Reviews by NoelleSeven
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624772
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

I have followed this story from FF and I was so sad when it disappeared.  I'm glad to have found it again and am glad I'm caught up now.  I can't wait to see what happens with Carlisle.  Never thought I'd dislike the good doctor so much...I'm kind of scared for Edward and Bella equally...I hope Jasper and Emmett back them up and nothing bad happens to Esme!  Great story and great writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Great chapter again.  Looking forward to seeing what happens when the "guests" arrive.  Hopefully everyone will stand up for Edward and Bella.  Carlisle needs to get what's coming to him dang it...I swear I've been waiting for that since the beginning of this story...

Thank you for addressing the whole lack of a condom thing.  I look forward to seeing what becomes of that situation as well.  Well done as always.  :-)

Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Wow...I'm so glad Edward didn't revert back to Carlisle's Edward!  And I'm glad Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle.  Hopefully the boys can come up with an idea to keep Bella safe.  Can't wait to see what Esme's garden is all about.  Well done as usual

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366325
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: First Date Insanity

Okay...I tried to submit a review earlier and it didn't let me.  Anyway, the last line almost made me spit my water out all over my computer.  Loved the chapter and I hope nothing is wrong with Edward...but it could make for some interesting moments for Bella.  Alice and Rosalie were great and the "jaws of life" line was awesome.  Well done as always.  :-)

Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island

Loved the banter about Gilligan's Island between Emmett and Bella.  It was extremely well written and flowed nicely.  And leave it to Edward to think of a genius answer right?  As always, looking forward to reading and finding out more about Edward and Bella's pasts.  :-)

Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Moment of Perfection

Oh I just squealed for joy!  He told her he loves her and she didn't freak out!  Oh happy day!  :-)  Her revelations here at the end...man, I am just waiting for her to realize she really does love him too.

Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All I Needed

Rosalie's game and questions were hilarious and we gained some insight on everyone.  I am still quite curious about this "him" character.  I wonder how bad it is and how bad Edward might take it.  Great sexy times and I can't wait for the lunch with Charlie.  LOL, I was thinking Bella was going to say the "L" word this chapter, but oh well.  Well done as always.



Author's Response:

No, it will be a quite a few chapters more before Bella and the L word find each other.  And it will actually be Edward who comes clean about his past first.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The Cullens left Forks so Edward could persue his dream of being a NASCAR driver. Many years later when Bella unexpectidly shows up in his life, how will they both be affected when they are magnetically drawn to each other and she is only there for one week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9128 Read Count: 1339
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: NoelleSeven Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ladies, thank you for the break from my crazy work & studies.  I am still laughing about Edward's stick shift coming to attention and wanting to spar with Bella's cootch.  Well done, and I would be quite interested should you decide to continue.  :-)



Author's Response:

Hey there 50,

Glad you liked our little verson of Nascarward. I have to say the credit for Edwards raving stick shift is all Hope4more's creation. She did a great job I think. Thanks for reading, don't forget to vote for us on Saturday the 8th.

 

Laters baby,

MO