a great super chapter,  it made me laugh alices line et tu bella, also the sentimental six in the bedroom super fluffy,  but honestly who dosent want to be spoken to like that by their husband (almost makes me wish i wasn't single but don't think i'd be that lucky) the baby shower was hilarious being english i dont know about them we just dont do that here, did you make those games up? or do you guys play them for real i'm still giggling at the thought of those three handsome men drinking from babies bottles, and yipee bean is about to make an appearance my moneys on boy for rose/emmett girl for bella/edward but its your story and i love it so thanks, cant wait to read your emmett transformation fic

another super chapter,  that i just managed to read and review before i left for work not waiting all day again (only left 10 mins late lol) emmett talking to lily was just lovely, and jasper is thinking of becoming a parent this family is growing and growing quick,  poor bella feeling like crap but bed rest is not so bad lots of us have had to put up with it, she has lots of people to rally round  and help, and edward undressing her he truly is a devoted husband, loved the bit at the end of course alice would not forgo shopping, she'll just switch to online loved bella words heaven help in deed lol, thanks for another super chapter

 a super, super chapter, i love the painting of their bodies and photos idea, bella gets her lovin and peanut reacts, not such good news with her blood pressure spiking but its like she said you have to do anything and everything to avoid a premature birth i had like 6 weeks of bed rest when pregnant with my triplets for precautions and yes its a drag when you look forward to a toilet trip just so you can get out of bed, but once again how brilliant is her husband organising the body cast and the photo shoot which sounds beautiful and very intimate bringing everything to her, loving this story,

ok no more heartfail well maybe a little,  i'm grateful my system cant do that twice in a row, a super fine chapter, i love the name nathan (my nephew has the same name) although i never knew thats what it meant i cant imagine what distress edward felt when he heard bella  flatline and the rest of the family, i'm  super pleased she's ok, as victoria helps them realise this is the begining of a drama less life just as they both want  well as much as it can be with a baby but you know what i mean her and edwards bonding was precious with the baby, as always loved it super chapter

and anyway what do you  mean this wonderful story only has 4 more chapters to go, you mean it dosent go on for ever!   lol i appriciate every story has a natural close but i will miss my up dates of this one very much so   

a chapter named run in caps no less had me worried before i even started reading, panic when he popped up in the kitchen  and then relief when he began to calm under bellas words and then panic again when he went off again, so thank god he had a lucid moment and they  got permission   to get the baby out and then severe panic when i read the line esme was bloodied and swollen and bella sobbed no esme no, catching breath untill i read she put her thumb up,  a dramatic chapter but at least it brings closure to the whole spermdoner father lurking  in the shadows thing, i would think with his very obvious display of severe mental health issues he will be sectioned and kept out of society for as while, cant wait for the last chapter (big sigh) fantasticly well writen chapter   thanks tracy

i think for the first time ever in a review i'm stumped for words, back in 5  you've left  nothing  outstanding, left no question unanswered, left no part of this most wonderful story untold, i've been left with a nice big satisfied smile on my face (even though its finished) knowing that bella and edward got there in the end, that they have a good happy marriage, the rest of the family are sorted and happy and most importantly everybody has peace and harmony in their lives,  thankyou for writing such a wonderful story that really has evoked every emotion going in me at one point or another it been a great ride shall we say

good luck with encore just read your a/n so my other question is answered, (i think)  is encore coming here?, ohh yeah  yes yipee no waiting for validation  cant wait thanks tracy

way to meet again, now they all get to work together, i hope that not going to be awkward i wonder id the boys planned on seeing the girls again or they just said that? more please

so thats how bella and alice got together, rose and emmett seem a bit reserved and obviously not ok with how bella lives her life, carlisle sounds ok bet he thinks they are  just two regular couples though

if both sets of parents think like rose and emmett then they wont be very pleased about the relationship either, as its a full on think now will they keep it hidden so well?

being together is pushing all their boundries, jasper and edward enjoying each other now, mike and tyler turned out to be gay no wonder the girld had poot first times with them

the trip is already going bad and they haven't told them all the news yet, get the impression rose is the favourite daughter,

i wonder how thanksgiving will go with edward parents? another first in the bedroom both boys together thats leaving a lasting image in my brain lol

hope kates not an unkind sister think they've had enough of that for a while, and alex should keep his eyes to himself, and another first in the bedroom both boys together, is the couples thing abandoned now? does bella still feel more for edward and alice for jasper?

