stage, of course.



Author's Response:

Now you know I cannot reveal all my secrets just yet. The answers will come in time. And as for that gunshot... we'll find out what happens in chp 16. I have to say, I am so very honored that this story reminds you of such great work. Ragtime is actually one of my favorites. I had actually never made the connection until you brought it up. And believe me, I will bring Edward and Bella back together as soon as I possibly can. They need their happiness together. Thanks so much for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...here's a quick peek at what Edward's been up to:

"Careful, Edward."

Carlisle's voice startled me, bringing my focus back to the park. Sitting next to me quickly, he reached out and pulled my hand from the park bench and smoothed out the grooves made by my fingers. I hadn't realized I was holding on so tight.

"Is everything okay, Edward?" I heard his concern.

I sighed. "Yes, just thinking."

"About Bella?"

"As always."

"I am truly sorry, Son." Carlisle leaned forward with his elbows on his knees, hands clasped in front of him. "Unfortunately, never having shared that kind of love myself, I can't begin to imagine the pain and heartache you're going through. I wish there was a way..."

"No, Carlisle," I said, halting his sentence. He looked up at me. "I understand and I'm not asking to go back. Bella deserves to live her life to its fullest and if I can give her that gift by staying away, then that's what I must do. It is my only way to honor her as I would have done as her husband."

Such a hard decision to make.

"The hardest one I'll ever make in my life," I answered his unspoken words.

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I love this chapter. You've done well in establishing enough of a backstory (just enough!) to at once appease the reader's rather selfish sense of entitlement to the bare facts while piquing our further interest! I was already convinced by the prologue that E was a good man, but this chapter further cemented that conviction in my mind. Thank you for sharing!

In the Wings by SaritaDreaming Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wings

 

Summary: Bella is a disillusioned cheerleader who jumps off a cliff into the churning water below and gets more than she bargained for when she's saved by the man who's been waiting in the wings. Popularity doesn't always equal happiness. AH, Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7440 Read Count: 1458
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In the Wings: a One-Shot

Aw... Normally I'm not crazy about epilogues for one-shots (I mean, they're called one-shots!), but your epilogue was great! It showed the after-effects of the evening without actually showing them, and gave a clear moral to the story.

Surviving For Love by Rie Rated: T [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Bella's life is about to drastically change when she encounters two people at the airport. She learns she will have to play a deadly game if she wants to survive.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/James
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3827 Read Count: 388
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2011 Updated: 29 Jun 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked the twist! Didn't see it coming at all.

Summary:

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When Bella is hired last minute to photograph a wedding for the Cullen family, she's grateful for the experience and the money.  But upon her arrival, she begins to suspect there's another assignment on Esme Cullen's mind – one involving her handsome son, Edward...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 5576
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2011 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Photographer

Aw, I loved how you managed to make backseat car-sex, well... sweet? I mean, even with the hot lovin' and smooth moves, I can totally buy that Edward is a nice guy, and he wants a relationship with her. I'm a sap, but even with the awkward talk (After Edward says he wants to see her again and she just says "Oh." or when she says "I guess I just assumed you were after a hook-up", which should have been awkward but wasn't) your dialogue made it clear that it was surprisingly smooth-not awkward at all! Bravo, I give you 10 gold stars!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much!  The plan was for a nice mix of sweet and hot (with a touch of awkward) and I am glad you felt like I accomplished that. 

I had such a great time writing this.  Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it!

The Inheritance by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36558
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

This actually made me cry. Or is it making me cry right now? I'm unsure, but either way, there are teartracks on my cheecks, and it's because of your story! I'm really impressed with Edward's foolish bravery in coming over, and trying to make up for his shitty past behavior. It's got to be terrifying for him to really open up to someone, even if he does so in such a clumsy way. This chapter kind of reminds me of Mr. Darcy's effed up proposal in Pride and Prejudice; he doesn't ever really open up, so when he does, it's both shocking and not very well-formulated. Poor Edward! Poor Bella! Awesome Alice (I know, she wasn't in this chapter, but she deserves an honorable mention)!



