Absolutely, fantastic, filled with love, comedy, sex, fightin, and a happy ending. One of my all time favorites.

Thank you,

Irene

Great start! Always distrusted Edwierd. Loved Jasper.

SM may disown you, but I'll adopt you. How would you like to live in Arizona?

Very good and complete one-shot. Of course I'd like more, but I was always greedy for the good things in life. A well-written story is one of the best things.

Thank you.

I was reading this story on that lame net, posted by petersgirlbff. It only went up to chapter 6. I'm glad there's more here because I'm laughing out loud, and I can't wait to see what happens to Gayward when he returns.

I sure hope you'll finish this one, it's great!

Peter & Bella are mates, aren't they? Since no one can see ties, how will they prove it? Fucking in front of Edward?

Aqua glue - Killer body wash!

"I understand perfectly. What you seem to fail to understand is just how little I care."

The second thing I love about this story is this line. If only canon Bella had this attitude.  "He left me in the forest for dead, and now you expect me to save him? What friggin' planet are you living on?"

Thanks~

Time to torture the redhead. Whoopee! God, these fics make me bloodthirsty!

That's like a 2 yr old "catching" a bowl of spaghetti. What a mess.

So the Cullens were paying Vickie to kill Bella? Were all of them in on it? Except for Jasper, of course. Why didn't they just do it, and get it over with. She would have let them.

Finally!

I'm glad Aro agrees with me. That's not the only reason that I like your Aro. He's cool.

Thank you for the fic. Love it!

The Cullens aren't suicidal. Just selfish.

Very satisfying battle.

My favorite bodice ripper was "Shanna". I read it with chocolate every month.

Your oneshots always leave me wanting more.

Another time that I'd like I'd like to be a fly on the wall when Eddie finds out.

Thank you, I've finally caught up.

It's a splendid story and I'm so glad it's on STARS where no one can remove it again.

Now we've had the coronation and Sookie a magicked away Niall. But I think it was a mistake not to kill him. He'll only look at fairplay or kindness as weakness, and will find some way to escape and cause trouble.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Yay Bella!

It would be perfect to end it here. No angst, no tears, no drama. But then it's not a novel without an arc.

Exciting chapter! So much to learn. Stephan and Elena seem to be parallels to Bella and Edward. How to get Elena free of him and with Elijah?

Demetri seems pretty damn sure of himself and unwilling to learn. I'm guessing that it is Jasper who is coming, but no-one will get between Bella and Damon.

Very good story. Sorry that there is more and this is not a completee ending. If you write more, I hope I will enjoy reading that the Cullens and the Volturi get their just rewards.

Very erotic.

Can't wait till Eddie returns and throws a tantrum. You wouldn't want to write that for us, would you?

Very satisfying story. I don't know much about the X-Men, stone-age person here, but I can see Bella, as you've written her,  as an adult equal to Wolverine.Even the baby was well done, as opposed to Twiight's baby with the ugly name.

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In addition to "not knowing much" about X-Men, I "know nothing" about the other characters you use from Sons of Anarchy, Deadpool, Avengers, The Walking Dead Vampire Diaries/Originals, etc..

It's interesting that the only fic not marked complete is your Bella/Jasper fic. Did you lose focus? Is Jasper not interesting or quirky enough? I don't usually read unfinished fics, but I'll take a look.

These little vignettes, like teasers, show what you and Jasper are capable of.

"he looked like a cat just barked at him"

Great line!

Why couldn't he pull his arm out? he's not that prissy with life & death on the line, is he?

Oh no! Jasper is in on it with the Cullins! Exciting chapter.

Great chapter - the truth is out.

OMG! I just sent you condolences for your grandma in a review for chapter 17.

I misread your AN. I'm so sorry! That's a horrible mistake to make.

This story hits so many emotions; despair, brotherly love, lust, joy, fun, teasing, mated love. With a happy ever after. Can't beat that!

I don't know how you do it: each story is better the last.

Great story. But so painful, I couldn't read it all. I guess that what happens when you write very well. I almost threw my MacBook at the wall.Thank you .

Alice is more evil than I expected. I'm sure she will pay in the end.

This fic is fantastic,

So Jasper the Cold Vampire was turned, partially, by a more 'traditional' kind of vampire. But he can still go out during the day, and doesn't sleep. He doesn't sparkle, but he does have those cool fangs.

Alice has some nerve showing up. (but I knew she would) She is a heartless bitch.Edward or Carlisle can force behavior? By glamour? A gift?

Carlysle is crazy! Aro is crazy! Who is going to help Bella and Jasper?

Another great chapter.

Super chapter! So many things happen in your long chapters, after you've completed this fic, I'll read it again, straight through.

Very good one shot. I like the way you skipped over the inessential parts of the story, like the car ride. I'd love to read more.

Very good story. I'd like more, iy was so good.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seattle_Underground

https://www.google.com/search?q=seattle+underground+trip&client=firefox-b-1-d&channel=cus5&sxsrf=APq-WBu9x-ZBpmYmbTsedh8FZbxd4GcvMw:1647808491646&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjrlbX-xNX2AhVOZc0KHdKpD_wQ_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=1440&bih=702&dpr=2

http://www.undergroundtour.com/about/

I thought you have never used the underground tour in Seattle in a story, that you didn't know about it. Here's info. Unfortunate I never went, (always spent my extra time at Pike Peak Market). Interesting stuff.Now old bitch that I am, can't do stairs.

A great story.

The goodguys caught up with the Cullens. Edward is such a dumbell. Thanks! Good chapter.

I always thought that Carlisle was gay(and Aro), but had the hots for Edweird. Never thought about Aro being Carlisle's mate. All this hidden guilt and self-hatred. Do you think Carllisle is also a triad with Aro and Eddie? That would make Eddie uncontrolable because in his mind he'd be untouchable. Poor Esme. If the control is moved from her, maybe she'll find her mate, very close by. She should remove tiny dicks from all 3 of them.

Abrupt ending. Bela and Jasper are mates. We never guessed from their behavior. Good or bad. Good; surprise at the end. Bad: we don't see them together.

Finally end of Edward, Alice and Rosalie are toast. Aro had his mating broken with Carlisle so he can go on with his life. Bella and Jasper can "meet" each other afresh.

Very good story. Thank you.