Reviews by vbfb1
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86077
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell

OH poor Edward i get the feeling Bella is not going to let him explain, i hope she does though i hope she realises just how he is willing to sacrifice for her.



Author's Response:

I know, he's been trying so hard and things keep on not going hid way. Hopefully, he thinks quick on his feet and gets his self out of the situation. Thanks for reviewing, Hun!! Xoxo

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries

OOOOO angela really is stiring the pot. I hope she hasn't done any irreperable harm



Author's Response:

Hi, babe!!!

Thanks for reading and I agree with ya, Angela is sure causing some grief, but I am an HEA kind of gal and I think things will work themselves out...God willing ;)

~K

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning

OMG i want to cry i feel so much for edward right now. Coldhearted fucking bitch.

 

Please update again soon 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Bella is not a fan favorite right now. To have someone love you that much and to crush them? But trust, she's got a plan. Thanks for reviewin, babe! Have a great weekend!

~K

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Three - Shell-shocked

i am dying to see how this plays out Bella better have one hell of a grand gesture up her sleeve

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254717
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Please tell me we are going to get some usual next chapter.

I totally love these two.

I have added this story to the series i created Domward's Dungeon hope that ok.



Author's Response:

Bella wants some ususal...I hope she gets it, but we will just have to wait and see..by the way thanks for adding my story, why in the world would that not be ok??? I'm honored that you think enough of my story...thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Becasue this is a Thursday post I have a teaser for you....lml

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Ok so i am never telling my husband sperm has nutritional value or i will never hear the end of it.

can't wait to find out what Edward put on her nipples.



Author's Response:

lol ....after the update is posted I will put a picture on the extra's page ...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

 

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hmmmmm can't wait for them to get their fuck on next chapter yay

 



Author's Response:

hmmm... i hope it's good...lol

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I have to say i am glad Edward isn't going to push Bella to open up it would only end badly. She will tell him she just needs time

Author's Response:

I don't think she is going to have a choice ...usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ok so i don't know why people insist on calling chapters that have more story than smut transitional chapters. They're just story all an integral part of the bigger story.

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

Thank you....I think M was calling it transitional because it moves the story forward and it gave alot of information that will be needed for the nexy few chapters ...but you are right about the smut...and I like smut, but I think the story should be paramont to the sex...lml

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

i get the feeling leah is pissed about being replaced by edward.

And i think we have only seen the start of the storm



Author's Response:

Leah has issues ...lml

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

mmm poor Edward hearing what happne dhas been hard but seeing i can't imagine what that does to a guy

can't wait to see his side 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Ok so my guess is he is paying someone to watch over Isabell and keep him completely informed on everything happening in her life.

excellent chap as always

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40308
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: photos

I would love to see the dress Alice designed for bella. also the rope bondage if you have any pictures



Author's Response:

I dont have a picture of that exact dress I made it up in my head,Bella will be wearingit to the club eventully, when they stay longer or go for a special reason... I do however have examples of hobble dresses I can post and I will...just for you... :)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)

Ok i totally love your story but ther is just one thing buggin the absolute crap out of me. I don't know wether your story is beta'd or not but you have a lot of inappropriate word use in you story. The biggest one which has happened in hearly every chapter is the use of left instead of let. I have put the definitions below for you.

left

the past tense and past participle of leave.

let down

To fail to meet the expectations of; disappoint

I just hate the fact that I’ve left him down, that through my senseless and thoughtless actions

If you don't have anybody to read your stories i would be more than willing to give them a read i am not good at punctuation but i am very good at picking up wrongly used/spelled words.

Also Project Team Beta offer an excellent beat service.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments and your suggestion. I have a beta, MommyLovesEdward, this is her first story also. She is learning the same as I am. Thanks for the definitions, as I have said before. I write the way I talk, and maybe it is a geographic thing, but we say'  he left me go', where left becomes the verb. So I'm sorry if that irratates you (I'm not being a smart ass...I really am sorry) My beta tried to fix that many chapters ago and I wouldn't allow her to change it. Now she is just use to it, as I guess all the other readers are too. Around chapter 10, someone else had offered to beta, but she kept trying to change so much of my wording, I became frustrated and it didn't work out. There are other little things in the way I talk, that are probably showing up in my story, that is just me, my personality and my eastern PA way of talking coming through loud and clear. So thank you for the offer, but for now all is well...lml

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105119
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

Ok so my question is why Edward didn't wonder why Bella knew what a succubus was.

