Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

can not wait to be pulled into another one of your stories!

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings

actually it was through checking for an update on the TTSS blog(?)/ website that i found you guys had moved here. thank you for setting this site up i have been here ever since!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Promises

omg daddy c is involved! guess he is not so much the good guy in this one huh?

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

oh renee what have you done?

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

poor bella. knowing how you guys's minds work i am not sure if i wanna know what' next...

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

uh oh renee is gone...

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

is it still felix with bella? he seems so easy on her and like he cares about her so far off from how he was with renee.

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

poor felix... he was being easier on bella, ignore my question from last chapter. you guys are so good you already left me the answer.

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

wow aro has really thought of everything, sad thing is this stuff does happen.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

wow lookslike bella has stolen the hearts of all she comes accross. at least aro believes in 'practice what you preach' takes some of the asshole out of it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

wow at this rate i wonder if aro is gonna want to give bella to edward or find a way to keep her himself. aro looks like he is gonna need to be punished again.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

and they meet! the connection is there, i wonder how nuch interaction edward and bella will have before the wedding, how close they will become. looks like bella did not lose all of herself, it will be a long road but she can still find her way back to herself.

happy easter to you as well. i will miss the updates but real life and family comes first.

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

aro is a sick mo-fo isn't he? glad to see that the spark is mutual. i hope the 'amends' are not too hard on edward or bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

aro is a master of manipulation. so happyto see that edward was able to let bella know he was ok and did not hold anything against her. i wonder if they are gonna do something to make bella more fertile for her birthday and the virgin sex with father? to make sure he throws a bun into her over...

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

yeah he is seriously creepy. and what a crock of shit that he can get away with this kind of stuff and not have someone call bullshit on his 'transgression' creey old fuck sexin on 16 year old girls! and all for the greater good! ha! i can not wait for charlie to find aro and kick the living fuck outta him for his transgressions! then aro can 'resist arrest' and just have to be shot. hum... maybe between the legs... that would stop him from getting away! heehee

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

wow does this mean that momma e and daddy c know aro is fucked in the head? if so why are they still there? or do they just know they need to protect the kids? and if that's it again why don't they just leave?!?!?!?!?

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Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

poor momma e! at least she is going to try to stand strong to keep liz/bella from living the hell she endured. now i wonder what the plan is gonna be? you can not just walk up and say...

'you sick, child abusing bastard! you will not use your phoney bullshit power trip as a means to abuse yet another young girl like you did to me! so we are just gonna keep with the regularily schedualed bullshit, have the arranged marriage, great match by the way, and the ONE time sex on the wedding night! no extra hanky panky, you got it mister?'

my guess is that all though funny as hell would not go down all that great durring the next 'family/town'meeting.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

wow can you say fucked up? 30 lashes, her hand being cast aside ( does that mean he's gonna cut it off? smash it with a hammer? make her wear a glove?), and no one can speak to her or look at her for a YEAR!!!!! holyfuck! that is one hell of a punishment for petting her own kitty! never mind going blind or getting hairy palms!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

love how charlie has his cop spidey senses tingling. he really is an awesome dad and i can't wait for him to pop a cap in aro's ass.

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

is creepy aro watching her? or is it someone else?

looks like i was right about them smashing rebecca's hand, now it will serve as a permanant reminder of her shame.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

happy annaversary! may you be blessed with a long and happy life together, full of joy, love and family!

poor alice she was just trying to help both bella and herself (man it seems wierd to call her bella in this fic! lol)

next up the ickiness that is sex with the creepy father.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

ok seriously not quite as creepy as sex with the father but to say either way she bleeds today! and then give jasper a knife to hold at her throat! holy fuck! i mean do they not realize that most girls have broken their hymen long before they have sex?!? and by doing seemingly normal activities. carlisle is a doctor! he has to know this, and yet he offered his little girl up as a sacrifice on the off chance her 'innocence' was intact.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

i am a good daughter, following the laws and making my father happy and proud by submitting my review. blessed be. - NOT

so i am just an addict saying thank you for feeding my addiction with your wonderfully fucked up take on this family - thank you :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

good job felix, way to man up and at least try to make up for your brian washing past. all we can do is pray that charlie can get in and get her out unharmed.

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

i wonder if eddie will come accross one of charlie's posters? maybe charlie himself?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

oh boy what are they gonna do to her this time?!?

where is eddie? and what happened on his trip to the outside?