how rich are the cullens in this? carlisle and esme are superb, the fact that charlie is a mess hoping that means he's sorry but he should have said something sooner

some goodnews on the parent front

lots of guests for xmas, i glad thgat her mum came round the plans thing was a really special thing to do

oh i bet that dick of a husband is hitting her,

the jacob story was not cool i'm glad he's out of the picture, i suspect fun & games at the office party

well he deserved nothing less, i hope bella will be ok, the family will enjoy having kate home

so all the news is now known by all the parents who are all now on board, including how they all met which is a shock i'm sure, and charlotte and renee knowing each other was not expecting that,  as for rennee and charlottee knowing each other i wonder where they will take it? if anywhere 

marriage proposals!!!! another surprise but a good one i'm sure they will say yes they are so in love and lust

those boys will be put straight as soon as they ask i hope,  lauren got her come uppence at last sarky cow, every body seems really happy now, on to the planning of a double wedding

these relationships get more and more complicated every time, how do they all expect it to work out when they all live away? will they all move to forks and be like the couples that every body gossips about? or will they just not care or is it morew of a temporary thing like experementing?  more please  thanks

hi sorry also meant to say would like to read the outakes if you decide to put them up thanks

oh my everybody is coupled and quadrupled up, they all had a great xmas, i wonder if any hardware would come out to play, grteat stuff

a little girls alone time, i like it

i think ben and ang will roll with it, they are all back in forks  now, a few encounters like the woman from the beach perhaps? we know the town is not too tolerent

their dinner went well and angela and ben accepted it no probs but being old friends helped i think, i get how bella is still freaked by her attack but she has  great support in her lovers, thanks tracy

loved those office goings on, bella in charge and they got rid of the skank lauren, all in a days work and there was a nice evening set up at home, all the sex they have unbelievable, lol

yay jasper is a cullen and they all will be soon, love those sexy times, both the boys at once  not sure if i need to say oww or ahhh lol

day one of island fun they will be exhausted before they even get to the big day at this rate lol, roll on the wedding the tension is papable, a better foursome i never heard about, thanks tracy

good on sam getting his own back,

the wedding was lovely as was their vows, and they had some fun on their wedding night lol

firstly you have got me hooked even with all the fab sex there is a bigger message coming through, accept people even those a little different, secondly whar are you playing at ending the story on such a cliffie!!!!! lol moving swifthy on to the sequel, thanks tracy

i loving this site all my favourite stories keep popping up, i leave this note to any readers like me who skim reviews to get a idea if a story is being enjoyed or not, my advise is READ THIS STORY IT IS AN AMAZING TALE i wont give away any plot but you wont be dissapointed it is fabulously well written and keeps you on the edge of your seat,

to a cullen wannabe i read this on twilighted, reviewed there, and loved it thanks

wow catmasters these chapters are very detailed and a great length, poor bella what's her story? i must read on to find out,  i'm enjoying this it's been a while since i read a vamp story, lately ah fics have been on my reading list,   hope you dont mind questions but i'm english and i always get in a muddle with the ages college=? age is college the equillevent of going to university in england we do that at 18 normally after a levels, fab thanks

another fab chapter, bella is active in the church how is that going to conflict with edward view of no soul or is he a little different here? edward is gradually getting used to her scent but is she in a position where she would welcome  his friendship? edward is increasingly thinking of her and not a lot else, must read more

hey there, another fine chapter, edward sure has got it bad for bella,  i'm thinking that's what alice and jasper refer to alice probably would call it love but edward has not thought of it himself yet, he's just trying to process a lot of emotions that feel odd to him, loved the family meeting that did make me giggle,

super chapter, i wonder what the google search will reveal?  if anything, i'm also wondering if she's tried suicide before why does she always cuffs on? edward sure is keeping a close eye on her his resolve to not let her dictate or change  his schedule diddn't last long now he's camped outside  her house every night and passing up partys,

their first  meeting went well, bella was not so nervous and it was her who initiated the hand contact, i bet it was edward bella spoke about on the porch, why does she believe edward would hate her? now what are we going to do about jessica she's making poor bellas nightmares worse,  if edwards scary vampire face dosen't get her to back off let's send in rose cause she really is scary lol, fab stuff

