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"With A Smile On Your Face And God In Your Heart, You'll Be Alright!"
"Being a Christian is like being a pumpkin. God lifts you up, takes you in, and washes all the dirt off of you. He opens you up, touches you deep inside and scoops out all the yucky stuff-- including the seeds of doubt, hate, greed, etc. Then He carves you a new smiling face and puts His light inside you to shine for all the world to see."
In the words of Rhett Butler: "I am going back to dignity and grace. I'm going back to Charleston, where I belong."
"Don't tell God how big your storms are, tell your storms how big your God is."
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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
These people are just awful. They are completely 100% nuts. This place kinda reminds me of what might go on behind the doors of a religous cult...a throughly messed up, scary one. This is a great story...but it was probably not the best idea to read this update as the first thing I did this morning after waking up. I forgot how graphic this could get. And now I feel silly bc I feel worried over some fictional characters :) Thanks for the update. I'd love it if you could update soon to tell us how Bella's doing. Have a great day :)
(PS: If this review is a bit scattered...it's due to the fact I just woke up. :) I haven't had my coffee and I'm reviewing. I rarely do anything w/o my morning coffee as it could prove to be dangerous,but I got an email on my phone that you updated...so here I am. Reviewing w/o morning coffee. Thought I'd give you a warning incase my review sounds like a five-year-old wrote it. My brain works on that level w/o my coffee.) :)
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
This was great :) what is "just a sip" and how do you find it? Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Hey there.. Glad you are reading... OK
for just sip... go to the top of the page...and find the TWCS link. This will take you to The Writer's Coffee Shop...There is all KIND of magic waitinf for you there..hahaha..
Scroll down and find the NEWS link that says Just a sip...it will be updated with new teasers every Thursday.
Hope this helps...and happy reading.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
That might've been my favorite chapter yet. To see that he had grown attached to Bella/"Elizabeth" surprised me. I wonder how/if that will affect the story. Awesome chapter. :) Can't wait to see what happens next.
Oh! And thank you for taking time to explain what Just A Sip was! I went over there and was so giddy with everything I found :) You were awesome to take time to clue me into that. Thanks again :)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Haha yes that was one seriously creepy chapter. But fantastic as always! Yall are rockstars! :-)
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
That was close...why do I have a feeling that more memories of her old life will be surfacing in the near future? BTW, yall are kicking ass and taking names w/ these updates! Go yall :) :) And congrats with your daughter placing second at her competition. As a former gymnist myself, I know all too well how much time and effort is put into competitive gymnastics. She must be very talented to place where she did! Anyways, I'll let yall go! Loving these updates...can't wait for more :) :)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
Everyone in this place is nuts. I almost hoped that somewhere a piece of the girl that was "Bella" remained...but Bella seems like a lost shell of the girl she once was. I understand she psychologically needed to surrender in order to survive. I just don't think that's a life anyone (in the right mind) would want to survive for. I just hope that someone will enter into this story who realizes how sickeningly wrong all of this is...and is able to save Bella from fully becoming Elizabeth.
Question.:-) Will Edward ever show up in this story? (Other than being vaguely mentioned as Esme's son?) Thanks :-) Update soon! This is fantastic :-)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace
Loving this story, as always! Tell Jenny good luck on her finals. I'll be taking them right along with her. I know all too well how stressful that can be! :) What sport is your daughter competing at State for? I was a competitive cheerleader for seven years and our state competitions meant the world to us...more than nationals. I remember it all too well. :)I'll be thinking about her and praying for your family! I hope yall have a wonderful Easter week. Don't put too much stress on yourself over updates! I adore this story, but I understand life comes first. :) :) But do know you have a number one fan for this story! It's fantastic :) Have a great week & God bless!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
Awesome update! Poor "Elizabeth" (I put her name in quotes because it still feels off for me not to call her Bella) :-)
She's going to feel so guilty when she watches her future husband get punished. This whole place is just crazy. But loving the story as always! Yall are awesome! :)
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
Holy cow...that's crazy. That just...gives me the hibby-jibbies!
That would be torture to have to stand and watch that happen to someone. It made me think about Rebecca's sentence, and if she would ever be able to function within their society again after her year sentence was up. Having my B.A. in Communication, I studied how communication, and lack there of, can effect a person mentally and physically. (You don't need a degree to recognize this) but to not have anyone talk to or acknowledge you in any manner for such an extreme period of time would -simply put- severely damage a person on a multitude of levels. Gah to think about this place actually being real makes my stomach turn. I'm so glad this is fictional!! Loving the story, as always! Yall always know how to creep me out, hahaha
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
Soo good!! Yall are brilliant! (Although, should I ever expect anything else?) ;-) Loving it, as always! I'm itching to see what happens with Bella and Edward. And to see what that psycho Aro has in store for Bella. Does he want Bella to carry HIS child or something? (Ick & yuck. Gross, gross, gross!) He just has this crazy obsession with Bella and how she's the one who's going to be the "cure-all" for "The Family". Ok...so he didn't say "cure-all"...but I'm adding my interpretation here. I just wonder what he wants her to do in the name of "The Family". Bella's in serious trouble. (I'm sure you're reading my comment thinking, "No shit, Sherlock".) But I'm just worried about our little innocent Bella! I have a feeling Aro is going to make sure she leaves him a little (or a lot) "less innocent" than she was when she came into his graces. Sick perv. I'm loving the story though! So much I'm dying to figure out!! Update!! :)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
I get so excited when I see yall have updated!! Gah I wish Saturdays could come twice every week!! (That thought sounds more and more appealing the more I think about it. More Saturdays. That would just make the world a better place) :-) I just wish the chapters were longer sometimes! I'm not complaining AT ALL...just being wishful. Heck...I just wished for more Saturdays so that goes to show you how seriously I take my wishes. I just love this story and can't wait to see it progress. Yall rock!! Hope yall have a fantastic week and I'll see yall next Saturday! Xoxo :)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
Ahahahaha this story is soooo crazy!! He is so creepy!! How do yall come up with this stuff? I feel like a perv for loving it and drinking it all up! This story is too good...Holy cow I couldn't believe Jasper hit Aro! Do I suspect some people are starting to not "respect Aro's authority?" Lord...hopefully so with the plans he has for Elizabeth/Bella. I just want to push the flash forward button on this story so badly! I'm dying to see Edward and Bella interact with each other more...and see if Aro is going to try anything with Elizabeth/Bella like he did with Esme. There's just SO much to cover in this story! I'm all for two updates a week. Just sayin' ;-) (Ahem...hint hint) Kidding. Kinda ;) I'm just freakishly addicted to everything yall write. Is it next Saturday yet? :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much.. We love reviews like this.. GOD.. aren't there those stories that you sooooooo want to just read the last page to see who is still around.. GAH.. it's madding.. so WE FEEL YA.. and we love that you are enjoying it. The problem with Edward/Bella time is that Father Aro keeps her under constant watch. Sick Bastard. BUT... I bet they MIGHT be able to sneak something in sometime. HAHAHA..
Thanks again.. Enjoy your Sunday.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Yall made my day with the extra update! Next time, I should wish for a thousand dollars or something. I had no clue my wish for the extra update in my last review would come true. Yall = total rock stars :-) SO I have no clue what this note could've said. My guess is that it might mention Aro or The Family? I'd be the worst detective ever. I should note my guesses range as far as Felix writing: "Don't worry, be happy". Yeah, why do I guess I'm NOT the big winner this week? :-) I'm totally counting down for Saturday to find out what's in that note!! Gah...I'm so impatient! This story is fabulous! :) I just wish we had 80+ chapters up already. Haha...by then we MIGHT start getting to the heavy stuff. There's just so much to cover in this story! I don't see how yall have come up with something so outstanding. There's so many important parts that must be covered that all make up this intricate web that we're JUST starting to build! Just watching yall's writing process is kinda fascinating to me, haha. I could never come up with this stuff and place everything exactly where it needs to be like yall have done. (Granted, yall drive me crazy with suspense!! Saturdays have a whole new reason for existing now, lol) Loving the extra update. Feel free to continue with that if you feel like it :) Anyways, I'm shutting up & I'll see you ladies Saturday!! Keep up the fabulousness!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Love this chapter!! Edward's going to flip when he steps out of the box he's been living in and sees how life really is. Geez...I'm all in knots about Elizabeth and how creepy Father is getting with her. Can't WAIT until Saturday!! This was fantastic :) :) xoxo
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
This gets better and better and more intense with every chapter. Gah I just love everything yall come up with. I'm terrified what is going to happen to Elizabeth to ensure that all memories from her prior life are officially washed away. I'm sure "Father" will love to have his fun partaking in taking care of that. I cannot wait until the next chapter! And don't worry about not getting everything up by Saturday. That's just a time line yall set for yourselves. Everyone can tell how hard yall have been working this week by how AMAZING the site looks. (I freakin love it!!) Can we still join club java? I'm JUST out of college and in the part of my life where I'm no longer a student, but still without an official job. So I don't know how much money I can offer, but yall work so hard on this site and it truly relaxes me after a tough day and I feel bad enjoying it and not giving yall anything for your hard work and time. If Club Java is still open, I'd love to donate. Anyways, I have you guys in my thoughts and prayers as things are getting hectic for everyone right now! Just know I can't wait for yall's next post - whenever that may be. Have a great week! Xoxo!!
