Reviews by TwilightTucker
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awwesome, love the need to hunt his mate. love the maze.



Author's Response:

It just seemed like a sexy thing to do.

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hi, when I first started reading this story I enjoyed it so much because it is nice and not so filled with horrible angst, constant misunderstandings, etc.  I do like that sometimes, but sometimes you just need a beautiful story.  And this is.  But I do have to say, this chapter, not so on par with the rest.  It was like you were sprinting to the finish line.  You covered way too many scenes, and skipped right over way to many intimate moments with just a sort of quick, "we made love".  On several occassions.  Sometimes that works into the story to make time pass, but it would have made more sense if there was something significant that happened in the chapter, or a cliffie.  It just seemed like filler, not really fun to read.   I hope you take this as honest an not meant to be mean at all.  The story has been one of my favorites since I discovered it, it is just this chapter.  Thanks for writing it.



Author's Response:

HI TT

Thank you for the honest feedback. Sorry if you felt this was a filler chapter. It was somewhat of a race, but more like a race that you don't want to win, cause neither of them wanted the time to come, and it just got faster and faster the closer they got to their separation. I hope that makes sense.

I'll do what I can to make the next chapter up to par. Again, thanks for your honesty. Every bit counts.

=0 J

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Im loving this story.  It's been a bit slower lately, but still good.  Of course I'm loving this Edward...sweetie pie that he is. Thanks for the abuse warning. I was worried, but turns out that are some so very much worse in a few fanfic that I"ve read lately that I made it through OK.  Sure would love longer chapters...but you just keep up regular posts and I won't go mad from withdrawal. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153105
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

I almost forgot the story, so glad to see the update pop up on my favorites.  Please keep going.  this one is a little hard for me to read because I feel like Siob.  I couldn't possibly live with a man who had other women that he 'loved".

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

A very good story.  I enjoyed it and was so relieved and thrilled when after a very long dry spell (I thought it was abandoned and was very disappointed) you came back and finished it.  Thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366383
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Longest Day

Loved the chapter, just found your story and I'm up late hating the fact that I really need to stop and go to bed.  The one thing that is irritating me the most about this chapter is that Bella should have called Edward on 'forgetting" her on the porch.  I know in your note you explained his reaction, but either she should have stayed out there, or interrupted an said excuse me can I come in.  All of them, Edward, Karen, and her sister should have had to acknowlage what asses they were (intentional or not it was rude).  And then it would have been fine when they apologized and included her in the conversation.  I'm pissed that he criticized Bella for not speaking and yet never acknowledged that he never even introduced her or knew if she was there.  I can't get over that infractions even more than being pissed at the shittiness of Mary and Jason.



Author's Response:

Welcome aboard!! So glad you found WTB. I've been on both sides of the porch issue so I know where both E and B are coming from. Especially E since it never occured to him B would be intimidated in the least. He's never seen that side of her before. And as stupid and manly of him as it was, when she got mad, he got mad. But that's the way things sometimes go when the relationship is new and the two are learning about each other. The good thing is that they didn't let it fester between them for long.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

OMG, you have GOT to tell me that EMMET is going to BURN in HELL for this. Really.  I don't care that he says he did it because he LOVES Edward. that is a crock of sh%##. period.  Please make sure Edward finds out exactly what and when Emmet said everything to Bella.  Both the what and when are important, not a watered down version. And it is unforgivable...and now Emmet is acting like he loves Edward and talking like ....if you do get back with Bella.....and then .....she left you man, she walked out on you.  Want a decietful, horrible son of a bi$%h.  Edward has to find out everything and Emmet needs to get it. If Edward were every to forgive it would need to be several years down the road, and even then, forgive but never trust him again.  I think Emmet doesn't want Edward happy, those reasons he threw at Bella that she caused all this were the biggest crap I've every even dreamed of.  He was mean and hateful not just to Bella but to Edward too.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: My Cross to Bear

Sorry, too much , waaaay too long,  I did't even read this chapter....just checked a line in middle and at end, and saw the unbelievable crap still going on.  Good writing style, the story really captured me right up front but I'm off now.  Thanks for the ride, I'm gonna remember the first chapter.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

Well I still have trouble understanding Bella' reaction to the point I'm just rolling my eyes at her inner dialogue.  He didn't lie about being with another woman. He didn't lie about doing something mean to her.  He didn't tell here about is illness because he didn't want her to worry and was afraid she'd leave him.  Her insessant rambling that expands it to not being able to trust anything he ever has or ever will say just seems incredible way way way blown out of proportion for anyone.  That is just my opinion. 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995706
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Gosh was I thrilled with the early posting.  I love this story. I liked this first introduction Bella has to the media and it is going to be interesting.  You've definitely got me all worried about Jacob now...on top of James of course. Keep it up, love it love it.  HATE waiting between posts, it is like withdrawal!



