Reviews by Edwardskeilo75
Summary:

Bella is the local bad girl.  Edward is the new kid.  What happens when they meet while she is serving out her latest punishment at church?  Rated NC-17 for lemon and language.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5466 Read Count: 1511
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sinner and the Saint One Shot

That was nice. (smiles)  I loved it. Awkward is so innocent he is beautiful..

Here's to hoping there' s more soon

ek

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner fs

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57010
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

I absolutley love this story.  Can't wait for the sequel and the sequel's sequel. lol

ek

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1626414
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

This is the chapter I remember the most.  It's the one I still tell friends about.  I found it to be so sad and scary for her.  Can't wait for Charlie and James to get thiers..

til next time

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

I read part of this story on another site.  I'm please to have found it again.. I did always wonder how things turned out for Bella and Edward.  Does Carlise ever get his revenge on Charlie though Bella.  Will Edward protect her from his father and in turn seperate from him.  Does Esme finally get free from Carlise hold.  So I must say the addition of Renee's POV is priceless. The last line made me cry.  I was always suspcious of how Charlie got word Renee had died.  So many unanswered questions I've had for so long will finally be answered.  I will read.   Review when I am moved, or must yell..lol   Can't wait to take this ride again.   WOOOO(holding hand in the air) 

til next time

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

As creepy as ever.  lol

til next time

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I'm really hoping Edward gets his head out of his a**!

til next time

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

This scene always scared me.  Thats a side of Edward noone like .

til next time

ek

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 91023
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thanx for the update.  I've missed you.

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thats Alice being proposed to..  I love it..

E/k

Summary:

Hate is a passionate emotion.  It can drive people to do things they never thought would do.  Hermione and Draco's hatred collides and explodes into hot, steamy passion.  Our entry for the Birds & Bees Writing Challenge.

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Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2769 Read Count: 2199
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Impassioned One Shot

WoW! That was very intense!  I loved it. More please.

ek

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55149
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is great... I'm still smiling.

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOW.  I think that was so hot..  I do think Edward gave in to soon, but so what it was Amazing. 

E/k

Summary:

Bella's first trip to England at Christmas isn't exactly a Dickens novel, especially when her host family's son seems to hate her guts. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35950 Read Count: 12735
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

NOOOOOOOO !! Oh please tell me there's a sequal..

til next time

ek

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35982
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?

Great story.  It was exciting and thrilling.  love that aggressive Edward. Bella was alittle to meek for me but I got her.

ek

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 304210
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

eeeeeeee!!!  Yes, say Yes.  (huge smile)

Will babies make 6?

ek



Author's Response:

Eventually....

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

O.K.  kind of saw that coming.  lol

still lovin it though.

ek



Author's Response:

Would you say no?? I didn't think so:) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

GO BELLA! GO BELLA! 

ek



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

duh, duh, duh....

ek



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Angela and Ben are keepers.  They must make a reappearance. Please.

ek



Author's Response:

Thanks:) They will not be back in this story though:(

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AWWWW

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76215
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control

I have enjoyed the ride so much.  I love Edward in this fic. He will forever be "MY MONSTER"!  Can't wait for more from these two.  I am wondering, who is the mysterious other voice Edward heard?, The one that made him panick.  What is up with Roselie?  Will we see Emmett?  So many questions.  Must have more..  lol

ek



Author's Response:

*claps excitedly* well done, your the first person to notice the other voice hehe however u shall not find that out until later im afraid, but well done :) and rosalie is just jealous of Bella because she is human thats all. and you shall get more i promise :) xxx

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

I do hope Bella could get it out of Edward who this girl is. I think it was tanya.  I do wonder what happened to her and if it has anything to do with MR. MYSTERY.  Will we see more of Jacob.  I hope we get to see what he is thinking though this.  As always I can't wait til next time

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

OMG!!!

