Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yay the permission has been granted! too funny that you made jasper puke! hopefully bella and edward's first date will be wonderful, she really needs it.

congrats on the baby! hope all goes well and you have an easy time of it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

too funny that she didn't even realize it was a date. glad to see rose is trying to deal with her shit, too bad emmy decided now was a good time to ask vicky out. i wonder if alice is gonna tell him about rose? or will rose seek out em first?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

that was one hell of a first by themselves date! not sure how eddie is gonna top it.

the kiss and bite was too funny. i wonder what bella is gonna find when she googles kissing?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

poor bella! and the rest of them are just along for the messed up ride! and with having semi-normal lives this is some pretty fucked up shit!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well thatwas not really what i was expecting from rose but it fits and em's thought on resentment for him not knowing makes prfect sence.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well i hope emmy is able to pul himself out of this rut. he better be using his 2 weeks to actually think this all over. he knows he loves rose now he just needs to forgive her grieve and move on.

so glad bella and charlie had a daddy daughter day - they are so important.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i see panic attacks and nighttime call to liz in bella's future. but hey dealing with this shit is not gonna be easy. i am proud of em for breaking things off with vicky. it was just more drama and un needed stuff for him to deal with. i just hope she doesn't turn into   'a woman scorned' because em doesn't need that either.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well it seems like bella is opening up more and becoming more comfortable with her new life, friends and family.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

is this vicky being all psyco? or is it someone new? glad to see rose and em are working on things. still wonder what's up with yorkie though.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315695
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God

that's right b you tell him!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun

to good. love the PSA on wrapping it up! lol

looks like eddie-boy needs to find himself a chalenge...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me

luckily for me i have onlyever had a jasper- like man down below! he doesn't need to breath either and always knows just what to do! never had any complaints!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth

you are so right em would totally be freaked by any male contact. i guess that's why rose uses jasper and edward to get her rocks off. she'd be lucky to get the 'let's do this but don't touch my junk or i will end you' talk from poor emmy.

but i still love me some emmett!

i do not think either one of them really knows what they are getting into with this bet! but i'm sure you'll take them for a hell of a wild ride finding out!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy

gotta love it when a girl knows what she wants and takes it. love it even more when you leave him wondering what the fuck just happened with his mouth hanging open wishing for more! at least he had the presence of mind to put it back in his pants before she left him there.

mmmmm....sexy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone

jake is fuck hot and i so would love to lick something off of him. but sounds like it is time to move along back to the main event.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Closer

you go girl! show him who is in control, any guy would be tripping over himself to get a piece of that.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life

your shower scene was hot. and not just the tounge to clit action but doing it while there are other people around. hawt!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat

again thank you for your words of wisdom and caution on 69. lol

are you  gonna let them fuck soon? cause the playing is fun but i think they will both implode if they wait much longer for the main event.

and... you still haven't told us what happened at the end of year party that b can not remember. my guess is he took care of her while she was messed up but no tickling of the cooch. he probably stopped her, cause deep down he is not only a good lay but a good guy. lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations

yay they finally had sex and fuck was that raw and hot! i think eddie is starting to feel that maybe b is awesome and not just another girl.

again love the psa on condoms! so glad i don't have to worry about those things anymore! now it is just with my teenagers! oh god going to have a panic attack now!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets

ok first things first. what the fuck is going on with jasper and alice? they both seem way too over sensitive about eachother. are they doing anything? wanting to do something? hate eachother with a passion? come on! i am happy to see that bella can see something there and is going to stay away from jasper for a while.

next loving the 'playing'on the rides that was going on.

but jake?!? and what the hell kind of girlfriend gives out afree pass to 'get things out of your system' to their boyfriend??? i mean am i just an over bearing, possessive bitch? cause i would never! he wants me, he got me, and he better stay with just me! i do not share! but maybe that is just me?

the jelousy is gonna be awesome though. and can't wait for eddie to remind bella the bet is still on durring the 'date' and bella said they would be exclusive for the rest of the time. heehee she can't do anything or forefit on the car and the bet!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist

can't do the biting, tried that once and he didn't like it. but i do so it's all good.

