Penname: tracygoodey1 [Contact] Real name: tracy goodey
Member Since: 26 Jan 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

[Report This]






Reviews by tracygoodey1
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 308748
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

oh my goodness who are these mad people? how many girls come through this place?  going by felixs comments loads phase one is bad enough cant begin to imagine what phase two is all about

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

sorry thought i had reviewed already (reviews on ff for 1-4), stepped up her training lets call it torture can it get any worse,  she holds on to her will shouting it out at the end, she may have to play into there hands and say what they want to hear for the sake of her sanity, cant wait for more fab writing

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

i kinda got goose bumps just looking at the picture, what a life she has gotten herself and bella into rennee broke down faster than bella but bella wasnt electrocuted for hours on end, somewhere in the back of her mind must be knowledge of bella and her old life (god i hope so) can you be forced to forget so quickly? great writing abet scary but we all know thats what you do best thanks

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

water torture, god damn it these peoplr are mad even if felix tries to help,  and what of charlie? he was susposed to visit after 4 weeks and now we find out that bella has been tied to a bed and tortured  for 5, tomorow i'll read the preview thanks 

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

it's come to something bad when kindness is considered a couple of nuts and a few sips of water, felix if he likes bella that much maybe he should try to break bella out or is aro that powerful that is not an option? dear god what has that maniac got planned for bella? maybe felix and  edward will worl together in the future? great stuff ladies i'll look out for the teaser

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

the poor girl dosent know which way is up anymore but thats the point isn't it to  destroy her to make her compliant, another well written chapter i have masses of questions which i'm sure will be answered, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

ok inside his mind is a dark, dark  place, edward is his son i was wondering how he was involved, he wants to make her pregnant then marry her off to his son!!!!  jesus thats just twisted

i got my email alert in fact i have never stopped getting my email alerts



Author's Response:

Father Aro says, "That's because you are one of the chosen ones....."    

 

 

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

god it makes you cringe what aro does to her he scrubbed her skin raw, is he like that to everybody or just bella cause he likes her, the women are like robots, this story is addictive more pleasse

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

oh now edward is in the mix, its goung to get even more complicated from here on in, her mind is begining to come back to her danny fishkins, all is not lost, where is charlie?  bet he is tracking her down or trying to, more please but when you can we all have busy lives i get that thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

thanks ladies another cracking chapter, things are so beyond twisted the mindset of the people like edward truly scary, edward gets punished for his last lady getting the hell away (sensible girl) but bella will be his undoing he's already questioning the practises of aro the father and taking bella punishment for speaking which in it self is crazy, more please tracy

glad you had a good trip and enjoyed it

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

hey there,  what a nightmare position to put bella in,  at least the connection is there between bella and edward, aro is a sick bastard now he wants her on fertility drugs????? where is renee i wonder? i like to think bella will get more of her flashbacks and begin to question whats going on, great job ladies i am staying for the ride thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

great chapter,  cant wait for more,  carlisle and esme dont seem tobe into it as much as the others?? what drugs will she be put on??? thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

great chapter,  her memory is coming back to her so all is not lost, 'father' is as frealy as ever and glad that bella started to realise the bath thing was not right, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

oh esme is getting thoughts that the great alll powerful aro is not all good but that amount of brainwashing is hard to combat, great chapter, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

her mother it must have been renne although she is not known by that now, and yeah definatly aro is a man who is so very, very cruel and damn scary to boot, love reading this story thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

oh superb chapter, they cant be that far then if felix is in a bar, charlie is on the case, knew he had to be looking, loving this story thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

aro in the bushes spying now is he the mad sicko, if aro heard about jasper he will be in trouble for nothing, good god that poor girl bleeding from the whip and smashed bones pure torture, the rules in this place get more and more bizzare,  another intensen chapter thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 ĖEyes Upon Us

oh the place they live has more strange rules, the maternity wing there has to be more than what we all expect, and what is a chosen? great chapter and love this story, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

creeptastic chapter, god thankgod he dosent have sex with these poor girls but poking them apart upon threat of death uggggg, i assume this is what happened to tanya, but bella can not be brainwashed she is remembering more and more but how will she ever escape? look forward to more and staying tuned for the training school publishing details, thanks tracy 

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

agreed he need to be in the nut house, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

oh what does it say?  must read on thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

great chapter, more and more people are begining to realise aro is way out of control, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

oh my god phil is just as bad, thanks for the great chapter tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

completly agree carlisle history is horribly sad, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

missing what has aro done to her?????????? thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

great chapter thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

god the man is truly a mental job so sick, somebody help bella please!!!!!!! thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

superb chapter, thanks tracy

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner fs

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

FanMadeBanner4

michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

FanMadeBanner6

The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

Photobucket


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 56597
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

intresting story, i saw the sequel on the recommended and thought it sounded cool, liking it so far, still trying to work out edwards motivation, reading on to find out more