Bella could be so trusting.  I hope she doen't regret it in the end.

ek



Author's Response:

hehe you shall find out very soon :) xx

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom

Ahhh Your reveal of the mystery man.  Nice one!!

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom

Ahhh Your reveal of the mystery man.  Nice one!!

ek



Author's Response:

hehe im glad you enjoyed it :) xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 367458
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Morning Aftermath

I am so amped about this story!  I love the way Bella talks. She is cool as hell. Can't wait to continue this one.  But for now I'm off the bed.

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: He's So Yummy

LOVIN THIS SH**! 

ek



Author's Response:

LOL!!  That's very good to know!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Walk Away

Hope there's more to come.

ek

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Moment of Perfection

Aww Bella just tell him you love him too..

ek



Author's Response:

She's not going to do that until she knows for 100% sure and that is not something she's going to come by easily.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A collab between Kitschisme and Rosette-cullen Isabella Swan has lived as a servant her entire life. She has come to expect cruelty from her masters, but will her luck change when she is purchased by the mysterious, brooding millionaire Edward Cullen?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58565 Read Count: 33393
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was wonderful..

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Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17428
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: An Arduous Journey

I like this story.  Can't wait for more.

E/k

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU/AH OOC Bad girl Bella Swan takes on a challenging bet to turn Edward, resident golden boy, to the dark side. Can one bet turn into a life time of love? Lemons and adult situations. Better Summary inside. Collab w/Luvrofink and Chartwilightmom


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64046 Read Count: 38035
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya

Thats a great story.  I do hope there's more.  will be waiting on pins and needles...

I love Edward in this one.  He does learn quick. lol

ek



Author's Response:

Oh yes, more, posting every other day and the sequel is on it's way. =0 J

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want

DAMMMN!! Edward is so f***ing hot in this chap.  Love when he man up on Bella.

He could order me around anytime. haha

ek



Author's Response:

Oh yes, a demanding Edward-So fucking HOT!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Good Boy Edward: Branded Duo

My heart is broken for both of them.  Poor Bella and Edward.  They belong together and Carlise has got to see that,  Maybe Esme could stand up for them.  Something, Anything they need to fix this.  I'm scared for these two...

ek



Author's Response:

Edward's dad is Edward Masen Sr. Carlisle & Esme are Alice's parents. Hang in there, so sad, but it gets better. =0 J

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

OH NO U DIDNT!!  You put her on a plane.  NOOOO.  lol

ek

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50139
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I enjoyed this fic. It is a lot of fun.  Seems to me, those two got a lot to work out. Can't wait to see it unfold.

ek



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm having a lot fun with it!  They do have plenty to get through but at least they've finally had a couple important conversations!  Hopefully a new chapter in a week or two!

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167674
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Change

THIS IS NOT COMPLETE!!!! YOU MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOUR FIC AND THEN LEFT ME HANGING. I'M DISAPOINTED!!!

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64343
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I loved this story,  I read it while watching the final DWTS.  That just made this story all the more enjoyable.  OH please do a sequel because I feel you still have unfinshed business with these two.  Here's hoping you sequel soon

E/k

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 144010
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am totally obsessed with this story.  You must update quickley..

I love english Edward..

ek

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12238
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1

 That is one of the best stories i've read ever.  I love the way you mixed the original story.  Bella as the vampire is great,  But making Edward a halfling was brilliant!  I love how she could fed from him and him from her, it's so animalistic and passionate.  It makes the scenes more Dirrty and you know we all love a dirty Edward. 

THANX FOR THAT!!

ek



Author's Response:

WOW! Thank you soooooo much for your wonderful reply. You have no idea just how much your words make me want to write more. It blows my mind how much support I am getting for this story. I never thought it would be so welcomed. Thank you so much!!!! Next chapter is under way, I will tell you this...expect some lemonade, lol.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

I really wished you could update sooner.  Damn this is a great story..

