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Bio:
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin
ohhh exciting you decided to go with it, so sequel here we come, i'll put you on author alert so i dont miss it and say thankyou for jumping back in with this super cool story, off to the blog to look around, thanks again tracy
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373175
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess
wow a fantastic start, liking the concept of this story it all seems tied up she has to get married to a womaniser = bad marriage end of, but we all know you a cullen wannabe you'll have many plot twists and ideas that will keep us guessing and enjoying the story things we wont guess about and thats why i enjoy what you write, this reminds me of history class back in school (and thats going back a few years) when we had to learn all the kings and queens of england and who they married and which treatys or wars they made etc why am i even thinking of school thats mad lol
Author's Response:
Yeah...I hated studying it, but I'm loving writing it, even if it is a little more difficult to get into the right mindset. If I thought the 1940's were hard...the 1630's is like a mindtrip! LOL!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
superb stuff, is everybody going to know and bella and edward be the last to find out? imagine her face on the wedding day when tony from italy is stood there, the english royals seem to be a lovely family genuine, i liked how they relaxed protocols and just became friends, king charlie is not so nice but i believe his behaviour was probably fairly typical of the day, i hope she is allowed to bring angela with her to england, and i super glad we girls dont have to dress like that anymore what a pa lava, look forward to more thanks
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince
another fab chapter , prince edward dosen't seem to be as bad as the rumours, he listened to jacob and agreed to his conditions, i think angela recgonised the saying maybe as something bella now says having heard it in italy perhaps, poor angela she thought he was going to take her but i dont think that was even in his head at the time, wonder what's going on with jacob? is the king mad? ps lovin the banner for this story very cool
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles
another fine chapter at least her brother was able to help her fears and explain what kind of man edward is, realising that he is just as apphensive about the wedding, amazing isnt it that bella is the one with the brains and diplomocy(not saying jacob hasn't) she solves a lot of spains problems through jacob yet gets none of the credit being just a princess viewed as a bargaining chip like you say women were powerless, i'm lovin the slow burn makes everything worthwhile, satisfying when they get there you know,
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation
oh fantastic stuff, dear edward trying to catch a look at his future wife out the window, i love how he's still in love with his mystery girl from italy but fully prepared to do whats best for isabella including being disgusted by the kings behaviour and turning down jessica, i cant wait for the wedding when they both realise exactly who they are, i believe bella will have a good life in england the family are so very different to her own, thanks
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities
another fine chapter, bless alice trying to explain what was going to happen asnd she get's an audience for her wedding night!!!!! i'm pleased that angela gets to go to england with them, roll on wedding day
ps i joined club java it sounds cool
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles
oh it's so exciting, i was speed reading to get to the see each other faces bit, i loved it how romantic and unbelieveable, the two of them just stunned with the knowledge that they have found their true loves again where they least expected it (dont worry i went back and read properly) i hope the king still lets angela go now he's so angry, what did he think wwas improper? all the staring, fantastic stuff, cant wait for more
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss
a fantastic chapter and such a tasteful lemon, that was quite beautiful their first time together edward or a bella likes to say tony was very attentive which was probably an unusual thing back, then how odd to have the advisiors of the court to come in and observe, cant wait for more i wonder if her father will say goodbye? he dipped out of the reception sulking
ps you're posting schedule is fine for me
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans
bella is most obviously a highly inteligent queen and is very apprassed of the current political climate, she is going to go down a storm in england at least she has a forward thinking (for the time) husband, it's a shame her time is getting cut short with her family well her mother and brother, her father just seems to be a product of the time in which he lives which i suspose it was the norm for men to be chauvonists, bella is pleased to also have emmett going to england and he's a lord was not expecting that, wonder what they will get up to on the boat ha ha i dont need three guesses lol, fantastic chapter, more please
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage
fantastic chapter, they sure are enjoying married life, alice is having a baby i hope that goes ok that sort of thing was frought with problems back then, next stop england i wonder if everybody will be pleased to see the new queen? more please thanks
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore
what a stroke of good luck getting the estate given them to relax in, i'm sure they will be able to fill in the time with their new found activities, bella continues to amaze people introducing emmett the way she did was so very kind, it gives him a higher status in england i suspose, cant wait to see what they get up to next, great chapter thanks for posting as things such as rl keep us all busy, see you when you update next with no worries just when you can tracy