Author's Response:

glad you liked it - sorry for the wait!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Really fantastic.  Sometimes when the story gets into what is seen as a tangent, it can be boring and make me want to skim or skip over.  However, this wasn't the case in this chapter.  The writing and story were line intense and interesting and helped in understanding Bella while you kept Edward/Bella in the midst of all the goings on. That helped make it bearable to get throught that whole chapter and still feel we got our E/B fix.  Thanks os much for this story, it is on the top of my list of best Fan Fics...



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I'm still pissed at Edward and now pissed at Bella for "forgiving" his asshole actions.

Bella would not have let Alice leave without telling Edward, she was treating her friend with a smigin of common respect to allow her to tell Jasper first.

I'm certainly pissed with Jasper for 'beating' Alice because of his own baby tantrum of not seeng what he should have seen over a period of years. He's an asshole too.

It bugs the shit out of me that those two guys get to act any way they want with no repercussions, they dole out all this baby assed punishment and on top of that they were the cruelest of cruel and they are forgiven....no consequences whatsoever.  As much as Bell may love him, sometimes you have to consider if you can deal with the person's faults forever.  And this would take a LOT for me to get over especially while both Edward and Jasper still think they owe them somekind of punishment.  REally pissed off, can you tell?

REally terrific writing!



Author's Response:

I really hope this makes you feel better...

 

PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?”  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”

Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

“Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can’t reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!”  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  “Jazzy, you are scaring me…” 

This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…”  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

“Come to me…”  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.

“No.  You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!”  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!”  She said with determination.

“Gladly, Darlin’.”

“Okay, I’m going first.  I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?”

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

“I promise.”

Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise.  I won’t freak out on you again.”

Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

“Jazz…”

“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck!  It’s too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’.  I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.”  Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.

“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets.”

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  “Can I get my clothes back?”

Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”

Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”

Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”

Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

“Alice?”

“Yeah?”

“Supervised visits only…”  Jasper kissed her forehead.

“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale….

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Yes, I did really enjoy this chapter.  This is such a very well written and thought through story.  I've loved it.  One of my top 5 favorites.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

This continues to be one of the very best freakin fan fics yet.



Author's Response:

Awww - now you go me blushing! Thanks Hon!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I think you handled that "outside interference or distraction" well.  You are right, that is real life.  I've always been of the opinion that althought their might be soul mates, most of us don't meet ours necessarily. But when you agree to marriage, you are making a choice and a promise  A commitment to stop looking, if you will.  It doesn't mean that there won't be others you find attractive or that you could be happy with.  But you agreed to spend you life with that person and not look around anymore.  That requires you try hard to avoid temptation when you have the ability to avoid it....and to resist it when it is presented.  We are not perfect and niether are our partners...so we can screw up and so can they. There are always consequences, some are mild and some devastating, but again, that is life.  You try to learn and avoid making the same mistakes.  This is one of the cream of the crop stories out there in the world of Fan Fiction. Thanks for all your effort and especially for you quite regular updates. It helps readers "stay in the game" when the time between chapters is reasonable....some people go months and even a year between updates....I know their life comes first, I'm not trying to be critical of them but it makes me so greatful for what you've accomplshed with updates.  In those other stories I have sometimes forgotten the whole plot and have to re-read several chapters to get back up to speed. It really makes them much less enjoyable.  Hope your real life is treating you well. Thanks so much for this particular story...I'm dreading it's end as it is a sweet escape now and then.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your insightful comments and your review.  so, I guess that you would like a sequel, right??  The next generation of doms and subs....

:)

Michele

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

Well,       I have to be honest here.  I hated this. I am depressed and unhappy.  I was so happy with where you left the last one.  Maybe this is because 15 years went by so quick, one chapter, and the horribleness happened.  It doesn't feel happy....I know that is life, but I loved the story so much and now I'm left ......yucky



Author's Response:

I knew not everyone would like it but I tried to stay true to the characters.  I feel it is more of a beginning than an ending - thanks for reading - Beth

Memories of Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Bella Swan wants nothing more than to prepare for her future.

When Edward Cullen moves to town he quickly realizes that he wants nothing more than Bella Swan.

Will her painful past and his recent mistakes keep Bella from seeing the man Edward truly is?  Can she let Edward in?  Can the two form that lasting bond that can never be broken?  Or will the heartaches and tragedies tear them apart for good?