Author's Response:
Yes you can still so club java but please don't feel you have to. It might only be $20 but we do understand this is a huge amount for some people. If you want to, wait until you can aford to do it.. it will always be there :)
And thank you for the review and support of the site. We hope you have a great week too xxx
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Fantastic update :) Again, don't worry about a chapter being "late". Life gets crazy...I don't see how yall are able to post the way yall can! (I love it though!!) I'm thinking about you guys and praying for yall that things will calm down for yall! Again, excellent chapter! Xoxo
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
LOVE this chapter!! It was totally worth the wait :-) I can't wait to find out what is going on w/ Elizabeth and where she is.
And I just feel the need to tell you guys how much we appreciate everything yall do. Whether a chapter comes out within a week, a month, or whenever...yall need to know that we know how busy yall are and how much hard work yall put into not only this story, but also your fans and more so this site. I'd just hate for this story to start feeling less like something fun you enjoy writing, and start to feel more like a task you have to get done so you can put that "check" on your to-do list. Because when it becomes something you feel you HAVE to do rather than something you ENJOY and WANT to do, you know you've run into a problem...and it's unfair to you guys. I simply adore this story and am so glad yall are so intent with continuing it and finishing it. But I think at the same time yall need to know how appreciated yall really are. Because it's TRUE!! :-) This story gets better and better and I can't wait for more to unravel. Just know your true fans will stick with you and wait patiently for life to settle down a bit. :-)Thanks for the awesome chapter!! Yall rock as always! God Bless :-)
Author's Response:
Aww how nice was that! Thank you... Jenny and I appreciate hearing that..
We do feel guilty for not updating as we don't like letting people down.. there is just so much going on at the moment.. My to do list is a mile long.. but writing with jenny is actually our down time.. we have a lot of fun writing together.. it really is easy for us to do when we can actually find the time to do it. That is the hard part. Once Jenny finishes her studies, once and for all.. it will be so much easier.. and once the publishing house goes live for me I will be able to breathe again! I THINK.. but then I keep saying that and something else happens LOL Our site has a long way to go...
Jenny and I were saying we don't think we will stop writing FanFiction.. the subject matter and book/movie might change.. but we enjoy writing it so much that it helps with writers block on our original work and this is so much easier than original as well.. It takes 1/4 of the time to write this than it does to write original. So yeah don't worry we are here to stay :)
Thank you again.. it was so nice of you to say that
Mandy xxx
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Holy cow...what on earth has happened to Bella since the last time we left her? Why did she try to run away? Obviously something struck her memory...but what was it? And what has she had the endure due to trying to escape? Yall aren't going to just leave us blind on this, are you?? That's a HUGE GAPING HOLE. I feel so bad for Bella...and I'm freaking out for Edward and Bella. Please tell me they are going to find a way to escape this crazed psyco!! I freakin love this story, as always!! Please update soon!! Xoxo :)
Author's Response:
Hey there SouthernBelle!!! How are ya.
I think you may have missed a few chapters. Go back to the chapter when Bella sees her mom in the kitchen. That explains her escape attempt... Hope this helps. Glad you liked it. Have a great week.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
LOVE IT!! Thanks for the update & Happy New Years!!
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus
Finally an update!! I love it guys...as usual of course. Yall can't write anything bad! I'm actually in the middle of rereading The Training School Saga for the forth time! I soak in everything yall give me :) BTW, "Misery" sounds fantastic! I can't wait to start it. Yall are great...thanks for the update!
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514635
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
I've spent the last two days soaking up this story. Yall...this is seriously fantastic. I just wish I started to read it sooner :) I came across it once and I'll admit...at first it felt a bit too graphic for me. I am SO glad I came back around and gave this story another chance! I should've known how great this story was...sice I've been throughly enjoying the rest of yall's stories. Like you can see, I could go on & on about how awesome this story is...but I'm going to shut up so yall can get back to posting your next fabulous chapter! :)
[Reviews - 85] There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is? A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.
Banner by mkystich72 .. Thank you so much.. It is wonderful.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Obviously Rosalie is in the clear. So...my guess two chapters in is...Emmett. It's always the innocent ones...and who knows what Tanya might've said to Emmett seconds before she waas murdered to cause him to snap & kill her. Hmmm. :) That's my guess so far.
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
After this chapter I feel like the murderer is...Mike. He and Lauren are having marriage problems...something Tanya seems to have a knack for causing in relationships. Also the killer thought that Tanya was "a whore that messed with the wrong family". That statement could deal with Tanya messing up Mike & Lauren's marriage. It's obvious Lauren feels Mike has some sort of relationship w/ Tanya...considering the way she perked up to Officer "Ben Dover's" (love the name, PS) last question asking for the last time Mike saw Tanya. Also during questioning, Lauren was acting so jumpy while Mike kept his head down giving short, non responsive answers. Mike was acting as if he kept his head down, eyes lowered, and mouth shut, people wouldn't see right through him. And Lauren just seemed like a wife trying to cover up for her husband...despite being irritated at him. (We know it wasn't Lauren b/c the killer heard a scream minutes after finishing the act. And we know that scream was Laurens, since Rose said Lauren was standing over the body, screaming.) Last, my suspicions point to Mike b/c the killer thought, "Cullen Manor [is] one hell of a place to be stuck for the evening". A "Cullen" wouldn't think that about his or her own household. So assuming the "Cullens" are the same seven in the book, that should mean the list of people we can take off the suspect list are: Lauren, (and the seven Cullens) Rose, Emmett, Alice, Jasper, Edward, Carlisle, and Esme. (I'm excluding Bella as we don't know for sure if she and Edward are married or not yet...so I'm not including her as a Cullen for now).
Wow...sorry for my mini novella...I have to write all this out for it to make sense in my head. Watch me be totally wrong about Mike simply because it almost seems like yall led me to think it's him. And it's always the person you don't suspect. Watch it be Bella. :) Ok. I'm getting way to into this. I've got to go start supper, finish the laundry & finish cleaning the kitchen. This is too addictive for my own good! Well at least for this loooong review, can I ask for an update si'l vous plait? Merci! :) :)
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ok...laundry can wait for this last chapter :) It seems like after this chapter it would be one of the Cullens...but what Cullen would think about feeling bad for ruining the party, but being partially happy because "The Cullen Manor [is] one hell of a place to be stuck for the evening"? My suspicions are still kinda pointing to Mike. Unless Bella found out (perhaps over heard Bob & Emmett talking) about the incriminating accusations a/b the Cullens. Maybe Bob overheard Tanya taunting Bella a/b some incriminating actions having to do w/ the Cullen men. Perhaps Bella decided she needed to kill Tanya before Tanya could ruin another relationship. Bella is so loyal and cares so much for the Cullens, there is little she wouldn't do for them. The only "off" part is that the killer just doesn't sound like Bella. But the story fits...I think. So since I've eliminated: Lauren, Rose, Emmett, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Carlisle, Esme, and "Bob"...I'm between Mike or Bella...kinda leaning more towards Bella at the moment. Update soon please! This story is too fun. Love. It.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Well, conidering before reading this chapter I was inbetween Mike and Bella, I now feel it's Mike. PS...I. Love. This. Story. This is so much fun to read! I can't wait to see what yall will post next :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm still stuck on Mike. It's not Carlisle. Carlisle wouldn't be all excited about being able to spend part of his night at the Cullen Manor. (Something the killer thought earlier). The only other person it could possibly be is Bob. I guess I haven't given Bob too much thought. It does always seem to be the innocent ones...hmmm. Well, ok. I'm torn now between Mike and Bob. I'm going to have to reread this entire story to track our little butler :) You know what's seriously sad? I have actually TAKEN NOTES while reading this story and have on paper the reasons why I have eliminated certain people, and reasons why I suspect others. That's pretty pityful isn't it? Haha :) I also wrote down all the names of suspects (which was everyone in the house) and forgot poor little Bob. PS, I've stayed pretty sick since the year began and this story has kept me highly entertained. :-) Thanks for all yall do for this site. Yall are great. I am looking forward to the next fantastic chapter :-) Have a good one.
