Reviews by anakinsmom
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90988
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

She gets a house and he gets a Porsche. Wow! That was some Christmas!

It was so sweet of Edward to fly everyone in for the holiday. Way to make points big guy!

i love how thoughtful and sweet they are with each other. this will continue..right???????

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

If there are pictures of them on the boat are there pictures of them on the island too? Maybe a few with little or no clothing? Bound to be something that will mess with the happy couple.

Great chapter! Thanks.



Author's Response:

nope, none from the island, there is always bound to be something to mess with the happy couple

thanks!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm having seperation anxiety enough for both of them. I just have an awful feeling about anything with the name Volturi attached! Sue hope i'm worrying for nothing!

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Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Sex on Skype...isn't technology wonderful!!!! How long before Edward makes a quick trip to New orleans?

Great inside peeks at the movie industry. I hope you keep up the detail on this side of the story as well as the wonderful lemons!

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Really love these guys! Their careers keep them apart so much but they sure make up for it when they are together! Nice lemons!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks!

i love these two as well

i love having something sweet when there is so much angst in ficland

hmm, lemons

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Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh my, the New Year is upon us and yet another of my favorites is coming to an end!

I will happily read anything you chose to write about these two. The wedding, the Oscar win, the children, whatever!

Thank you for sharing your time and talents with all of us!



Author's Response:

i have plans for some good things

glad you have enjoyed and it was a pleasure to share what goes on in my crazy mind!

thanks for reading and supporting

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64064
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP

Nicely done! Now on to Aro to make him eat s--- ! Love it love it love it!!!

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Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

Another great chapter!

Our shy, timid, little wallflower has certainly come out of her shell! Good for her and what she is trying to do to save the company. Aro and Caius got their just desserts but will they end up harming Bella or the baby? Hopefully Edward will return home in time.

I seem to remember reading that there were no set lenghts of time that a serviceman would be deployed during WW II. If they were needed they had to stay and tours were often extended into years instead of months. Ouch!

Come home soon Edward !

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

Every James I've ever known has been a real jerk, creep, shady character, etc. Not a nice one in the bunch! There must be one out there that has some redeaming qualities, somewhere.

So glad that Bella has protection now for herself and the baby. Edward is going to be sooooooooooo pissed when he finds about the Volturi traitors and their hired goon.

I loved her dream and I'm sure we will find out that it wasn't just a dream. These two have a real connection and I'm wondering if he dreamt about her confrontation with James.

Thanks for another great chapter !

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Perfect Beginning

Let's hope her labor is short and Edwards time away is coming to an end. All the boys need to come safely so we can have two more weddings!

I'm praying that Baby "G" is a boy with bronze colored hair and green eyes.

Another great chapter! Thanks!!!

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

Horrendous time in delivery but the results were certainly worth it. Glad the baby has Edwards hair. He will be over the moon for sure! Great chapter!

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

Nothing  better than Mother & Daughter bonding time while feeding. At least her recent dreams about Edward are more positive.

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

So Edward has been gone over a year and a half and now he has been shot down over Belgium. I'm gettting almost as anxious as Bella! Hopefully they will all be home soon.

I find myself holding my breath while I read this and only realize it when I start to get woozy and light headed. Guess I let myself get carried away with your wonderful words. Keep up the good work and don't let plumbing problems, crashed computers or sprained ankles get in your way! If it was easy, anyone could do it!

Hope everything is better for you soon!

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

I think you need to issue a tissue alert before chapters like this! So sweet and such a relief to know he is ok and finally coming home. But what of Emmett and Jasper? Hope theu will be home soon too. Maybe Edward needs an escort or two???

Thanks!

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Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

SLIGHTLY disappointed??? Yes, we were all hoping for his return for the party but we know you have something better planned for his return. I imagined that he would be back in time for the board meeting. After reading the sneak peek on your blog I'm MORE than excited for the next update.