Rated NC-17 for some strong language and eventual mature content.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 199361 Read Count: 9583
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Hoping For A Miracle

It is so hard to read these chapters anymore. I have never experienced  blind anger but the Bella in this story actually makes me so upset my stomach hurts.  And it is just a story   Clearly excellent writing on your part evoking all this strong emotion.   I feel weary of her.  I don't understand why she suddenly questioned that she might be wrong about Edward now. Just finding out he wrote the letters doesn't seem like it would be able to make her listen when she has refused to do anything but think he is a h00r and no one could convince her otherwise.  I don't see why she just didn't keep thinking he  was just trying to get in her pants. It might have made sense for anyone else but her since she has been so very hateful about the facts she thinks she knows.  Just because he wrote love notes all those girls she knew be was with suddenly might not be true?  I clearly don't trust her as far as I could throw her. I would think Edward would be wary of someone who could be so hateful to anyone especially without cause.   Now I'm rambling.  I'm tellin you.  Your story just gets my feathers all ruffled! 



Author's Response:

I really hope you give Bella a chance here. She's still a kid who let her emotions get in the way of common sense. Should she have let Edward explain sooner...yes. Should she have listened to her friends...yes. Should she have listened to Jake...hell no. But they were mistakes that she wants the chance to fix. Bella may not have liked who she thought he was, but she was really falling for the boy who wrote the letters. I'm not going to say one conversation with them is all it's going to take and they'll be magically in love, life doesn't work that way. It's going to take a lot of work on both their parts to be able to get past a year's worth of lies, anger and pain but they'll work on it together. Thanks for the review. Believe it or not, I love seeing your reviews. The level emotion you show for this story truly puts a smile on my face. Much love - D

Here's a quick peek at the next chapter that will be posted later today:

Edward's voice came through the door again and I stopped, hoping to hear what they were saying.

"Let me go!" he yelled at Emmett.

"No! You don't need that girl, Ed. Just let her go."

Hearing Emmett say that, I tried the doorknob this time, desperate to get into that room and make him see how sorry I was for hurting Edward all those times in the past. It was locked, of course, so I started beating the door and yelling for both of them this time.

They were yelling at each other and I heard Rose's name thrown around a couple of times. She had nothing to do with this, why would they even be arguing about her.

"...are you gonna let that damn girl..." Emmett yelled again.

His words were so hurtful and I tried as hard as I could to ignore them. I knew he hated me right now and how could I blame him. I hated myself for everything I'd done to Edward. But I was here to make things right. I was here to tell him that I was here for him.

"Fine! Bella can go to hell!"

Edward's words stunned me. All the air left my lungs and I fell against the door when my legs gave out.  

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left Unsaid

No Edward wasn't harsh at all. I'm shocked beyond belief the teachers didn't shut Bella the f@ck up as she was talking right through the other team's 5 minutes. She is a weak selfish prick of a girl and in NO way deserves Edward. No Rose was not at all too harsh either. I can't stand a person as hateful and  arrow as Bella. She's seems like a stupid uneducated hillbilly.  She believes whatever Jake tells her.  And does that after he has proven himself untrustworthy over and over again.  Her friends should leave her on the curb. My gosh what if jake tells a lie about them    Shell just believe it. She makes me sick.  This should end with her losing her friends and Edward. She should end up just being jake's mistress while he marrys another.  Wow.  Talk about invoking emotion.  



Author's Response:

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wonderful story, thanks for writing.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254866
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

The one thing I walk away from this chapter actually bothered by is the caning scene.  I'm bothered that knowing her background he would force her to sit through a Punishment caning in particular.  i am very angry with Edward for at least not being attuned to the jumps with each hit long before she turned to him.  He should not have taken her to that punishment caning in the first place if he just had to be selfish enough to push her to see a caning at least it should not have been punishment.  Lastly, he comes off as an  asshole to me that he didn't at least immediately after the first or first two that she responded to, take her away from there.  My respect for him just dropped several notches.



Author's Response:

hmm..can I ask if you looked at Bella's limits on my extra's ?? Have a look and then maybe you will see why Edward didn't see a problem with taking her to see it. another thing, the strikes of the cane come fairly fast, especially during warm up (which is what was happening) so it might have been 30 seconds before she turned to look at him....He's only human and he thought he was doing the right thing with the information he had...thanks for reading ..lml

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I'm more interested in 'straightening Edward out" on his comment on it being just semantics.  Really, does he expect her to take it?  SHe tried to do that, she just took it and tried to leave and the witch grabbed her.  I will have no respect whatsoever for him if he in any way chastises her for her creative way of getting out while obeying him.  Jess physically restrained her.  I'm pissed at Edward right now for how he handled that in the office period.  He pisses me off more than anything.