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624915
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45
Oh gah...I'm so torn with this chapter. It's so bittersweet. Showing Edward and Bella when they were younger, and Edward taking care of her even then was precious. I also love that you put more Edward and Esme interaction. It shows just how much Edward is growing up and becoming a man. But the parts where Carlisle thought of Bella as "his" even back then...is just sickening. Even though if that point he probably thought of her as the daughter he should've had...but knowing what we know now makings that scene turn my stomach. I don't know what Carlisle will do or how he will react when he finds out Edward has officially proposed. This story is so amazing...it definitely keeps me on my toes! Please update soon! :) :)
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45
Oh gah...I'm so torn with this chapter. It's so bittersweet. Showing Edward and Bella when they were younger, and Edward taking care of her even then was precious. I also love that you put more Edward and Esme interaction. It shows just how much Edward is growing up and becoming a man. But the parts where Carlisle thought of Bella as "his" even back then...is just sickening. Even though if that point he probably thought of her as the daughter he should've had...but knowing what we know now makings that scene turn my stomach. I don't know what Carlisle will do or how he will react when he finds out Edward has officially proposed. This story is so amazing...it definitely keeps me on my toes! Please update soon! :) :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. We needed a little more insight into Carlisle for the next chapter
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
This is the BEST story in the Twilight fandom...BY FAR. I'm caught up with the story, so your probably wondering why I'm reviewing the first chapter.
This review isn't as much for the author (as she already knows how much I love her stories) as it is for first time readers.
I've heard that this story is controversial, (and can see why that might be the case). If you are a reader that might be in that boat thinking this story might be too much to stomach, please read this before walking away.
Unless you've been to rmsrms5's fanfiction page, you might not know that The Perfect Wife received over 1 million hits, 7000 reviews and won an award for "Most Unique Plot" before FF pulled the story. This is an NC-17 fic, and has that rating for a reason. But in my opinion, the story is written in a tasteful, realistic manner.
Regardless, if you feel you cannot read some parts due to its graphic nature, readers can begin the story at chapter 11 and write rmsrms5 for a short synopsis of the previous chapters and not have to walk away from such a great story. (I know rmsrms5 said in the past she would write back with the synopsis of the past ten chapters, so I would imagine that still stands).
Ok... I'll get off my soap box now :) It's just stories & authors like this come few and far between. Have a great day :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your support of my story. Yes, it still stands. If someone wants to skip the beginning just send me a note and I'll send the summary to them.
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
This chapter was fun :) I love evereyone being so excited about the wedding. I'm nervous about what the future holds for Bella...everything just seems too "perfect" at the moment. The ball's going to drop soon. Carlisle will make sure of it. You already know how much I love this story...but I swear it gets better with every chapter! Update soon! And btw, thank you so much for your sweet email you sent me about a week ago. I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to respond-we have family in town this week so things have been crazy! You are definitely awesome to your reviewers :) Have a great day & can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
OMG this cliffhanger is going to kill me. Bella's not going to be able to handle it if Edward reverts back to his "old ways"...even if it is to save her from Demetri. I could seriously about cry for her right now. But on a better note, I love the update and cannot WAIT to find out what you have planned next. :) As always, this is by far the best story in the Twilight fandom...I can't get enough! Update soon! :-)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
That was hard to read, so I couldn't imagine how hard for you it must have been to write. Thank you, thank you, thank you for clearing it all up for Bella before you closed the chapter! At least she knows what's going on now. Wow. Really good chapter. Loved this! I wish you could always update this fast! :-) This was great. Have a wonderdful week! :-)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife
Hey sweet girl! Don't worry about this. It's not just happening to you, it's happening to the entire site. You're not doing anything wrong...seriously, something's just up with the site today. If you go to "most recent" and try to read one of the newly posted stories, you'll notice the same thing is happening to them. I was just talking to another author, MissKingAtYourService, and she's been posting over and over again today as well. I don't know what's gone all funky with the site today, but it's certainly nothing you're doing. Don't stress about it. Go get some coffee and take some deep breaths! You're a rockstar :-)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
You're leaving us there?? What an evil little cliffhanger! :) Is it next week yet?? Ahhhh...please let Edward get to her in time! Loving this, as always!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Let her GO?! Holy cow...I'm putting A LOT of faith in you right now Ms. rmcrms5!! :) :) This chapter broke my heart. I'm just ready for Bella's happy ending. Although I'm SO not ready for my favorite story to end! Sequel, sequel, sequel!!! PLLLLEEEASE :) :) Even though the end of this chapter has felt confused, conflicted, torn, and broken-hearted, I freakin love this story. You are an amazing author. Although I think you know that :) Dying for some more of your greatness. I love the world you've built here with Bella and Edward. I hate the thought of it being gone after two more chapters. Consider a sequel? BTP is AWESOME and I love it - don't get me wrong. But yeah...sequel would be fantastic. I'll shut up :) :) You rock, PS. Update soon lady! :) :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I loved this chapter!! And I'm all for you doing more with this story. I'm kinda obsessed with this little story you have here. :) Can't wait for the epilogue!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
I LOVED the ending!! Awe...I'm so sad this story is over! You are definitely on author alerts so I can't wait to hear more from you. This has been such a fantastic ride :-) Can't wait to hear more from you SOON! Xoxo
Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I was following this story on the other site, so I was very glad to see it here :) I love everything you write! ESPECIALLY anything to do with TPW. That one is -by far- my favorite story in the Twilight fandom...so I was so pumped to see you started to write one from Alice & Jasper's POV. It's so weird and pretty scary to see that dark side of Jasper we never saw before. I guess we got a small taste of him in Edward's flashbacks, but to see him treating Alice poorly...at all...is disturbing. I just cannot wait to see where you go with this story. We already know how their story ends, but to read that transformation will definitely be fun. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. It's hard to write Jasper being an ass since everyone knows how he turns out and still keeping him believable in this story
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Gay! You updated this! I love this story :-) Although the thought of wrapping up TPW saddens me, because (as you already know) it's my favorite fanfiction ever! :-) So I guess *someone* is going to have a lot of writing to do once that's finished...in order to create my SECOND favorite fanfiction ever ;-) This story is looking promising to fulfill that spot :-) I hope life is going well, and I'm looking forward to hopefully hearing from you soon in an update of one of your stories!
Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 42033
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Firsts
Wow. You are describing this really well. I know this girl. I was this girl only a year ago. The panic attacks, the medication, the negative thoughts, the way you let weight control your life...I know that all to well. It's crazy to think that it was only this past August that I was 90lbs...and trying to convince my family and friends I was perfectly fine. I'm happy to say I'm getting better. Not having as many panic attacks, and I feel happier. I'm still pretty small weight wise, but I'm being healthy at least.It's just strange to read about someone who feels so familar. Someone I remember all to well, but I hope to never know again. As I said, you're describing her situation really well. :) Very powerful.