All of Cherie's gifts were lovely and really fit the time and what was happening in the country. So many did without so much to aid the war effort. I don't think today's generation has any clue about the hardships that were faced here at home.  Even the Cullen's who had money had to make a lot of sacrifices. Maybe your story will help to open their eyes a little.

Another great chapter and a great way to start a Monday! Thanks!!!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

Such a beautiful homecoming! So glad that Cherie wasn't afraid of him. Her food mooching routine was priceless.

I can wait for the lemon meringue...but not too long!

Thanks!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

There should have been another tissue alert on this chapter. Beautifully written! Bella bathing Edward was so simple and sweet and then lemony too. What more could we ask? Then Cherie falling asleep in his arms. Such a sweet picture.

Thanks for posting it so soon. I'm really going to be sad when this is finished!

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Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

Beautiful chapter ! All home safe. Definately the happy reunion I was hoping for. And now that they all have jobs and a bright future....sigh.

I'm sure that little Cherie will be joined by a sibling in the not too distant future.

If I saw the "Cullen Steel" building in person I would probably make a scene too! Thanks for sharing that!

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Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

Thank you again for such a beautiful story. Happy to know that the "old timers" were still gettin' it on!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41873
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
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Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Reality Check

Didn't realize how kinky I was until I started reading this and enjoying it, well, most of it. Will she ever forgive him? Hmmmm. I know I would !

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blazing Suns

Crazy lovesick fool! He was so sweet to Bella and trying to do everything right. Just hope that dealing with Jacob, Alice and Emmett isn't going to destroy everything he wants with Bella.

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Consumed

Emotionally wrecked here.

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Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Can we all just say "Witness Protection" ????

Didn't see this coming at all but it is a very fitting ending for Alice.

I'll keep my fingers crossed for Part 2 !!!!!

Summary:

AU oneshot. Set in New Moon, Bella finds herself haunted by the memory of Edward both waking and sleeping.  With no one to confinde in, her dreams are her only refuge from the pain...until she wakes up.  Based on "On My Own" from Les Miserables, originally written as a sample for the Bella's Lullaby of Broadway Contest.

INloveWaDREAM


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2062 Read Count: 589
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
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Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: In Love with a Dream

Whew! I think my computer is starting to melt...she certainly dreams in hott color. Wasn't expecting that from virginal little Bella. Thanks!!!!



Author's Response:

hehehehe...yeah, she had an active imagination to compensate for the lack of actual...stimulation!  Glad you enjoy it~

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17341
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rash Actions

So far I'm lovin' this! Please don't take the time to answer everyone who reviews. I know you are trying to be polite and thank everyone but you need to FOCUS and get back to writing another chapter or two or three!!!!!!!!

Sorry, I really am trying to be patient !!!



Author's Response:

Its funny to answer a review that asks me to spend more time writing and less reviewing, but I tend to answer reviews in the morning on my phone, when I don't have access to my comp, so it doesn't really take much time away.  The reason there hasn't been an update is because I'm still trying to finish moving the rest of my stories, which should happen today, so after that I'll be back to writing.  Thanks for the love and the enthusiasm!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rash Actions

We knew Bella was strong but she is unbelievable! Nice to see them all away from Forks and Denali. And the love and support she gets from the rest of the family is wonderful and partially responsible for all her success in her new life.

Ocean lemons....very nice!



Author's Response:

Bella's coping very well and it is due to the support she has from everyone, you're right!  And ocean lemons are fun!  Glad you enjoyed this one!

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23675
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Serious Talks Ahead

Yes, definately different. Bella older than Edward and now pregnant. Didn't see that coming but it should prove interesting to see how they cope and their relationship develops.

So glad Jake is out of the picture and can't possibly be the father. Thanks for clearing that up!

Can't wait to see Jasper and Alice get together too.



Author's Response:

I had a lot of fun cooking up this plot and now I'm enjoying the good stuff!  Jake is not the baby daddy, but he will creep back into this.  Jasper and Alice will be interesting to watch them fight it.