well hot up against a tree sex with biting and blissfull orgasms what more could a person expect from a night at the school fair?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Add it Up

wow poor bella, and i know she would be pissed thinking it is pity but it's not. she just should not have to deal with that kinda crap. no kid should have to feel bad about having people meet or see their parents. no kid should have to be ashamed by or embaressed by the ones who gave them life and should love them and hold them above everything. unfortunately parents suck sometimes and kids get the brunt of it.

but b is a strong woman and will rise above it and move past the bullshit.

glad to see that eddie was able to help pull the spot light off of bella for at least a little while. still more proof that he is a good guy under it all.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - End Credits

wow that was truely awesome and completely out of left field for both of them. wonder where they will take this from here? what will everyone else think?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything

ok what the hell was eddie boy thinking driving away on her AGAIN!?! he saw that it hurt her before so what the fuck? he better have been going out for coffee or something and the note slipped under the bed!

daddy c and momma e, is that new? wonder what eddie is gonna think of that? maybe player daddy c is ready to settle down? and what will momma e do to set right the fuckery of this littlw cullen boys string of fucks? oh she's gonna have to bitch slap the boys! get em' in line and acting like gentlemen. heehee.

and finally we see that alice and jasper are really together and i guess in love. can't wait to see how that all happened and why they kept it quiet.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

wow can't even believe it took them that long to come together. but the way people see you can certainly put you in a rut and make you feel you have to be/ act a certain way

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

hope all went well in the real life department.

man eddie is seriously screwed. i mean with his head shoved so far up his own ass how will he ever be able to even find bella to make things right?

i don't think bella is quite as far gone with the de river nile because she knows she's screwed and feeling way too much she has just decided it is easier to push it all down and have someone (jake) lick her... um... her wounds i mean! man get your mind outta the gutter. oh wait never mind we all loved it so much more when you think in the gutter and bring us all down to your level! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

well looks like they are ready to admit a few things...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

well he may not know that it is love but he has realized that it is definately more than just lust. he he is obviously a little more than in 'like' with her. and it seems that she is willing to find out where this is going.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

so cute 'it's me and you against the world'

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella just found out she's pregnant after a one night stand. Edward is enthralled by this woman who is carrying his child, but Bella has a dark past. Will she be able to let it go and give Edward the chance he deserves? AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57790 Read Count: 19425
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

well i wonder if she is gonna go looking for eddie? or will they just happen to bump into eachother?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Babies and Nightmares

poor bella! how far along was she? was that when she ended it with chris or did she stay longer after she lost the baby?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Boogeyman's Coming

wow that is some scary shit poor bella

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Angela

he killed her family framed her mom and then stole bella when she was 11! holy fuck! how long was bella with him before she got away?

what is eddie gonna do to keep her safe?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Don't Ever Leave Me

well we now know the family members from eddie's side. alice is her usual self, nuff said ther i wonder when we will meet the rest of the cullens?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: An Unexpected Invitation

well it is time to meet the cullens...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Lemon Meringue Pie

i really hope that this was not bellas goodbye. it is so sweet that bella thought of giving the baby to rose, never gonna happen but still a very touching thought.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Imperfect Ending

oh shit she thinks eddie is working for chris?!?!? see this is why communication is so important.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Surprise, Surprise

well at least she got the message to eddie about chris. so he knows she is not going of her own free will, and he can try to look for her.

poor bella right back into the nightmare.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Captured

i hope that bella gets found brfore too long so they can start her detox and hopefully the baby will not have lasting side effects from the drugs. and i hope the baby is not born addicted, that shit is so fucked up and sad.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Waiting

well it's great that the cullen tribe showed up to help but why weren't they all there from the start? ok let's go find bella and the baby!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Great Escape

ok you're right that baby thing is just ....odd. but if there are any baby spankers or diaper wearers out there no hate here we all have our thing and as long as it is consentual it is all good.