I don't know i just have this feeling that Bella knows Edward is a vampire maybe because whe already knows about the wolves from Jake.

I don't know can't wait to see what's next. You asked about what we'd like to see and well this is going to sound strange but i like when Edward the vamp goes down on Bella while she's got her period.

I know i'm a freak but when written well it always seems to work.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

HMMMMM i can't wait to see what these three are upto.

excellent chapter

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

Wow i love my some Domward and subella but this is the first time i have read a vampdomward and subella and i think i like especially that he can read her thoughts although it does reduce the submissive angle a little because he tends to do things inresponse to her thoughts instead of just what he wants.

It is good none the less and i can't wait to where this goes.

Ps i am adding this to my series Domward's Dungeon



Author's Response:

I have added your series to my favorites. That would be great if you would like to put it in there. Thank you so much!

No wories on her submissive side of him reading her mind. He will still do what he wants but he will be able to redirect her when she is nervous about something new. They will be seeing many new things at the classes to experiment with so i hope you coninue to read it.

Thank you again!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

I think Leah trained her and that Jake is her boyfriend

I so love that Edward can read her thoughts.  Can't wait to see whats next



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing your guess. next chapter will hopefully bring the answer closer. Sorry to tease but i dont' want to ruin the story for you.

I love giving a small peek into her mind. it gives her more depth.

thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oooo i think this is going to be good. I like Bella are holding out Hope that Edward isn't really dead.

I can't believe Emmett had her dad killed as well he is such a fucking bastard.

can't wait to see hwta happens next i will so be looking forward to Emmett getting his come upance.



Author's Response:

I'm hoping this story encourages other writers to look beyond Emmett's goofiness and start offering some good Emmett/Bella stories.  There just aren't many out there.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ooooo i had been holding out hope that Edward wasn't really dead but i am a sucker for a Jasper/Bella fic so this is good too.



Author's Response:

Everyone was hoping I'd bring Edward back, unfortunately he's dead & buried in this story. I love J/B pairings almost as much as E/B.

Summary:

parental

 He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15388
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drifting

Hmmmm interesting i am looking forward to seeing where this goes.

PS: do you know you have named your story Parentan instead of Parental

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106920
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

YAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!

Ok that feels a little wierd being happy that for all intents and purposes Brother and sister just made out.

Mmmm i think i am really going to enjoy this ride

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awww he gave her his heart for xmas that is so cool.  I get the feeling these two ar going to go from zero to a hundred in the blink of an eye.

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

hmmm it is not going to be an eaqsy road for these two but i think they will come out the other side stronger and happier

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

totally loved it.

I get the feeling the next chapter is going to be a little emotional

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This story just keeps getting better and better.

can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm so sad this story is almost over i am going to miss these two.

Thanks for a wonderful inspiring ride.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww i am going to miss these two i was so hoping they would have babies baby we can get a futuretake sometime.

Thanks for another excellent story

Punishment by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Summary:  Edward has auditioned to be Bella's sub.  However, he has a problem keeping his hands to himself and for that he must be punished.  Sample entry for the Dommella's Dungeon Contest because nothing is better than a strong Bella and an Edward who knows his place - serving her.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5305 Read Count: 2673
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Punishment

Fabulous

I will put a note on the blog for peopl to check this out.

I can't wait for you to continue Anonymous Meetings i am so excited.

Summary:

Edward and Bella have been stepsiblings since they were ten, but how long has Edward felt something different for his Sort-of Sister? EPOV of fanfiction MY Other Brother


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6658 Read Count: 3853
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Edward i can't imagine how hard it would have been being a teenage boy and having feelings for a girl for all intents and purposes is your sister. I can't wait to see how the family ahndle this when it comes out i get the feeling emmett my b e dealing  out a beat down. I get the feeling there will be a lot of sneaking around though.

I hope we get some more of edward in the future

Summary:

Here is the companion story to Endless Awakenings, the story of Seth, Tanya, Ben, and Angela. NC-17 for the usual.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15719 Read Count: 6336
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so glad your writing this as a bit of a mini side story because i so wanted that matter of fact i could see i being a whole side story dealing with all their issues like how they end upliving together as they are currently both in different cities and then onto having babies.

