Reviews by bba628
Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84114
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
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Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future

Thank you for not prolonging their first meeting. Feels like as low burn though they both have so much more to learn. Great set up chapter.

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Date: 02 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Confessions

Things are moving along , will Edward and Bella meet again soon? I like what you did with Carmen, strong to keep 4 men in line. Looking forward to more.☮Ajfflady

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare

This is a crazy plot so far and I am loving it.
The prologue mentioned the name Jessica as Edwards sub is it Tattoo Jessica? Bella will be so out of her depth.
I cant wait for more. -AJfflady

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Date: 18 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins

Lee Pace .... God he's so beautiful. Thank you for that pic. Slow burn your setting up here poor Edward missing out on potential playtime. Thank you for the update. -Ajfflady

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Date: 02 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 ~ Lost and Found

I am so grateful you posted again. I can't wait to see where you take their relationship. And I want some Tuscan chicken on Pinterest? Edward will have a long road of healing. I have a feeling it will be overwhelming and challenging. Thank you for your words.

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Date: 14 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I was thrilled to get the update. The idea of such a wounded leading man with loss of limb is so interesting I can wait to see how he navigates life now. Bella hopefully will get answers and these two can meet up again. Great chapter thank you .

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Date: 03 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

You did write the right amount of anger for our poor Edward. Also I like how you are bringing his dominant training into his recovery I wonder how he will treat his PT nurse????? Hmmmm this is gonna be good I’m sure Heart forTwilight.

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Date: 15 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I have been looking forward to more of this story. Thank you Clo. Hints of Waco Texas here in your plot, terrifying that the doors were padlocked. Looking forward to More of Angela and Bella. Great Chapter.-Ajfflady

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Date: 27 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Love love love it!!!!! Clo Thank You for this amazing story. Also for the update. I am thrilled it came so fast. Now I hope it gets down and dirty as we know you can.
This is one of the most original Edwards in a while. I read Impact this summer and am excited to read another Edward with a disability. Waiting for more of your wonderful words.-ajfflady

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Date: 27 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Love love love it!!!!! Clo Thank You for this amazing story. Also for the update. I am thrilled it came so fast. Now I hope it gets down and dirty as we know you can.
This is one of the most original Edwards in a while. I read Impact this summer and am excited to read another Edward with a disability. Waiting for more of your wonderful words.-ajfflady

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Date: 01 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Beautiful ring just stunning. The sexual tension is almost unbearable. It’s going to be explosive when they get together.
Edwards not letting his injury stop him now. Who is in the shadows?? More please.

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Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 ~ When The Nightmares Come True

Charlie to the rescue. The idea for this story was one I could not wait to read. I’m thrilled you finished it. Thank you for sharing it.

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Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

A Series , excellent. I’m going to reread Testing Faith this weekend in its entirety.
I can not wait for more of their story.
Bless you and a Happy Thanksgiving.

Summary:

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Doctor Edward Cullen has never really enjoyed Christmas holidays.  His entire life is wrapped around his job and nothing else.  Walking out of hospital one snowy December night, he is drawn to the large decorated tree with tags with a number and gifts that are required.  What happens when he allows his heart to open back up and give this family a Christmas to remember?  Or will he get a surprise gift that will tear down all the walls around his heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9129 Read Count: 2821
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2017 Updated: 12 Dec 2017
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Date: 29 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

Doctor Edward is always a crowd pleaser. Such a lovely Christmas story. Best wishes in the new year.

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While doing fifteen years for Drug and Gun trafficking a drug lord content with his existence gets a letter from a plain jain book worm not so content with hers. They start as pen pals while he does time, but when Fast Eddie Cullen is released on a technicality. He has two goals, return his empire to what it was, and have Bella by his side. A/H Cannon Lemons Language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 129260 Read Count: 29699
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2018 Updated: 12 Feb 2018
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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am loving this story. It is a great start. are you a new author? If your working with the Sarcastic Bimbo you are in very good company. Thank you very much for sharing your work.-Afflady

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love EPOV its the best. He has had an exciting life but is looking for something more? I liked the way you made a connection between them and it seems Edward could be what Bella needs. I cant wait to see how Edward turns out or gets out for that matter.- Ajfflady

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was a bit confused at the different states where they are located. Living in Arizona myself I'm loving Bella's a Sun Devil. Esme and Rose didn't waste anytime and Bella is already under the "family" protection...nice.