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Love Rock N' Roll

Sure hope the morning sickness doesn't last all nine months (like mine did!) or she really will be hormonal and tough to be around. Sweet Edward always trying to say and do the right thing for her and the baby.

Great chapter! Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the love...I'm not going to be that mean to Bella.  There will be other issues to deal with.

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Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jingle Bells

Fast thinking by Leah to get Edward out of Charlie's sight. It's good that they have a friend like Leah who really understands.

Can't wait to hear the reaction from Renee. Fireworks or waterworks?

Thanks for another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah...Leah's seen gun toting Charlie in this situ and lets just say Sam's lucky he's still walking around with a head.  Leah's a trip and I can't wait to work her in more!

It will definitely be the latter on the Renee question!

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Feels Like New Years in July

Glad that Bella's mom took the news so well. She really didn't need anymore stress right now.



Author's Response:

No she definitely didn't!  It was nice to let her relax for a bit!

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

A little scary there for a moment but I'm glad it turned out so well. At least Charlie came to his senses!

Are we going to hear wedding bells anytime soon?



Author's Response:

You'll know more soon, it did get dicey, but Charlie's on board now and they can move towards the due date.  Thanks for the continued love.

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Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Something Worth Celebrating

Glad you got this sorted out. I read this last night and felt like something was missing but couldn't get chapter 9 to load. Now I feel better having read both.

I just hope Edward can survive all the hormonal issues as well as finals. I'm so happy that Esme and Carlisle are so supportive of them as a couple and parents to be. All their great friends are really a blessing too.



Author's Response:

Thanks for going back...I was annoyed because I lost all the reviews for those chapters, but it had to be done so they'd be up.  Edward will find his own outlets and with Esme and Carlisle will continue to be there for them.

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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

So beautiful ! She arrived early but healthy and that is all any parent could ask for. She really is the perfect gift for both of them. Just wish we could hear those lullabys he wrote !

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Jailbait’s Double Standard

So sad that this has to end! Glad to see the passage of time in the last chapter and what had happened to all of them. Thanks for wrapping it all up so neatly. I'm going to miss this !

Summary:

Nominated in the Indie Awards for Best 'Love Conquers All' One-Shot.


Having had his heart broken four years ago, Edward Cullen became an arsehole, an evil Christmas Scrooge…

But what happens, when on one Christmas Eve, an unexpected visitor comes to show him the error of his ways and that things aren’t always what they appear...? Is it too late for Edward to make things right and to save his soul?

Based on the song "Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas" by Judy Garland (from the movie ‘Meet Me in St. Louis’).

Rated 'M' only for language.


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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10223 Read Count: 299
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Edward's POV

I have resisted reading this for several weeks now mainly because I didn't feel the need for a Christmas themed story. I should have read it the minute I saw it! Just the image of Edward in a towel and ugg boots was enough to make it all worthwhile!

Seriously, I really enjoyed him being such a butt head fow awhile. We don't see that too often. I think she was a little too eager to take him back but who in their right mind wouldn't want him back? Jackass or not he is still THE MAN !

Thanks!

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55041
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Research

Love it, love it, love it! Can't wait to get started on the Family you Make.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for reading and I'll see you on the TFYM review page!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 372980
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

So far I'm lovin' it! And I feel so smart that I knew "Tony" in Italy was really Edward. We all know his middle name is Anthony. Anyway, all the background details are wonderful and shows you have done some considerable research. Keep up the good work (stay up all night if you have to!) and keep updating so none of us get TOOOO frustrated waiting. 

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Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

Many thanks for the early posting! I loved Alice's explanations of what to expect on the wedding night. Can't wait for the wedding but the wedding night should be wonderful between these two. Come on and hurry up to Monday and Thursday!

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Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

Many thanks for taking pity on us mere mortals and posting the wedding chapter early. Beautiful! Waiting patiently...........

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Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Thank you...for soooooo many reasons !

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Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

5 days on a boat with nothing to do...how will they ever fill the time? I feel a lemon or two or three coming soon.

So glad to see that Edward realizes how intelligent Bella really is. So sweet together. Love it Love it Love it!