Summary:

My entry for the Steamy Movie Crossover contest featuring the movie Serenity. Bella provides Edward with a distraction while the crew is away. Rated M for lemony goodness.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1678 Read Count: 3590
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Welcome Distraction One Shot

heehee leave it to em to bring everybody back to earth.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner fs

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57009
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

so cute how he goes through the 'see i'm not that badass' list it is true the volvo does not scream badass no matter what anyone wants to say. my grandma drives one! i think it is sweet how he doesn't want to take her v-card, he's a dumb ass though i can not see him allowing her to give it to someone else. and she wants it to be him. i wonder how you will play that one out? will he or won't he?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

well i wonder how little bella is gonna use the í love her...' information to get what she wants? and now that alice seems ok with this will she help?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?

so maybe eddie was just young and didn't know what he was doing?!?! wow who would have thought a 15 year old didn't know everything about sex? for beingg a pretty smart guy and on his way to being a doctor he sure can be a bit of a dumb ass! glad to see bella and the family could make him realise it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!

the moral of this chapter - watch whatbyou do as a kid, you never know if you are gonna fall for the police cheif's daughter!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.

i think that charlie will be won over but after he makes eddie work for it. heehee.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - Lalalalalala

well poor eddie and bellie, looks like charlie is not gonna give in quite so quickly or easily

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

well i think something is gonna give. charlie is playing with fire on this one and i do not think he is really willing to give up his daughter just because of her boyfriend. he just needs to realise that is whats at stake.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?

lol i didn't know we could drop off kids, i got 3, 15 - boy, 14 - girl, 12 - boy. any takers? please?!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

i knew it! charlie should have thought this through a bit further than he did. i knew he would have a rude awakening!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.

well at least she is feeling better now. i wonder if you will do anything in charlie's POV? we can all watch him realise he is an ass, and the price he paid for it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.

sounds like this weekend is gonna be great. you just know that in real life she would gget her period and have cramps from hell all weekend! lol at least we know that won't happen.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?

glad that bella's first  day of work went ok, too bad jake had to be an ass and ruin it for her,but eddie boy made it all better

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - For the love of God!

charlie should have seen what he was doing, pushing bella away, now it seems too late. i wonder how long until they can move on from all of this drama? it is gonna be a while i guess cause charlie is gonna have a coronary when bella admits to moving in with edward in seattle.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - That's why I need you.

glad that the air was cleared with jake, wasn't sure how long that would take, but you promised, so i had faith in you. the date was sweet, and about time too, i mean they are talking about moving in together, alone, and getting married but they haven't been on a date?!?! but it's all good now. sex was sweet, and now the drama can start again.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.

well looks like everybody has had a good scare but they all *cough* charlie, got to see how much b really means to e.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

thank you for writing. i have really enjoyed watching these 2 grow and deal with the bullshit that is life while still trying to make both themselves and the others happy. off to the sequel!

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - The Wedding

it is nice to see that edward is not infallable and perfect all of the time. you had me going in the begining of the chapter that it was b & e getting married. keep up the writting, thank you.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - The Day After

everyone has a past, glad to see bella isn't gonna blow a fit over edward's

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36877
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow eddie is an ASSHOLE!!

bella is a goodie two shoes.

this is gonna be fun!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

did you hear that? it is the begining of the end for eddies bad ass days! actually it sounds like all 3 boys are gonna be getting more than they bargained for tonight!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

let the fun begin!

what the hell is tanya playing at?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh no he is gonna hurt her feelings

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

charlie better not think that e hurt her and she better set him straight if he does

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow tanya really is a bitch. i wonder why she desided to throw the new life and new friends away?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

charlie is being a douche. one little mistake is not the end of the world!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

uh oh edward is not fonna like this. he can try to be all cool about it but we all know he is gonna flip his lid

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wonder whats up with jake and the mood swings. is he taking roids? that's how he beefed up and now has a temper? date was good, sweet and semi innocent

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

poor eddie! what is bella gonna do when she hears what charlie has been up to.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 42033
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Broken

thought i would try another of your stories! this one sounds like it's gonna be good.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home

well imma gonna guess that it is DR. Edward? the attraction is there already.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice

well look at edward trying to simplify bella's problems! i know he means well but that has got to be a big piss off to bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out

edward seems to be a nice guy, i wonder if he noticed bella not eating? and what he is thinking about all of this.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee

bella has a lot she needs to overcome. edward thought the 'weight loss was a side effect of the OCD' but bella keeping track of what she ate and the extra laps show me this is control issue and classic anorexia

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Firsts

so cute to see an unsure bella, than i remeber her age... cute for 15 sad for 24

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Normal Girl

oh my the poor girl. talk about taking the whole : you don't see yourself clearly..." thing to the ninth degree!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Flashbacks

oh my that was sad :(

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Welcome to Forks

edward seems like he has started to win over the family and friends. and he seems to be putting cracks in the walls bella has put up. she had a kinda good day!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella's Story

glad to see that everyone cared enough to tell edward upfront. some might see this as overstepping their bounds but it really is for bella's best intrest. this way if he could not deal he could walk away now. bella and edward will both be in really deep once she is ready to tell him everything. if he walked away then she would probably never recover.

glad to see that edward is man enought o stay.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed

yay she got a kiss,and she went from kinda ok to having the best birthday in years and feeling 'secure and happy' that sounds like progress to me.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Pizza and Beer

first make out session! woohoo! hopefully she won't freak out thinking she did anything wrong