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The meet up already...YES! The songs are very sweet. You made Esme a mama bear which Bella desperately needed. I cant wait for next chapter.-Ajfflady

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The plot twist with the judge was surprising. Their meeting was very sweet a little like a Outlander reunion. Edward seems very romantic with her. Great work on this chapter.-Ajfflady

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The Cullen men are charmers and seem so devoted. I'm liking Liam too, Esmes assistant seems like a force to be reckoned with. Phils days are numbered I'm sure. -Ajfflady

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So much happening now. Edwards revenge should be memorable.

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Let Mobward arise! Nice little set up I like that the press was involved also. And Edward ILY'd her this was a fun chapter all around. I can imagine Bens apartment being one of the high rise condos along Tempe town lake too. Great work.-Ajfflady

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Things are moving along their relationship is developing nicely. I cannot wait for Edward to show her off, lots of " Tanya's " to deal with I'm sure glad Bella's got a backbone.

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good chapter Bella standing up to Tanya was great. She's becoming a member of the family for sure.

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Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Bella's getting a taste of the life now. Hope they will be safe from all the threats.

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Date: 08 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Amazing action at the end. This is a nice change to most Mobward stories where he is almost always indestructible. More realistic of his lifestyle.

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Date: 08 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Your Bella sure has grown a pair! Feisty I like it. Great chapter.-Ajfflady

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Date: 08 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Charlotte the harlot it is fitting. Bella's backbone is growing . Poor Edward will he ever wake up?

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Date: 08 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

His show of dominance here was a little confusing. I hope they can get back on track.

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Date: 08 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The plot sure does thicken. Now Charlie gets a part in this story and he's a rival of the Cullen's, oh my.

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Date: 09 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

A bomb? This is getting so good. I think the target is definitely the Cullen's but who's behind it I'm not sure. Edward and Bella in the car was hot. You made drug use part of the story and I believe that would be a true part of their lifestyle. Thank you for writing your story I'm waiting patiently for next chapter.- Ajfflady

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Date: 13 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bless you woman for the amazing update.
I am so glad your over here supporting STARS. FFnet has some bitch trolls its sad truly because are we not all here for the HEA?
I loved the tension between Edward and Charlie how embarrassing to get cockblocked by your dad. Your writing is good my lady and I see you on FB I'll put in a request for your group.
Peace-Ajfflady

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with a husband who does nothing but gamble away her fortune. Will she be able to get out in time to keep her fortune and her life?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18528 Read Count: 10264
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2018 Updated: 07 Feb 2019
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

I'm so glad you were able to finish your story. I love period romances. It was quiet the legacy Edward and Bella left. Congratulations this was a sweet story.

Summary:

LDEID

Isabella Swan is the only daughter of Charlie Swan, the leader of the Swan Mafia Family. While out with her father, they are attacked by a rival family, The Wolf Pack and her father was critically injured. The family doctor was unavailable, and Bella is scrambling for a replacement. She called the person she’d least expect to help her.

Dr. Edward Cullen is working as an emergency room physician when he got a phone call from the girl he’d secretly loved all throughout college, but she kept him in the friend-zone, save for one drunken night. After that, she disappeared, and he hadn’t heard from her. Until this fateful night … And he found her much changed, hardened, scarred and angry.

Charlie Swan’s life hangs in the balance, and the only person who can save him is Bella’s former friend and one-time lover. Will Edward be able to save Charlie and stay away from the girl, who is now a woman and far more beautiful, despite the scarred and hardened exterior?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44585 Read Count: 11819
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2018 Updated: 12 Jul 2018
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Date: 16 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Well you did it again Josie another sweet, smart and engaging story. I always love your work. Hope your having a relaxing summer. ☮Ajfflady

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Well you did it again Josie another sweet, smart and engaging story. I always love your work. Hope your having a relaxing summer. ☮Ajfflady

Summary:

Edward Cullen and Charlie Swan have been best friends all their lives.  However, that may all change when Edward starts having feelings for Charlie’s daughter, who is sixteen years younger than Edward.  Sometimes, age is only a number.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2842 Read Count: 3119
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2018 Updated: 26 Apr 2018
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HFT this was a sexy one shot. I always enjoy stories with an older man pairing. Thank you so very much for posting and sharing with your fans! Congratulations on having two stories nominated this month to Twificrec, I'll be voting, ☮Ajfflady

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39584
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Seems as if their chemistry is off the charts. Elizabeth seems excited to include Bella in everything .

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Date: 18 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Clo what a heart breaker. I love the idea for this story. It reminds me of Return to me with Minnie Driver and David Ducovney I love that film. Amazing banner also. I'm so excited and can't wait to read more

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Date: 06 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh this is a heartbreak. It’s nice how the characters are lined up. And great original idea for Alices profession.