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

Quite a chuckle to hear how far Jasper had to look to find "suitable" ladies in waiting for Isabella. Guess that Edward hadn't left too many young ladies "unaware" of his talents! Another great chapter! Thanks.

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Lemon has always been my favorite flavor...I just never knew why! Great chapter! I love that they were Tony and Bella and the quote from Romeo and Juliet was perfect.

Sorry you have to drop back to once a week but we'll survive...I hope! I'm amazed that you give us so much already. Just please don't stop writing!



Author's Response:

LOL...you know I don't think I could if I tried!  I"ve already got another one brewing for when Flyboy wraps up...NASCAR Driver Bella...nuf said :) (what, I like writing Bella as strong, independent, and tough)  LOL

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

I would imagine that Bella will be pregnant soon since they can't keep their hands (and other parts) off of each other! Every night? What stamina...oh to be so young again!

How much longer before Emmett finds love (and Rose)???

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

Loving the fact that Carlisle thinks as much of Bella (and her brain) as Edward does. Just hope they all come back before Alice delivers.

Great chapter! Thanks.

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Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

Isn't it a stretch to call Tanya a Lady??? I know its her title but we already know that she will be up to no good. So Bella has to contend with Tanya, get to know Rosalie and discover that she is pregnant all in a very short time frame. I love the way this story is unfolding and the research and historical elements make it even better. Thanks!

Have a great time on your mini vacation!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

Oh those pregnancy hormones will do it every time! Even with all the "courtly" manners, Alice will always be a spitfire, especially if someone goes after anyone she loves.

Can't wait for the fireworks when Emmett and Rosalie meet! Please just bring the guys home safely from their diplomatic mission. Edward needs to find out soon that he is going to be a father! Yes, I do think she is pregnant because of all the "painful stomach" issues she is having.

Great chapter! Thanks for getting it out early!

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Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

Prince Dadward ! Yummy yummy!

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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

Goodbye and good riddance to Tanya and Kate ! Loved how Edward took her down and threw her a** out forever.

Prince Edward is going to be such great Dad if the love and devotion he showers on Bella is any indication. And we know that Carlisle and Esme are going to be thrilled with the news.

Emmett and Rosalie are just so sweet together. Love at first sight indeed.

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Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Princess Isabella the diplomat. I hope Edward realizes that she won't be the power behind the throne...she will be the throne! I love the fact that she is quiet and somewhat shy but powerful when she needs to be. And Edward, well he still owns me, no matter what.

Thanks for the early update on Rob's birthday!

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Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Gosh Mike, we hardly knew you! Oh well, if someone had to be sacraficed for the good of the story I'm not too sad it was him.  I just hope the Cullen men will listen when the women come up with the solution for Tanya.

Good chapter !

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Really glad it was Jacob that accompanied her mother and not her father. Hope we don't see good old dad ever again. Unless of course that is who Tanya has gone to "visit" ! They would deserve each other!

Beautifully written as usual. Thanks!

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Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

Off with her head! Sorry, I just always wanted to say that after reading Alice in Wonderland!  But it certainly fits here. And now to figure out who else is in on Tanya's plot. Hmmmm

So much going on behind the scenes...I'm so totally engrossed in this story line, setting, characters...love it love it love it !

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

Hmmm, Tanya plowing a field....nice picture. I love it. Nothing was decided about Lady Kate (or did I miss that?). Will she go back to the "family" and work in the fields or something else? If Bella has a say I'm sure it will be a less harsh punishment. Love how Jacob, Emmett and Edward all formed a protective arc around Bella.

Too bad about James (NOT!!!!!) Methinks even the worms would have nothing to do with him!!!

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Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

Love the names for the children. Very fitting and regal altho' I'm sorry Maximillian didn't make the cut..haha!

Thanks for such a beautiful story.

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

So sweet. Happy that they think of themselves as parents first and rulers second.

Sad this will be ending with the epi next but it was a great ride! Thanks for such a beautiful and loving story.