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

oh this is so cool, this story is fun with quite long chapters the ff ones must be massive if all 3 are one over there, anyway the family are having a great day out, but what will occur in the alcove? this plan of edward i suspect is not going to work he'll never want to say goodbye

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?

glad it's not over there's lots more to explore, bella got her man now she needs to face her father, edward got his girl now he need to learn not to mess up, fab stuff

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?

glad it's not over there's lots more to explore, bella got her man now she needs to face her father, edward got his girl now he need to learn not to mess up, fab stuff

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!

charlie obviously has a major blow out at bella & edward, i can see it now and charlie banning boyfriends never works, cant wait to see feisty bella standing up for her man, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.

charlie might not be happy but he should put more trust into his daughters choice and trust her to make good choices for herself, and i think  it's safe to say both bella & edwards both enjoyed the afternoons activities, great chapter thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - Lalalalalala

was that a near marriage proposal i read by edward? a great chapter please charlie is playing with fire pushing bella towards jacob and being openly hostile to edward, bella and edward had such a greatr day (minus the looking at alices bobs thing) but out and about, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - Lalalalalala

was that a near marriage proposal i read by edward? a great chapter please charlie is playing with fire pushing bella towards jacob and being openly hostile to edward, bella and edward had such a greatr day (minus the looking at alices bobs thing) but out and about, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - Lalalalalala

was that a near marriage proposal i read by edward? a great chapter please charlie is playing with fire pushing bella towards jacob and being openly hostile to edward, bella and edward had such a greatr day (minus the looking at alices bobs thing) but out and about, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

jesus charlie is an idiot can he not see what he is doing, does he not think how awkard this is for jake to be constantly turned down,  he is a bit dense also, now on to bath time yummy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?

so, what now charlie is stalking them?  charlie is heading for a daughter less life, oh and bella the rebel running off to the cullen house cant say i blame her, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

charlie brought that on himself i dont blame bella,  charlies  stunt with the speeding ticket proves that and the severity of the grounding was ott, point is wil he be a stubbon man and refuse to admit he  was wrong?  

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.

i think it's about time bella got some peace and happiness in her life, let her savour and enjoy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.

i think esme & carlisle are sensible parents realising how teenagers are and working with it, and in the garden what a risk  ha ha

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?

life is good for bella right now aside from dickhead jake

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - For the love of God!

moving in together wow but they are so good together, i bet charlie is regretting his crap now

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - That's why I need you.

what a way to lose her virginity, edward was veryy attentive to her, but what was she thinking, she cant have wanted icecream that much, i hope bella is fine

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.

well she woke up eventually, thankgod and charlie and edward have patched up their differences this is so much better for bella, great chapter with only one more to go

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

a fab story with loads of moments that were great, bellas plan sounds great i'll move on to the sequel to find out more thanks tracy

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1489622
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

fab chapter, but running wont help them with the micro chip thingie in victoria, carlisle has shut the school his pride and joy i'm sure he'll want james to pay for that, and on a happy note bella and edwards have declared their love for each other and she can go about fixing her friendship with jacob, got your a/n this site is excellent thanks for sorting it i found it when you moved volturi order here, love your writing

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

i am  for one glad this site works as well as it does i was so ready for another update and i was not dissapointed this is another fab chapter in a  fab story,  and it seems after dippy lauren let james out there was trouble on all sides,   aro was also led astray possibly by somebody on the inside but who? more please to answer all questions

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

oh the plot getts thicker and thicker and i love it

on another note several more fics have  been pulled by ff (not sure if you know or not) more violating the tos shit really good ones like yours anyway i keep telling people to post here and read here, apparantly there is a group calling themselves the liberate union and they deliberatly target twilight  fic they dont like and flame them complain to ff and get the story removed can you believe it? well there is a petition for ff to update the ratings system i signed it but i will always come back to the coffee shop library

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

oh my god, jesus f***ing christ  the madman is back, bella is trapped, edward is on his own, alice and rose on their way back, victoria in the bed, ladies dont leave us like this for long please, frightingly good chapter

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

jesus ladies, seriously cant take the stress, he got them both, and he's killed laurent, what will heidi do? help the girls or help james? what about aro with carlisle is he good? think so as he told carlisle he has been duped also how will edward find them now? oh please ladies more

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

another fine chapter, heidi well ripped aro off but at least he's on thew right team as it were, god poor edward sounded empty at the end, i'm praying they can get bella and victoria back, maybe heidi will help the girls now that james has killed laurent, more please 

ps joined club java and it sounds great



Author's Response:

Girl.. I think you joined before ME even.. Thank you so much for you support and help with this... We are so thankful to have such wonderful readers. 

I am also thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter...MORE TO COME!!