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Date: 06 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Edward such feels in this chapter.

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Date: 06 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Such a sweet chapter, belly dancer indeed. Let’s get Edward to a HEA.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Beautiful choice of song. I can see the slow dance between them.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Moving fast forward but I like it. A very Romantic chapter

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you for giving us more of their story. Although you ended this chapter in the perfect place.

Summary:

All Tied up in Love

You never know where you might find that person who is everything you need or desire.  E/B.  HEA

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3488 Read Count: 4880
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2018 Updated: 01 Jul 2018
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As always your stories are delightful. Nice twist with Edward as a sub. Thank you for sharing.

Summary:

FOYS

 

In the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness … or succumb to the world’s worst pain, losing someone that had no reason to die …

Edward Cullen, a decorated fireman, after losing a woman in a deadly apartment fire, left his life and family in Seattle, trying to escape the ghost of the beautiful woman, the concert mistress of Seattle Symphony. He stayed away from Seattle, living in Boston, working as an arson investigator until his mother called him, informing him that she had cancer. Without a second thought, Edward moved home to help his family.

Dr. Isabella Swan, a renowned oncologist, specializing in women’s cancers, went through the paces of life. Her mother, an ovarian cancer survivor, was her impetus to become a doctor. However, she was closed-off and had been for many years … since the death of her twin sister, Angela, in an apartment fire. Bella focused on her job, working to forget the empty pain of losing her soul mate. Even eight years after her death, Bella was profoundly broken because of it. She never let anyone in … Until … a handsome, sexy man and a son of one of her patients … Edward Cullen …

Everything in her mind told her it was wrong, but in the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness. Your life can come back to life, especially when you find your new soul mate … the Fire of your Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115672 Read Count: 29262
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2018 Updated: 25 Aug 2021
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, what an opener. I definitely see the
difference in writing style by blending two of my beloved authors I’ve been reading for nearly 10 years. -Ajfflady

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, what an opener. I definitely see the
difference in writing style by blending two of my beloved authors I’ve been reading for nearly 10 years. -Ajfflady

The Collection by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 365]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In Volterra, the Crown Prince chooses his future queen from the Collection. 35 young women from every province of the country, open to members of all castes, given the opportunity to be the newest chapter in the country's fairy tale. But Isabella Swan didn't want to be part of the Collection, all she wanted was to love a boy and have him love her in return. And Edward Masen was not that boy.

 

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The Collection: A Twilight/The Selection Crossover

For those of you who have read The Selection Series, you will recognize the world of this story and some of the character types, but most of the plot will blend elements of the two series with original ideas, so it won't simply be The Selection plot with Edward and Bella. There will be things that will completely take you by surprise, I hope, and keep you entertained. This idea overtook me while reading the last book, which is the first time a series has done this since Twilight, so I wanted to play with it. Also, it felt right to post this the day before my 9th anniversary in fanfic. Thank you to all my readers, new and old, and my team, past and present, for sticking with me on this journey. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Wanna read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118372 Read Count: 63730
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2018 Updated: 17 Jun 2020
Reviewer: bba628 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

More , more this was a great escape read. Going to another time and world is so appreciated. Thank you Good Witch.

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Date: 10 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

More , more this was a great escape read. Going to another time and world is so appreciated. Thank you Good Witch.

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Summary: At eighteen Edward was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit. It’s now six years later, and he has been released four years early. His bail conditions have been set. He has to find somewhere to live and get a full-time job, both things he has found in a small sleepy town. All he wants to do is keep out of everyone's way and move on with his life. Will this sleepy town of Forks, Washington let him, especially when they find out why he was in prison?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229926 Read Count: 52221
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2018 Updated: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have been following you two as always but now want to reread as completed.
Hope to finish in a day.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner done by Britt Lexington

Bella Cullen was about to have everything she had worked toward until she lost the two most important things in her life. Vice president of the legal department in her family's business, she tries to bury her pain in work. All of that changes the day she meets a man that has obviously suffered from a serious trauma. Edward Swan is more than shy; he's scared of everything. Bella doesn't know what happened to the endearing man, but she vows to help him and his young daughter in any way she can, starting with hiring him as her personal assistant. Little does she know they'll soon become the driving force in her life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36710 Read Count: 31519
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2018 Updated: 21 Mar 2019
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I adore your stories, I followed this by chapter but now I'm going to savor it whole;). Great work Alyscia.- Ajfflady

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am so glad I reread this completed. The subject was disturbing but you wrote it so very well. This was an Edward who needed such a soft touch and your Bella was smart enough to give it. I look forward to more of your wonderful stories , bring on that Family of Conviction! -Ajfflady

Summary:

Tough Little Boys

This is a birthday o/s for my bestie and partner in crime, ericastwilight, based on the Gary Allan song, Tough Little Boys.