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love your story :) It has a unique twist to the other stories out there where Bella gets kidnapped. I was initially expecting Edward to be "Darkward"...but I love where you've taken this! I would write more, but I have more to read! :) Just thought I'd mention how much this story has entertained me. :-) Have a wonderful day
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
You can't end there!! What an evil little cliff hanger! ;-) Update ASAP (please) :-) Merci!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
This is SO good!! How can you leave us there?!? With Bella TRAPPED?! Shame shame ;-) You know what makes up for that. A quick update. :-D Because this story is kinda fantastic :) :) Thanks for posting this chapter! I've been sick as a dog this week & you've made one sick lil' girl feel much better ;) Now if you could just cure the flu I'd be set! :) Have a great Thursday - looking forward to your next update!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Oh lord...Bella's in trouble! Let's pray she knows how to think straight in life-or-death situations, or just will learn very quickly how to run fast without being clumsy. Why am I thinking this just isn't going to turn out well for our lil' Bella? I can't wait for more! The suspense is killing me! :) Excellent chapter BTW :-)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I adore this story. I always get all giddy when I see you've updated :) :) This chapter was fantastic...it's nice to have some Edward/Bella time again. She does need to get to the hospital sooner than later though. I'm surprised Edward hasn't pushed her to go already with her ankle being in such a fragile state. After all she went through, I'm curious if she isn't worse off than she's trying to make it sound. But that's Bella...she'll have some horrific injury like her knee facing the opposite direction - and swear she's ok,hahaha. She never said she wasn't stubborn, I guess :) :)
I do have one question. I'm left a bit confused regarding the conflict with Aro. Edward seems to be acting as if the whole crisis is over since Bella has been saved. Which...I guess I can understand because a huge part of their crisis has been lifted. But are things still messy between Aro & Edward? Like shouldn't we still be worried about Aro wanting to kill Edward or get revenge in another way? Or was that resolved & I didn't catch it? Thanks for easing my curiosity! Again, I love this story & can't wait for your next update :) :)
Author's Response:
Aro and James are most definitely on Edward's mind. He won't forget them and I doubt they'll forget him. It's just now everything is up in the air since we don't know where and what those key players are doing. So, other things will happen until the Aro/James situation becomes resolved. I can't tell you all that may happen (in large part because it's not written yet ... yes, bad me). I have ideas on where to go but when I go to write lately my adled brain wants to shut off and I end up falling asleep. After we're not so busy at work I should have more time. Thanks for your wonderful review. I hope you continue to read and review.
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Loved this chapter! I thought it was awesome that you wrote Bella as being a virgin and having Edward find her inexperience endering. I'm waiting until marriage...and the older I get the more difficult that choice gets. That choice was definitely more accepted in high school than it was in college. To say the least, finding out the guy you were head over heels over cheated on you because you wouldn't "give it up" gets old. I just hope I can someday find someone who will find my "innocence" an endering quality, like the Edward you just wrote :-) This chapter was fantastic! Update soon :)
Author's Response:
Oh, I think you will. The older I get, I swear it rings true all the things my mother used to tell me .... even though I hate to admit it. Thanks for reading & reviewing my story. I'm glad you enjoy it. :)
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Great chapter...very interesting progress! Update Update Update!! :-)
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Oh gah...you can't leave me THERE!! I wish this could be the story of my life :) (minus the psycho stalker...ha) but you planned his engagement perfectly! The dress is beautiful and that ring is GORGEOUS! I'll just be happy if I can find me a good man someday soon. But all the rest would certainly be icing on top of a serioiusly perfect cake!! I hope this review entices you to update ASAP!! I cant wait for what you have in store for us next!
Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed?
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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations
Ahhh...Edward is such a tease!! Granted, I think subconsciously I love it like that because it creates so much sexual tension! Guys like that drive me up the wall...strangely in a good way. This reminds me so much of my relationship with my ex Jason. I'll have to give you that whole story in my email. But I totally can emphasize with Bella's frustrations to say the least!
Oh and PS...I got all giddy when I saw my name at the top of your author notes! Yay! Mucho cool points go to you! ;-)
Question. When Rose was talking to Carlisle, was she trying to hint for some of his assistance in turning Emmett? I assumed that's why she was stuttering, but I wanted to make sure we were on the same page.
Also I'm loving the bit of interaction b/t Jasper & Bella.(Even if he still had to act kinda like a jerk...) At least it's a step up from him acting like he'd rather her dead. I'm hoping we get to know more about Jasper's character. (Hint, hint!) I'm also hoping he and Bella soften up a bit towards each other eventually. (Cough..hint! Cough) Ahem...excuse me! Stupid cold...;-)
This chapter was *awesome* Seriously...this story gets better with every chapter. So update lady! :-) :-) xoxo!!
Author's Response:
hehe i do love your reviews :)
And i am trying to create sexual frustration, but at the same time i am scared to write a sex scene, firsty because some of my family read this and second because im scared it ul b crap and smutty :s
And ofc i mentioned you, your my little helper :)
and no, she wasn't hinting at changing him, she was just worried he would hate her, because they get along well and he is like her father, so she felt like she let him down.
And they may get closer, bt i dno lol maybee
And thank you very much for the lovely mugs and saying it was awesome :) xxx
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Trapped
This sounds great so far :) I feel so bad for Bella...I have no clue what I would do in her situation. At least she has enough guts to come after him with a rock. (Although we know it will do her no good...it's better than just choosing death.) I think I'm going to like this story.
Author's Response:
oh thank you so much, i love when people review, and you've spoken your mind so i love you even more :) and i hope you stick with the story im just writing the forth chapter :) so it will be up very soon, thank you so much again :) xxxx
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster
Great update! Loving this story :) And your banner is awesome! I wish I knew how yall did those :) Very cool. Can't wait for your next update :-)
Author's Response:
aww thank you very much :) your awesome for reading + reviewing hehe
and thanks so much for liking the banner, can i ask which one you like?
and il make you one if you want? xxx :)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings
I love this story :-) Please post your next chapter sooner rather than later :)
Author's Response:
aww bless ya, it will be up today i promise :) xxx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless
You posted!! Yay!! :) :) This chapter scared the pants off of me. Edward is nuts. I'm at a loss of words. But I loved the chapter update!! Please keep morw of your goodness coming :-)
Author's Response:
hehe, im glad you liked it :) and sorry it scared you but he is a vampire, not a bunny hehe xxx thank you for reviewing
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster
Loved this chapter. It was great to finally get a glimpse inside of Edward's head. I cannot wait for this story to progress! I kinda love this story if you can't tell ;-) Loving your updates! You're a rockstar!
Author's Response:
hehe im so glad iv made you happy :) and im so glad you think i did a good job, i love you :) xx
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Magic Eight Ball
Finally! Bella might start getting a glimpse of the many layers that make up Edward. Edward sure does have a think wall to break down. I am going to love watching that unfold. :-) I also really loved meeting Alice this chapter. It'll be interesting to hear her version of Jasper and Edward. She seems to think "Jazz" is so kind compared to the Jasper Bella has encountered. Your story rocks. Can't wait for more! :-)
Author's Response:
wow thank you so much, and yes very thick wall, but only Bella can break it :) and im so glad you enjoyed meeting Alice :) and thank you so much for the cups :) i love you xx
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Talk about sexual tension! Wow...go you. I was dying for Edward to kiss Bella this entire chapter! You little tease! ;-) This is awesome :-) Like my three year old nephew always says, "more pwease"!
Author's Response:
aww that is soo cute, you shall get more hehe i promise :) and i wanted him to kiss her too, but he wouldn't hehe :) he is far too stubborn xx
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Hey sweet girl! This is happening to a lot of authors today, so don't think it's just you. But your story didn't show up :( Just your author notes at the beginning & end. I know your chapter had to be fabulous as usual though! I'll be pumped to read it when all this confusion gets fixed :-)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy
I love how they are getting closer. Yay! Fun fun fun :-) Update woman! ;-) And I'll be writing you back ASAP! Be expecting that email soon :) xoxo!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control
Um...wow. No, really. Abi! That about got me all hot and bothered reading about our half naked Edward! Whew! Like I said...you're a total ROCKSTAR ;-) And I love her nickname for him! "My monster"...awe! How appropriate! :-) Also loving the girl time with Alice at the end. Alice is my girl. I think this is my favorite chapter yet! Update woman! Xoxo!