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Hard to type through the tears! Beautiful ending even tho' it was so sad for the most part. Together again as they should be.

Thank you for such a beautiful journey.

Summary:

Edward and Bella have loved each other since they were kids but never said anything. When circumstance brings them back to Forks will they get their chance at forever or will the memory of the past be too much to live up to?  Originally written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44128 Read Count: 16230
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: If You Go Away

Thank heavens she has Alice and Emmett ! And as for Edward...first rule is "never leave with your phone with anyone else !"  Maybe without her being so handy he will appreciate what he has lost and make some changes.

And Aro, Lauren, Jane and the mystery woman are all a pain where I sit !



Author's Response:

hahaha! You're supposed to be able to trust your personal assistant...thats obviously not the case.  He will definitely learn what its like to be without her.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Remember When

So glad you are back! Thanks for the update!

Tough times for Bella and Edward but she did what she needed to do. Maybe now he won't take her for granted.

Does he really think that starting his own theatre company will take up less of his time? Good luck with that!



Author's Response:

The idea with him starting the company is more that he'll be in control of his time.  They're going to get a group of people together that each know their own niche and will work together.  There will still be late nights, but he can also say, "I have a date with my girl tonight, can one of you handle this?" and not have to worry about the consequences.  It won't be perfect, but it will be a lot better.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Baby, I Believe in You

So happy to see an update on this! Things are starting to come together for everyone, finally!



Author's Response:

We are coming into the second half and its all coming quicker now.  This is the beginning of the end of all the bull as they try to go it on their own.  Thanks for the review hon!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: This One's For the Children

So sorry to see this beautiful story come to an end. I've enjoyed it all the way along.

Thank you so much for sharing all of this with all of us.

 

Summary:

Bella & Edward are neighbors who have watched each other secretly, but never met. When Edward comes to Bella's aid, will it be the catalyst they need to make their feelings known to each other? The smallest event can lead to a big life change. AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11321 Read Count: 444
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! Nothing even remotely close to what happened when I sprained my ankle! Could I have a "do over" please?

Love the way  they were drawn to each other before they ever met. Good for Murphy! Now I'll have to read his POV.

Thanks for such a cute and lemony story.

Summary:

Because we all want to know what Murphy was thinking the whole time during the events in Destiny and Driftwood.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1672 Read Count: 149
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for letting Murphy have his say. Such a clever dog! almost like Cupid!

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19440
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Reality Lost, Paradise Found

What a honeymoon ! Unlimited funds can create just about anything the heart desires...and then some. 

So glad that Alice and little Danica Arabella are doing well. Too bad Edward won't be spoiling his goddaughter ! His two Bellas, so sweet!



Author's Response:

I fell in love with that locale a while back and was just planning on it from the get go!  I had to add a dash of angst, but all is well and that baby will be plenty spoiled!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: One Hand, One Heart

Half a box of kleenex later..........loved the vows they spoke to each other. I'm a big fan of Johnny Mathis and when she quoted 12th of Never in her vows, I must admit to wiping away more than a few tears. That has always been one of my favorite songs and reminds me of my own marriage.

I think I'm just going to keep the kleenex close by ! Thank you!



Author's Response:

Awe...I grew up on JM so he holds a special place in my heart.  The story of Edward's about how Carlisle listened to it in the car on long trips, that's me.  I wanted her to put something in there that was special to him.  It's a weird thing when people say they cried, because I feel bad that you're crying but I'm proud to know that my work touched you like that!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella Notte

Such a Happy Christmas and New Years Eve.

Let's see...they guys go camping in the Spring so that must be where Edward is when he gets the call that Bella needs him. I'm thinking that the egg implant didn't take or it did and then Leah had problems and miscarried.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!



Author's Response:

We're moving through time at a steady pace so you'll have the prologue answers soon enough!  I enjoyed writing the holidays again...next chapter is with me sister, aka my beta so you'll see something soon!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

How wonderful that the implant took the first time. Now will she carry the baby(ies) to term?