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment
ha ha ha nice joke in your a/n skip the reason this is nc17 ha ha, no thankyou you do them so well!! this was a lovely chapter, out in the open air on a picnic blanket that's dangerously romantic, cant wait for more and your posting is fine once a week is loads thanks ever so tracy
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen
as always a fantastic chapter, bella is going to have to face up to edward les than resectable past and other ladies that seem to have ideas above their station, but bella is smart enough to be able to out manouvre them without them knowing what bella is all about, i hope your little ones feel better soon thanks tracy
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty
loving these descriptions of their love making, sadly the call of duty is soon in their marriage but i'm sure they will copem, great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante
that is quite an honour for bella to be included in the meetings, they really don't do well seperated from eachother, as for the gossips they are so wrong, excellent chapter and hope your ankle heals soon, thanks tracy
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful
another superb chapter, poor isabella missing her edward but good news he's on his weay home but what does she have to tell him? i like that your rosalie is a good person but her friend tanya obviously is not, trouble is brewing there, love the trust carlisle places in her judgement, thanks tracy
ps have fun at the zoo
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra
fab chapter, gotta love firey alice who despite her station in life can still throw her drink in a bitches face, cant wait for emmett and rosalie to meet that is going to be a super mix, i hopoe they get that tanya thrown back to her ruined estate and she better stay there, thanks for posting this early when you was so busy tracy
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm
oh poor bella she is not so secure in her belief that edward is hers and hers alone i hope she voices these fears so edward can assure her that tanya is out and has been a while, she going to assume tthe worst and think he's with her, alice is now bedridden i hope her and her baby are going to be ok, speaking of babies and this throwing up bella has been doing is bella pregnant? hope so tyhat would put paid to tanya fantasies, off to the blog now to get a teaser, and i need to start breakaway it looks cool, thanks everso tracy
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath
another superb chapter, i'm glad bella was brave enough to speak to edward and say what was on her mind and that he assured her he is not going anywhere ever and especially not through her pregnancy, so tanya is gone but is that finished? a woman scorned and all that, off to the blog again to catch the teaser, thanks tracy
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished
another fab chapter, so lord emmett and lady rosalie met and hit it off that's so good, love your description of tanya a delusional harpy and she is banished from court, bella is pregnant and all is well within the court, lovin this story, thannks tracy
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
bella is really coming into her own suceeding with the envoys where others couldn't and this tanya business is maddening she is just nasty, but go bella fighting back, great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
great chapter, but murder tanya has way out of control, with all the court cleared and loads of guards i'm hoping they will be safe, love the ladies battle planning, thanks tracy
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises
great chapter, things are settled and they are happy the nasty tanya is gone but she has run so where is she? but what a lovely xmas surprise he brought her mum and brother over how special, thanks tracy
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings
great chapter, so there is more to the plot than just tanya and her jealousie, i look forward to more thanks tracy
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment
great chapter, i cant believe we are nearing the end of another one of your fantastic stories, loved this chapter at least the plotter is found and now they get to enjoy xmas, thanks tracy
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown
great chapter, like you said loads going on but lots of good things happening, lots to be happy about, jhope all goes well with the deliveries as that was a bit hit and miss back then, as for names that is a tricky one something modern but regal at the same time what about
amelia gabrielle
caroline andrew
spencer brandon
isobel phoebe
imogene nathan sorry its girl heavy but cant think of many boys names any how hope this helps thanks tracy
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice
great chapter and big sigh of relief that alice is ok after that touch and go delivery, good news for emmett and rosalie getting married, thanks tracy
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs
as always a great chapter, can't quite believe we are at the near end of yet another masterful creation from you, i'm so pleased the birth went well as tewins in that day and age was a recipe for disaster, glad all is well thanks tracy
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties
again a fantastic chapter, they are living a happy and contented life despite bucking the trends and doing a lot of the care themselves, great stuff thanks tracy
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
oh my i cried edward died of a heart attack! what an ending, they had 5 children together and many happy years together, bella out lived everybody except jacob, thankyou for another wonderful story tracy
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever
hey fab start, liking the sound of this, assassins huh intresting, but i'm sure letting aro in on his weakness was not a good idea does he mean his weakness is protecting women even from one of his own?