Author's Response:

Not that I want you to cry, but...I kind I do. I cry all the time while reading fic haha. Now that you mention it, it does remind me of the proposal scene in P&P. Thank you so much for this kind review. :)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Okay!! An apology is on the way... Perhaps from both parties? Thank you for updating!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 101998
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Resolving

I prefer mexican hot chocolate. I will melt a blend of dark, milk and white chocolates over low heat, add cinnamon, vanilla extract, cayenne pepper, and whisk in milk until it is slightly foamy. Sometimes I will add extra cocoa powder! Thank you for sharing!

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Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Departing

My favourite dog is a brac de weimar, or Weimeraner!

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Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing

When I am sad panda, I watch BBC North and South, or Doctor Who!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing

Dude, Tanya's pretty much my favourite person, ever! She's completely dignified and badass, with visiting the castle to see Bella (and not hating her as her replacement, which could be well within her right), and then just kind of... staying there, without the King's permission? Totes BAMF.

The Parachutist by Camilla11 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner parachutist

 

It is 1943 and WW II is devastating Europe. Edward Masen is a 23 years old American parachutist sent by the OSS on a secret mission, meant to help the partisans fighting the Nazis in Northern Italy. There he meets a girl concealing a terrible secret. They fall passionately in love and plan to marry as soon as Italy is liberated. However, while going back to the Allied lines and trying to reach Anzio, where the Anglo American forces are struggling to break through Germans’ opposition, Edward finds his nemesis, in the form of two Volturi warriors.

 

Edward becomes a newborn vampire, fierce, desperate and bloodthirsty. Will he succumb forever to his inner monster or will he be able to recover at least some of his lost humanity? Will he see his love again and resist the urge to kill her?

 

The Parachutist got second place in the Shimmer Awards 2011 as Outstanding Story

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65856 Read Count: 9944
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2011 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rome

The ring story is very interesting to know! Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Here is a poster dated 1935 encouragiong the donation

oro alla patria

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Two poachers

This line made me crack up like nothing else!

 

 Christ, I am speaking like I was fucking Count Dracula himself! Did I really say:

‘I am the stuff of your nightmares, I am your death…’ ?



Author's Response:

True to the original character of the Saga (I am referring particularly to Midnight Sun) Edward fights despair with sarcasm and bitter humor. Glad that it made you laugh. The sentence in German was offered by my niece who is a professional interpreter.

(I am not a closet Twilhard, everybody knows I write and read fanfiction - my family is very supportive).

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Mission

Wow, what an amazing story of your mother-in-law! I appreciated seeing a gimpse into how (human) Edward's telepathy worked!



Author's Response:

Oh, I am so glad that you are reading this. I poured in it much of my family's war experiences and memories. Indeed my mother in law was an extraordinary woman!

If you have the time pleas let me know more of your thoughts as the story progresses.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Music

I'm taking a guess at Isetta's secret: She is Jewish! She did not eat the pig fat, did not participate in the Catholic prayer, and is not from this region. So, the family is harboring her for safety! I know, this story is already written and complete, but I thought I might as well review as I read, even though the answer will be posted in the next chapter! I'm enjoying this story immensely. Thank you for sharing it.



Author's Response:

Good morning (it is now morning in Italy) and congratulations! Despite the clues I sprinkled here and there, I can count the people who got that she was Jewish on the fingers of a single hand!

I am so glad that you like it. Thank you.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Hunting the Doctor

YAY for finding Carlisle! And, shallow as it is to admit, yay for Carlisle's pretty face still being pretty!



Author's Response:

I couldn't make him ugly. Carlisle is practically my favorite character after Edward. In a sense he is the hero of the Saga even more than Edward.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A poacher

I loved this chapter. Somehow, hearing a story (nearly) identical to one we already know so well, but directly from Carlisle, seems like a brand new tale. Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

And thank you for reading!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Intermezzo

Oh, I LOVED this chapter. It's wonderful to see how he impacted so many lives, and hearing their interpretations of it all was fantastic.



