Penname: vbfb1 [Contact] Real name: Melissa
Member Since: 26 Jan 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a 35 year old mother of two year old old son. I discovered twilight just after my son was born and have been addicted ever since.


I love reading Fan Fiction and decided to write some myself problem is always get distracted with reading and forget to write.


I love my twific and my husband seems to think it is an addiction. I told him when he quits smoking I will quit reading.


Hope you like my stories because I love writing them.


Check out my Blogs


http://plainjanebydaydommebynight.blogspot.com/?zx=702939f0c989e36


http://dommellasdungeon.blogspot.com/?zx=11a19c5a43f79e7d


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Reviews by vbfb1
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 307822
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Please tell me that it was Edward or Carlisle coming to rescue her and not that sick bastard Aro coming back for more.

Can't wait for the next update. i know bella has to go thorough a lot before she can be saved by her knoght in shining armour unfortunately that doesn't make it any easier to read.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1483389
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

pleas tell me this is the last trial for BElla really how much more can you put her through please tell me a HEA is not too far away.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3520]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1595977
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

omg please tell me he is going to explain the role she has to play and not just subject her to it

please hurry up with the next cahpter i so need to know

keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

OMG i so wasn't sure at the beginning of this chapter but i was much happier by the end.

can't wait to find out about esme's garden

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

i really hope it is carlisle and that he is there to rescue her not make it worse

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

i think this would make a brilliant original novel it is an excellent story i am sad that it is almost over

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

thank you for such a wonderful story.

Must say i am just a little disappointed with the epilogue i was so hopping for more about their future. but it is still a nice ending.



Author's Response:

I have to leave something for the book...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 149556
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

awww i so can't wait for edward and bella to start getting a little more intimate



Author's Response:

Sorry to say that you are going to have to wait. Edward is very old fashion after all.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

i am so loving this story can't wait for rosalie's session and i so can't wait for edward to start courting bella but i guess that is probably a little way off yet

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

hmmm i think roslie so underestimates bella i think she would be the best thing to happen to the family i am so on the alice bandwagon.

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

I love that Alice has a bandwagon....

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

I defnitely loved it but i was a bit disappointed that they didn't get to edward and bella dating yet please tell me that is next chapter.



Author's Response:

Okay well I can tell you that Bella is up next... And she will be a part of the discussion... But that's all I'm allowed to say....

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

Damn it. Still didn't get to the big reveal although i must admit i had forgotten about Bella's past. Can't wait to see who's pov the next chapter is going to be from.

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

All right you twisted my arm. Edward's POV will be filled with the big reveal. 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

Ok so the office sex was definitely hot but it felt a little ooc for this edward a felt a little like sex for sex sake.

the rest of the chapter was great though keep up the good work



Author's Response:

I hate to say it but it was sex for sex sake. They have to get it where they can right. Plus Edward felt the need to reconnect with Rosalie on a physical level after the punishment and meeting.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

yay it is so nice to have another chap of this story i've missed it. sorry to hear you have been unwell hopefully things are looking up

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 62495
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

wow another excellent story as always. i only just found this story but read all chapters in one day can't wait for the next chapter.

It is so refreshing to read a story that isn't all teenagers having sex and falling in love and of course no mobile phone and the internet yayayayayayayay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL...ironic is I did all the research on the net!  LOL...but yes, it's been a nice change of pace...and then I had to go and write it the same time I'm also writing about the 17th century...talk about your culture shock!!!  LOL

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

AWWWWWWWWWw gosh i love this story i am so sad that it is going to be over soon

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

it was so perfect though without the lemon zest though what a wonderful chapter. i so love this story i am going to be very sad when it ends.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

awwww i feel like i want to cry an burst out laughing all at the same time that was the sweetest most beautiful chapter yet. i can't believe this story is almost over i am so going to miss it.  guess that means i will have to go back to the beginning and start again. 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

booo hooo i am so sad this tory is over i have totally loved it maybe i might go back and start from the beginning

 

can 't wait to read your new work

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 295045 Read Count: 65137
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2014
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Crescendo

Oh Edward he's so concerned about protecting Bella from himself that all he is doing is pushing her away.

i think locking them away is the perfect thing to do.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Unison

Yay finally know more UST i suppose this means that there isn't much left. gonig to miss this story

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Rhapsody

AHHHHHHH the next chapter they better finally do it or might just have to twitter harass you until they do LOL.

