Reviews by serephina
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303327
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I have fallen in love with this story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108984
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

I think it would be nice to see how they got to the epilouge that you wrote

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 372980
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I am in love with your stories, but I am having trouble with reading the stories. 

Dragon Stones by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

Edward and his dragon companion, Volterra, believe that Volterra's mate is lost...gone either in death or time. 

Bella, a servant in the castle, discovers and makes a connection with Kathea, a long dead dragon. 

She is asked to help with Kathea's daughter. She and the young dragon, ShayTan, become Bond-Mates. 

 DRAGON STONES was the THIRD PLACE WINNER in the

Once Upon a Twilight Contest! 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55360 Read Count: 2688
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2011
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Esme

I like this story.  It reminds me of the Pern series by Anne McCaffery.



Author's Response:

I love the PERN series...I did try not to steal anything from her...LOL...a good friend and fellow author who writes for a PERN blog has a hard time reading DS...she says it's "weyrd"  LOL....so I guess it's different enough...

I've read the PERN series about 25 times...all...the...way...through...LOL...yes, geek, much?

Thanks for reading DRAGON STONES, Serephina!

Kathie

Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Beginning

I have read them almost as much. There are some elements that are similar but other wise it is different.

Author's Response:

Then I did my job...LOL

Kathie

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 119844
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I was starting to cry while reading about the dvd part.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40804
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor

At least they have met now.  I am enjoying this story

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 188996
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Press Pass

I just started reading your story and I love it!!!  It is really fun and enjoyable to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  I have a lot of fun with these guys!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114430
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

Sorry to hear about your loss.I know what you are going through right now. My grandfather died 2 weeks ago, but like you said they are both at peace.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297502
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

Thank you for the story.  I just started reading the story a few weeks ago.  i loved it.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254395
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

There was no chapter



Author's Response:

Sorry there was a glinch in the system...lml

Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.

 

“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.

 

 “I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”

 

 “I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”

 

“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.

 

Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

I hope you and family are okay.  I live in South Jersey so I understand completely with what you are going through.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91265
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope your daughter is feeling better.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

All We Knew by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary:

Bella Swan returns home after ten years and a bad marriage. Will she be able to find herself? What if her past catches up to her? AH & NC-17 for language and possible lemons. B/E, A/J,R/EM

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143567 Read Count: 114396
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2012
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I love my Kindle.  It is so easy to handle and I can make notes and underline information that I want to remember. The free books are fun too.

Thank you for writing your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

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Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204484
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love your stories. I hope your daughter is feeling better.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268726
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I know I keep saying this, but I love your stories.  You have an amazing writing ability.  thank you for sharing it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159782
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your stories.  You are my favorite author.  Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43157
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: notice of removal of chapter 26

I did not get a chance to read the chapter, but those other readers need to get a life if all they can do is critize your writing.  I have liked the direction your story was going. I know it is hard to ignore people when they attack you, but don't let them destroy what makes you happy.

 

Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Past Actions and Current Consequences

I enjoyed this chapter very much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella’s long distance best friend shows up unexpectedly on her doorstep after being discharged from the Army under mysterious circumstances.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9126 Read Count: 974
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this is a great plot.  I hope you continue this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've had lots of good feedback about continuing the story and I hope to start working on an expanded version soon.

 

Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading and reviewing!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218006
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

That was mean!!!!

Summary:

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Hermione didn't know what to expect when she was summoned to the Minister's office. She definitely didn't think that she'd be sent on the assignment of a lifetime. And she certainly didn't expect to catch the attention of the most infamous prisoner to ever grace the cells of Azkaban, Draco Malfoy. A Dramione Couple's Remix...


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Drama, Mystery, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5405 Read Count: 1288
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it. I think it would be a good story 

Summary:

BannerFans.com Part 3 in the series. Bella's chance to confront the Cullen's comes a little quicker than she thought it would due to a new threat looming on the horizon. How will she react when she sees Edward for the first time since she was changed?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Alec
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6053 Read Count: 895
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Aug 2013
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Missing part 2 of this story. You jumped right to part 3

Summary:

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What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 173762 Read Count: 86947
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2015 Updated: 06 Nov 2017
Reviewer: serephina Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2016 Title: Family Secrets (the Redo)

I am not sure if this is how you wrote the chapter but there are only 2 short paragraphs in the chapter.  

I do enjoy your story and I hope everything goes well with the non profit and effects from the assault.



Author's Response:

Thats a copy and paste error I've now fixed the chapter :)