Reviews by Guilort
Summary: Past Featured Story

The birth of a child is usually a large and wondrous affair in an estate. However that was not the case for those at Longbourn. After bringing forth their second child, Mrs. Bennet passes from this world. How does this one event effect the characters we all have come to love. A story of loss, misunderstanding and eventually finding love again. The first in a series of stories.


Categories: Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Characters: Mr Bennet/OC
Genre: Family, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9563 Read Count: 868
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 26 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Guilort Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: A step forward in time

Hi! Nice reading your story. It is a pity the bad experience you had in fanfiction. It took time to find your story here. Just a question. When you describe Lizzy, at first reading I thought that you wanted to say that Lizzy's eyes were like her paternal grandmother as in the following sentence you said that she makes her paternal grandmather remember her daugther. So I was wondering if you wanted to say that Lizzy looks like her paternal aunt phisically or her personality? All the best!