Edward was a tough kid growing up, but that all changed when one little girl came into his life.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Family, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2737 Read Count: 1037
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2018 Updated: 11 Oct 2018
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this and what you wrote about his thoughts and fellings are so very true. Happy Birthday to Erica as well I adore her stories. Ajfflady

Summary: Past Featured Story

SBW

 

This story is set ten years after the Cullens left in New Moon, and deals with the idea of what might have happened had Bella remained, ultimately, broken. In this story, she never heard Edward's voice and therefore never sought out a hit of adrenaline, never sought out Jake. One-shot. Rated M for safety. Halloween Special

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Embry, Bella/None, Bella/OC, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst, Horror, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3274 Read Count: 431
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2018 Updated: 01 Nov 2018
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Serial Black Widow

Loved it, I like that you left interpretation to the reader. Ajfflady

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10117
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank you Heartfortwilight for the Christmas gift.
Blessings and best wishes in 2019-ajfflady

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Date: 26 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Fate strikes again! Poor Edward these two poor people I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. HEA here It comes , I hope.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a delightful Christmas gift. I always love your work. I especially like the idea of Fate lending a hand. Jacob was some piece of work.
Great start thank you for writing this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hockey Pucks and Library Luck

Meet Edward Cullen, aka The Great Eight. He's the Captain of the Washington Capitals. He's one of the highest paid hockey players in the NHL but he's a little lonely. He fell in love once and thought she was the one. Until she broke his heart and walked away. Since then he's concentrated on getting his franchise a Stanley Cup.

Then Bella happens. She's quiet, intelligent, funny and beautiful. She knows nothing about hockey, and could care less that Edward is famous. She invites him into her apartment for a dinner, and eventually that blossoms into a relationship. She has goals of her own. International travel, keeping her family members safe, and excelling at her job as a research librarian.

She's independent and doesn't like to be controlled. He's a superstar who likes to spoil the women he falls in love with.

This story is rate R for adult themes and graphic language.

 

Banner made by HeartForTwilight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49639 Read Count: 27421
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Your story was wonderful. I love Hockyward. Making her Amish was a good plot point also. Reading this was a great way to spend a afternoon. Best Wishes in 2019.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Don’t Slip in the Sauce

Great start I love a bashful Edward. Also being neighbors can help in becoming friends. Looking forward to where this goes.

MARS ONE by Lissa Bryan Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

M1

“You knew it was a one-way ticket.” That’s what she told herself again and again as she stared out the tiny portal at the rust-brown desert that stretched as far as her eye could see. Bella believes she's the final survivor of the Mars One mission, but there's a sound of footsteps in the corridor...

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15699 Read Count: 664
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2019 Updated: 02 Jan 2019
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant all the way to the end. -Ajfflady

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65687
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ July 18, 2017

Clo you always deliver on the limoncello
If you know what I mean. I adore Bound E&B but these two are very Sexy.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

4 am and each chapter keeps me pressing next for more. How’s that for a review.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

A mafia mystery , this just gets better.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

4 am and each chapter keeps me pressing next for more. How’s that for a review.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017

These two don’t mess around, or yeah they really do. Sweet dreams indeed.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was hoping for Italy.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward to the rescue. But did she have to be kicked and punched. Where is Renee now?

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

Edward is a fanboy of Bella ...nice plot twist.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Always a treat when you give us a story.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Always a treat when you give us a story.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this was riveting. My heart pounded just reading it. Expand of course. You are so talented Clo. - Happy New Year and Best Wishes in 2019- Ajfflady

Summary:

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Misunderstanding is the difference between admiration and mortification.



Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5226 Read Count: 1425
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2019 Updated: 04 Feb 2019
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This was sweet and thanks for making Bella a fantasy writer something different. I really enjoyed reading this.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the chapter. Edward messed up and I hope Bella has the wrong impression.

Sanctuary by KitsuShel Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bznner

 

Childhood friends, Bella and Edward drift apart and start families of their own. Years later, tragedy strikes and brings them home. Edward and his son never expected to find sanctuary in a pair of Swans.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14039 Read Count: 2189
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2019 Updated: 04 Feb 2019
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Absolutely perfect. How sweet and romantic. What a beautiful gift.