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play
has edward got some sort of mental illness? when you describe the monster is that like him having schizophrenia? or just so mad he's out of control, edward has lots of torture methods that was pure nasty but then he did mess with bella and that was evil, it's safe to say jacob is dead now,
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between
oh my, so many questions what the hell has esme done to make edward hate her? and carlisle dosen't know but he knows everything! edward has been bowled over by bella he's so confused, i mean she needs some protection from jacob rape, beatings so not good, is jacob dead yet? and lots more questions i'm sure you answer as we go on, and on that note off to read the next chapter, thanks
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again
oh my bella has evoked some very powerful emotions in edward and to a certain degree bella is touched by edward otherwise she would be scared by his touch, is carlisle going to throw a fit? more please
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon
so all the family except carlisle seem to have taken to bella real quick and see this connection between edward & bella, i wonder how much power does carlisle have with edward in charge? and i suspect bella knows too much for her just to leave any way,
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?
jacobs a f***ing mad man, i'm glad he's dead after hearing that tale of shocking horrorness, i'm sure edward wont think of her as broken and used as she thinks
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises
another superb chapter, bella sure evoked some strong emotions in edward and alice edward is now very proctective and alice loves her, jasper and edward must have looked a right sight covered in blood, but clever alice gets her porsche, i wonder how bella will feel in the morning?
PS the red ribbon means your story it was featured, blue means being featured now, (see shout out box)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fathers and Sons
jepers, carlisle managed to piss off all his family in one foul swoop, they have some severe fighting techniques but that is their business i suspose, so they have to be good at what they do! everybody is sticking together and backing edward, but what will bella think? and will she want to stay? bella seems quite taken with edward as she calls for him in her sleep, so i'm assuming she will, more please, great chapter, thanks tracy
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My List
great chapter they are just getting to know each other and that will take a bit of time, they have both got feelings for eachother, i hope bella stays with him, more please
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?
ohh the plot thickens, what secret is he holding on to that turned his mother into an alcoholic and made him hate james? we get a glimse into the nice side of edward like the trust fund stuff and the people he helps, loved the beginning with the pillow fight his family were so stunned he obviously does not have much fun but with his 'job' fun dosen't really come into the equation, i like carmen she is for him and bella and i think bella will be good for him, more please thanks
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle
jesus that a huge secret for edward to keep what was esme thinking sleeping with her brother in law and having a baby carlisle might be a lot of things but not loving esme was not one of them, he adores her even now, trouble is with secrets like this they have a way of being found out i can only imagine the damage when this comes out, edward and bella get closer and he realises he loves her they calm and help eachother, alice and jasper and emmett and rosalie both make their relationships work and are in the clan so i'm sure edward and bella can also, edward is working hard too keep his demon inside his other sexual encounters made it easy for the demon to rein bella is so different i hope it becomes easier to rein in to demon, great chapter thanks tracy also catching up on the outakes
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End
another superb chapter, now the secret is out i love carlisle reactions in saying that alice is still his daughter to him her dna is not making a difference, i know alice is shocked and hurt but i hope she forgives edward he was only trying to protect her, edward and bella seem to be getting on well even if she is firing up edward inner demon that is as long as he only drives 30 mph and no more lol, cant wait to see how they all deal with this i'm sure bella will be good for edward and help and comfort him, thanks tracy
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You
oh my alice has every right to be upset everything she every believed in is now different, i think she will come round her anger is just directed at the one person she loves and despite her words does trust, it's always easier to throw your anger at the one person you know deep down wont hurt you, as for edward his demon is fighting back i dont suspose edward is used to feeling things as he is now bella has opened him up to lots of new things and this alice situation is tearing him apart and trying to kill your employees dosen't help, i dont think he will hurt bella his love is stronger than the demon, cant wait to read more thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin
gtreat chapter, so edward did somewhat keep the monster at bay in bed with bella, but the best news alice has forgiven him and that means she is probably coming home, next bup whats going to happen at the ball? thanks tracy
Author's Response:
I can't tell you whats going to happen next!!! LOL. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son
oh my great chapter, that aro is a real nasty piece of work, ok i know the cullens are killers but they have love for the family and look out for one another, aro lets his daughter get reguarly beaten by the sound of it nasty nasty, jasper is like a mental super fighting man so where is he? and will edward make it to the batheroom in time? cant wait for more thanks tracy
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town
what a chapter, thank god bella is safe she headbutted that demetri and glad he did standing up for herself and it brought her some time for edward to get there, edward had quite a night of it didn't he getting them out of the ball then the idiots on the way home he is supremely skilled and bella saw and still loves and wants to be with him, so its all good more mysteries to answer what did esme know when they left the ball? and how do the voltouri know about the jacob stufff? i look forward to more of this great story thanks tracy
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home
great chapter, cant deny they are so good together, i hope this is a ligit hit and not one of carlisle games to get rid of bella, thanks tracy