 

Excellent none the less i am glad they talke dthrough their issues.



Author's Response:

lol, hold that Twitter happy finger lovely. They are going to do it next chapter and it's almost ready to post :) kisses....

 

BBxx

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Vivace

OMG you brought tears to my eyes. I felt nearly every ounce of Bella's pain deep down inside. Edward is so fricking clueless he just keeps hurting her over and over i so wish he would just pull his head out of his ass.

Yes she's running away again but really what else is she supposed to do sit there and watch him break her heart by ignoring her or go back to the reastaurant and have it out with him yeah way to keep the realtionship under the radar.

Ah i'm really pissed at Edward right now. he bet have one hell of a grand gesture planned :(



Author's Response:

Hi Honey,

 

I just posted next chapter...maybe knowing Edward's thought may redeem him somewhat...? xxxx Onto the next...

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Tilde

Wow i totally love this story you almost had me crying when Bella walked out on Edward but i get the feeling your a HEA kind of girl so i know something good is coming.

It is excellent by the way to see another aussie in the fanfic universe.

Keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Verismo

I so hope Edward can pull his plan off cause if they don't get to have sex soon i am gonna get grumpy :(



Author's Response:

Really M? Grumpy? No, Never!!! I can't say!... lol

BBxx

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Rhythm

Aww beautiful can't wait til they get back to the hotel though.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Andante

Yay i've missed these two. glad to hear you had a good trip. Can't wait for them to finally do it

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Rondo

hmmm looks like Riley has made his appearance too little too late mister *wags finger in disapproving gesture*

Summary:

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Slash: Jasper is a privileged high school senior. A fight between his friend and a "blue collar" student leads to a surprising discovery about someone he's lusted after for a long time. Written for the Support Stacie Auction. Explicit sexuality/language.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6252 Read Count: 622
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Of Slums and Sultans

excellent as always and as always i want more maybe another one shot of the bike lemon

 

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) Glad you enjoyed it.

xoxo Katie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 365627
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

OMG This story is amazing it so refreshing to read a story that has now texting no i'm speak and no abbreviations just beautiful well written proper english.

And may i say the descriptions of their union are amazing the words you use make you feel like you are there wa tching a felling every wonder as they expeience if themselves.

 

can't wait for more keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

excellent as always can't wait to see what struggles are going to befall them in th english court. i would love to here edward say off with her head to tanya

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

i get he feeling we have not heard the last from lady(yeah lady my foot) tanya.

keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Ok so i looked back though my family tree and here are some options

Elizabeth and the variation Eliza, Mary, Jane, Ellen, Katherine, Anne, Emma for girls.

Richard, John, Stephen, William, Thomas  for boys

These were popular names in my family from the 1600's through to the 1800's Hope this helps

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

thank you for sucvh a wonderful story it always refreshing to read something i little different

keep up your writing i truly love it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43102
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

WOW  i do not  normally like carlisle ficx expecially when he is with bella but this is fucking excellent.

so couple of things i hope happen in the end of this story.

1 edward and carslisle work their shit out

2 bella and carlisle live happily ever after

3 bella ends up pregnant from all the unprotected sex they have been having

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

Well, it's safe to say (if you've read the next chapter) that you're number one desire has been granted. Sort of. They will eventually get there.

As for 2 and 3...only time will tell.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

i am so sad this story is almost over but YAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! Bella and Carlisle are going to have their HEA.

here's hopping the future entails a wedding and some babies.