another fab chapter they were having fun in denali, edward is all stressed about bella but i doubted he would be anything else, what has caused her to be on the floor? a relapse? must read on i'm invested in this story now and am begining to worry about what happens

bella is really poorly isnt she? with the chapter title i think probably yes  theres only so much our bodies can cope with before it says enough i need a break and bellas has had enough

i'm so pleased bella is doing better,  not completly but more like  she was when they met and dear esme i diddn't think she would be able to not help for long, i hope this party is good for bella rather than a source of stress, and did we get a little glimse of the prebroken bella? a girl who's witty and resourceful and sticks to what she says? super chapter

oh revelations, revelations bella had them sussed and once they began to talk it was easy for her to make the vampire conclusion, but then    decisions, decisions whats bella going to do? she obviously stays but will she continue to be friends? i dont think she would talk thats just not who she is,  bella is  determined to do something that is important to her is it the trial? and thats why she asked if the voltouri could be put off, must read more brill thanks

oh catmaster you cheeky author fancy having the handsome edward running all over town commando style **begins daydreaming** what was i doing oh yeah review time, they had a nice lunch together joking around, and did bella drink the coffee edward brought her in class?  another nasty panic attack that edward was good at getting bella to calm from, then edward in full on angst mode after he put down the monster  at least carlisle can reason with him and he has a big family to help, now what's going to happen when bella comes over? fab stuff thanks

another jampacked chapter, this story is superb, sad but so very well written, ok i might join a edwards is an idiot club but not a bella is pissing me off club she has her reasons for her behaviour and they are solid and valid, edwards reasoning is a bit iffy  i mean jasper makes sense when they talk on their run but he can't see it,  always the negative, how close are we to dec & the trial?  just ignore if answer in the next chapter which i cant wait for, thanks, sorry meant to say yes i did love  the mike thing peeing his pants, provokes much more humiliation over a longer time span so therefore a better punishment (should have said before)

ps i like twilighted  i am a member and dont find the site a pain like some people are saying i like it and hope you get on ok posting over there

big sigh of relief bella is ok she was gone for 24 hours but she came home safe, poor edward was beside himself with worry and carlisle is asking him to tune in to her emotions and he still does not think of her as his mate, loved the meadow scene i'm pleased edward went for it and knocked on the door, bella had had her time to analize and disect everything from  saturday night it was time to talk, i cant believe bella is a murderer she must have been forced to do something, i think hearing about edward past helped bella to think shes not undeserving as she thinks edward deserves a life and yet his past has similar links to hers (the murder thing) they both spoke some truths and drew comfort from being together again, love how bella slept on his shoulder this is probably another first for her, great chapter more please

ok i suspose if i was being rational i should know that the cullens would not let edward leave but i was worried for a bit, the jasper thing really dosent bother her is it because she has had a lot worse done to her so even though its vampires to bella its not bad at all? once again bella shows how amazing she is by leaving her doors open and once again trusting,  i'm glad they talked about the nightmares and edward knows he is not hurting her one less thing for him to stress about, excellent i love this story

hey there as always great chapter, dear edward even having the conversation with carlisle he cant quite accept it but he gets there in the end, it's a sad necessary that they are apart as they obviously  both feel a void despite the stilted phone conversations,

questions i wouold ask are

edward, you're  planing  on telling  bella you and her are mated, how  will you tell her and where?

what life/relationship do you plan on offering bella now you realise you cannot be parted?

how will you deal with bellas issues and her screwed take on relationships due to her history with the increasing intimacy you will face?

thanks tracy

oh my lord another super chapter, it is so hard to hear poor bella practically break apart at the seams and edward become more frantic as time passes as they are seperated, her breakdown at the hotel,  i wanted to cry but she does have people who care about her and they came to help,  with her part in the trial done for now she is on her way back to the cullens for some desperatly needed t.l.c,   i think the last thing edward will worry about immediatly is what to tell bella she'll be in such a state with the no eating and no sleeping he'll just want her to get a little better before he begins to talk about things he discussed with his brothers, i wont ask for more i'll just patiently wait, as you got so much on my best wishes to your mum for her recovery and your part in that home schooling thats a big undertaking thanks tracy