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power
great chapter, is edward begining to feel differently about his family business? wow what a reunion they had lots of emotion there, thanks tracy
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home
aro's group is a goddamn mess i'm surprised they get anything done with all the inhouse fighting and scheaming, love how edward put carlisle in his place he needs to realise bella is not going anywhere, fantastic chapter, thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night
good god, a powerful chaper, demetri and felix are crazy taking on edward and the clan they barely made it out last time, love this story thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night
another powerful chapter, edward has a lot to deal with two scared children i hope things are ok for them, thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping
oh my god esme is the contact, how is the super observent carlisle not aware of this? the plot thickens, cant wait to read more, thanks tracy
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December
great stuff, the plan has to go wrong for them, i hope it does thanks tracy
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You
hey great chapter, nice to see bella and edward just on their own having fun thanks tracy
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares
great chapter, loved bella and edward carefree time, and its official demetri is an absolute nutter, thanks tracy
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells
jepers a fab chapter, i love this story and it's so exciting esme has done something right by her family her letters were very heartfelt despite her past behaviours, this rescue mission is dangerous i hope they all make it, they must all come home, cant wait to see edward reaction to bella's big pregnant belly, love it thanks tracy
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
reat stuff, love this story thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Sorry Im so late at replying. :-)
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make
oh no what is going to happen? fantastically well written chapter thanks tracy
Author's Response:
LOL i cant tell you what happens! Thanks so much for reviewing and I apologise that this is so late. :-)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places
Fantastic chapter, so much info and stuff going on, bella is pregnant, kate is trying to help, edward is a mess, and esme what is the woman on!!!! now she see's the error of her actions because of the piano reminding her edward was there all along, her alcohol induced madness i hope is gone long enough for her to help bring bella home and bring her home soon, loving this story very gritty, thanks tracy
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions
superb chapter, so much going on, how is edward and bella going to be now? can carlisle survive without esme? cant wait to read more of this great story, thanks tracy
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
oh wasn't expecting bella to have that in her past, thats nasty if jacob went on to do what i think he did, edward obviously feels quite comfortable with her at ease to sleep so well, and what does bella have in her cupboard that she thinks is not nice?
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
sexual tension much!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
well what a turn up for the books they're all into bdsm, this should be fun cause if the body shots are a taste of things to come it will be a hot ride
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
ok great chapter, bella has told her story jacob did not have a clue he's an idiot, bella is going to be pleasantly surprised that edward is like minded,
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
ohhh a whole world of opportunity just opened up for the two of them, bella family are shitty god pathetic excuse for parents
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
nice job with the scene, i'm glad edward is being sensible using jasper to hear him out, edward is the more experienced one i wonder what he has on his list? bella is going to be stoked her fantasy become forfilled in the shape of edward cullen
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
love that he phoned his mum for a recipie, is it me or is edward being a bit harsh on bella it's her first time should he not be a be more lenient or is that typical stuff for a first time to punish like that? poor bella was so upset at the end
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
i'm so pleased it was better for them both and that they both had such a enjoyable time, alice was cool with the advice, edward obviously has a good supportive family, wonder what bella is holding back about her family cuz edward already knows her dad is a drunk and her mum dosen't care, great chapter
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
great chapter and meeting the family has gone well so far, bring on the drama
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
bela and alice had a good talk, bella and edward seem to be getting a lot out of the playroom, great stuff
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
oh my those girls are in so much trouble, are they always punished as subs even when they are being normal boyfriend/girlfriend? rather than just have a row like the rest of us, i get how they are punished on dom/sub time but do the 'rules' apply 24/7 regardless of play? great stuff
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
they got matching collars/bracelets that was a nice gesture rather than only bella have a collar, i'm a little confused with the punishment thing edward says you wont be a sub all the time but yet he can punish behaviour as a sub anytime? if they are not in sub/dom role how come he can punish her as a sub? edward was good with the after care and bella accepted what he did to her, enjoying the story, more please
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
jeepers, bella is having enough trouble with her confidence with meeting the family without that crap rose is spouting, she is the insecure one maybe rose feels threatened by the fact that the family are so accepting, but what does she lose? nothing, edward relationships dont affect her so stay out of it! whats the tanya deal? a great chapter, more please
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
lots going on nice to see bella sticking up for herself with rosalie but what happened to her was very cruel, poor bella she was so insecure when edward left but the family stepped in and helped her, her flat sounds horrible i'm sure edward will help but where is angela? cant wait for the weekend
Author's Response:
thank you for the review - Angela - well, just wait and see...