Author's Response:

I am happy you liked the solution I found to give an idea of Edward's activities as a Resistance supporter. Otherwise this part would have been too lengthty and possibly boring. Plus, I always like those stories where humand are in contact with vampires and have not  a clue ...

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Train

I am glad she is not his singer in this story. I agree; they have enough problems already!



Author's Response:

However, Bella is the singer of somebody else. You'll discover it if you read the sequel "Our New World"

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The truth

GAH! NO! Next chapter, coming right up!



Author's Response:

Well, OK, he is a vampire after all|

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Vampire Gigolo

I think his lack of victorian upbringing might lend itself to the "maybe vampires CAN have souls" debate from the book. Hopefully he will be convinced to change her... Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Still, he will struggle with the idea ... he wouldn't be Edward, otherwise.

Thank you for rewding so far and for the wonderful reviews.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Promises

Uh-oh. Wasn't she not supposed to show herself to anyone? I know Gaia was supposed to "help her" where that was concerned, but still... she's shown herself. I guess 100 years isn't that long of a time if she's reunited with Emmett in the end, but still, this Chronus character is slippery...



Author's Response:

Chronus is definitely slippery, and the issue of her showing herself might not be something she'd be able to get away with...

Thank you for reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100852
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Strange

Ah, comme il est pauvre! Pourquoi est-il tellement désolé?



Author's Response:

Euh, si tu es une lectrice francophone, tu peux aller lire la suite directement sur la page de Drinou sur FF...  Although maybe you're just practicing your French, which is very sweet :0)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

I'm hoping for a combination of options 1 and 2. Although I'm sure Alice is having a wonderful WTF? moment!



Author's Response:

I bet she is :0)

Summary:

Banner for Desktop Desires

 

Bella has a problem...she's just a tad bit distracted at work. Who knew facial hair could drive you crazy? Quickie One-shot that I planned to continue, but it never got any reviews. If it gets some interest, I will continue it. :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 490 Read Count: 1300
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, this does seem like the beginning of a story as opposed to a stand-alone. Just sayin'...



Author's Response:

I have no delusions that this is a full story. This was an entry in the quickie one shot contest. The word limit was 500 words or less. I always intended to expand it to a full length multi chapter fic, but as no one seemed interested in all the time it was on fanfiction.net, I decided not to. However, once I posted it over here it has drummed up some interest so I may continue it after FAGE.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

PttTbanner

 

PretendersToTheThrone2

Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86458
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

RED FLAG!!!! Anytime James has an "intensity about [him]", things are about to get bad...

Summary:

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A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50356
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, Esme is speechless! I love it, imiagining super-posh Esme, barely tolerating Jacob and Rosalie(!), but immediately being charmed by her new daughter-in-law!

Summary:

At age 13, Bella cast a spell to keep from ever falling in love. Now 5 years later, everything has changed and nothing is what it seems. It's a race against time to either fall in love or risk losing it forever.

Bind Me To You Banner


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18454 Read Count: 1346
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Aug 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved this so much! I loved the use of the proper names for the sabbats, as well as the casual presentation of their purposes and meanings. It showed that your characters knew the history of their occurences without feeling like you were handfeeding us information on magickal celebrations. Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

One would think with my name.. I would have a little clue of what I was talking about!! *winks*

Glad that you loved it...... I truely enjoyed these two.. they were unique and special to me. Maybe because I got to share so much of me in both of them!

Glad that you enjoyed it and appreciated the depth of the magical aspects.

Thanks for reading!!

Feral by opalaline Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

feral

When Bella signed up for a summer archeology program, she thought she'd be exploring fossils and sedimentary rock. Little did she know, she would find herself the primary caretaker for a man with no verbal capacity or human interaction skills-a feral man.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115615 Read Count: 42914
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Dec 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh how things have progressed with Edward since the beginning! I'm very impressed with the gradual manner by which you've demonstrated Edward's growth since the beginning; his syntax has progressed while he keeps that straightforward, simple logic he always had in his thoughts. Thank you for sharing this!