 

Thanks again

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

oh the stress of bella  being gone!!!! oh  the tables are turning on the madman james, he no longer has laurent, he no  longer has the gps, he has a multitude of people after him who can now find him, i wonder if he even realises the phone is gone? (with his adrenaline rush)  i know he is dangerous but he cant win surely not, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

oh my good god that mad bastard (not sure if i'm allowed to type the stronger words i want to call him so bastard it is ) is a sick ****** you get the idea he's begining to lose the plot and make mistakes no phone he dosen't care so who punched him out?  bella and vicky did he not tie them too well and they are fighting? aro people got there quicker are they involved in the rescue? edward and gang are there? more please and i hope that  cage never comes off

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

ohhh go bella, smack him on the head hard, poor victoria she is so scared and bella seems to realise she is in charge of helping that duo, so pleased the others got there quickly to help, two chapters left cant quite believe it's the end, i think its a great idea to  make this a book and then publish and great to have bella before the school, what will happen to the school? what will happen to carlisle and esme? emmettt and rose as they live there? and i would love to hear what aro has in store for james, just one thing does he get to wear the cock cage for ever more please say yes thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

i'm so sad and so excited at the same time sad this is almost finished i will re read as you are leaving it up thankyou for that and excited that you are publishing as an original work i cant wait to purchase that, i would lve to read the teaser how do i do that? or shall i just wait for the news section of twcs, this chapter superbly written  as usual is is bad of me to enjoy his emmense suffering now and his  his lifelong suffering he better get used to the feeling of his ass being used and abused i dont think so as he deserves it,  it's everything he would have done to bella and victoria, james really wasnt very smart when he pissed off every body at the school with his treatment of bella and aro  who sounds like a man who can inflict a hell of a lot of pain thanks ladies best wishes tracy  



Author's Response:

hmmm... watch this space I guess... not sure when we will put it up.. we need to get it edited first.. but thanks for the support.. you have been with us for a very long time.. we love you!!!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

fabulous finish ladies fabulous finish, it's amazing what has occured whilst this story has been being created,   from finding you on ff,  following you to the blog,  to following you moving here as you   created  this magnificent website & library FOR WHICH I AM SO THANKFULL , loved the ending you put together for this and cant wait for your original training school to be published through your publishing house i will be one of the first to buy, thanks for an exciting ride ladies it is much appriciated, tracy

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

TMS

This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

FanMadeBanner

This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

FanMadeBanner2

michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

FanMadeBanner5


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 43717
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - The Wedding

great start to the sequel, edward drinking nothing good ever comes of too much alcohol, but they seem so happy now,

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - The Day After

something tells me this isnt the last we have seen of jane, other than that life is good and lovin the lemons

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - The Big News

charlie and sue are cool i love how playful bella and edward are together great stuff

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - Party Time

love the putdown the party was a complete sucess yipee, bella on wine not like her ummmm

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy

oh my god what a present i dont think he was expecting that, what will he do?

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift

that was cool for two people experimenting, liked it

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - A Change of Plans

poor alice she just wants to get married, edward and bella getting married in a few short weeks

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy

blimy jasper seriously a very  bad move

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest

there's going to be some sort of massive fight, i bet but will bellas mum make it to the wedding day?

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

phil is well creepy, and it's sad that her mum chose wrong, i love that at the moment all is going well in the run up to the wedding that was organised in super fast time, alice is hiding her sadness well,

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom

this wedding is not going to be disaster  free, love the sex fantastic

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - The Proposition

so much could go wrong with this plan, keeping my fingers crossed cause phil well out of order,  invasion of privacy and those photos he should never have see n

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - The Truth

so now renn ee knows, the plan worked even if bella set it in motion early, phil is out of the picture for good (i hope) loved edward reasurances and the bath scene,

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - Forgiveness

they almost gave in it wiould have been to easy too, i'm glad it all worked out with renee i'm also a fan of the hea, moving swiftly on to the big day

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - The Big Day

wow what a wedding they love each other so much i'm almost jealous, the notes they passed so sweet, loved this chapter a lot, and yay jasper is back, honeymoon   yes please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws

oh lord so much going on i must admit i can see each side of the argument but being older and having kids i thinhk i would also be upset like esme of my kids ditched out of her own wedding, it would not have hurt them to stay, but then again i've never had that all consuming love that you describe them as having so yeah still undecided, and now alice is married in vegas no less esme is going to pitch a fit she felt cheated already, as for all that honeymoon sex all i can say is well i dont quite know what to say but they wont ever forget will they!!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch17 - Back to Reality

nice lunch time for the newlwed cullens

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

cool

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

go bella defend your man

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20 - Repercussions

good shes gone

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21 - Closure

good result

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

well bella proved she can handle herself and does so, edward can be rest assured she does not crave any attention other than his, as for how the ended the end of the evening it's a very personal choice that type of sex depending on who you are with and how much you trust them not to hurt you,  but bella did not seem to enjoy it so much as edward, i wonder if they will again? more please thanks tracy

