Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77001
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Sharp

So rose wants em huh? I wonder if em wants rose too? Heehee maybe a few double dates are in the cards? That would be awkward! And bella is well on her way to getting ed a gig! He is gonna be stoked!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Barline

He was a hit! The plan worked flawlessly! And bella has definately realized how far she has fallen but how will ed react to her running out and freaking out?!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Quaver

aww drunk eddie almost made himself known to bella. and sober bella is a smart girl for not allowing anything to happen while he was drunk. heehee can't wait to see eddie in the morning!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bracket

well eddie has got a plan and it sounds like a good one. also sounds like a date. heehee.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Brevis

poor eddie! he just can not seem to get it out!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Demisemiquaver

so easy for bella to get the wrong idea when you look at everything together. but she really needs to stop and think of when ed and rose would have had time to even be together besides on set. i wonder how long until eddie finds out where she went? he is gonna go crazy until he does....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Hemidemisemiquaver

oh poor bella ed should have just spit it out when he had the chance instead of rambling on and on. and eddie!?! poor guy is losing his mind and that message is so not gonna help.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Rest

bella is home with charlie and will have some time to take a breather. ed knows where she is thanks to mike - that was sneeky and sweet by the way. if all these 2 are gonna do for the next few day is leave messages and texts ed should say something!!! doesn't have to be i love you not rose but something to put her mind back on the right track. and yeah she doesn't have voice mail but she does have texting!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hyphen

well miss b looks like she is trying to grow and move forward, very insightful for a teenager. she is trying not to make the same mistake twice...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Tilde

i really hope eddie gets to call bella tonight this shit needs to be delt with! pulling my hair out at these two right now!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Apostrophe

eddie just can't get a break can he? it would be awesome if bella could play the girl in ed's new movie. maybe the director will meet her once ed and bell get their shit together, and director man will be all she's perfect! cause it sounds like she would be. lol

charlie and elaine are too cute!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Asterisk

i can't even believe rose did that!! i think em has a thing for rose too and she may have just shot that out the window. maybe losing her chance with em will be the wake up call she needs. now rose is gonna have to tell bella that it was a setup or bella will not believe ed.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Underscore

the new movie is a definate. bella is oing away to the cabin, a perfect plsace to have the big talk. almost there boys and girls ... almost there...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Em Dash

damn it!!! em really wasn't helping, he kept interupting eddie. he was trying to help but sooo not! lol i wonder if em is gonna punch ed for peeping on bella?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Caret

oh this is just getting rediculous! bella is running away because she wants him and doesn't want to be hurt anymore, ed is running after her only to be shot down continuously, and em is not sure if ed is crazy and stalking her!

*palms face while shaking head*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Exposition

well now we are getting somewhere! but bella thinks this is just a bootie call or something, she doesn't want him to say things that will hurt later when they get back to real life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Overture

well at least eddie realized what was going on and stopped it. now he just has to find a way to prove that he loves her and wants her. then they can move forward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Transposition

wow bella really is drawing a lot of similarities between her time with riley and her time with ed. i wonder if rose is gonna go hide away with em for the next 2 days? still not sure what's up with them. with her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well so far things are good they talked about riley and rose and have things kinda set too bad when they get home bella will see the real pictures...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Interlude

silly bella she should stop and think that he was all for going all the way until he asked her if she was proected and she said no. that was when he started pulling things back. glad she is taking the time to make out on the couch definately a great pastime at any age.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Rhythm

another misunderstanding delt with bella really seems to be getting better at believing that ed loves her and no one else. i wonder how that will hold when she sees the real pictures? almost time to head back to real life. ed really needs to open up and tell her the limitations and expectations of what his real life entails.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Coda

oh this is gonna be bad. still kinda wondering about em and rose, is there something going on there or does rose just wanna start it with him? i can only hope that when and if rose gets together with em he helps to ground her and bring her back towards reality and away from the tricks and schemes of holywood.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Scale

i am glad to se that ed is starting to stand up for himself and his life. also happy to see that kate is forcing bella to see that riley doesn't deserve her pining away for him or the right to have every other guy in bella's life compared to him and his fuckery. time for our lovebirds to meet and reconnect.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Andante