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 411998
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I enjoyed this chapter being in EPOV, as I think it adds information on how seriously he takes his role as a "daddy" and the not-exclusively sexual responsibilities included therein. About the contract, is it legally binding? Does one contact a notary for these types of contract? I understand that it brings a comfort of binding and helps to beget trust in the precarious beginnings of a relationship like this one, but is it anything more than a formality? Thank you for sharing your hard work with us!

Summary:

The fairy tales and warnings Bella Swan’s grandmother used to tell her were real.  Never, ever dance in a Fairy Circle, and never be drawn in by a handsome Fae male.  One night Bella is drawn from her home into the forest – will she join the dance?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38996 Read Count: 5305
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Nov 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just saw a performance of Midsummer for the first time last week, so this story is fortuitously timed! I like your spacing; just disjointed enough to jar, but not too new wave-y.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Props to B for keeping her cool when she saw everyone's forms for the first time! I would have given myself away in .2 seconds!

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 33296
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved this chapter being in Jacob's POV; he is one of the more well-rounded characters, and hearing his internal voice is always a bit more natural than some of the others. I guess I mean that the reader can empathize more with a likeable yet flawed human than with a 500 year old vampire/goddess. I'm very glad that Nessa is safe, and I appreciated Jacob's regret over the (necessary) deaths of the elves. Oh, and "Give us the halfling, she-elf!" was hilarious! I also enjoyed the Zombieland reference.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324291
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

I'm terribly sorry for your loss. My best wishes for you and your family during this time.

Loss of Control by ruinedbyrob Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

For 21 years Bella has lived a quiet, safe, boring and unsatisfying life. She's always in control, never allowing herself to just let go and feel. With one look from an unkempt beautiful stranger she takes a chance and changes all of that. EPOV to follow in separate story.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8014 Read Count: 721
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't beleive this is your first attempt! It was amazingly well done. I like the second-person point of view; it's a refreshing change from first and third, and it involved the reader more intensely than they do. Brava!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Bella Swan was the reincarnation of Isabella Salvatore, Damon and Stefan's beloved sister that had died tragically? She not only looks exact but due to a spell cast years ago, she has begun to remember her former life. What will the Salvatore brothers do when they find out she exists? How will this affect Bella's relationships, especially with Edward? How do Katherine, Victoria and Klaus factor in?

AU: Takes place at the end of New Moon (Twilight) and the end of Season 2 Vampire Diaries.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244615 Read Count: 75586
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Twilight of my Redemption

This is really strange, because I'm fairly certain the day you posted this I had an MRI... Of course, I don't have dreams and visions of a past life or anything, so it's not exactly the same!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Cerebral Mystery

Well, I don't know any of the medical jargon, but it certainly seems like you do! I like the medical explanation of what these memories/visions are doing to (Isa)Bella's brain. Nicely written!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Jigsaw Pieces

Oh, dip! With Meyer vamps being so much stronger than TVD vamps, I don't think a confrontation between the dynamic dastardly duo and the vicious vamp Victoria would have our boys coming out alive. So, I'll let them just avoid one another for now! That raises an interesting point, however. What would happen if a Twilight vampire's venom entered the bloodstream of a TVD vampire? Or if someone with vampire blood in their system was killed by a venomous vampire? Maybe they'd be like a new hybrid between the two. No sparkles in the sun, maybe a bit of a shimmer and sunburn? A heart that still beats blood and venom? Not as strong as Twilight vamps, but stronger than TVD vamps and able to compel people? Hm... so many ideas! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: It's Complicated

I loved Damon trailing off as he realized that the Cullens were dangerous. He's so snarky, and then... survival mode!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Letters From a Condederate Soldier

These letters were somehow both sweet and utterly believable. There was a bit of Damon snark, but you can hear the gentleness of which his human side is so capable. Thank you for sharing!