Author's Response:
hehe thank you, I'm so lucky to have amazing readers.
And your still wrong you know, your the ROCKSTAR hehe :)
And I know tell me about it, I think I need a cold shower haha :) It almost killed me writing it lol
thank you so much for the cups, i love you woman :)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions
Awe...that was such a sweet and needed chapter! (Sorry this review is coming so late! My computer is trying to slowly die on me. Today, it's acting like it might work. It's just trying to humor itself...you know. Through getting my hopes up by acting like it might want to work. Soon enough...it'll be heading towards death's door. Damn computer ;-) But that's my reason for my crazy late reviews!!) PS...Carlisle is a...pompous, holier-than-thou, jerk. Or another really creative mean word that I can't think of. :-) Ugh...he's so mean! I've got more to read so I'm shutting up! Xoxo!
Author's Response:
hehe well that was a huge rant haha, u shud tell the computer off haha, mine never seems to work lol
and Carlisle is all of the above haha bt with good reason :) and thank you for the mugs :) xx
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart
Understanding Carlisle a bit more. I don't hate him. I just feel very sad for him. No wonder he hates humans so much...since he's categorized them all as hateful, cruel, malious beings. I hope he gets to know Bella and maybe in turn is able to gain a wider perspective on humans as Bella has been able to do with vampires. Hmmm. Loving it :-) Off to read :-) :-)
Author's Response:
:) I'm glad you don't hate him, he isn't all bad, just very bitter and angry :( Im very glad you are enjoying it, thank you so very much for the mugs, and i've missed you hehe im glad your back :) xx
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom
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Questions, questions! So there's a MOLE in the house.(PS...have you seen Austin Powers 3? The Goldmember one? If so, then you know why I just found the word "mole" WAY too humorous.
"It's very nice to mole you! Uh, I mean, meet you. Meet your mole. Oh dear God".)
Classic.
On a more mature note...loving it even more with the insider. Very "24" ;-)
(Yeah...Jack Bauer is my hero. Next to my Edward obsession of course. Sigh. Where was I? I digress...)
So I have an idea over who this mole could be. :-) My guess is...Rosalie.
She hates humans, has all the access she needs to know everything she could want to know about them, certainly willing (considering she about killed Bella herself when Bella met her the first time), and she's said to be stunningly beautiful. (Granted, most people would disagree that Rosalie "pales in comparison to Bella"...but beauty is in the eye of the beholder, correct?)
I only have three problems with my guess.
One: If the mole IS Rose, why would Jacob refer to her as "the Blonde
Barbie"...a demeaning term for someone he was an accomplice with. (Granted, the Jacob in this story isn't known for his tendency to respect women. So maybe that's a non-issue.)
Two: Why would the "human-hating mole" be seen carrying a human into the house? So unless Rosalie "the mole" Hale had sudden change of heart concerning her distaste for humans...maybe she isn't our mole. (Although, Jacob did ask himself, "What is she doing?", showing that he has reasons to be interested in her actions. Hmmm.)
So, so far, even with my doubts I've mentioned...I'm still good with thinking our mole is Rose...until my third problem.
Three: If Rose is the mole, how has she gotten away with it since Edward can hear her thoughts? Even if she began to block his thoughts...wouldn't that make him suspicious towards her? That part stumps me. :-)
So I’m slightly torn. Is there another woman living in the house that we don’t know about? I’d normally totally assume it’s Carlisle from the beginning…but I really don’t see Jake calling Carlisle “beautiful” and then saying his beauty paled to Bella’s. Because that’s just plain disturbing.
Eeep! Can you tell I get way into mysteries?? I love trying to solve this stuff. This story is too entertaining. :-)
Believe it or not, this review turned into becoming two pages long, single spaced. So I had to make myself cut a bit. I realized most of what I was writing should probably be in the email I'm still trying to write back to you! :-) My poor, sad, seriously sick computer. The email’s coming!
Even with the part I took out, I'm still writing wayyy too much for a review! (I'm home sick AGAIN…ends up the flu I thought I had was mono. Yuck!) So I’m bored out of my mind. S bored Bree = Abi receiving the longest review on the planet! Uh...so I'm going to stop tying. Really. XOXO!
Author's Response:
well that put a hugeeee ass smile on my face hehe, that is the most amazingly epic review ever!! haha I couldn't believe it was so long haha its hugggeeeee! And I'm very sorry but the Identity of our "mole" will remain a little mystery hehe :)
And yes i most certainly have seen goldmember, and it rocks :) i love the whole rambling awkward mole convo haha
I shall be waiting for your epic and longgg email hehe
and i'm very sorry that your sick, and thanks for the mugs i love you girl :) xx
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger
Haha if you thought that was a huge rant...get ready for the review I sent you for your last chapter. I'm sick with mono and bored out of my mind. Ha...Abi, don't judge a sick girl. I just realized how long the post was that I just sent you. Oops! We're gonna blame it on cold meds, sound good? ;-) Oh dear. Ha.
Author's Response:
hehe we shall blame the cold meds lol thats what there for haha And you do realise you have sent this as a review lol not that i'm complaining it boosts them hehe
and i dont think i could ever judge you :) especially not while you have mono. it sounds horrible, i just hope my story can keep you entertained :) xx
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster
Woman!! You should see my face. It looks like :-O!! LOVE this chapter...hahaha I am speechless! Seriously...you are SO past rockstar status! I don't have a word for that because "rockstar" is totally usually the best props I know how to give...but you've surpassed it :) :) You're a word I don't know!! LOL
Sorry I've been MIA! Life threw me for a loop, but I'm back! I've missed this story. It's too fantastic for words :) :) So how's everything going with college? I just graduated this past December. I miss it...it's hard, but so much fun once you learn to balance everything. Gah I've got to send you my email! It was asking you all about college and such. Anyway, I'm about to head out for the night so I'm going to make myself stop tying so I can finish getting ready. (I'm always the last person finished getting dressed. But you know what they say: never rush a lady!) Hope life is FANTASTIC and can't wait for your next update :) Talk to you soon
Author's Response:
:) your reviews always make me smile :) thank you very much :) im glad you liked it, i was very worried that i had ruined it lol cos well u knw how nervous i was about making a sex scene, or maybe u didn't lol
and its alright, i understand u hav a life outside of my story :) hehe and erm yh uni is gr8 :) its only the first week, so havnt done tht much rli, jus lik introductions lol bt next week is gna b difficult. Im gonna try get the next chapter out this weekend :) cos even if im constantly doing work, i will always try make time for the story, cos well im wanting to get it all out of my head haha, its jus floating around in there haha im as excited as everyone else :)
i hope to get ur email soon :) and hope you have a gd nite out :) xx
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Doomed
Awe...that was sad, but sweet. I understand Carlisle more now. No wonder it's so painful for him to see Bella and have her around. It's like a constant reminder of Esme. Bella just needs to open up and talk to Edward. BTW, I LOVED finally getting to "meet" Emmett! He's precious! I love his character :) :) And I'm also loving the whole Bella loving "two" indiviudals in one. Very "Buried Amogst The Begonias" (Awesome story BTW...you have to read that one if you haven't)
This story is getting better and better! Loving it, as always :) :) You better know I'm your number one fan ;) Talk to you soon!
Author's Response:
i have read it, and it is like my inspiration lol :)
im glad you enjoyed the chapter :) and i knw, i love Emmett and Carlisle is very tortured, but hopefully he can put it aside.
thanks for the mugs, and yes i shall hear from you soon
and i knw your the number one fan hehe :) i love ya for it :) xxx
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes
Jake is so messed up...I love it! Bella's in more over her head than she can even remotely comprehend. Poor Bella...she has no clue how scared she really should be right now. How do you come up with this stuff? I'm very pumped about the next chapter. Update update update :) :) :)
Author's Response:
:) im glad you like it and its jus bcos i hav a twisted little mind :) hehe and the update will be coming soon, thanks for the mugs :P i loves you xx
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Fighting the Monster Within
Loving it!! (As always, duh!) :) :) So I want to hear all about college life. That's pretty much what my email contains, so don't answer that one until I FINALLY send it,hahaha. Can you tell life's been a bit crazy lately??