Sweet sweet Edward and his over the top Valentine's Day surprises. Who wouldn't love a man like that?????



Author's Response:

With everything else I needed a little sunshine in their life, and after last V-Day with the hiding out from Charlie, they needed something drama free.

Summary:

Edward convinces Bella, his Honors Bio lab partner to help him with an extra credit project that will help him with his med-school aspirations.  Agreeing, she soon finds her time taken over by her gorgeous and ambitious classmate. AH/AU/CANNON/OOC Winner of Honorable Mention for tying 4th Place in Twi-High Anonymous One-Shot Contest!

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8049 Read Count: 803
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Weekends at First Beach

Too cute! Loving the sassy Bella and somewhat nerdy Edward. I see a lot of potential here and i hope you'll continue with it.



Author's Response:

I will be continuing this when I finish some of my other stories which won't be too long at the rate I'm writing these days.  Thanks

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36669
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Better Than Expected

Started reading this and couldn't stop to review until I had read everything posted so far.

Whew!  What an emotional roller coaster ride with all that Bella has gone through. I'm so glad that Edward is her rock and support. Her friends will be supportive but Edward is the one who will pull her through this. I know she will be devastated when it comes time to testify but that is the only way she will achieve some peace of mind.

Your poetry is beautiful and speaks so eloquently of having been in her shoes. I hope we see more of your poetry in later chapters.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

dang...I'm glad you liked it that much.  You're right, Edward will be the one to see her though and the trial will be the test of all that!  Thank you...my poetry is how I've always expressed my inner feelings, so to have you all love it that much means so much.   Working on some of the other stories, but I'm getting closer to this one!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Center of Attention

Now I have to add The Virgin Suicides and Where are You Going, Where have You Been to my ever growing reading list. So many wonderful things out there to read and so little time. Thanks for bringing these to our attention as well as explaining them so well. i feel so much smarter after reading your prose and poetry...as well as still lusting after Edward.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Will it be time for trial yet?



Author's Response:

The Virgin Suicides is awesome...but with the Oates story you have to find it online or find an anthology that has that short story in it.  I love them and wrote a paper on them in college...hence the analysis.  Wow thanks...no one said I made them smarter before...that's a totally awesome compliment!  I'm still lusting after Edward too so no worries there.  We're a few chapters away.  We have the end of the semester with his party for the honor society and her departure for phoenix and then christmas break and then the trial so 3 chapters will be the start of the chapter.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Confidence Found

I'm so glad that things are settling down a little for you and allowing you time to write. I've missed you in my inbox!

So happy that Bella was finally ready after all the turmoil. Her poems were womderful and spoke beautifully of the unrest in her heart and mind.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

thank u for the love and for sticking by me.  Bella made some big steps and is finally starting to be her old self again.  As for the poetry, it was hard to write this time around, but I'm glad it felt right to you. hagd!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue 2: A Little Piece of Happily Ever After

I'm so glad you finished this story. It has an important message that more people should hear.

I'm glad you took it far enough into the future so we could see how much they lived and loved and got through all the nasty stuff.

Domestic violence touches so many people beyond the actual victim. I know because it has touched our family too.

I'm going to miss this story and the characters but I know you'll continue to write more wonderful tales for all of us to enjoy.

Many thanks for all your work!



Author's Response:

You just touched on one of my biggest things with writing this story...yes, what happens to bella is a travesty, but so is what happens to Edward and Emmett and the Swan's because of the inability to cope.  I had to tell this story and for it to be loved as it has been makes all the hard work worth it...thank you.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Going "Home"

I'm having really nasty thoughts about Charlie right now! Blaming the attack and rape on her. Is that how he treats all victims of rape or just his daughter? Seems he is more worried about his own image than anything else.

I'm happy that Emmett is finally coming around and showing her some support but it will be Edward that ultimately gets her through the trial and aftermath. He really has grown up!

Thanks for a great chapter!