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
i'm so relieved that it all worked out, bella punishment all over with now let the talking begin, edwards house sounds amazing he is never going to let bella move into that sad little flat, alice is so helpful and a good friend and nice to see bella and rose getting along, thanks for the sooner rather than later update more please
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
fantastic chapter, bella is begining to open up a bit and edward is giving her a bit of slack which is good as it's all so new for them, i cant believe angela ditched out on bella like that i thought they were good friends, i'm sure alice will have some good ideas for the flat but i'm sure edward is going to hate her living there, thanks
Author's Response:
all the action and the drama! thanks for reading
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
great chapter, bella seems to be understanding so much better now i think kate willl be a great friend to her, still think edward is going to pitch a fit when he sees her flat, but how will he handle it? cant wait for more
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
bloody hell even i was shouting she's only downstairs on a exercise bike what are you doing edward after the night before and the day they had had they had talked and everything was ok, he was the one to say exercise more, edward is sending more mixed messages that bella you are a sub but not when the collar is off but if i get cross i can then scream at you like a sub and demand you on your knees, then he left her just like that! and he said he would'nt but via a note what is he 15 yr old, edward needs to get a grip and quick or bella just might decide that it just not worth all the heartache, great story thanks tracy i'd love a emmett and rose outake, emmet is gorgeous,
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
superb chapter, so pleased they got their issues dealt with well some of them, love how they all sat down and helped bella and edward talk it out and shout it out lol, it's a good idea to sort out their relationship then go back to the d/s stuff, they seemed to enjoy the afternoon as they had lots and lots of lovin goin on lol, looking forward to the outakes thanks tracy
Author's Response:
thanks tracy - I really appreciate your opinion xoxo
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
oh great stuff, just love how they are getting on so well together, lots of sexy lovin with bella picking up her confidence to say what she likes and needs and after hearing what that god damn jake did thats good that she feels she can open up to edward, the girls are a good comfort for each other while the boys are away and when alice travels with them bella will have emmett and rose to rely on, read the outake with dr c and look forward to the rose and emmett one thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy - E & R outtake has been posted!!
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
thankgod for emmett and rosalie when bella was exploring the neighbourhood and then her weird neighbours who seem to want to set up some sex style threesome, yes most definately a danger magnet, i'm sure edward will try to talk her into moving in soon at least she is out of her place for the weekend, bellas new job sounds cool and its typical bella to not know the famous man who will be her boss, great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
oh lordy lordy those girls are in trouble now, the play party was not a good idea, they could of just gone out to a regular pub mind you that was trouble last time, are they in more trouble for going to the party or for not asking permission to go? great chapter thanks tracy
Author's Response:
hey there - they are in trouble because they should have asked them if they could go so that J & E could have phoned Garrett and let him know. thanks for the review!
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
another great chapter, the rules are confusing or is it just me, there not playing or in dom/sub mode but she still has to ask permission for things and if she gets cross he can give her time out, if they sort out their communication problem will a lot of stuff be solved? i totaly get why alice is upset she is that carol was nasty to jasper and i understand why alice wants to kill her, perhaps things will even out after the ceremony, thanks tracy
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
what a superb chapter, they seem really settled at so much more at ease with eachother in the playroom bella is really getting 'it' now her role i mean, and the commitment ceremony sounded just beautiful, now this creepy stalker neighbour business is worrying with all bella new found realisation of the importance of communication i hope she tells somebody soon if not edward then emmett, and yes i'm super intrested in a outake of alice and jasper fall out and make up, if their playroom time is as hot as edward and bellas was this chapter i'll enjoy reading that thanks tracy
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
great chapter, bloody hell edward get a grip, bella is already anxious to share sensitive/intimate things you, edward is making that so much more harder than it needs to be if he wants the dom title he needs to keep his own emotions in check and put bella first, he cant pick which parts of being a dom suit him edward expects bella to be a sub completly and edward needs to take his own advice, they were doing so well after that beautiful ceremony as well, bella had her epiphany with the words and i thought things would settle a bit, now bella is eyeing the front door , i think in general a sub's life is too confusing bella is always at sixes and sevens and is then in trouble, cant wait for more thanks tracy
Author's Response:
hey Tracy,
I told him to relax about it - knowing him, if she makes for the door, he'll tackle her like a linebacker! (OMG, Edward, I didn't mean it...RELAX!) Seriously - these characters!