Can't wait for more.. My heart is pounding

ek



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I am beyond happy that you are enjoying my little story. I have every intention of updating by next week. As long as RL plays along we should be back on my once weekly schedule. Thanks again and hope to hear from you again soon =)

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:The End

AAAGGHH!!  DAMN YOU BELLA!! 

E/k



Author's Response:

I feel your frustration!!! thanks for reading ;)

Entity by birobird93 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Three friends. Three guys. In the same body. Blood-thirsty murderers, prowling the streets of Chicago, one at a time. "Evil prowls the shadows in this city at night Miss Swan. You will be wise to avoid it...not ask to see it again.” Edward's quest to find the perfect victim. One-shot. Darkward/Mentalward/Sexual content and extreme violence.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8840 Read Count: 543
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

MORE, MORE, MORE!!!  PLEASE

ek

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135781
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Worth the read,  I loved it.  Can't wait to read the sequels. 

E/k

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106383
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That is a great story..  I enjoyed it.  I happen to like Happy Ending.

thank

ek

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123542
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

I read this fic so long ago when it was a o/s. I never knew you continued it, When I came across it two days ago I was pleased to see it. I loved the o/s and the fic itself was wonderful, however the end is what made this one of my top ten fav fics of all time.. You gave me a drama, angst, loving and unquestionalby the most rewarding fic I have ever read. Thank you for coninuing. I am so glad I found it. I will always love it.

E/k

Summary:

A darker romance. Searching for balance and trust, Edward and Bella negotiate a tangled web of sex, blood, secrets, kink, and demons from the past. NOT CANON-STYLE VAMPIRES but canon pairings. Very, very AU.

WARNING: This story contains much in the way of lemons, violence, and dark and dominant Edward.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49922 Read Count: 11469
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Jacob

This was the best story I've read in a long while.  Esme, OH ESME!!!  I've never read a fic with such OOC behavior.  You are a great writer. 
Really can't wait for more..

ek

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297975
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life

OMG!!!!

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

AWWWW!!  Welcome Emily Grace,  You want to go wacky and give her the "David Bowie" and make one eye brown and the other green... lol  Great chap made me cry.  Can't wait for more. 

E/k

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Is Mike out to get Bella?  Lovin the playful banter. More of that please..

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 THE BOX

I love this story.  I just wish you update faster.  I love the passion between these two.  More heated arguements would be fun. Cant wait for more.

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Edroar I miss you. please hurry back.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

today is july 4th. thanks for the fireworks. I truely miss edroar when he's away for so long.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211977
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Thanx that would be great, a double update!  I love this story.  I have been a fan since the beginning and every week I wait with anticipation for the next update.  (SO AGAIN THANX) 

I love the progression of the relationship, I love how you didn't have them all over each other as soon as they met.  I your like me; I'm sure you see this as a love story.  So for me easy does it is the key.  However I still wait with baited breath for your touching words.  So til next time.

ek



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I love Edward..  He can be so sexy at times.

More him and Bella alone time is wanted.  I will say I do have a very nervous feeling in the pit of my stomach.  Something bad is about to happen. (OH NO!!) 

ek



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Are you going to pull tears from me every chap now? ha ha 

I wonder if we are going to meet Victoria soon?  Will Bella get to scrach her eyes out?  Can't wait for next chap.  Hey thanx for the double update this week sorry if it took alot out of you but i feel it was worth it.

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Yaayy!!  They finally said it.  I am worried about Jack though.  He is so awesome in this story.  I do hope to catch a Jack POV.  Can't wait for next Friday. 

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Three words.. O.M.G!!

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I'll miss the double update but I still can't wait for the weekly one.. This story is so awesome. Can't wait to see what happens next. I do hope you keep our regular Friday appointments.. lol

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Yeaahhh!!  I love the whole family together.  That was a yummy and warm chap. (heart swells)  Now that the gangs all here.  It's time the lite the fireworks and get it on.  lol    So thanks.

