Reviews by halconmia
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624810
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

He still has a bit to go, what was taught to him is so ingrained its going to take him a little bit to lose those habits.  The good thing is that he is recognizing it himself and correcting himself. 

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Damn Carlise is more obsessed with Bella then I thought!  Not good, not good at all!

Summary:

Bella is at home looking after her brother on halloween. Trick or treating doesn't go as planned when Seth goes up to the new neighbours creepy house..

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7996 Read Count: 1023
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 Jan 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was funny I hope you continue this.  Going to put it in my favorites just in case you do continue it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Lips of An Angel Banner

Edward and Bella were in love, but graduation from college and their new careers split them apart. It's been five years since their break up. They have each moved on with other people. Will a tragedy bring these soul mates back together? My entry for the Lyrical Melodrama Story Contest.  Inspired by Lips of an Angel by Hinder.

Rated M for mature themes and attempted sexual and physical abuse.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16577 Read Count: 6597
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 Jan 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Beautiful ending!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the ending :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Jenn

Frisson by The Antimatter Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14237
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Can I find chapter 5 somewhere?  It went from them arriving at Emmetts to the rules about keeping a human.  Great story by the way.

Macabre by LolaRose Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight; when the two worlds of good and evil began to co-mingle in the glowing hues of the ever fading sun. The onyx tendrils of night slowly fill Edward's soul. Black of night, crimson blood, light of day; what will be his decision? Cannon darkward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8539 Read Count: 640
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Metanoia

There is no chapter posted just the authors notes. Could you fix this so that we are able to read the last chapter.



Author's Response:

It is all fixed now, glad that you were anxious to read it though :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89851
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability

Wow that was intense.  My husband is pissed cause I have been reading this most of the day and refuse to get  off the computer. LOL.  Oh well only fair since he has his days of WOW non stop for hours at a time.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella

Wow what the hell! Did Bella misunderstand what was going on when she walked in on that woman or is Edward that much of an asshole.  Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Turbulent Affair

That was intense!  What was a mistake?  What she thought happened or him was he really intending to cheat but got caught?  What What?!  I want to know!  LOL so I guess I will keep reading.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares

Ok I will say this she need to quit leaning on Jacob so much if she is going to have a chance at reconciling with Edward.  Cause we all know that is what she wants.  I can't wait to see what comes next.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Nostalgic Nightmares

I can't wait to see what she meant at the end. She KISSED him lets hope she is not going to let them convince her not to give him another chance.  Its like when she is with him she starts thinking strait and then she gets taken from him again and she is confused  and conflicted.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Deception Unveiled

Oh shit Bella grew a pair!  Lets hope that its not to late and that Edward can forgive her for keeping her miscarriage from him.  I am really rooting for them to get back together and work all their issues out. 

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers

Wow that was hot hot hot!

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux

I know that Edward will be mad when he finds out about her keeping the pregnancy and the miscarriage from him but lets hope that they can work past it and be happy.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Desperate Devotion

She needs to just tell him already because the longer she puts it off the worse he is going to feel about her keeping it from him.  When they were apart and she was under the misconception that he had cheated its one thing but now that they are try to work things out she needs to come clean about everything.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: False Allies

There goes Bella just assuming again!  She needs to learn to ask strait out!  I hope he did not sleep with anyone else but four years is a long time and he could have finally just given up.  Evil Cliffie you left us at!  lol I look forward to the next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752678
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Pressure

Wow I can't believe Bella knowing how to shoot a gun is going to be used against her.  I mean ok fine she can shoot but she did not put her self in this hostage situtation and how is something she learned before any of this happend valid.  I mean its not like she learned to shoot because she knew she was going to be in a hostage situtation and wanted to be ready for it.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Gearing Up and Getting Off

Very hot chapter now on to the trial and lets see what that lawyer tries to pull to discredit Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

Very intresting, I wonder what will happen to Bella.  I don't see her embracing her dark side and I can see it is going to be almost impossible for this Edward to change.  Its so ingranined in him to be a monster and he feels no remorse for the things he has done or the people he has killed.  I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

I don't know what is up with this site but when I get to the last chapter posted all I get are the Authors notes but no chapter.  Do you have this story posted any where else so I can read it. 



Author's Response:

yup here you go, sorry about the last chapter :) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5723707/1/Irrevocable x

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

Wow that was a very intense chapter for both of them.  He is trying to hard to resist her but it seems like a wasted effort. 

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

Look forward to the next chapter.  Everyone is so evil here that I have to wonder if the girls are going to end up that way to?  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174117
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Latent Image

Poor Edward I felt so bad for him, but I get why Bella took off.  Its a lot for her to take in, I think she will be ok with it once she has a chance to think it through.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sharpness

That was so sweet of him, he is totally into her its not funny.  I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop I hope it won't be to unpleasant if it does.  I don't see him letting her get away from him lol!

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Montage

I am so glad that Jane turned out to be a good person, and did not try to ruin everything by try to make it seem like it was something it wasn't .  Poor Edward his past came back and bit him in the butt bad!  He is lucky he has such an understanding fiancee.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Angelic Phantom

I am glad you included the picture of the dresses and cake.  Bella's dress is beautiful.  It looks like an inverted calla lily.

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

Wonderful!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61023
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ok this asshole need to make up his freaking mind.  First he does not want it and now he is all concerned and is not going to give his right up.  Dick!

Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity

Douche!  Thats all I have to say!

Extremities One shot by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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My winning entry in the Auto Erotica Challenge. Awarded 'Best Handling'. 

Bella wanted to be one of the many girls that Edward pleasured in his Volvo. What happens when that car is now hers, and she makes the first move?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4867 Read Count: 921
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Extremities

Third time this happens.  The chapter notes are there but no chapter.  Funny I don't know if its the site or what. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know. I went back in and reposted the text inand it's all there now. I see you found the story on FanFiction, so thanks for hunting it down! Luv BBxx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: halconmia Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

I hope you post the next chapter soon.  I know I am a little late in reviewing but have been a crazy couple of weeks.  Great story and I can't wait to see what happens next.