Author's Response:

You hit it right on the head!  It was about the betrayal to him, not his daughters situation.  Their first time was actually harder than writing the fight with her parents, it was just a really tough moment.  Charlie has his issues and Renee is not the one to jump into a fight like that, Emmett is getting better  and that will help.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Standing on the Edge

So happy to see this update!

I love the way the Cullens are circleing the wagons and trying to keep everyone safe.

Can't wait for the trial altho' I'm sure I will be pulling my hair at some of the antics the defense "pig" will try! He has to be a pig because his name is James!!!!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Lest Terror Be Forgotten

Whoa! That was intense! And James is such a bastard!!!!!

Hopefully this hasn't thrown Bella into a panic attack that can't be stopped quickly.

Did I mention that James is a bastard??????

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Terror Comes Home

Thank goodness the jury saw through Jake's BS and came through with the right decision on all the counts.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: All Bad Years Must Come to an End

It is so heartwarming to see them finally emerging into the light after all the darkness they have endured.

The sentence for Jake was perfect and another good example of the three strikes law put to good use!



Author's Response:

thanks so much...the three strikes law was a bit of a stretch from what my research showed, but I needed him to be gone.

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, I loved it and YES please continue this. They have so much to teach each other and he has so much virgin skin that needs ink!!!!!

Summary:

After a new beverage tax is imposed on New York State, Bella is forced to stretch her pitiful college budgte to the max, until she meets a stranger who is looking for a home cooked meal.  Hilarity ensues.  Warning, this story is rated NC-17 for a reason...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1817 Read Count: 1193
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm..food for sex, sex for food...doesn't really matter when it is so fast and furious with these two!!! Even tho' he claims it isn't.....haha.

One shots are okay but this has serious potential as a much longer story. Hope to see an update someday!



Author's Response:

He's in deep with our girlie...that's for sure!  Evident;y people should alert this because it will eventually be continued...not for a while though.  Thanks for the love!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sequel to The Good & The Bad. Follow Bella & Edward as they mend their relationship & start their new lives in LA. Old friends & new enemies make life more interesting. With Twilight Records blossoming, Bella & Edward find their niche in the music industry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55499 Read Count: 20187
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Good Boy Edward: Who’s Your Daddy?

Too much sex and Edward in the same sentence does not compute!

Love how he is keeping a Mission Log. Wondering if he thinks Charlie is going to "suggest" a wedding.

Great chapter! Thanks!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

Should have had a Tissue Alert at the start of this chapter!

Beautiful! And Edward quoting Shakespeare was... I am without words.

Thank you!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114430
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

Really good start! I love the concept of girls with "balls" and our favorite trio has them here! I don't think it will take long for Izzy to retrain Edward...at least I'm hoping!

I grew up with a Dad who loved racing and drove push trucks for the midget auto races. Went to a lot of races and loved the whole feel, smell and excitement.  He raced go karts for awhile but even tho' I was "old enough" he didn't think it was the right thing for a girl to do. Thank heaven the world has evolved since then! I prefer Indy car racing but NASCAR will certainly do.

I'm looking forward to future updates but also doing a happy dance because you plan on concentrating on The Soverign story first.

Smiling, dancing, smiling!!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

Okay, it has taken me a few minutes to calm down after that ! The worst part of racing is the accidents and you really brought that horror out in spades.

Great job! Oh that Jake is still a jackass!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

That boy is so gone over her! I'm really happy with the way this is shaping up. Glad to see that Charlie is so supportive of her decisions and choices.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

Happy that Edward is okay and able to race. I'm sure Bella will only be taking off one week to heal. She is one tough cookie and I love her spirit and determination.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

Just when I thought I couldn't love him more! Asking for a date in the middle of the race. Nothing like leading with your heart.

I'm glad they haven't kissed yet. There isn't quite enough sexual tension between them yet...haha. When they do finally get down to business I know we can count on you to give us ALL the details!

I'm really enjoying all the aspects of this story. Thanks!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

They haven't even had a first "real date" and he already is picturing her in the new house with kids all around. Gotta love it!