Author's Response:

EPOV is coming... don't be mad at him until you hear his side ....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

You know I don't think Leah hsa even a shread of an iota of a point.  IF she had answered Bella's calls and tried to schedule a visit with her at all and Bella kept putting her off, I could maybe say OK, her point is that she missed her sister. But all I see was that she's the one that refused to get with Bella.....who cares if Bella has "things" to do on Wed night or the week ends....all of us have stuff ...even scheduled stuff that we do.  Leah is jealous and a bitch and that is all I see. 

Paul is a b#st#rd and him, I could hate.  Does he have some unfulfilled crush on Bella or what.  He's mean and spiteful from what I can see.



Author's Response:

lol.. on Paul...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

The proposal was darling, how perfect for this particular couple. 

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Early Morning Chat

Thank you so much for this late nite/early morn chat.  It helped me a lot.  I did not think rape but did struggle with his method for the " lesson".  I worry not that Isabella is afraid to safe word but that she either sees it as failure or forgets she can because she thinks she needs to go through it since Master knows best.  It helps to hear Edward say he loves her and has faith in herm.  Understanding why ther "has" to be so much physical pain inflicted and mnot caring a flying fuck how it makes her feel is always going to be hard for me to swallow.  

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland

I think it is a great and interesting twist. I can see how Alice would go there. It bugs me that Jasper is going to talk to Edward but I hope Edward gives him the rest of the story.   I'm one of those people that thinks you don't step into the middle of other people's relationships.  Not just Alice staying out of Edward and Bella's but Jasper staying out of Alice and Edwards.   From what I've seen the person stepping ing screws up their own relationship with those people.  

Embellishment by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

 

Bella and Alice are on an extended visit to Australia. A combination of homesickness and patriotism see them meeting up with some U.S. Military forces personnel on shore leave. An overheard conversation, a little deception, can all be forgiven?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8905 Read Count: 497
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2010 Updated: 19 Sep 2010
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Embellishment

I like it. very sensual writing. Really good short one shot.



Author's Response:

Than you. It was fun to write!! Luv BBxx

Summary:

This is the sequel to my story Intimate Ties

 

Dom Edward finally has his submissive, Bella, right where he wants her. But when Rose decides she wants to enter their world, they start to feel their ties come undone. Can their relationship survive Rose's attempt to sabotage? OOC/AH LEMONS, BDSM


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11580 Read Count: 8773
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It's been a while....is RL beating you down?  I hope not. I also hope to see an update soon.  Intimate Ties was fantastic, really good.  I frankly wasn't sure about how you could pull off a sequel....but it is good so far.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Such emotional writing and so descriptive, I feel like I'm there with them.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389576
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

I'm LOVIN your story, but strongly disliked this chapter...I undersstand it is nice backstory, but I was primed to follow Edward and Bella progressing.  I woudl hve been fine with some backstory, but not an entire chapter.  Love our writing, and the story, but with all due respect, I felt cheated after finishing this chapter. 



Author's Response:

Whoa... you really let me have it!  Lol! I told you I was hiding under the bed, now you see why.  Sorry you didn´t like it, but I didn´t want to let the New Year ring in without giving you one last chapter of 2010!  Lol!  I haven´t had alot of time to write, and I wanted to be able to do the phone conversation justice.  Plus I just think it will be better from Sir´s POV.  I promise you that it´s the next chapter and from here on out it´ll be nothing but floggin and snoggin!  Lol!  Also, I´m going to do my best to get it up in the next couple of days! 

Thanks so much for sticking with me, reading and taking the time to review!  Please make sure to check out the blog!  www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Happy New Year!

Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Are you serious, you would be that cruel?  You would leave us all hanging right here?  No,  I can't believe anyone would have that much cruelty.  Just like Bella saying she wouldn't survive if Edward left her, I won't survive if you leave us here.  I found your story fairly recently...I think maybe you were about 3 chapters back, maybe 4 when I found you.  This story is so well written, and suspensful and so full of lust and love.  I love this Edward and Bella. My gosh there might be mass suicide all across the country, no, across the globe.  Don't leave us here. Please.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Awesome, that was unexpected, and so suspense filled.



Author's Response:

Thank u so much....we really hoped u would like it....next chapter is crazy Esme....eek she a crazy beyotch

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

Even though Mike gave her the tape, I'm still worried about copies and worried that he can be bought. With a "lot" of money even normally decent people can cave.  What if a different guy is on duty in Mike's place?  And give is away or gave it away already.  What if it is from another visit they forgot about and still shows on tape....and where the hll is Eric.   Weren't Eric and Angela together at the Swing party?  I thought Angela liked him.  Why don't they get together and just drop it, leave our love birds alone. I think they will or have gotten together but will be bitter and try to do E/B harm just for the spite of it.