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

THANK YOU for the wonderful story and yes i was very happy with the wedding and the baby.

i am kind of sad there is not going to be more i would have loved a little DILF

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3983]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 984744
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Yay i am finally caught up i have seen this story about for a while but finally decidedc to start reading a couple of days ago.

and i haven't been able to put it down. totally love it. Also i must say reading it all a once you can see just how much your writing has improved since you started and it is really good to see.

So the only thing i think i have figures out is that JAmes Denali and jim are the same person very curious to see how that is going to play out.

can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and thank you for reviewing. Saturdays are update days so not too long to wait now :)

Michele

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Poor Bella can't help being bad she will get it eventually.

Can't wait to find out what James and Jacob has planned



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and not too long to wait x0x0

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Firstly there is something funky going on with the punctuation in this chapter. Where ever ther should be and apostrophe there is a full stop and ther are so weird double comas in on places. It just made it a little hard to read.

Secondly i totally love the game playing and the shibari excellent chapter totally hot.



Author's Response:

hi there - I reposted it - thanks for picking that up!  the format completely lost it's mind!!!

Thanks for the review

xoxo

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

A really good chapter lots of actions i can't wait to see what the fallout is from this chapter

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

wonderful chapter has always but there was a couple of consostency things that bugged me.

1. at the end of chapter 41 he punished her with mr bristles which i thought was hidden but then this chapter before he punished her he had her go find mr bristles which made me think it was still hidden. I was just a little confused.

2. At the start of the weekend bella had a privalage taken away that she was to sleep on the floow and not share masters bed. yet at the end of the chapter you had them wake up in bed together. i would have thought bella should have been on the floor.

anyway other than that it was great as always.



Author's Response:

um, no - that would be ME who is confused - I had put the whole "hunt for Mr. Bristles" in ages ago and then I cut and pasted myself into complete confusion!!!! Please accept my apologies for the mixup!!  The punishment in the last chapter was supposed to be with a paddle, but then things happened (these characters tend to rule the way things go in a chapter) and i put Mr Bristles in without thinking!!!

Bella didn't share Edward's bed on Friday or Saturday night, she slept with him for the first time on Sunday night, and this would have been after her collar was removed (remember they only play Fri - Sun evening).

 

thank you so much for keeping me on my toes - I mean it when I say, that I really appreciate it.

 

Michele

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

HMMMMM i have to say i think that was harsh. I didn't see it as keeping a secret so much as Bella giving ALice the opportunity to do the right thing.

Yes what Alice did is wrong keeping Jaspers brothers miss deeds from him, but like all abuse victims Alice was trying to protect those around her. and make no mistake what Jaspers brother did was abuse.

I didn't feel Bella and Alice were conspiring to keep it a secret Bella was trying to help Alice work through her issue of how to break the news to her fiance that his brother was an abuser. It was Alices news to tell not Bella's

As for Jasper and Edward well I am kind of pissed at them right now. Although i think Bella and Alice did warrant punishments i think they have totally overreacted.

Aww i am just too pissed right now to even think straight this chapter has really thrown me off balance.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for your honesty and comments as well as your review of this chapter. I hope you will let me know what you think of the next one, please.

thanks,

Michele

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Hmmm this pair just can't catch a break.

can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

oh come on - you know that I've got their backs... thanks so much for your review - I hope this makes up for the drama a little bit!

 

PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?”  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”

Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

“Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can’t reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!”  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  “Jazzy, you are scaring me…” 

This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…”  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

“Come to me…”  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.

“No.  You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!”  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!”  She said with determination.

“Gladly, Darlin’.”

“Okay, I’m going first.  I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?”

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

“I promise.”

Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise.  I won’t freak out on you again.”

Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

“Jazz…”

“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck!  It’s too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’.  I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.”  Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.

“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets.”

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  “Can I get my clothes back?”

Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”

Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”

Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”

Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

“Alice?”