So...back to the story. To answer your question: Jacob is, of course, this horrific person that has no problem with using (and hurting) Bella in the process simply to get even with Edward. I'm totally on Edward's side 100% here. (Granted, I feel for Bella because she's just too much of a good person to see the dirty, bad intentions Jacob truly has.) There's no shades of grey in that equation if you ask moi!! Booo Jacob :) :) :) (Now...when it comes to Taylor Lautner, I'd give you a completely different response as he is HOT...hahaha. But that makes me feel like a major cougar, as I'm 24, and he's like...what? 19? 20? But there's no harm in looking...right?!?) Hmmm, I never asked you...Team Edward or Jacob? I'm personally an Edward/Bella fan over here :) :) That's just...the sane way to think! Ha :) Anyways doll, I better run. Going to the grandparents for Easter! I hope you have a fantastic Easter! Christ is risen!! :) :) Xoxo bye girly :)
Author's Response:
hehe wow another long one :) hehe and i am totally for edward, can you tell haha :) thank you for the mugs and i cant wait for the email :) and finally your the one person who has realised, bella is not fickle, she is naive lol she trusts everyone lol so yeah :) and bella will see jacobs dark side in chapter 25 :) which i am soo totally looking forward to writing :) xx happy easter to you too :) xx
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic
Woman! You left me THERE? Really? Really. I'm shocked. Ok...not really but geez what a cliff hanger! I hope you are serious about a quick update! My heart can't handle things like that :) (In other words, I have the patience of a three year old, hahaha) I've missed you lady! Hope life and classes are going well. I assumed your updates would become further apart once classes got into the "meat" of the course. Just remember...deep breaths. And adderall. (I'm totally kidding. Sorta, haha) Starbucks works just as well. We'll have to catch up soon. Like you, life has been kicking my butt over here as well. Can't wait for your next update! Xoxo :) :)
Author's Response:
aww bless ya, i did leave you there and i am very sorry, and you better email me soon woman hehe :) i know i do love the cliffys, ur gonna loveeee the next chapter, i promise, you shall probably squeel with excitement, or shudder in revultion, im not quite sure how the next chapter will be perceived lol and classes are going rli well, i had a terrible night lastr night, bt i will explain tht wen u email me haha xxx
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
That was just evil!! You were VERY right...I LOVE this chapter, although I'm now having a minor anxiety attack ;-) Holy cow what have you done to our lil' Bella?? And you're right, I owe you one monster email! It's coming pumpkin!! Life has been kicking me in the behind as of late. As from what I've heard, life is beating you up too! I'm dying to know what happened the other night! I'm thinking about you!! Who do I need to beat up? ;-) BTW, I don't think I took a breath while reading this chapter. This was wild! Thankfully, I'm a sucker for dark stuff, hahaha. (Should this worry me? Lol) I miss you & will talk to ya soon! Xoxo :-)
Author's Response:
how did you know about the other night? and yeh it was pretty horrible, but i'll live, it just creeped me out thts all. and i know i am an evil little thing, but you know you love me :) and i love this chapter too, i love the dark stuff :) and i know little Bella is gonna have a rough couple o chapters ahead, i hope she can handle it and i hope you guys can too :/ i know i was holding my breathe too :) i got the idea of the lake when i went for a walk and saw a really beautiful river, i just thought it was the perfect scene for jake to catch up to her :) i miss you too, and no i love the dark stuff, im wicked :) xx thanks for the mugs :) xx
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Truth Hurts
Woman what are you DOING to me? This chapter was brilliant BTW. :-) I just want to scream and cry and pull my hair out in frustration for poor Bella. That's the worst torture I've ever heard of. (You're so twisted!! LOL...I mean that in the most loving way, of course!) Gah, to have to watch your loved ones around you suffer would be AWFUL. I think I'd be begging him to kill me instead. I totally didn't see this coming. And I freakin love it! (As usual!) I'm about to head out for the night so I've got to run...we've got tons to catch up on though! I'll talk to you later :-) Update soon lady! Xoxo
Author's Response:
i know i know im evil to keep throwing you guys off cliffs haha, and thank you i enjoyed this chapter too :) and yes i feel that way too, and there shall be lots of begging and my twistedness seems to know no bounds haha. and dont worry about al the pain, it will all be ok. have a great night out and i shall update when i can hehe, email me woman! lol xx
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Irrevocable
Abi!! I've missed you pumpkin! I can feel you on the pains of a lost internet connection. We didn't have ours for two weeks (we got it fixed last week) but I had never appreciated my blackberry so much! Hahaha :) I was getting worried about you...I was afraid school had become really stressful and was consuming all your time. I've had those semesters and They. Are. Hell. So I have to say in that aspect, I'm glad it's just your internet connection and not some seriously crisis in your life. You have been missed lady!! We need to catch up asap :) Can't wait to talk to ya soon ;) Hope everything is well. Xoxo
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Irrevocable
Chick-a-dee! First, I'm so glad you're back! You've been missed woman. :-) Second, (I mean this in the best way possible!) I'm really confused woman! :-) I'm fairly certain this was suppossed to either be an update to another story or a new story...rather than the update to Irrevocable. (I came to that conclusion b/c you said at the end, "anyone worrying about Irrevocable please dont because I will be posting a chapter there soon.") Please tell me that's the case b/c if not, I'm sooo lost! :-) This chapter rocked btw and you've totally pulled me into whatever story this is :-) I'm totally still rating the chapter as a "ten" because you've drawn me into whatever story this is, hahaha. But I'm just guessing it's not Irrevocable since it has nothing to do with where we left off. (If this was suppossed to go with Irrevocable, I love you...but you've totally lost me! I need help.) :-) You rock, as always and I'm totally pumped to have you back!! Don't be a stranger missy! Xoxo :-)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Haha it's so good to have you back!! You have such a twisted little mind and I LOVE every bit of it!! This story is freakin EPIC! If you're twisted, I'm on that boat right along with you because I love reading it :-) :-) You've gotta update this sucker! I've been deprived! PS- How are you?? You've been missed! We need to catch up! I'm on the hunt for your email address...it's buried in my stack of emails somewhere. I've got you tons of emails saved on MS word that are now kinda irrelevant...haha but that's ok. I'll make up for them. Take care and update soon woman!! Xoxo! :-)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I didn't foresee Aro coming into the mix. Lord, how much more twisted cab this get? Poor Bella is screwed in every direction. I'm just hoping Edward's anger is fueling something strong enough to overcome the hell that's coming for all of them. I loved the Carlisle/Bella scenes in this chapter. It was truly really sweet and showed Carlisle hadn't lost his humane side. I'm curious where Rose and Emmett are right now. Maybe you addressed that earlier and my mind is going blank on me, but it just seems sketchy for them to not be in the picture. Hmmm...I wonder what you have in store for them.
I've missed you buttercup!! Sorry to hear Uni is kicking your butt! It does that to everyone! Why do I have a feeling you're one of those people who work at all hours on the day and night and have perfect grades to show for it? That reminds me of how I was when I was in college. An A- was a bad grade. Stupid plus/minus system. I graduated with a great GPA...now I'm just working on the getting a job part. The economy sucks in america. :) I miss you & miss our convos! Let's catch up soon!! Even better idea, update this fantastic story ASAP!! Xoxo!!
Author's Response:
hehe i snook up on you! and trust me it is going to get even more twisted hehe :)and yes it does appear that she is up shit creek without a paddle, but thats what the monster is for hehe :) I am glad you enjoyed the carlisle snippets they were my fav :)
anyway here is my email address - kizzez_n_hugz@hotmail.com :) use it wisely, i shall answer more questions, and I have a blog, you should check it out, its on my profile :) sorry it has taken me so long to reply, i have lots on my plate xx
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home
Soooo good!! I hope the "monster" kicks Aro and his little "posse's" asses. (Wow. I just used the word posse. I haven't used that since my freshman year of college with my sorority, as our class had some group we made up...calling ourselves "the posse". We thought we were so cool back then, haha. I smile and miss all those girls now...as they are all seemingly either engaged, or just married. Growing up sucks. (Not the getting married part. That part would be great if I could just FIND the guy God wants me to marry. I tell you Abi. I'm 24! My eggs are getting old! HA HA. And I'm going to be that girl who's always the bridesmaid and never the bride because I date guys for two months and then run when it starts to look serious.