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3521]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1601519
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

oh fab this a great site set up by tso/footrosa and its easy to review, i love this story so would probably follow you any time you move about, edward memory is coming back to him and will hope fully ring some alarm bells before he speaks to carlisle considering the dream he has now had, also good to see edward attitude to bella and how he realises the error of his ways and honestly loves her i'm praying thats enough for him to protect her always  



Author's Response:

Edward is about to get a rude awakening.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

oh my what is carlisle the nut job up to i think the guests are the ones he was on the phone to but whatever plan he is cooking up with them it cant be good especially for bella as he has some bad plans for her anyway, i'm glad the girls had a nice day, fab stuff cant wait for more

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

oh my lord what does he have to do to save her?,  carlisle knew all along edward would not agree its his way of manilupating everything and everybody to get what he wants bella, maybe edward could tell her to act in whatever plan he thinks of, more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

ok ok i'm lowering my pitchfork, but i did have my heart in my mouth at the beginning shouting at edward dont do it just tell her, then massive relief when he did and bella understood i so hope carlisle does not ask to look at her bottom as proof or something equally sick and just accepts the wrists as proof, he needs his brothers to make a plan, how much longer are nasty and nastier  visiting,  i think their only escape will be to kill him off, oh god more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

oh the garden is her salvation, her respite from her dreadful life before she had the boys to focus on, carlisle truly is a evil man he did that to esme, bella is choosing writing, i'm glad demetri and marcus have gone, but what of edward i hop now they are gone he can be more like bellas edward and not carlisle edward

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

he stole her out of class, o m g what a total *******  edward has no idea where she is so who on earth is at the door?  carlisle come to claim what he sees as his?  or demetri dad came to get bella so to return her not willing to risk upsetting carlisle, please more soon, fantastic chapter

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

thank the lord that bella was not touched in that hotel room, iy was touch and go for a while, as for carlisle good riddance  there really was no other way for the family to escape him other than death, i'm also curious what did esme do with the ashes? you can imagine the relief she must feel to finally be free of his torture, i so hope bella and edward get sorted will the wedding happen? what does she mean by set me free? more please love this story

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

wow he really let her go, edward loved her that much that he gave her what she was due and let her move out, it sounds like bella has had a rough couple of years as she pieces her life back together, bet edward has not had an easy ride either, i was so pleased that edward was her date, and loved hearing that all the other cullens are doing well and the ladies came into their own especially esme,

yes, yes i would definatly buy this as a novel, fab idea

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

oh my goodness were at the end, i cant quite believe it, what a ride this has been i only picked up this story after the ff debarcle after seeing so many rec and boy was i glad i chased you all over the internet and finally landed here which i love bty, love to bella she got her happy ending, her life is as she wants it no forcing of anything and because edward was brave enough to let her go she came back willingly and that love and trust and freedom is what they are basing their lives on, love that the rest of the family are all happy as well rose and emmett with their two beautiful children, alice and jasper with their  beautiful daughter, and then there is esme married again how brave is she to put her faith in another man after carlisle but her bravery paid off and she now gets to experience a good normal marriage as do all her boys and their wives, a superb ending and a big thankyou for this fantastic story i have enjoyed reading, thanks tracy i will be keeping an eye out for your next project

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19053
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow jasper has changed big time and emmett does he already treat rosalie correctly in private and put on the show for carlisle? their attitude is appalling pooor esme living with it for so long, big time changes for the cullen boys coming soon

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

that poor girl what on earth must she be thinking? james needs to shot already i'm glad the cullen boys  eventually take care of that, at least jasper recgonises his feelings and i'm pleased to see him back alice in the face of carlisle wanting to give her back

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh poor poor alice she  ended up having a crap childhood as well, shes so broken she'll settle for crumbs of kindness and expect worse,

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

how long for jasper attitude to begin to soften i wonder?  soon i think

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

the poor girl really dosent know which way is up after everything cant say i'd blame her for trying to run either just sheer blind panic made her do it, wonder when realisation will drop in on jasper and he works out her terror is now of his making and changes into the jasper from tpw, alice is already warming to him despite her brain telling her its dangerous they both change so much, more please thanks fantastic chapter  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 41845
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Broken

intriguing start

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home

promising all the main characters are introduced  

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice

cool chapter edward and bella interacting and it was kind of him to offer the lift as technically they did not know each other

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out

a few more nuggets of info popping up, so just what is bellas story? and i think i agree with jasper edward likes her

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee

well edward noticed things are not quite right with bella and yet he askes her on a date anyway, fab stuff  also whats up with the fore arm rubbing bella is trying to sooth something?  

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Firsts

bella has quite a few issues poor girl buit edward isnt too phased he wants to go on a a second date