“Yeah?”

“Supervised visits only…”  Jasper kissed her forehead.

“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale….

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

OMG the babies are coming i so hope she gets to have a natural birth to many babies are brought into the world by cesarean when they don't need to be. Though don't get me wrong it is a procedure that save many a baby that would ahve died otherwise.

ooo can't wait for the next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 61278
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

so my guess is that the favour is to let his grandfather preform the ceremony

 

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60318
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

Aww what an excellent way to almost finish can't wait for the epilogue

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 141448
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Bella has got a long way to go before she will be ok if she ever is. Poor Edward is in for a world of hurt.

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40416
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

I just found this story and may i say fanfuckingtastic i totally love Dommella and subward. I am actually writing a Domme/sub story of my own called Plain Jane by day Domme by night.

Kepp up the excellent work can't wait to read their first scene i get the feeling it is going to be explosive.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 44672
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Awwww ALice and Emmett will take care of them and they will be back together in on time.

YAYYY!!!! can't wait for the next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 121256
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Wow that was such a beautiful wedding so frickin romantic what girl wouldn't say yes.

I hope Edward tells his mother to fuck off or maybe she will finally pull her head out of her ass.

AS fo the babies please tell me your going to write this story atleast through the first baby i would so love to read that.

Keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

It will definitely contintue through the first year after they have moved.  Then I can't decide if I want to do an epilogue 10-15 down the road or do a couple of chapters that span about 5 years each?

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

OMG i love your stories and this is the best one i have read yet though i found some more on your profile i am dying to read. Can't wait to see where you take this story hope this is going to follow them to chicago and after. i would dearly love to see them have kids.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year

Nosy fuckers why can't people just keep their noses out of other peoples business.

Totally love this story can't wait for more

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

I so want to slap Esme up side the head to knock some sense into her.

I am a little confused however i am sure they got married in their thrid year from the first chapter maybe that is coming up next chapter.

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

The first chapter is the entire one shot I wrote.  It includes a five years later part in which they are married but it doesn't say exactly when they got married.  They go publis in their third year but are not married yet.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Fuck this story totally owns my ass god i love it.

keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

So fantastic. I can't wait till they move to chicago. I so hope his mum takes her head out of her ass.

Don't suppose you know how much you have left of this story because i am hoping it is heaps i will be sos sad when this is over.



Author's Response:

I think there will only be 3 or 4 more chapters.  It is hard to end I love writing this E & B.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

God i love this story can't wait for Esme to pull her head out of her ass.

Also i can't wait for bella to be pregnant although that is probably just me projecting my own desire onto the story.
excellent as always keep up the good work

Author's Response:

Thanks and keep reading!!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months

Excellent as always they are trying for a baby yayyyyyyyy!

Can't wait to read the outtake i so want to know is stuck up Esme's ass.



Author's Response:

Thanks & thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

ooo Esme has been very self serving she has made a total mess of her so called perfect life.

I get the feeling though that Bella will understand and she will get every one to forgive her it will take some work though.

oooo can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Even Bella only has so much compassion and this could hurt Edward's relationship with his mother beyond repair.

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

OOOO naturally conceived triplets a wonderful rarity. The babies are coming can't wait.

So excited for the next chapter but i get the feeling it means we a nearing the end boo hoo.

keep up the excellent work

 



Author's Response:

Thanks - Beth - Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

Awwww the babies have arrived. I love this story i am going to be so sad when it is over.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

Another excellent chapter as always can't wait to see what the future holds



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

I am so sad this story is over i am gong to miss these two. it was such a beautiful ending and you made me cry bb.

can't wait to see what you come up with next



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 75122
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think bella's pride is going to get her into an awful lot of trouble.

can't wait to see what happens next.

A suggestion though when it is so long between updates a little refresher at the top of the chapter is good. I had to go back and read the last chapter just to figure out where we were at.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 29622
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Finale

Thank you for the wonderful story i hope that we definitely get a sequel because i would love jasper and bella to get their HEA.