Wait. I think I was supposed to be leaving you a review. Not bitching about how everyone and their dog has a ring on their left finger but moi. (There's a possibility I could be PMSing...oops. How's your life going?) ;-)
Sorry about that. That's right. Back to reviewing the chapter. The chapter in which Bella has found love. And she'll probably end up having a happily ever after...and get a ring on her finger too. With a great guy who loves her and adores her and will give her children and they can start a family with a two story house with the white picket fence and a pool with built in hot tub and sun deck and little white puppy. Damn. I did it again.
Take three: This chapter was fantastic...it even got me thinking about something other than my non existent husband and the fact my father suggested I try e-harmony.You heard me. My dad is suggesting dating sites for me. I think I need more of your chapters to pull me outta this funk I'm in.
Ok. I guess I can tell you what's really going on. I kinda just found out the guy (I mean...THE guy)who I dated on and off since my freshman year in high school (that's eight years together on and off) just proposed to one of my good "friends". Did I mention this guy and I were seeing each other a month ago? I'll be using that email address of yours asap. Sorry for the crappy review. My mind's not in review mode right now. My mind is kinda numb. Along with my heart. Guys are...just insensitive jerks. What's funny is I want to hate him...but I can't find it in myself to be mad at him. I guess I just really do what him to be happy. I just don't understand...why that couldn't have been with me. I'm going to be fine. And believe it or not, I'm going to end this review at some point. It's just...see, I've got to appear strong to all my friends here. Indifferent. Like I don't care. But you're kinda like that friend that doesn't really know any of my friends here...so maybe admitting to you that the truth is: it hurts so badly that it feels like my heart fell out of my chest...is ok. Because I'm only going to admit that once, and then we'll go back to pretending everything is normal and fine. Because it will be. Sorry for forcing you to read all this...it kinda just poured out. Whether you mean to be or not, you're a great listener, ha :) And I really mean it...kick ass chapter. SO update soon hun! Xoxo :)
Author's Response:
Oh sweety, I'm so sorry I havnt replied, but listen here, that guy is obviously a dick! your lovely and he doesnt even deserve to breathe your are, and I'm not meaning to sound rude but this 'friend' is a bitch (I'm sorry but your too sweet, they dont deserve to even know someone as special as you!) I wish I could come and give you a hug, I dont like you being sad, please dont be sad, just remember, he aint worth it, so dont even waste energy and time thinking of him!
Oooft I feel a little rilled haha I am gonna have to pour all of this into writting lol
Be Happy, I shall send to monster to you :) xx
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri
Haha YEP...totally confused. But, as always, I trust ya :) Normally my review would be much longer but I start my first *real* JOB tomorrow! So that college education evidently paid off. I'm actually not that excited...I work from 8am to 8pm. Yuck, right? But it's a start. And it's something to pay the bills and put food on the table so I can buy my own place! Living with the parents for the past few months has been interesting. It's going to hopefully be a good change. So I would write more, but it's 12am and I need sleep :) :) But LOVE the update!! Hope life is FANTASTIC!! And thanks for your sweet reply to my last review. You are precious!! Talk to you soon! Xoxo
Author's Response:
hehe everyone is confused :) thank you for putting your faith in me :) OMG first real job, I am soooo proud, this review is almost as good as the one I am anticipating as your whole 'I have the best boyfriend ever' review hehe :) hey 8 to 8 aint too bad :) you can do it :) I'm looking for an apartment with my fella :) you are very welcome for the last reply, I ment every word sister :) thanks for the mugs and I shall be updating soon :) xx
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Gratitude
I miss you woman! It's fantastic to hear from you! We need to catch up...sounds like life has been as rough with you as it has for me recently. It always helps me to remember God will never put us through anything we cannot endure and overcome. He's kinda awesome like that :) I'm thinking about you and you're in my prayers! Just know your update has made a day that TRIED VERY HARD to be hellish...a much better one :) Xoxo!!
Author's Response:
Aw sweetie I miss you too! aw thanks sweetie, thats very nice of you :] and its been bad but nothing I cant handle, I just needed a little break from this story, sometimes the pressure just builds a little too much :/ I'm glad i made your day :] you always cheer me up with your awesome reviews xx
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball
Sooo awesome!! I love every time you dish out a new chapter :) :) And how could anyone be confused with this story?? It makes PERFECT sense to me! They just aren't reading carefully enough. It's freakin brillant :) I can't wait for your next update pumpkin! Let's catch up soon :) XOXO :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much sweetie :] Hehe I know it makes sense to me too hehe We really do need to catch up :] and the story is almost over sweetie xx :[ sad! xx
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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood. Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver? Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?
This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over). Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Invaded Existence
Hey :) I have a quick question I'm hoping you can help me with. I feel like I'm missing something important or something important has been left out between chapters 13 & 14. At the end of chapter 13, Edward finds a box with his name on it...leaving us to wonder who's interfering. However, the beginning of chapter 14 seems to start off at an odd place with Edward wondering "how [he] should take [Bella]". It goes on to have him replay some speech over in his head that Alice gave to him. (A speech that I have no recollection of hearing about prior. As, so far, the only Cullen Edward has talked to so far is Emmett). I'm afraid your chapter 14 was left out, and you might have accidentally posted chapter 15 in chapter 14's spot. (Mainly I came to that conclusion as chapter 14 is entitled "chapter 15")
It probably isn't a big deal. But I love this story and can't help but feel I'm missing out on some crucial parts that we should know about. If you could, would you go back & read chapter 13 & 14 to check if anything was skipped over? And if so, would you please let me know because I'd love to read it. :) :) I hope this review/post made some sense. Sorry if this was confusing! Again, I love your story. You have a big fan avec moi!! :) Believe me. This is my second time reading this so you know I think it's great. Update soon si'l vous plait!! Merci! :) :)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Thanks for posting chapter 14 :) It really made everything connect and make sense. Can't wait for your next chapter!! Update soon :)
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Don't you dare go back into hibernation! This story is too good and has been VERY missed! I was very pumped to see you updated...I thought you'd left this story behind forever. Don't ever do that to me again! ;-) You have far too much talent to leave this story hanging :) I LOVED this chapter, so UPDATE SOON :) :)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I hope your headaches start feeling better! I have chronic headaches/migraine...and they can really run your life. I'll be keeping you in my prayers! Love the update...please update soon. :)
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I've just reread this story today and can't get enough!! Please, PLEASE update ASAP! This is an AMAZING story that DESERVES to be completed! You can't leave us there!! :) Just know you have some devoted fans who would love an update! Si'l vous plait?? Merci! :)
The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.
Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!
Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
This is soooo good!! Please update! I love this story! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much...glad you like it!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Loving this more and more with every word! So glad to have Edward back!! :) Also glad his little "temper tantrum" is over ;-) Love. It.
Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.
Banner by IllicitWriter
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: React now, think later
Love it! I think this is the first story I've read where Tayna is just another nice, regular girl. Not the girl that Edward'sa into, but nice all the same. It seems like every other story that feature's Tayna presents her as a psyco bitchy drama queen. This version of Tayna seems much more true to the series. Just please keep the story B/E and I'll be set! Can't wait for an update! :-)
Author's Response:
Tanya will take a little turn in this story, but not anything super crazy...it'll be justified to her and other readers have agreed so far. I understand making the choice either way, but especially with vamp stories, I don't understand how you rationalize it. B&E are the endgame so fear not!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking Point
Loving it! I just wish there was a "next" button so I could read what happens next :-) Wow...a whole lot of drama just unfolded. Poor Bella. I wish she would go ahead and open up to Edward about Jake. Or atleast to someone. I know I would be a hot mess. I feel that conversation is coming sooner or later :-) I just love this story! Cannot wait for your next update!!