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

YEAHHHH!!  LOL

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

THANK YOU!!! Happy holidays to you.. (now for the selfish me)   MORE, MORE, MORE.  lol

 

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

OK.   The teaser really had me going. I should have known you wouldn't do that to Edward again.  But to put Bella and me though that was just plain mean. lol   Thanx for the lemon can't wait for more of those.  I do want there to be a situation with them not using a condom. Maybe a little bundle for them?  he he.   I'm sure it is to soon but yayy if it does happen.   When will Edward find out the whole truth about Jacks disappearence and the truth about James.  That is one I can't wait for.  I hope he kickes his ass for it.  Please let us see that.   C U soon. 

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Tears, sobs.  I will miss them when the time comes but we still have new update to look forward to.  Just give me and Esme another grandchild and I'll call myself happy.  Can't wait.

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

My hAnDS arE sHAKinG.   OMG!!

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

My emotions are everywhere.. That was an intense and scary chap.  I do still feel a little sorry for Victoria, she just didn't get it.  I also think her death and James inprisonment was not enough justice. I think you should have reversed the death and jail recipients. James should always die..ALWAYS!  lol  I'm still feeling this chap even as I type the words.  Can't wait for the teaser, and chap. 

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Great chap.  See you soon.

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!

I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.

He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."

She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"

He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."

"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Awwww!  Yayyyy!  It is finally here. The HEA.  I have taken this ride with you since the begining and am so please with the outcome. Jack and his friends are so adorable.  Thank you for the wonderful fic. 

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45329
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

That was a great story to come across.  So glad I found it here.  It made me laugh and cry and laugh somemore.. Can't wait for the update.

E/k



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading!!! so happy to hear I made you laugh!! I giggle a lot writing it

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

So great.  loved it. 

E/k

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 239102
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I don't care how long you take to update, just update... This is my fav fic right now.. You are genius with the way you write these vampires... I love the way they are  more like animals then I've ever seen them.  It makes them all sexy as hell. I am so excited for Angela to meet Ben.  She should come live with Bella now.  Please make that happen.  I love her. Also can't wait for Edwards back story. how he overcame the thirst.   I'll be here waiting for more.  thanx

E/k



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! =) I'm glad you are enjoying this story. Thank you about the vampires. I'm happy you like them animalistic. I think that vampires should differ from humans somewhat, it sets them apart. Yeah, Angela will be around a lot because once she meets Ben, she won't be able to leave ;) lol I'll explain the back story about Edward's thirst real soon.

Thank you so much for reading and for your nice comments. =)

I'll post more soon.

~Jells

Summary:

Edward Cullen is a world famous actor and singer.  At just twenty-four he has received several awards for his acting and is currently in the running for a Grammy for his debut album.  What happens when he meets Bella Black; a thirty-five year old wife and mother who is in town on a business trip?  Anything can happen…if you let it.

 

 

 

 

This is a one-shot I wrote for a friend as a birthday gift.  She has begrudgedly granted me permission to share it with you all.

 

My banner and blinkie are thanks to my banner goddess Misskingatyourservice.  check out all her creations at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3261 Read Count: 1831
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Chance Encounters

There is more than an interests in you continuing this story..  Keep me in mind should you do so..   I love that line: "OH SHIT".   LOL

E/k



Author's Response:

I already have the outline written.  It is just a matter of finding the time to do the story justice, but I promise that I will make it happen.

Thanks for the review!

Nickey

Summary:

wlahc

Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27326
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Back to reality

Boo!! I'm gonna miss you for the holidays.  Happy holidays to you and yours.  NOW

I totally love this story. I'm glad you didn't make Tanya a Bitch like most authors do,  I like her so thanks.   and now for James.  Can't wait to see where you go with that one.  C U soon

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Happy fucking birthday

I wanna owe Edward a kiss.. Totally lovin this one.