who did she call? eddie? alice? someone else?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Stranger to the Rescue

yay she called eddie! and seriously how could alice be so stupid as to forget where she is?!?! it is a wonder that eddie didn't smack her or toss her out a window. but all's well for now and bella and eddie are speeding towards eachother.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Reunited

well bella and the baby and the rest of the tribe are safe ... for now. i wonder where they are all heading to? and i get eddie taking off with bella but everyone else? wow tham are some understanding bosses! but hey it's ff, right. lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Broken Togetherness

eddie still needs a good smack upside his head! bad stuff happened being an asshole to the victim will not make that go away ! dumb ass!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: It's a Beautiful Baby

glad to see rose, alice and daddy c all gave eddie a hard time about being a dickhead.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Bittersweet

well shit that was not nice at all! you left us hangin on so many things! how's em? how's rose? are they alive? hanging on by a thread? how's bella? the baby? what will chris do to eddie? will anyone else come home? fuck i'm off to find out!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Sullen Solace

well my vote doesn't count since the story is posted as complete, but i would have said to write it as the voices in your head tell you to. i mean it is your story we are all just along for the ride. and what a ride this one has been!

i can not even believe that you killed off emmy! that is so unfair and i am mad at you right now, but i'll get over it. i guess....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Inducing Pain

i know you're already complete on this one but it would be awesome if rose found out she was pregnant, like a last gift from em. i know fluffy angst, heehee.

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Beauty In The Breakdown

rose is going through some major shit right now but the baby should help. she can be the momma baby em needs while they wait for bella to wake up and recover.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Letting Go

yay i was right and you did make rose pregers! once she can calm down a little with her loss of em this will be the perfect thing to help her move forward. she has to be strong for the baby.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Awakening

yay rose found her peace, the new baby is born, eddie and bella are married and living their hea with baby em. life is good.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ten Years Later

well they all found their hea. i am still kinda mad about killing off big emmy but life goes on.

thank you for sharing your story with me. :)

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tempt

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35963
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

well that was a hot little tease of things to come

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

well, that sure was an exciting, and interesting meeting. yummy

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

yeah bella, that'll show him! and make all of your problems go away.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

that right bella listen to charlie, daddy knows best.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

awww. that's why everybody had that 'look' when they were dancing.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

they are going on a date! time for eddie to shine. alice and bella are bonding, rose and em had the baby, and the family is seeing that there is something there between bella and edward. life is good.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

so cute how everyone was all over emmy to try to protect bella's honor. i wonder what eddie is gonna think of bella being a virgin?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

well that was fun.now they have to get through the family meeting, wonder what that's about? the fight? how are they gonna explain that? and poor angela what's gonna happen there?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

funny how you read so many stories with a character a certain way and it floors you when they are ooc. never saw that comming from angela. glad to see all is out in the open now, but it makes me wonder who saw them in the prologe?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

well i wonder what eddie's deal is with babies? and who the hell walked in on them?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

so eddie can't have babies? that is easy enough to get around.

poor bella it always takes an emergency to see the truth of what's really important, some times it comes too late though...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

yay it was a hallusination! they are gonna be able to move forward and find their happily ever after.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

the the voodoo sex powers win on both sides!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

see bella all is good when you stay and give him a chance. wonder if eddie ever told her he had a crush on her for years?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue

glad to see em helped me with my does she know... question from last chapter.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped

too funny that it was emmy bear that needed the snip snip! he is the perfect person for it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?

so sweet! loved the story, thank you for writting!

Summary: Past Featured Story

beaches

Returning to her hometown after college, Bella is thrilled to be reunited with her friends Alice and Jordan. What she doesn’t expect is the undeniable attraction that she feels for Jordan’s husband Edward. When lines blur, friendships are tested. ExB, All Human, Rated M for language, adult situations and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66851 Read Count: 13509
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Blast from the Past

well this is gonna be a sneaky one isn't it?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: So Happy

well looks like these two are gonna be fast friends. and at least bells knows she is on a very slippery slope.