Author's Response:

Well I guess there could be other people working at the desk....great observation...And yah where the HELL is Eric Ari??? ari??? ohh shit......thats where is he...the bugger...xoxo heheh love ur review....xoxo hope u like the rest

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

Wow.  Don't leave us hanging too long please.



Author's Response:

We have the next chapter done. And we are working on the one after that. So it shouldn't be to long.

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x00x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale

Bella was an idiot, no? 



Author's Response:

i think so myself but she had her reasonings

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Thank you for staying up, for so long I was wretched waiting for updates after I found this story and was completely hooked.  Noe I've had three that were in a row.   So very awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much =) We appreciate it and we are happy that you're enjoying thsi story =)

Hope that you'll continue to enjoy it, lots of twists coming up.

 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Awesome story!  Anxious for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Glad you like!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

hE'S going to explode one of these days with all the pompusness and anger. there will be tiny bits of him on every surface for miles.



Author's Response:

That was the word I was looking for last night!!!!!!!!!!!!! pompus *laughs oh so fucking hard* I could not figure out what it was for shit!!!!!!!!!! I was like " I know this word...what the hell is it?" thanks yoU!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

This really "heating" up.  The bits and pieces of the mystery are so tantelizing.   Keep it coming



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

We’ll have more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So much excitement, written so well. I was rivited to my seat...couldn't put it down. Then it ended!  Dadgummmit



Author's Response:

LOL well thank you.  I'm evil and horrible for ending it there - but I promise I won't keep you waiting as long :)

Summary:

 

 

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"I think you liked me touching you in front of your ex, didn't you?" E & B are alone for New Year's ... or not. Written for the Squeeze My Lemon, Lemon writing exercise.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2754 Read Count: 2290
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 24 Dec 2010
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OOOOOOO drama, please don't make me wait too long for the update.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I didn't expect the twist, but I like it.  I wasn't sure where else this could go, but I see now.

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Whew!  I'm so glad you are back!  I feel like I've been holding my breath a little. I've missed reading updates. I love all your stories!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Birthday Chapter

Where IS the clerk anyway?  I love your stories.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.

Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Deals

THis is so very funny while still having real feelings and intense ones at that.  So cool.  Love it so much

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40657
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Ribbon

Still one of the most exciting reads...just wishing as always for more frequent updates.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Fate

Finally some kinda hope. I was about as stringed out as I was gonna take anyway.  

Worthy of You by mimozka Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 72]
Summary:


After Bella's 18th birthday accident the entire Cullen family leaves Forks leaving behind a devastated Bella.

Four months later, when Bella seems to start healing from her heartbreak she is faced with one Edward Cullen, only he is not the same Edward she has known before.

As he reveals the reasons of his lies and actions Bella has to make a decision that will change her life forever...


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New Moon Alternate Universe - canon couples (perhaps a little OOC later on). Rated 'T' but if everything goes according to plan the rating will change in the future *hint hint*

I know the NM AU is a very popular theme, but give it a try it's not your usual NM AU story! And yes, I did just shamelessly promote myself... An author's got to do what an author's got to do.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31557 Read Count: 4532
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 May 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

I like it and it is definitely worth a full story.



Author's Response:

Thanks TwilightTucker, the next chapter should be up by tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

Yes, you were right about it feeling repetative.  I like the story so far, but it was hard to read each word in this chapter, so tempting to skip over paragraphs.  I'm still hopijng for the next chapter soon.



Author's Response:

I know what you mean. That's one of the reasons it took me so long to update... It bored me to write the same stuff all over again... Luckily, the story will pick up from here. What do you think about the rating though?

Summary: Past Featured Story

One day in gym class, Forks High learns that Bella Swan can kick. The football team needs a kicker.

The result of that: Bella makes the football team.

The problem: None of the guys want a girl on their team.

 

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(Banner maker: unknown) 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74692 Read Count: 22155
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2014
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Not Giving Up

You know, I'm having trouble with Bella's thought process about Edward.  I understand her being angry with him....but he came and didn't help and immediately tried to get her loose. She is the one that sent him away.  I think he did the very best thing.  He couldn't stop 30 guys, but he could immediately get her out of it....the fact she was there so long was her own fault.  Edward still was the one that got her out by calling Emmet and Jasper even though she sent him away.  I do think Mike should get some serious repercussions.  It wasn't clear to me whether Edward ever found out about the dog collar yet.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure

OMG, A top rate lemon. I mean really soooooooo good.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!!!

I appreciate the compliment more than I can say!

Thank you for reviewing!

xoxo

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

So glad he resurected their "game", it was perfect!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line

I can't believe this is by the seat of your pants.  It is very good reading. The emotion is so easy to feel through your words, and the scenes are clear as a bell.  I feel like I'm there.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Prowling

Mmmmmmmm. I'm not back down to earth yet.  At first I thought Edward using sex right then might be a mistake but it turned out perfect.  