But that's just me i love this family of stories so much that i can never get enough.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Fuck i love this story so hot can't wait for a little boy on boy girl on girl and of course i so i can't wait for all four together all a tangled mass of limbs

please post again soon



Author's Response:

THanks:)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this story and i think Seth and Tanya moving is an excelelnt idea. I already told you i would love to see this become a full story and explore their lives but it just cause you write the best poly

keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I am 90% sure that I will expand this but I will have to do it along with Endless Awakenings.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389498
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

Thanks for the fic rec.

Now this chapter had a lot in it totally loved it. I seriously suspect Edward is going to pay for his lack of honesty with Tanya.

But can't wait for the test scene.

Keep up the excellent work Babe

vbfb1

xoxo



Author's Response:

Ha! Tanya is such a flake!  She wouldn't take no for an answer. Lol!  He really had no choice.  And as far as the fic recommendation, what can I say, It's a great story!  I just call 'em like I see 'em!  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: For the Love of Domination

ooo this is getting interesting Bella's secret is out. now all Alice has to do is get her hooked up with Edward and everything will be peachy.

can't wait for the next chapter keep up the excellent work BB

PS: did you just copy my favourites list for your rec's LMAO

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Another excellent chapter. Have to say i was a little pissed that Bella left instead of them sending Leah and Jacob packing but i understand why.

Bella is onto bigger and better things with Sir anyway.

Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

God i loved this chapter it was so fucking hot can't wait to see what they are like when they are in the same room

 

Keep up the excellent work BB



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Excellent as always i can't wait for them to confess their feelings and make love, then of course i can't wait for edward to fuck her silly.

til next time keep up the great work

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Yay I finally got some time to read. I so love that Bella thinks she is getting over Edward and falling for her new Dom wonder what she is going to think when she finds out that her new Dom and Edward are the same person.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Keep up the excellent work

vbfb1 xoxo

 



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

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~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

God i fucking love this story. Please tell me that there wont be too many chapters before Bella and Edward meet as Pet and Dom. i want them together so bad.

Keep up the excellent work bb

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

fucking brilliant i so totally loved this chapter i loved that they didn't just fall into each others arms and profess their love can't wait to see how their conversation goes.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

ooo can't wait to see how Edward deals with that revelation.

keep up the excellent work bb

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

I so would opf told that bitch renee if she wanted to talk to me then she knew where i was cause playtime with my fuck hot boyfriend is far more important

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Oh my Edward sure did work her over so jealous. I would hate to think Edward has been pimping out mojo

 

can't wait to see what's next

Strawberry Wine by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 255]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Seventeen year old Alli Wilson falls hard and fast for the cowboy next door. She lies about her age, and has the most magical summer of her life. Things get down right awkward once school starts and she stumbles in to her AP English class to find the cowboy next door is her new teacher.

First assignment? An Essay: How I spent my summer vacation.

Lemons.

 

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54159 Read Count: 21171
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hmmm naked cuddles almost as good as sex. If i was Alli though i would have at least offered him a little hand relief maybe some mutual hand relief.

Hmm can't wait to see whats next

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ok so i totaly no a baby goat is a kid but gosh it is stange to read it with thinking about children.

It was a cute chapter though it felt a little transitional can't wait to see whats next though

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh dear Alli is showing her age a little. Poor Jason all mopy oh well can't wait to see what happens when a little UST gets resolved.

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

If you are still interested in publishing this i know of an ebook publisher that might be interested. email me at vbfb19@hotmail.com if you are interested.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oooo me thinks Alli's world is about to come crashing in around her 



Author's Response:

I'm glad *I'm* not in her position. At least this time - I wouldn't mind being in her position other times. *cough*

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG i'm just... i have no words



Author's Response:

No words good -page-turning-drama or no words bad -hate-you-for-doing-that?

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I thoroughly enjoyed this chap. but i am curious i thought this was one of the winners of the contest and was expecting to see it published. What happened?



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it. TWCS has passed on this story. I'm not at liberty to say more. The good news is you can look forward to reading the rest of it right here!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok i am really enjoying this at the moment i can't help but keep thinking just kiss already.