Unexpected by monica03 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

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Edward and Bella's honeymoon in paradise results in a surprise pregnancy.  When Bella’s pregnancy goes more like a regular pregnancy, the couple decides to have a party with their closest friends and family for a gender reveal. AU


Categories: Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3226 Read Count: 365
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2019 Updated: 14 Feb 2019
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected

A very sweet story and thank you for including all the pictures! I truly enjoyed reading this.

Our New Love by jenn72stamper Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Some people do love their way. We do love our way.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Anastasia Steele/Other Character, Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Erotica, Family, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1023 Read Count: 225
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2020 Updated: 09 Jan 2020
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start to a story with a twist

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. That story I will update every October 5tg

Reviewer: bba628 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cool idea it was fun to read.

Toy Soldiers by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

"I didn't ask her to interfere, but him walking into the cabin this Christmas may be the reason I'm alive today." Sometimes you think you know what you left behind, but the reality is far different. Second chances are hard won, but they could make all the difference.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17905 Read Count: 727
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2020 Updated: 28 Jan 2020
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A hard topic but very well written.

Pagan Paparazzi by LunaEclipse Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 


Pagan Paparazzi


I always thought capturing that timeless moment was the ultimate goal. Until I found the one who I needed to capture for all time.


~ Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3448 Read Count: 407
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2020 Updated: 02 Mar 2020
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Finding My Muse

This Edward is very bad ass. I especially liked the way he described himself, a bit of a sadist too? Great job. You covered so much in so few words, his narrative was very well done.-Ajfflady ( you deserve so many more reviews for this)

Man of Omerta by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 197]
Summary:

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Silence. Honor. Humility.  This was the world as I knew it. Isabella didn't change this for me, she made it clearer. She became a part of that oath as I spoke the words, because a man who couldn't protect his family, couldn't be trusted to protect the organization. “We settle things like men, amongst men, we don't run to cops like cowards.”

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52604 Read Count: 27304
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2020 Updated: 30 Apr 2021
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You area a tease, it’s going to be difficult waiting on this one. I have so many questions. Bless you for donating your time and talent to this cause.-Ajfflady

Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 56618
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My lovely ladies you finished this! I’m so excited to spend time reading Caledonia. I have been a huge fan of you both for so long now.

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 67921
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.

Summary:

Final Descent

Edward sensed her from miles away and followed his heart to the busiest place in the city—the airport. Just as he was about to meet his soul mate, the plane they were flying in suddenly fell from the sky. What is a vampire to do but grab his mate and jump toward the ocean. A story that begins with a fall and ends in Happily Ever After. Total AU, M for themes and language. B/E Pairing.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17456 Read Count: 2745
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2020 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Forever

Just lovely, this take on the mate bond was well done. I really liked your Edward.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TPWCH

 

Providence and destiny. Elizabeth Masen raised her boy on those principles, and though all of life’s hardships, he’s remembered her words. When Miss Bella Swan steps off the train at the Denver Depot, she’s a pleasant surprise and some much-needed help. As they work to build a life for themselves, they’ll face hardships neither one expected, but together they will weather the coming storm.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Western
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69173 Read Count: 21463
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2020 Updated: 27 Mar 2021
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Westerns are one of my favorite fis genres. Mail Order Bride I reread each year. I look forward to your take on life in frontier Colorado.

Summary:

Bella unearths a long buried truth that sends her halfway across the world to reclaim her heart. New moon alternate ending.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7879 Read Count: 4048
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2020 Updated: 24 Jun 2020
Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Everything

Consider my heart broken. This was so painfully to read. So many emotions. Thank you for their reunion.

Summary:

HnH

 

Keeping the town of Forks safe was Chief Cullen's job. But when a tragedy strikes, he has to learn how to cope when nothing feels right. Everything reminds him of what he lost and what he can't move on from. *character death and dark themes*


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49628 Read Count: 9300
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2021 Updated: 23 Oct 2021
Reviewer: bba628 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

This may have had triggers for readers but you were graceful in how you presented their story. So many different issues you covered, divorce, depression, death but you get them thru in the end. Lovely story Lady Good Witch. Happy Halloween. Ajfflady.

Etched Swan by TeamAllTwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106] New!
Summary:

When a tattoo artist is searching for some work to be done, they know what to look for. Will Edward find it when he moves to Seattle, and sets an appointment at Etched Swan.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56288 Read Count: 5868
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2023 Updated: 22 Mar 2024
Reviewer: bba628 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this is wonderful, where have you been? Been missing your stories.