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: That special moment

Ok!  I love when Edward calls Bella baby.  I absolutley loved the kiss, It is my favorite part also.  I wonder when you will let Bella and Edward come forward about their feelings for one another.  Will Bella find out about the promise before or after the confess to each other?  Will it affect the way she handles Edward feelings for her.  Can't wait for more...  I must say I'm sadden with the loss of an update but am very happy that your starting a new job.  Good Luck and I'll be waiting..

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yayy thier together! 

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Riding a bike

Another great chap.  I agree with you the part where Edward ask the "big" question is the best part. Followed closely by the kiss to make it all better. lol

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Adult movies

Poor Edward is the first to say it. I just know it.  With Bella's big "O" revelation, will she begin to develop a more open personality?  What will Edward do with Bella's thank you?  Totally lovin this fic man!  See you soon

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Fighting

I love these two.. (big smiles)

E/k



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Give and Take

I just love how gentle Edward was being for her.  Considering the way he used to be with her.  It's a turn on.  He's so sweet. 

E/k

Summary:

Just gonna stand there and watch me burn Well that's all right because I like the way it hurts Just gonna stand there and hear me cry Well that's all right because I love the way you lie I love the way you lie - Love the way you lie by Eminem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1919 Read Count: 342
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love the way you lie

That was F*%$ING AWESOME....

E/k



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thank you so much!!!!

I'm glad you liked it!

Lot's of love,

Caitie

xoxoxoxoxo

Summary:

Isabella Swan visits the wrong side of La Push Beach. Jacob and Paul have something lemony to say about it. But when their little three-some games continue, and feelings are caught, what couple is left standing? Rated XXX. My first threesome.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166105 Read Count: 96119
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 19 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Sex on the Beach

That was so hot..

E/k



Author's Response:

:D thanks!

 

hugs

 

Cam

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Restarant

OK!  Comming from a TEAM EDWARD fan. It killed me to see Edward to get his ass kicked by Paul. (yeah, it hurt a lot)  This is the first and only story I've every read that Bella was not with Edward.   And  I am enjoying it. Can't wait for more chaps..

Tanya is always a B*$#h in every story I read.  I say: Bella slap that B*^$h.  lol

E/k



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading lol. beating edward up didn't bother me at all. LOL but i am glad you are enjoying it.

 

Hugs! :)

 

Cam

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389878
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

So far very interesting

E/k



Author's Response:

Welcome to the party! Thanks for reading and reviewing! For update information, pictease, and chapter teasers, check out the blog! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140992
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

ha ha,  ha ha ha!!  that was a hilarious chap. Thanx guys...

You get points for Emmett too.

E/k



Author's Response:

Yaaaay *hits DLIR in arm* did you hear that DLIR? We get points for Emmett! Yeeees!!! Emmett is by far one on favs to write. It's just so easy making him do and say stupid things. Thanks for your awesome review!

xoxoxx Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Another loop.  You guys are worth of jkr fame.  Can't wait for more.  Hope you are doing well Ari. Come back soon.

E/k



Author's Response:

Yay next chapter is with the Beta and I hope Ari comes back soon too

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

Thats awesome. Loving the web your weaving...

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

ohhhhh!  What was that???  Please update soon or send my a preview. Totally lovin this fic 

E/k

P.s. I love your banner. SO HOTT!!



Author's Response:

Ari made that banner and yes...it is HOT HOT HOT...lol...and sorry we ended it that way..it wont be long for a update

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

OMG!!!  That was exciting.. I can't wait for more.  I think laurent was talking to Eric.

I hope Bella finds out he had something to do with it.. My second theory is it is both Eric and Angela who set this up.  Please update soon. (like tomorrow). lol

This is a very sexy and exciting story..

E/k



Author's Response:

I love ur enthusiam.....We will def be posting soon. If u want we have more chapters over on FF....but we promise to put them here asap  Love DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

Thank you for telling me, I could find this story on ffn.  I went rite there and read ahead and like always I loved the chaps..  I also read another story. (oneshot by ari)  I loved it.  I will be looking forward to futher updates...