aww these two are so cute! good to see they are still trying to talk about things they will really need that. i wonder if rose will be even more sorry now that she knows bella is his girlfriend and not just a fangirl? maybe she will realize peoples real lives are being fucked with, and that shit is just not cool.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Verismo

by the time these two finally get neked with a condom it is gonna be fast hard and uncontrolable. i'm thinking up against a wall, or on a couch, or on the floor. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Tablature

poor bella by eddie trying to make things perfect and by going to 'shower' all of the time he is making her overthink things. these 2 need to sit and have a chat about everything!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow! You are amazing. Reviewing each chapter like that! I am blown away. Thank you. I wanted to respond when you asked questions in your reviews, but I thought they would be somewhat answered as you moved towards the end...I'm working on Chapter 38 now. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, it means a lot, and it was a nice refresher to my story, reading how you interpreted each chapter!

 

Thanks....see you again sooon!

 

Luv BBxx

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303477
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

looks like renee may have taken a few too many bitchy pills today.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews so far. I have enjoyed reading them.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well hello....! that sure was an interesting meeting



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well i think work is about to get a hell of a lot more fun!



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i wonder is it time to get going? or time to get off? hmmm...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow you can't tell a boy that kinda stuff b, they just drool and daydream...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well that was fun! nothing like a little 'get together' with a few friends

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

bunnies have nothing on these guys. it should be 'fucking like e-b-j-a'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ah but emmy 'judge not lest ye be judged'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

well that sure would have been a sight to see on the dance floor!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i wonder if em and rose have decided to stop judging?

'let he who has not sinned cast the first stone'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

narrow minded people drive me batty, i can not think of anything that would turn me away from one of my kids.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i still can not even fathom turning one of my kidlets away let alone telling them i regret them and all of that other horrible stuff. glad to see that em and rose are seeing things clearer now. the only ones who should care about what goes on in someone's bedroom is the ones in that room. * unless they are breaking the law*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well at least there was a happy home cumming. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well that was awkward, what is up with creepy alex?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oooo... now momma esme is on the case and she sounds like she means business

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

time to let the shit hit the fan...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow renee slfish much?! as a parent you always put your kids first. you stand back and be their biggest supporter and chear the loudest at all of their sucesses.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

looks like renee is not quite ready to accept this whole thing but at least the other parents have come to terms.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

well now looks like they are all still greatly enjoying the relationship. i wonder how early in the morning they have to wake up in the hopes of getting to work on time? heehee!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

yay renee is on thier side! now we just have to get through japer's parents wonder how that will go...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well how are they gonna have wild foursome loveey sexy times with reneeand charlie in the house? will bella ever get her rocks off? poor girl needs release, they've been teasing her all day!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

just when everything is looking up in walks another problem... creepy alex.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

yay for bad ass bella. bringin' the smack down on alex's ass! but... something tells me wehave not seen the last of alex....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

hot sexin'in the office on the desk no less! what would daddy c say?!?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i knew that fucker would be back. i wonder if jasper is ok.did he write the note or did alex?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

ok not that i'm complaining but how did alex die? i jus thought the boys knocked him out...



Author's Response:

Bella stabbed him with the knife while they were rolling around on the ground.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

well i guess that explains how alex died.

i am holding out hope that jasper's parents are cool about everything... crosses fingers*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

how weird would that be? the parents of 2 members of an four-way being in a four-way themselves?!? would that make bella and jasper some kind of messed up step brother and step sister? wow my head hurts



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

oh i wonder what the boys are cookin' up?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well duh, of course they will say yes... right?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well this is one big happy family

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

uh oh i wonder if mike and ty will hit first ask question later?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

well looks like it's gonna be a happy chritmas. i wonder how em and rose will take the news?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

wow once ebja started it has snowballed!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

aww christmas....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

what did they do? paying for a resort wedding?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

ooo... harleys

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

definately help get rid of the holiday stresses. wow!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

well i can see her point on what people would think

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

still gotta have some one on one time...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

society will never accept the relationship these 4 have, it is sad but true

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

well between all of the foursomes going on here forks is in for a sexual awakening

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

"ummm... never we just expanded?"

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

glad to see that ben and ang are ok with everything. ang is right forks is about to get very interesting!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

well at least they are all slowly finding acceptance



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

well lauren is gone and life seems to be going good for our little family

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

wow, they are doing so well, things are going good for all of them... i wonder what will happen next

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

looks like things are winding down. glad to see they are all on the way to their HEA.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

well that would have been one hell of an interesting plane trip.