 

 

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 111720
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

Fuck this chapter was HOT!!!!

I think i need to go and find my husband.

 

keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

god everthing ou write is alwas so brilliant i totally love this story can't wait for the next chapter

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1703]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 291852
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

I just found this story and i think it is fantastic and i can't wait to read more.

Would i be right in assuming that English is not your first language. Just i noticed through the chapters there are a lot of misued words or joing words missing from sentences. It doesn't really bother me, you can figure out what it is supposed to be most of the time i was jsut curious.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And you're right, English is not my first language. I'm from Sweden ;)

I've asked my readers before if they would prefer faster updates or beta'd chapter that takes longer to update. They chose the first option so that's why there is a few misspellings and errors ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever

Excellent chapter.

I never fully understood that expression, but no, I'm not 'shitting' you

From sweet home alabama

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

Thank you for such a wonderful story look forward to more stories from you in the future

Anonymous Meeting by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

 

For the Under Her Thumb Challenge on FF.

Edward needs a Domme but has trouble truly submitting and has been labeled as trouble.  At the club's anonymous play night he thinks he finds what he needs in a new Domme.

With no information on her how can he find her again?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7144 Read Count: 3111
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2010 Updated: 19 May 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Meeting

WOW god please tell me there is going to be more of this because they are fantastic. i love me a good Dommella and subward.

 



Author's Response:

I probably will extend this after I finish one of my other stories.  Two seems to be the limit I can write at one time and update regularly.

With school starting if I can work on this one then I will.

Thanks for reading.

Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 63305
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13

Edward is in sooooo much trouble.

Poor Bella everybody is making decision for her instead of letting her make her own.

please update soon.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14

i totally loved this chapter. Tanya and her family need to but out and stop putting there noses where they aren't wanted.

I hope we get to have the next chapter from bella's pov i so want to know what her and alice discussed

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18

Ok so i really hope you are heading down the surprise pregnancy route because i always love that turn of events. I mean we have now established bella isn't on birth control, we know they have had unprotected sex and well i know for a fact that men don't always stay infertile after cancer treatments overtime they can become fertile again.

can't wait to see what is to come

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

it's so Jake isn't it

can't wait to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

Oh i do not see the first meeting with charlie going well at all.

please post soon

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

I'm so proud of Edward for not giving up.

As for Bella she is only trying to do what is right for her family she will come around

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

I think poor edward is going to be slightly devastated if her news is what i think it is. but i also get the feeling that edward would follow bella to the ends of the earth. and hey he has nothing tying him to where he is now.

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25314
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

I love these two can't way fot the UST to explode.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Plan A

oooo please tell me theres is going to be more because i can't wait for Bella to kick Edroar's ass



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

it appears Edroar has some issues. This is a fucking great story can't wait to see where it is going to go.

Is it going to be al BPOV or are we going to get some Edroar in there as well

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

I have so missed Edroar it is nice to hve him back.

Summary:

Elle is an energetic, independent woman with a successful business and new start in the big city. The bustling streets of New York are not what she expected, yet she finds the freedom exhilarating. One interaction at the mailboxes with her shy, strikingly handsome neighbor is all it takes to turn the strong- willed young woman into a bumbling mess.

 

Jonah Quinn is withdrawn for good reason; he harbors a dark secret. He lives his life in the shadows, playing his music in late night bars and hiding himself from everyone but Elle's cat. His tattoos bear his pain while his music is his outlet, but it is his silence that keeps his shame at bay.

Can one night of passion between the two of them lead to more than casual glances exchanged at their mailboxes? Will Elle be strong enough to help Jonah with his personal demons. And will Jonah break his silence regarding a past that haunts him?
The Rules for this relationship are Unwritten. 

A story of longing, love, and forgiveness.

Only the first chapter is available.

If you want to read more, my debut novel is available here.