Author's Response:

She is on a VERY slippery slope!!  Glad you're liking it so far!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Just Below the Surface

well looks like bella could use some building up and eddie boy seems like just the man to do it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Revelations

and it begins...

bella is so screwed it is not even funny. the right thing to do would be tomove out NOW, but hey where's the fun in that right? and if jordan is stupid enough to throw eddie away she deserves it. and poor eddie needs someone to mend his broken heart *wink wink*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Realization

being the best 'guy' friend is not always what it is cracked up to be is it edward? not when you dress her how you want her and then have to send her to the arms of another man. at least bella is still trying to be a good friend to both edward and jordan and not really thinking in terms of hrself.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Second Chances

remember eddie, can't have your cake and eat it too...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: New Digs, New Day

well it looks like bella is trying to stay nuetral and realizes that wanting edward is wrong. she is trying to fight it, eddie not so much. or maybe not at all...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: More Revelations

well poor eddie is gonna need a shoulder to cry on and something to take his mind off of everything at home. hmmm, i wonder who he will turn to? bella do you have any ideas?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Uninvited

wouldn't you just know it? eddie is now free but bella is not.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Possession

what are you gonna do bella? time to take a step back and think long and hard

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Instinct

wow looks like eddie is finnaly making his move. i wonder what the storm will bring?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to leave all these reviews!!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!!  :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Wrath

well jude is gone now and looks like these two are gonna be able to move forwrd now. i am pretty sure the storm will be scary and bella is gonna wanna snuggle close to edward for comfort and protection....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Calm

they have been waiting a long time for 'next week'glad to see they are moving forward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: New Beginnings

so sweet to do all of that...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unstoppable

yay they have finnaly made it to eachother completely



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to leave so many reviews!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Playful Existence

oohh... what's he gonna do?!?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Forever

well the bracelette was a nice new kick on the promise ring. love the idea.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Life Anew

i would have prefered to stay home for sexy-times and snuggling. but i don't have a rose and aliice to make me go. lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

can't believe she freaked like that over not getting a ring. too funny. glad that everything worked out in the end and they all got their happily ever after.

thank you for writting.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story!

Cotton Dawn Longing by vixen1836 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

In the early hours of dawn, a husband finally returns to his newly-wed wife. After two weeks of longing, only cotton separates them now. Prompted one-shot written to celebrate Ninapolitan's birthday. Happy Birthday, Nina! E/B. AH/AU. RATED M. BPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2341 Read Count: 914
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i decided to go back and find a few oldies but goodies to read today. very hot and sweet.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie:)

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

episode_text

Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77001
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Semibreve

so we now have the story behind alice and what dream vision bella fit into. bella is trying to play things low key and eddie is gonna have to turn things up. i wonder who will crack first?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Motif

wow they finally made it to at least partial sex and she has lowered the wall and admitted she loves him. but will she open herself up to the fact, the possibility that he loves her too?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Brace

so that is the riley story. what an asshole!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Treble-clef

that wouls be amazing to just hear the music and write the words. can't wait to see what eddie thinks!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Semiquaver

oh eddie sometimes it is fun to work with your honey. besides it is not like you will be working with her 9-5 everyday....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Breve

oh these 2 are cute. heehee wow even cigar smoker came in to clap for the song! must be a doozie

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Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Minim

Aww so cute ! I wonder what else happened between bella and riley? A touch obsessive or what? And what did alice see that everyone knows about? A mysterious woman in eddie's future...?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Crotchet

Wow talk about both being on the very same but very different trains of thought! Still wondering about the alice thing. Did she tell ed he would meet his ausie soulmate in forks?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Stave

ooooo who is jess dating? she is hiding something...

bella and eddie are still fighting it i wonder who will crack first and how long till they do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Alla Breve

that was a shit way to find out about riley and vic. and angela is right she needs closure.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Octave Clef

Heehee too funny that they are both wanting the same thing- to be together and they both feel that to get it they need different things - finish with the song for ed and keep the song going for bella