thanks for the review, I look forward to them.
xoxo
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
great chapter, i think things have settled down now they have had their heart to heart and bella has realised the importance of her 'words' thanks tracy
Author's Response:
I hope so, they make me tired *winks*
xoxo
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
superb chapter, i really get a sence of the relationship settling down, little things are not blown way out of proportion by bella's stubbornness or her lack of speaking about problems and not by edwards temper, things are being resolved so much easier anbd quicker and that's good for both of them, so this james sounds well dodgy what is going on there? love this story cant wait to read what's going to happen now the news is out i hope she does not lose her job, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
thank you for the great refiew!
TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29 “P-pardon?” Bella felt faint. This is bad! This is really, really bad! Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’ Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk. Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you. It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow. Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office. She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents. Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl. My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head. What had she done? Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand. “y-yes?” she whispered. “Bella?” “Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
another great chapter, i do so enjoy reading this story, so the cat's out of the bag big time but so far not to bad, the cullens just did what every good family does and rallys round to help, and bella coped well, cant wait to hear all about their la weekend emmett is a hoot, bella and edward get some much needed alone time, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
thanks for the review tracy
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
oh superb chapter, lots of sexy fun lovin and lots of laughs, all is well with bella and edward although i hope edward gets bella to change her mind about xmas she wont leave him to sit in a place that has bad memories and with a father who is not all that good at being a father will she i hope not, bella is getting better at the whole chatting and listening thing so edward should talk to her, i love that she is moving in, it's time for that now they are an established couple, love this story and oh yes the toy (what a wonderful invention) i've seen them at love honey so if they are that good ummmmm thanks tracy
Author's Response:
thank you for your great review, tracy!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
great chapter, good god bella really went downhill in her worst week ever, her father is a .........well not quite sure how to describe him but father of the year award he will never win, ok after his latest stunt jim has gone up in the creepy stakes and teaming up with the bastard jake has got to be serious bad news for bella, just the way he spoke about her is unhinged, bella should just stay ay edwards and say sod the lease edward can pay it off and bella should accept for her own peace of mind, i'm hoping bella evens out now edward is home (is he back for the weekend or good?) and she is away from the jealous mona what a cow she turned out to be! look forward to more thanks tracy
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
great chapter, glad they got sorted in the end, their fallings out are resolved so much sooner now as they both become more involved and the relationship progresses, the one thing i dont get if edward is just as much as bella to blame for her being ill why is bella the only one getting a smack? and i agree with edward bella should not go back to that flat full stop, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
I would have smacked the shit out of him!! (so, I don't think I would be good sub material, but then again if it was Edward...Hmm)
thanks again tracy xoxo
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
oh superb chapter, god dont we all know living with a bloke is never easy but add in a d/s and it add all sorts of complications to the mix, i'm so glad alice and jasper are there to add a note of sensibility to the mix and help edward and bella navigate these murky waters, but lurking in the background is jacob and jim, jacob is invading her 'play' time and needs to be gone for good i get a bad feeling they are planning something not quite right bellas saving grace is that she does not have to return to the flat, loving this story and all its content thanks tracy
Author's Response: Tracy, you always have such great insight. Thank you so much for your review and your thoughts. :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
another great chapter, ok so i'm guessing jim creepy neighbour and james nasty sex fiend are one in the same, which is a little worrying as he and the mentally disturbed jacob know where edward and bella live, now bella where is your confidence i thought wearing the collar would help her this week, esme is crying happy tears she is too much of a beautiful person to do anything else, thanks tracy
Author's Response: clever girl!! loved the review
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
superb chapter, wonderfully long and detailed, the balloon ride was a great idea, must say it's good to read again and get back to this story, thanks tracy
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
great chapter thanks tracy
Author's Response:
thanks T!
Bella and Edward are happily engaged with their whole lives ahead of them. What happens when a tragedy strikes that will change them forever? AU, all human.
Categories: All Human
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Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86164 Read Count: 6795
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?
great opening chapter, lots of info on the family and who's who, saw this on featured stories and thought it loked good thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please
oh there is something not right with edward he realises that now, he made it through the party only to collapse, i hope he's going to be ok, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day
oh my what a sad chapter, it is unusual thing but young people do have strokes, god i hope he makes it, the whole family is distraught thanks tracy