 

 

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2497 Read Count: 1228
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Unwritten Rules

Aww poor Elle ,it appears Jonah is more damaged than she thinks here's hoping he isn't beyond repair.

Do i see a few complications ahead from a lack of mentioned protection

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 84673
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off

Holy cow that was fucking brilliant.

Poor Edward he is going to come so fucking hard if he ever is allowed to come again i get the feeling she is going to tease him mercilessly.

can't wait for the next chapter

keep up the excellnt work BB



Author's Response:

Yay!!! I am so glad you liked it!!! I was a little nervous with it, but I figured the hell with it. I mean, who said Bella can't have her fun ;)

Much Love,

 

Your partner in Domme,

Korry

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten- Relevations

What indeed.

I think both Edward and Bella are going to be suprised at just how Submissive Edward is.

CAn't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

OMFG edwars has the worst luck can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

RighT!! I swear, the poor kid can't catch a break...I mean, er...You know what I mean LOL

Thanks for reading, babe!!

~K

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three- Waking Life

totally love this story i am totally hooked on dommella and subward. i actually write my own story called Plain Jane by day Domme by Night.

So my bet is that Bella is Anthony and Masen's teacher



Author's Response: Oh yay! I might have to check it out and no she's not the twins teacher.. I love the concept of Domella and subward..I think it's about time. Time to whip some delicious Edward butt *licks lips* Thanks for the review babe, and I'm going to stop by and show you some love as well!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination

Ok so she wasn't the twins teahcer but she was a teacher and as i suspected he found her when he went to pick up the twins.

Can't wait to see how long it takes for Bella to give in.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde

god i'm impatient i so just want these two together now. i can wait though i just don't like waiting.

hey is this story only from EPOV or are we going to get some BPOV eventually.

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response: Awe thanks, babe! This story is from just EPOV, but I will be writing from BPOV in a different story and I promise that they'll be getting together. :)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips

Fucking excellent god please tell me we are going to get more Bella totally fucking fantastic even if was only an outtake.

 

Can't wait for more this story totally owns me.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six- White Knighters

You almost had me going there for a second but the longer it went on i knew it was a dream.

Can't wait to see what else Edward is gong to try.

I also like the sublte hints as Edwards inner submissive is starting to take over.

God I love this story

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It

Of course its her unless she has a twin.

I can't wait for Mistress Marie and Eddie to meet

oooo this is so getting good.



Author's Response:

Do you know much I fucking love you? You are so pro Domella that it makes me fucking giddy. There needs to be more people like us...right! I can't stress enough how excited I am about Bella taking control over Edward.

*Bounces with excitement*

The next chapter is a week away...so excited to share it!

Korry

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight- Masquerade

AHHHHHHHHHHHH No Fair. I want to know what haopens now. :(

Oh well guess i don't have any choice but to wait. Please tell me i wont have to wait too long for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~

Hmmm I get the feeling Bella is going to be either really pissed off or really relived I am kinda leaning to pissed off and relived because she can have Edward now because he isn't freaked out by her but actually turned on.

can't wait to see what's coming

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive

Hmmm Eddie is realising he is more submissive than he ever knew.

 

Can't wait fore theri first scene

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse

Fuck i loved it please tell me you have a picture somewhere of the horse.

Can't wait to see what's next

Keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake

Eww i love these two can't wait till NaNoWriMo is over and all my favourite authors come back.

Eargely awaiting what's next

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List

Poor E he just can't help being bad, he will figure it out eventually. although i have a sneaking suspision B likes it when he's bad.

can't wait to see him get his wax on

keep up the excellnt work BB

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions

Hmmm me thinks Edward is about to have his limits tested. can't wait to see what happens.

Another excellent chapter it was good to find out a little about Bella's motivations.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette

hmmmmm such a god little subward. i get the feeling Edward is in for some pleasure and not a punishment.

can't wait for the next chapter