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2671980
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Wow, dadgum, shit.  Man, this was riviting. I am shaking.  Awesome action.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

Such an emotional roller coaster, these two.  Lovin the story...keep going please.  I'm following on TWCS....I don't know about that FanFic...way to many of the very best stories are consantly taken off...I'd ignore them all together they are so much trouble, but there are still some really good stories there.

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184410
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Taken

I was expecting Rene's involvement.  I'm not sure who the driver was....hmmmmmm, I don't recall leah being short.....or Emily.....but whoever it is why would they be in the truck.  I'm gonna have to go back and read again about Billy's "Tanya".  I'm missing some understanding of his comment "no my Tanya, Rene".  Surely he would have known Rene...I can't imagine her being able to tell him her name is Tanya....but that is where I guess I have to go re read.  I read several fan fics because it takes so long between chapters...so sometimes I forget details during the wait or just get them mixed up between stories.  So, lots of suspense.  Really getting exciting.  I hope Bella is OK.  What would Rene get from Bella...surely she cannot get to the money if Bella is dead....unless she gets' Bella to take it out now and give it to her then she gets rid of Bella.  She's already killeed one and tried to kill Billy so I think she would kill Bella after she gets her money.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Passionate Dance

No need for nerves it was beyond fantastic

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The unknown pov (outtake)

Scary.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review :-)

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Wow

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

That was so frought with emotions.  I feel stretched so thin, it was so intense.  And that last thing he said....hmmm.  I'm so pissed at them both really.

Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 143999
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: They Tried To Make Me Go To Rehab

You are doing a fine job.  The story is good.  Of course I don't have any prsonal experience to know if the details are good, but it seems reasonable and believable. Well written. thanks.

Slither by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

    

Banner by the wonderful Mehek18. Check her other amazing banners on Mehek18.tumblr.com

OOC. AH. An outcast who had everything, but eventually lost the one thing that was truly important to him. She was back and her presence would turn his world upside down again. 'He needed her but she left him.' Mature content. E/B    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46224 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 01 Mar 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Paint me good

Wow, everything changed.  I had developed some thoughts of what Edward was like, who he was, but this chapter was way out there, a little wierd with Aro's rambling and a totally different view of Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

I meant that I have read this exact chapter several times as it posted new.  I thought it was some glitch.  You know sometimes on fanfiction dot net when a story chapter first posts you can get an alert but the new chapter won't show up. But you go back a little later and it is there.  But it seemed this was the third time I'd read this particular chapter.  I just now found I have your story also favorites on fanfiction dot net.  I try to not favorite the same story on more than one site but it seemed this one slipped through. Would you also have posted it to twilighted dot com?  If so that might be why I feel I've rec'd the same update multiple times. It has felt that way on the last two chapters as a matter of fact.  I hadn't noticed before. I kept thinking it was a glitch as I said. Then I thought maybe you had made some subtle changes or corrections and were re posting.  Sorry




Author's Response:

Hi TT

Well, the mystery is solved and I must say I feel a whole lot better for it. I've been in a funk for the past few hours, beating myself up, trying to decide why my last three chapters would seem so repetitive. Turns out I do post on all three sites: FFN first, then Twilighted and finally here at TWCS. I spread it out over a few days so my inbox isn't a complete nightmare. So, if you're reading updates from all three sites, of course that would be repetitive. ;)

Now I'm going to go have a glass of wine and a smoke to celebrate that I can move on. lol

-bannerday

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Review Reply from Starlighted.net

Why do you keep reposting the same chapter over and over. It is frustrating to be very mild. This is I think the third time this story shows up as a new update and it is the very same chapter every time



Author's Response:

I don't really understand your comment. This latest chapter was Bella's response to what Edward had written to her., which is actually the premise of the whole story. She is addressing his questions and giving him some hope to pursue her, although she isn't aware of that. I'm not sure how else I could have accomplished her reply. A big part of this story is the communication between them.

Oh well. Sorry you are so disappointed. 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan

No he won't calm down. I'm afraid this will lead to more, longer or worse misunderstandIngs

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56323
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Lost in Love

Whew, I got worried something really bad was going to happen.  I feel so relieved that they talked and Russian Barbie didn't get him in a compromising position.



Author's Response:

Awww. Sorry to scare you. :)  

Thanks so much for reading. 

Sandra

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Apologising

Yes I am peeved with Edward, but Charles perhaps should die. threatening a child and worrying only about how his daughter needs to stay queen to bring him benefit...rather than worrying about his daughter. I really don't like him.