Now i'm going to confess i read a lot of twilight fanfiction and i can't help but think how Bella like Allie is bookworm tendancies and all. It is still a good story



Author's Response:

Thanks! Ask and you shall receive. Chapter five has that long awaited kiss.

Alli's love of books, aweful first kiss with a high-school boy, and interest in older men are all part of what I was like at her age. However I never lied about my age to bag my hot teacher... more's the pity!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hmmm YAY they kissed and boy what a kiss. i would so happily get a dose of poison oak if it meant a sexy man was gonna look after me.

i keep thinking that 6 years isn't really a big age gap but when your a minor those years until 18 make such a difference. cannot wait to see how this is going to play out.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ooo poor Allie got to go swimming with a naked man *sarcasm* i am really loving this story can't wait to see how far they take their relationship



Author's Response:

Oh, they take it far. Very far.

Glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Typical bloke always putting his foot in his mouth. If jason is looking for curvy women to paint nude i'll put my hand up.

Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OO she's allprepared for sex yeah right being on the pill doesn't make you prepared there is so much more to it.

I am a little sad tht we have to wait so long for the next chap but as a challenge entrant myself i understand the rules. Good luck



Author's Response:

Yes, sometimes Alli's age shows and reminds us how naive she is. I remember thinking I knew everything at 17. Ah those were the days.

Thanks for your reviews, and good luck with the challenge! I'll have to go check out your submission.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oooo me thinks the green eyed monster is going to come out and play



Author's Response:

Well see... there's only so much one man can take!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

HUH i was so sexpecting him to be furious with her guess love does conquer all



Author's Response:

He was. It's a shame he didn't stay that way, because being pissed off would be easier than pining...

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oooo Gran's not as oblivious as Ali thinks can't wait to see what happens at homecoming



Author's Response:

We should never underestimate the perceptive qualities of our elders!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

oh no this can't be good



Author's Response:

Pregnancy scare, ailse 4.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

hmmm i so hope Gran comes to the rescue because Alli is going to need the support.



Author's Response:

Alli is in the middle of a big, ugly mess... and it's only going to get worse.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh i hate Yvette i always hated the girls at school who got off on everyone else's misery. can't wait to see how the discussion with JAson's mom goes



Author's Response:

Yeah, mean girls suck.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oooooo things are getting interesting so we've cleared up that jason and ali having sex wasn't illegal as such bust i still think peopl are going to be extremely opinionated about it and his job is still in jepardy



Author's Response:

According to the law it wasn't illegal UNTIL he became her teacher. So, now that he is in a position of authority over her, a sexual relationship between the two of them would be illegal. Alli would need to transfer schools or turn 18 in order for them to be together without legal repercussions.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427853
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 **Encounters**

hmmmm and what a lovely addiction it is

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Awake

Oh i so think Isabella is going to get down on her knees and say do with me as you wish master lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation

ooo i always get so excited when i see a przeward update in my box and you never disappoint can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I get excited when I see your reviews! So happy you loved it.

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Home Again

i do not know who this dirty prick is who is the mystery point of view but i do not like him. 

 

I do however love prezward and he is the highlight of my week.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Alternate Arrangements

oooo me confused about who the mystery person is why would they want Bella away from her home?

 

I so think Bella is going to be back to her bitchy self-protective self next chap, she is not going to want to move in with Edward even if it is the safest option.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Diverting Disaster

I think Bella's hate comes from embarassment. She likes to stand on her own to feet and suddenly she needs help from the one person she knwos she could actually have a furture with.

 

A little natural daddy instinct i think for Prezward. As for Rosalie i think all she is worried about is her job.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 19 May 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

ooo Prezward and Bella got there orgasm on yay.

 

CAn't wait to see what happens when the staff find out about it.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack

oh my god love this.  Poor Bella you do one stupid thing and it has gargantuan conqesquences. As a parent i know the panic you feel when somthing happens to your little one and you got that across so well in this chap. At least she is going to have prezward to comfort her. can't wait for more.

 

And i totally agree about keeping Seth healthy because yeah just to freaky that Cayden keeps getting sick like seth. 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

ooooo i so love this story i am like a happy kid in a  candy store when i see an update for this in my inbox.

 

I cannot wait to find out why she got fired but i'm guessing his agents ahd something to do with it.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Career Move

OMG i am so happy for yet another prezward update i love the way these two interact can't wait to see what happens next i think Bella is just the fire Prezward needs.