*editing note you said the 'twelve of us' made our way off of the plane it should be sixteen.

b-e-j-a    ch-r-p-char     es-car-w-cat     r-em-g-k



Author's Response:

thank you:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

don't know what sam's issue is that sounded hot and it's not like e & j were going at it. it was just an average foursome. i thought all guys loved multiples...



Author's Response:

lol, I think it was the fact that he was under the impression that E and B were together and J and A were. Then he saw E  and A humping like bunnies and J and B going at it....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

is this a small resort or what? and what about other people? seems eam is the only one to always walk in when he shouldn't! heehee



Author's Response:

lol, it's a small resort:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

well they should all know that there will be 'dirt' to be had on each group of 4, these guys are insatiable.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

things are going great for all of them. iit is wonderful to see and the wedding is comming!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

yay the wedding was beautiful and perfect for them.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

well that was a shitty way to end off! get us all excited about the baby, and then this!? what happened to alice? will bella still be open to their relationship or  will she freak out even more? and what about the sex!?! how long until our fav four start going at it like mad again? off to start the sequel....



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for all the reviews:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a Bella/Emmett story. It's all human and a little OOC. Its AU/AH. Rated M for a reason. Bella and Alice work at a fancy hotel in down town Seattle. Alice is dating Jasper and living with Bella. Emmett is a pro football player and they meet at a party at the hotel. They have fun but will a long distance romance ensue or will there be other challenges along the road.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115126 Read Count: 12393
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Life is Beautiful

ok i googled the freemont troll and seriously that shit is awesome! so cool! the bella and emmie sexy times are great it just sucks that he had to go home! but they will be together again soon enough.... i hope.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Men in Tight Pants

sexy emmie the football player! *swoon*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: And All That Jazz

date night is going well i wonder where they are headin her place or his hotel? let's go see where the evening will lead....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: When Life Hands You Lemons

aww em had to leave! that has got to be the worst part of dating a pro anything player! i like having hubbie here every night when i go to bed and every morning when i wake up! only a month-ish till emmie is back!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 43,200 Minutes and Counting

yay emmie is coming back and he is staying for a week. the concert would have been great!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 720+ Hours and Counting

aww that was so cute! the reunion, the wanna be my girlfriend?, the yeah he's my boyfriend! we are finally official! yay!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Heirloom

em is gonna ask charlie for bella's hand!?!?!? wow boy definately goes after what he wants. and something tells me he'll get it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Emmettland is Candyland

that is sounding like a pretty kick ass kind of date to me. all that's missing is the sexy times!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Two Can Play That Game

and we found the sexy times! yay perfect date movies, snuggling, yummy cake, food fight, shower, hot shower sex and more snuggling!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Inner Monologue

awwwwwwww emmie is so sweet and in love!he is gonna give up his nfl carreer and move too seatle for bella! that is so sweet.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Two Months Too Long

what the hell is up with james? is he hoping em will beat the shit outta him so he can sue the big rich nfl player? or is he just a creeper? time for a romantic vay-cay!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 8 Letters and 3 Syllables

em was right it was a perfect setting and a perfect moment to say those 3 little words! so sweet my teeth hurt, lol!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: This Year's Love

these two are both gonna have such a hard time going back to real life and being apart again.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 'Tis The Season

i can't believe em didn't earn bonus points with charlie for being an nfl player! oh well my guess is em asking for bella's hand earned him all the points he needed! maybe he added in a few super bowl tickets on the side....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Permission, Presents and New Beginnings

is he gonna do it at the super bowl? that would be awesome! something in the endzone after he leads the bears to a super bowl win. he could drop down on one knee and ask her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Stranger, Junior and the Game

going to the super bowl! yay emmie!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Devious Intentions

oh boy eddie is plotting to bring down the happy couple! and he is working with james! ewwwww

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Whole Nine Yards

aww emmie is like the sweetest guy there is1 best thing about fanfic, we can write them how we wish they were! heehee!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Touch Down

And em wins the super bowl! But he definately went out with a hell of a bang! Everyone who matter now knows about the engagement, an eddie even seemed a little sorry for his interference seeing how happy em and bella are...