Author's Response:

Lord Charles' fate will be decided in Chapter 11. Hopefully you'll enjoy/like what I have planned *evil smiles* Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Crying

Whew, Edward is maybe settling down...his harsh, quick handling of Bella is toning down.  It is becoming and "awwwwwwwe" experience.



Author's Response:

I'm afraid it won't be like this for long. King Edward still has a long way to go yet. Thank you for reviewing and I apologise for how long it has taken me to reply to your review.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dying

I know back then all that mattered was the heir, a boy.  But I'm not from those times so I can complain.  I can't believe he took her baby away.  I half expected him to kill the baby...then to kill Bella when she stayed catatonic.  But he keeps yelling at her parents...can't figure that one out when he just seem interested in his boy baby.  When is someone going to knock the Stanley's out..they are really pissing me off in this story.  Geez. 

so, really good writting, I'm enjoying all the drama.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532801
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced

This story is one of the most exciting to read.  I love the drama.  The times Edward has almost gone overboard..like that time poor Bella was praying for her life, well it was hard to read, but so well written and so emotional.  I've enjoyed the entire story from the begining.  love just reading along in their life....so much more drama than I'm familiar with, but fun to read.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

Wow Carlilse found true love?  I normally am not ever that interested in the lives of the characters other than Edward and Bella much. However, this little slice of Carlilse and Alex kept my undivided attention! Bravo!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company

WTF  that was a ride and a half.  Holidays, Huh!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up

Wow, this is so heart wrenching and such a roller coaster.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

Just wow.  I hope Edward doesn't go all paranoid and end up killing everyone off and suspecting Bella and end up dead himself and everyone morns his lose of sanity.  That would be such a let down to this awesome story line.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

I am absolutely still reading.  It is a very entertaining story. 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

Oh no.  I'm gonna die waiting for this update. You left me right in the middle of all that drama???  I think Bella's been somewhat selfish too.  They are both running on empty.   They haven't really let go their emtions about Sonny being shot especially Edward and he does need comfort.  He may always feel Bella cant fully forgive him just because he can't forgive himself. That is hard to work through. 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Wow. This is awesome! I feel like I am just part of the family just living life with them. It's like a soap opera you know how you get hooked and you know everybody's life wow that's all I can say. It's getting so emotionally outrageous right now I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

I love this story. 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Thank you for this.  I'm thrilled to have been able to see this happen. I still can't believe she says if he did or didn't...after all this time she still may not belive him.  That is pretty crappy if it only takes a girl saying something and she belives it cart blanche....that was the only really nagging part.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Woah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'mmmmmmmmm

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

This is the best written story. So life like dealing with every day stuff And some crazy out there stuff thrown in. I have grown to love this family like I've lived with them because of your writing.  

Wow. sonny really comes across all grown up and very wise with the advice he gives K.    I still kinda wish he could have a happily after. He seemed to truly love Katie

Master to you by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 188]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After Isabella's transformation into a vampire, her life changed as well. Edward changed and her whole world changed. Sweet Edward is no more and Bella has a potty mouth. Sit back and enjoy the ride between Bella and Edward. This is a BDSM story, if that offends you, don't read it. You have been warned, there are also a lot of lemons. E & B will have a HEA.

 

new banna with bella

wonderful banners both are made by:  soapymayhem

 

Beta'd by RAH07890

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43263 Read Count: 84201
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 May 2013
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Where's Jake, Edward"

Hi, the story is good...the wording seems to be rushing, skipping over details so that the emotion and the feeling of being right there with your characters cannot quite develop.  I like the story and will keep reading, but it would be great if you spend some words describing the scene and the feelings the characters were having.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much , this is what I need . that way I can keep this going strong

I am new at this first story ever  I will take all the advice I can get

so thank you again  and I will work on that !!

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time

I love this story with everything in me.  Just read through to here. I'm so glad I didnt find it before though.  I would have died a thousand deaths having to wait in between some of those horribly angst ridden chapters.  I'm glad I got all the way to where Edward has risen to the battle. 

Summary:

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Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Grand

Always thrilled to see this on pop up although I don't watch for it anymore.  But I'm thrilled every time

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 : Give And Take

I have to say this story is on the top, I'd say top 5 best of all time on my list.  There are a few, very few stories that are very well written, to the point of truely making you feel you have escaped to another very real world.  The likes of which include Master of the Universe and The University of Edward Masen....in my book.  Clear and Bright is spell binding, intriguing, exciting, erotic and.....and.....I can't even come up with the words to do it justice.  I ache between chapters, dying for what comes next.  While I read I keep glancing at the little bar to the right of the screen that tells me how near the end I am.  Sometimes I slow down just to make the chapter last longer.  I don't want to leave my alternate universe too quickly.  Really, I'm so hooked.  This is just so very well written.  Please don't ever abandon it before you finish it.