Author's Response:
I'm working thru betaing the rest it should be caught up around Saturday so fear not! Bella has issues that will come to light later that will show her reluctance to talk to people. That conversation will be here soon. Thank you for the love and I should have another chapter up tonight!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Everything Falls Apart
You were right...it definitely hit the fan. Wow. I'm just so glad to feel Bella has found a bit of a safe haven in Edward. I definitely feel the story is going to take an interesting turn now that Edward knows about Bella. I am soaking all this up! I love it! You = total rockstar :)
Author's Response:
Wow...rockstar...that's quite a compliment! I had a friend that was in some ways very much my Edward from this story, without the romantic issues. He got me thru some pretty horrible stuff and I know it would have been much worse without him. Twists and turns abound in this one, thanks for the glowing review~
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Understanding Nila's Reasons
I'm enjoying this so much! And I love that therapist. Lord if I could ever find a therapist like that, she'd totally be worth every penny. I would write more, but I have another lovely chapter to read!! :-)
Author's Response:
Awe...Dr. G is based off an old therapist of mine and one of my best friends mom's, she's the best!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Strength in Numbers
I can't imagine going through what Bella is going through and not having my family there beside me. Her family situation seems so bizarre to me. I just hurt for her. I mean, I fully get she's a fictional character, but somewhere in the back of my mind I keep feeling like someone (probably numerous people) have a story very similar to Bella. There are parts of this story I can relate to...but if I hadn't had my family there for me, I would've been a mess. I guess they've always been my rock.
As you know, I just thoroughly love this story. I am anxiously waiting for your next chapter! :-)
Author's Response:
You'll learn a lot more about it at Christmas when you actually see them. It has a lot to do with not talking about those types of things (depression etc.) and the resentment she feels at having to pretend to be happy because her family is happy to forget her problems. It has a lot to do with keeping up appearances, that's something I know a lot about. When you want to talk about something and the people who should support you won't hear it, it makes it hard. Sweeping it under the rug never helps, and that's what it was like, plus being passed back and forth a lot fell between the cracks. I write things I know, things people I love have been thru, or that I have, because so many people suffer in silence...so in a way you are right, there are real life women, most much stronger than I am, who are living this every day. They are the reason I write these stories...so they have a voice. Thank you for the love and I'm back to writing now, so it shouldn't be too long!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Slip of the Tongue
Your poems are beautiful. The fact you are able to express such difficult emotions is a talent in itself, as such emotions are often times enough of a challenge to form into words. To possess the ability to express those emotions through poetry is simply amazing.
If you couldn't tell, your poems really spoke to me. :-) In particular, the second one...the one called An Attack of Panic. That one made me cry.
I don't usually like to talk about this because I never know how someone would react to it, but I've dealt with Panic Disorder (chronic anxiety/chronic panic attacks) since I was 16. (I'm 24 now.) I'm the type of person who hates for anyone to think anything is ever wrong...so I have always worked way too hard to cover up the fact my life is less than perfect. From my appearance (never allowing myself to go out without looking polished) to my personality (always smiling-regardless of how I feel, and making sure to be polite and nice to everybody)I made it my job to never let anyone see what was really going on inside. My parents always told me people don't want to be around unhappy people...so I became queen at suppressing every feeling I had. What's sad is that my parent's know about my panic disorder. They have opted to stuff me full of anti depressant & anti anxiety medication until it "goes away". But anxiety haunts you and takes you over as a person.
While reading your poem I felt like I was reading about the exact world I lived in and fought in every day. A world no one else understood...so it was strange to realize someone other than myself wrote this because so many times I feel like I'm the only one that has ever felt this way. (The only part I couldn't relate to was Bella's part about Edward being her strength to hold on to...but that's OK. I'm confident God's picked out my own "Edward" for me to meet someday. Hopefully soon!)
Wow...anyways. I apologize for telling you my story. I wasn't planning on doing that in this review...it just kinda wrote itself :) I'm kinda apprehensive to send this now. But I'm going to because I figure you should see how powerful your poetry really is! It certainly affected me ;-) Thanks for a great chapter. Looking forward to your next update
Author's Response:
WOW...this review made me cry when I read it. I suffer from anxiety disorder (panic attacks and some generalized anxiety) as well as depression and that poem was written when I was in college. I had gone undiagnosed for a majority of my life and much like Bella, when I did know about was told that you don't talk about these types of things. So I wrote. My poetry was my way of making sense of what I couldn't tell people. That one was writen in a time where my friend would force me to go to class when all I wanted to do was hide out from classes andd wait for him to be free. I'm similiar in that I would not want people to know I was sad or suffering so I smiled and kept it from most people. At first I was on medications, but it didn't help me, so I found alternate ways of dealing with my attacks and I do much better with it now. It doesn't go away, it is that shadow that hovers waiting to rain on you at any moment.
Please don't apologize for telling me your story. I write the stories I do to bring these issues to light and to let people who deal with them to know they aren't alone...others know your pain. Email me anytime you need to or want to talk more...I love talking to my readers and always have time to talk! Have a great night!
When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
You can't stop there!! This is SO good...I can't wait until the next chapter :-) I LOVE this story! Update SOON!! :-)
Bella Swan lives a dull life, but when a trip to the emergency room brings her to the Cullens, everything changes. Things are not all roses and sunshine though, there are attacks on women at the local campus of UW and it's got everyone worried. Everyone needs chances, but what happens when someone chooses the wrong one...?
(AU-AH, OOC for Bella's vocabulary)
Rated NC-17 for language, mature sexual content, and violence.
On temporary hiatus, 12/19/11
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100701 Read Count: 5338
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Everyone Needs a Beginning
LOVING it so far :-) Edward needs to drop Tanya and go for Bella ASAP! I guess they have to meet first for that to happen, haha. This story is too much fun so far. Great first chapter :-)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! That makes me truly happy! Thanks for rading and reviewing!
Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.
**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This is great so far :) Instant fan over here :) :) Update soon si'l vous plait!!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm enjoying your story...sorry I didn't review the last chapter :) I think you're doing a great job so far. The only thing that confused me a little bit was that in the last chapter, I felt Edward might have been more sad/hurt/emotional towards Bella getting raped. He seemed furious over James wanting to make Bella a "human pet", but kinda skipped over a reaction of the rape. Maybe that's just coming in a later chapter :) I hope it's ok I mentioned I felt that way. Other than that, I really think you're doing an awesome job expressing certain emotions each character might be feeling. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :) Update soon!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter, although it broke my heart. I can't wait for the Cullen's to get Bella back! Can't wait for your next update :-)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I can't imagine how difficult of a time Bella's going to have trying to convince James that she shares his feelings. That's going to be one hell of an internal battle. For any rape victim, the mere thought of waking up and having your rapist hold you...trapping you in his arms would just be mind-numbingly nauseating. I don't think I could handle it at all. That would've sent me into an emotional tailspin. I'm almost wondering if Bella's in shock. She's reacting purely on survival mode...but her thoughts are so unattached I'm scared she's going to break when everything she's trying to suppress comes to the surface. I just have a feeling the shit's about to hit the fan, and when it does Bella's plan might fly right out the window along with her "calm" demeanor. You just can't go through what she's experiencing and not break at some point.
Needless to say, you definitely have my attention :-) I'm interested to find out how long she'll be able to keep her so-called "composure" before she goes numb and comatose & hits rock bottom. I just hope Edward & the rest of the Cullens get to her before then. Ok...you've got me on the edge of my seat! You've gotta update...asap! Loving it :-)
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
You ended it THERE?? That's just cruel, ha ha :-) This story is awesome...I'm going to need an update before you cause me a minor anxiety attack. Loving this so far :-) Can't wait for the Cullens to finally get there.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Very intense...I'm dying for the next chapter :-) Update asap!
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I'm jumping out of my seat!! The Cullen's need to HURRY it up if they are going to save her in time. If James and Bella get on that plane, Bella's a goner. Ahhh...this is killing me. And WHAT is going on with Alice and her visions? The only thing I could guess is that maybe she's having difficulty seeing the vampire that turned her. But then I second guess myself because she didn't have that probalem in the book. But it's your story...you can do what you want with it...which means, that could definitely be the problem. :-) Either way, I feel bad for our little Alice at the moment. Even worse for Bella. I'm surprised Edward didn't freak out at her for not showing him her vision. I'm guessing that will come next chapter. I'd be freaking out if someone knew some information that I wasn't privy to. You HAVE to update this soon....it's getting so good! :) :) :) I'll be waiting :) Have a great day