The car lusting is so cute. Guys do it all the time but to realize that Izzy has motor oil in her veins too is really adorable. No wonder they are so good together.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

So difficult to have a relationship in the glare of the media spotlight as well as all the crew members. At least Edward is willing to take it slow in spite of his "obsidian balls".

I love the fact that she has her own line of clothing for little girls as well as big girls. I would love an Izzy Swan T-shirt but I think the Edward Cullen would be a much better fit! Haha !

Looking forward to the Monday updates since SF has ended and yes, I'm still wiping away the tears from the ending !

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

Edward is just so thoughtful and loving. Is there anything he wouldn't do for her? I don't think so. And such a marked improvement over Jake.

Beautiful loving scenes all the way through. Thank you!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

Izzy and Edward sittin' in a tree....they are just so cute together!

Now I might consider taking up racing if he is the reward for a win!!!!!

A little racing and a lot of loving...perfect chapter! Thanks!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

Two banged up cars and a week off, hmmmm. We know what Rose will be doing for two weeks but Edward and Izzy? Hopefully we will find out in the next chapter and I can't wait for the lemons!

Oh yeah, love the racing stuff too !

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

"...a scream that would give Sarah Brightman a run for her money"  Yes! And we know that Sarah can hit the high ones!

Bella would make a great motivational coach when she stops driving. She certainly knows how to get Edward motivated. But I can't see them going for 3 whole days without sex. Bet he has the house done well before the time limit! Has he thought about calling a service to unpack?

And Bella preferring hardwood to carpet...PRICELESS!

Have a great time at the reunion. We'll be here waiting patiently for your return. You have us spoiled with your regular updates so we can't complain when you have to slow it down some.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

How many lives have been screwed over in the name of "it's just business" ? Plenty I'm sure, so it isn't like you are writing a fantasy!

Good for both of them for standing up to Aro and team Volturi. If they do well in the upcoming races any team will want them. If not, have Edward call me!

Give your RL a kick in the shorts and don't stress. As I've said before we will all be here waiting patiently for the next update. You did say lemony, right????

Thanks!



Author's Response:

lol...six whole pages of straight up lemon!  ;D

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

Seriously, does anyone skip the best parts????????? You do write some of the best lemons out there!

How they can even think about the racing is beyond me. Now on to Chicago to meet his parents. Should be interesting!

Thanks!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

Bella has really become the miracle worker in Edwards life especially now with Carlisle.

Edwards relationship with his father has certainly changed and all for the better. Will Carlisle and Esme become a little closer as well?

Now that Carlisle has experienced racing in such an intimate way will he decide to help finance the new racing team?

Good for Alice in trying to get the "correct" version of Edward and Bella out to the media.



Author's Response:

:)  Either I am extremely obvious in my plots or you are very intuitive ;)  Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

They are going to waste away if they keep missing meals like that! But then again lemons for breakfast can't be all bad!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

So many possibilities for "who wants Bella out of the races". My guess would be Daniels who has tried "bumping" her out of a race with not much success. I feel like he has the most to lose if she continues to race well.

Interesting piece of backstory for Bella and why she feels compelled to "pay if forward" now.

Thanks for another great chapter!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

Bella is so compassionate with Ben and Angela in letting them move into her home for their safety as well as their unborn child. The added benefit for Edward is tha he will have Bella living with him 24/7. Win Win!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

Daniels and Cosma really have my "this is not good" vibe standing at attention. We know that Daniels is a creep and up to no good all the time but is he dragging Cosma along with him? I'm thinking that Cosma is being given orders to take out Bella and or Edward if possible. That is, if Daniels hasn't done it first.

Will Edward wait until after the final race to give her the ring? I hope he doesn't wait that long!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

Okay, I feel better now that we know he is going to be all right. He does have a long recuperation period coming so I'm guessing he'll spend most of the time getting the new team up and running.

Sanctions against Daniels???? Lets hope so, for everyones sake!

Great chapter!