Author's Response:

I want you to know that your words brought me to tears. I was overwhelmed, to say the least. This story is my heart and soul, and to know that it has touched someone in such a way... I don't have words to express how special that is to me. I am honored. Truly. Claire and Jaimin mean so much to me... it's probably not normal... definitely not... but I am owned by them completely. I'll never abandon them, I promise you. It's not even a possibility. I'll be with them until they order me away. Well... I suppose that he would be the one to issue such an order, but I hope that doesn't happen any time soon. Or ever...

Thank you so much for your beautiful words.  ~CM

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Real

I've missed them. Feel like I "came home" but in the middle of a storm. As usual. 

Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

 

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Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Puzzle Pieces

So heart breaking and suspenseful as I neeeeed Edward to remember what Tanya and James did. 

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: A déjà vu

Glad she finally got the balls to walk away from the prick. 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Trapped

I want to kill Edward yes.  But I'm starting to want to kill Bella. Really it is getting a bit too much now.   I want this man stuff. I can't control myself around him stuff. I mean if his "crimes" had been subtle or minor,OK, but he has said demeaning things about her to others in front of hers, he treats her like a whore, and constantly kisses, humps' and pretty much **ck's other women in front of her often even right after he screws her.   Bella's mealy mouthed inner whining about how she can't resist him is wearing on me.   She needs to grow up and have a tiny bit of self respect.  Good writing..... Gets me all riled up.  



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Infernal rise

Bella needs to meet a sweet guy who come and takes her to lunch and picks her up.  With some kissy face of her own



Author's Response:

Yeah, that would teach him a lesson :0)

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Delectable initiation

Soon soon soon please

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed star
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

Omg! Not number 4.   AbsOlutely anything but number 4!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Fatal Negotiations

Thanks. This is an incredible story.   I wish hard for the author to be OK and get in touch with you and finish this great story. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I'm really worried about the author. It's like she vanished from the surface of the earth...

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Hangover

Wow. Every single chapter is always fabulously emotional



Author's Response:

It's emotional, but I translated a one shot back in October, that is way more emotional than this story...

Summary:

Bella has moved back to Forks following a traumatic year. She is placed into temporary foster care with the Cullen's and meets Edward who is also battling his own demons. Life isn't a fairy tale; or maybe it is! Rated M for language AH E&B

This story is on hiatus. I'm sorry to any readers who are waiting for a new chapter, but I really want to concentrate on my other story 'Wrecked with Bella'. I may come back to OUaSN, but I don't want to make any promises I might not keep.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 135285 Read Count: 5141
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2011 Updated: 29 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Finding Bella (Edward's POV)

i do like Edwards list, sweet guy.



Author's Response:

Hi TwilightTucker

Yes, he is a sweet guy; also a little neurotic but that's what I love about him.

Look out for chapter 13 which I hope will be posted on Sunday, Australian time.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Regards

JKazzie

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Don't you think Bella was too fast in accepting Edward back in her life? After all he made the decision to leave her. He has to now face the consequences of that decision.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73782 Read Count: 19840
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Surprise

I'm anxious to understand what is really going on in Bella's mind.



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know that. I'll add her point of view also in the coming chapters for you. Thanks for the review. Hope to hear from you again.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Hermione never thought that things would turn out the way they did. But she also never expected to run into Draco malfoy on the night of a full moon either. A dark retelling of Little Red Riding Hood...

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Drama, Horror, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6322 Read Count: 1108
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2011 Updated: 20 Oct 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, how exciting, dramatic, and interesting.  I'm hooked.. waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Summary:

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Bella has a problem...she's just a tad bit distracted at work. Who knew facial hair could drive you crazy? Quickie One-shot that I planned to continue, but it never got any reviews. If it gets some interest, I will continue it. :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 490 Read Count: 1300
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, I like it please continue. 
But write because you enjoy it and want to write the story. 
Not everyone reviews but that doesn't mean your story is bad or not worth writing.  You have a great idea started.  I think it starting of very hot and bothered.



Author's Response:

I write because the voices in my head tell me too. Or was it the words on facebook...I can't remember. In truth, I am NOT a writer. I read, I review, I hoard porn, and I have a twisted sense of humor.  I know people don't always review and I'm cool with that. This story has actually been posted for a while on ff. It has zero reviews over there. That led me to believe no one liked it. In truth, the only reason I even posted it over here was because I had took the time to make the banner way back when so I figured I'd use it :P Out of all the quickies I wrote, this was my favorite and the one I wanted to turn into a multi chappy fic.