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay

so glad that she did not have a panic attack, i was waiting for it

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble

om boy bella is gonna die of embarassment when she faces alice and jasper. i hope that edward is there to stand up for her

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Girl Talk

oh boy you would think that her bestest best friends would know that was pushing too far too fast hope bella doesn't have a set back with this one

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bella's Song

yay even bella is starting to see the changes!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!

so cute how everybody knows everything! it is like there is a bella info hotline! just shows how much she means to everybody

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide

yay she is seeing that she can do it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother

what does he mean 'I wish that were true." ? what is edward thinking he is gonna do to hurt her?!?! he better watch it or he is gonna get his ass handed to him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is

well it looks like liz and ted are on to bella and tried to 'talk some sence' into edward they both know it is a hard road they are on and i hope everybody allows them to travel it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Longest Night

yay she lost her v-card! and most importantly she has realized she wants to get better!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal

i can not believe that edward is an early finisher! hehehe. i wonder if the birth control won't work thing is foreshadowing to something?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Our Holiday

so glad that bella seems to be dealing with things better. happy that e & j & a & em all stood up to bitch rose. too funny how em blabbed about the baby!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Making Plans

talking of the future! so sweet. glad to see that bella is doing so well. if i am correct she has gained like 20 pounds! that is awesome

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: My Worst Nightmare

so glad that everyone is getting along. bella's reaction to charlie on adate was too funny. charlie putting a time limit and rule to the movein is hilarious

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Surprises

well at least she is staying in jail. the only down side now is that bella said that she has bad flashbacks/nightmares after these hearings. and witht the baby...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Nightmare

the story is wonderful but i am so sorry that this is what you know. thankfully with how you have written this it seems that you have delt better with what happened. i only pray that you have found whatever peace you can with the situation and have a safe and happy life now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Little House

wow that was a heavy chapter! i am glad that one was saved for after work and not durring, you brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Only Waiting for This Moment

loved the wedding, everybody crying thinking that have come so far and they would never see the day

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue: Two Years Later...

wow that was awesome! thank you so much for putting yourself out there and writting this story. the story was wonderful and it means even more that you have obvious indepth knowledge of the issues discussed, and you wrote for us anyway. i can only hope you have found your happy ending as well.



Author's Response:

I can't believe i didn't see this review earlier! Sorry it took me 3 months to get back! Anyways, thank you for  reviewing!

Summary:

Hate is a passionate emotion.  It can drive people to do things they never thought would do.  Hermione and Draco's hatred collides and explodes into hot, steamy passion.  Our entry for the Birds & Bees Writing Challenge.

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Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2769 Read Count: 2197
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Impassioned One Shot

well that is just not fair! you can't string us along like that and then stop!

i am adding this story to my favorites in the hopes that you will continue it here.

hot angry sex! yummy!



Author's Response:

LOL we started writing it.. I think we got up to chapter 6... (non of those 6 ended have been posted) then we had to stop as we were building too many things for the website... we will go back to it.. as we were enjoying it.. but honestly I have no clue when that will be.. I have a rule you see I like to write 5 - 10 chapters of a story to get the feeling of it before posting so you can make changes before you get too far into it. I do believe this chapter was chapter 13 or something like that in the out line.

So I am glad you liked it.. and we do hope to continue it..

thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Impassioned One Shot

Thanks dor letting me know. I kinda guessed when I saw the 'posted' date. I do hope you guys get to finish it I love your work!

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47776
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Mockingbird

Yay she is going! And abby seems to have just opened her heart and let bella in. They are gonna be such a good little family. So cute together. Now all we need is for tanya to od or get locked up for good to keep her outta the picture. So bad I know

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

i started reading this on ffn way way back and decided it was time to reread and finish it. so excited!

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Freedom

love the letter and the fact that it is framed and mounted in a place of honor in their home

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Illumination

hot damn! mike's gone with a good ass kicking to send him off, the letter was sent and now the reply....!!

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Venom

love how eddie has split himself into him and ec. signs of definate drama ahead...

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Daddy

poor eddie! to the outside his world seems pretty awesome on the inside his world is just like everyone else's fucked up in it's own way. and that poor baby girl!

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Tequila

holy shit they are gonna meet! and they have finally moved on to the phone...

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Okhotnichya

the tour has started eddie is hyped to meet bella. finally asked for a pic wonder what he will think? heehee sucks about abby but she has granda e and grandpa c to love her while eddie's away.

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Threshold

What a gong show! And with all of this poor eddie is expected to keep going as usual?! No wonder he is reaching out to bella she is his sounding board anda true friend

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Justice

He got her! Thank goodness! Time for them to meet I wonder what eddie and alice have cooked up?

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Infatuation

Oh so romantic! Eddie is a darling but what will bella think of velvet?

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Velvet

Bella likes him as a whole! Both edward and velvet. These two are just so right for eachother but alas life isn't always sunshine *nd roses. And soon eddie will have to move on to the next town..

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Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Breathing

Wow already with the declarations of love! What will they do about eddie leaving? Will she go with?