 

Sorry to hear you son is having a hard time of it. I hope he is feeling better soon



Author's Response:

Woman, first off, thank you sooooo much for putting my banner up on twificpics and reccing the story out, I've gotten a lot of new readers because of you, so thank you, you amazing woman. Secondly, I hope you continue to love the story. I always look at your banner before starting and it helps me write faster. And, lastly, he is feeling better now, and I found a safe sliced ham for him. So YAY!!!!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

I can't believe how in love i am with this story and it is only two chapters in

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Date Night

yay prezward is getting his Bella of woohoo can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Letting Go

Oh Bella it wouldn't have mattered who you fell for after Brady you would have felt guilty but it is okay to move on.

 

Lovely as always bb i love these two so much and of course now the UST can start.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Vultures

OH prezward you are so caught hook line and sinker. i love this story so much

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Spa Day

OMG god that is a sucky cliff hanger i'm beginng to think that it is James and Tanya working together it is going to be interesting to see how this all plays out.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

oooooo i love this so far can't wait for more

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

oooo i can so see this getting fiery cannot wait

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Explanations

ooo me thinks miss swan has gotten under mr presidents skin

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

OOOO I love this story so much can't wait to see what President Cullen thinks of being thrown up on.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Emergency

I am totally in love with this story i am so happy you are so inpsired to write it  i'm going looking for my CT update now

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Schedules

ooo Prezward has a hardon for Miss Swan something fierce  i so have the mental image of him fucking her over his desk stuck in my mind please tell me that will eventually happen ;)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Repercussions

ooooo Bella the nut jobs are on the war path now. Me thinks prezward my actually step up to the plate on this one. I hope?!!!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Close Encounters

OOOO ME THINKS SETH'S FATHER DIED PROTECTING THE ASSHAT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Arrangements

oooo Prezward does have a hard-on for miss swan at least he can admit to himself

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Barbie Bella

oooo i think prezward is going to be totlly charmed by Seth he is going to fall hook line and sinker for the little guy

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Demands

hmmmm i'm beginning to think that Bella and Prezward have a history one he doesn't remember. could it even be that he is seth's father ooo now that would be a juicy twist.

Cannot wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections

ha seems prezward and i came to the same conclusion as to why Bella seems to hate him cannot wait to see if it is the truth.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Handling Things

ooo i'm begining to hate miss hale i don't know why i feel like she is jealous of miss swan but i sure hope prezward fires her ass soon.

And i am loving that prezward has finally realised he is owned by miss swan oo i get so excited when i see these updates in my box

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones

ooo loved it as always wonder if Edward will ever fess up that it was rosalie that got them to safety

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Sisterly Conversations

ooooo okay my vote on Jasper is that he has an Alice shoe fetish and that he recognised Alice's shoe when she threw it at Prezward, I have decided that the mystery POV is an oposition politician who either wants Edward's job or wants to get a particular candidate into the job. love it when i get updates for this story.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 A New Home

OOOO PRezward you sure kno how to unintentionaly woo a woman well done

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Press Conference

ooo how am i supposed to choose how often i want chapters, i would have you post it all now so i could read it to completion if i had my way. But i will go with whatever you prefer.

 

Silly Edward a girl pulls away from a kiss and he automatically thinks he has overstepped. Can't wait for Bella to explain that it isn't the case and maybe you know jump his bones to show him how wrong he is. But as any parent knows disruption free time is hard to come by would love for Seth to strat to cry right at the most important moment.

 

Sorry i am totally waffling can't wait for the next chap 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

oh prezward the way to a single mom's heart is through her children you better be careful you don't crush them both.

 

As always i can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

Hmmmm i had been assuming that the mystery POV was a man but after this one i am thnking it is Tanya.

 

Love daddyprezward :)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Daddy Time

oooh i think my guess from last chapter may be right but hey i have been wrong before so it wouldn't be the first time can't wait to see who it is

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Abducted

ooooo i thought i was so sure but now i am all confused again dammit i guess i should be glad that this is almost aover and we will find out soon.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions

Geez my guessing skills are hopeless guess i was in the minority and i had absolutely no idea royce was Seth's father can't wait to see what Edward does.