E/k



Author's Response:

It shouldnt be long....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

It's time for the fireworks.  YAAYYY!

E/k



Author's Response:

Ohhh I cant wait.....,these next chapters r FUN....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

Told you:  See more proof that Eric had something to do with Bellas attack.  Eric is      C R A Z Y..   I could see this becoming a serious problem for her.  OOHH and wait til Edward finds out about this. 

E/k



Author's Response:

heheehh I cant wait either.....and pretty good theory with Eric....hmmmm interesting.... :) DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tķ eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

That was another great chap.  I've missed you.  I've missed Edward and his obsession.  Thanx for the dream and couch hump.  That was fun. 

E/k



Author's Response:

Aww Spartan has missed you also! <3

I couldn't stop myself from the whole humping of the couch LOL it was waaaaay to easy to write LOL.

DLIR is up next with her awesome chapter! We really appreciate all of your support BB! <3 Thanks for your awesome review.

 

 

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

That was intense..  All those times they could have been caught.  You should let Angela catch them and in her rage, she could tell them that she is really involved with Eric.  Their meeting at the swing ball has me suspicious.. I'm so sorry to hear about your loss Ari.. My prayers are with you and your family.. 

E/k



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving kind words and love for us.....Ari will be amazed with all the loving words everyone is leaving......and yes...it was intense but i have a feeling thats just the beginning

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody

Oh Man!  My heart is pounding.. Damn that was a good one. Here I thought you were going to put Edward and Angela in a car crash and kill her.  Much better cliffy than mine. OMG It's on..  Always a pleasure.

E/k



Author's Response:

LOL sorry about the cliffy! But just so you know. We are working away on the next chapter as we speak! And yes it's soooo on! :)

 

Thanks for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR <3

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

OMG!   I just know I'm right now. I am more sure than ever that Eric and Laurent and Angela are working together. My heart is racing and my hands are sweating.. This fic is making it hard to wait for updates.  NEED MORE NOW..  lol  lol     want to watch the video on youtube but can't find it please give me the name of the video.  Loving both of you.

E/k



Author's Response:

welll deary Im working on part 2 as we speak xoxoxoxoo

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

Thanx for the chuckle at the end. That was great.  Now to business.  I so HATE Angela, is she mental or what?  I must say the way Edward yelled at the stalker on the phone was HOTT!  I am worried for the two of them though.  This is getting serious. By the way will we ever get to see what Eric is or has been up to.  That would be interesting.  Thanx for the fast update..  As Rob would say "Cheers mate".  See you soon

E/k



Author's Response:

Yes! Ang is very mental! Oh you will hear something about Eric in the next chapter!

Thank you soooo much for your review! We love hearing from everyone!

x0x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

I agree, Emmett is a f*%#ing hoot!  And then you throw in him mentioning columbus and the flash back was genius.. lol  I loved that part.  I also lke that Bella wasn't embarrassed by it and Rosalie's reaction.  That was a cute chap.  Always fun.

E/k



Author's Response:

yay,,,,u liked my emmett part...hahahaha...its hard to keep up with Ari's awesomeness on that part...but the Columbus was all me hahaha....glad u enjoyed this chapter :)

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

This is an emotional rollercoster for sure.  I don't know wether to read with my eyes closed or open. lol  Loved the "love making scene". It was hot and seductive.  Please let us in to Eric's mind.  I still think he has something to do with Bella and Edward's stalker.  Is he coming for Bella?

E/k



Author's Response:

hahahah ohhh an Eric outtake....maybe once were done.....we cant give away to much....yet....xoxoxo let me know if u want a teaser xoxoxo

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

I have nothing to say but...UPDATE NOW PLEASE!!! 

lol

E/k



Author's Response:

LOL we just did sweetie :) Hope you like the new chap!

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x00x

Ari & DLIR