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I love reading any fanfic that is about Edward/Bella.
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self
Wow! This place is nuts. I can't imagine how Bella is trying to get through this.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
Wow, this is just so sad. I can't imagine what will happen next.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
I feel sorry for Felix, but then again I have a small part of me angry that he didn't help her more.
This story is a wild ride.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Very interesting. Wow what tale do you weave for us. Can't wait for more.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
Wow, Aro is a very sick and strange individual. The brain washing he has done to all of these people is just out there.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
Wow, I sure hope that Edward is her future and not someone like James. I have to say this is not a place i would like to be at. I await for your next chapter.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order
Great chapter, I was so worried that it was going to be James, not Edward, I was so relieved. I was a little weirded out about Aro planting the first seed, Oh yeah.
Have a great Easter.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Yeah creepy he is. I just can't imagine her having to be with him the first time and not with Edward, her husband.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
Wow, I'm glad Edward 's first mate skip town. Edward and Elizabeth (Bella) will be very interesting together when they finally get together. Aro may regret his choice.
I can't wait for the next update already.
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Wow, this is such a great story. I can't wait to see what you do next.
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
Wow, that would be awful to watch or have done to you.
I am glad that they already have feelings for each other.
I'm glad you both are back with the story.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
Oh this is getting beter and better.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser
It is amazing that people don't realize that there are people like this out there.
I love this story, which makes me feel kind of weird, but it is like a car accident you want to see even though it may be bad.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
I think that Felix will be telling Aro, this may not be good for Bella.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
At least Bella has a friend. I think they were being watched. I hope Bella doesn't mess up until after her and Edward are married. She will be more protected.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
Another great chapter. I hope that Elizabeth and Edward making to their ceremony.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
Oh no. I can understand how Bella feels, but Edward can't take another rejection and either can his family. I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
Oh I really dislike Aro. I hope that Edward sees what his father plans on doing with his future bride before its to late.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Wow, I really want her to trust Edward, but i know she doesn't know she can.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Great chapter. This is getting better and better. Can't wait until Edward and Bella are together again.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
Thanks for another great chapter. This is getting more exciting.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh he is a sick man. I sure hope that its Edward that he found her.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
wow, great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Great chapter, I'm hoping even though you ladies are busy you don't stop writing these great stories.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
Wow, Aro has definetly gone off the deep end. Poor Edward and Bella.
Merry Christmas and Happy New year.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Wow, I love this story but just don't see how Bella and Edward are ever going to be together. happy new year and thank you.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Wow, glad you ladies are back I forgot how much I missed this story.
Thank you for sharing it.
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus
Thanks for the update and the teaser.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514600
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
wow, love the pictures of the cabin. I love how Edward just takes charge.
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
I actually feel sorry for Carlisle. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh my!! What a way to end the chapter. How did he find them? Edward is alone with the two girls, how will he save Bella?
Great chapter it is nice to see both our thinking of their futures.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
No, I can't believe that he got both Victoria and Bella. How are they going to find them??
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Wow, poor Edward feeling like this was his fault. I can't wait for the rescue.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
Oh that is mean, you leave us in a cliffhanger. Could the others found them so quickly. I hope so. Let Edward only with James for a few hours.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Great chapter. Finally James will get his due rewards.
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
yes, that is what James totally deserves. Sad to see this story end, but it really has been an adventure.
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
I'm so sad to see this great story end. It has been a very good learning experience.
[Reviews - 85] There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is? A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.
Banner by mkystich72 .. Thank you so much.. It is wonderful.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Wow, I have no clue who killed her, but she does have a lot of enemies. can't wait for more evidence.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Well, I assume that Bella didn't kill her, i mean she can't even be around the blood. Edward was with Carlisle so that counts them out.
But we still have jasper, alice, esme, and charlie.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Interesting info, I still haven't figured out who killed her yet.
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624772
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
So sad that her happiness is going to be so short, because of the guests. Hopefully, Edward will be able to protect her.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
NO!! He needs to expalin this to her so she understands why he needs to do this. I am so scared for Bella and Edward.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
Oh, Edward scared me there for a minute. I am so glad that she finally told him. I just hope he can keep her safe.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49
Great chapter. I feel so bad for Esme and Bella. At least Marcus and Demetrie are gone and Edward has the paperwork cleared for them to marry.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
Oh my God its probably Carlisle. I can't wait for the update. I feel so bad for both Edward and Bella.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Great I'm so glad that Demetri and Carlisle died, but i really feel bad for Edward because he does love Bella. I know it will hurt but he will let her go.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
You had me panicked through that whole chapter, I actually wanted to cry. How sad for Bella though, I am glad that Edward waited for her.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
Great ending thank you for a very intersting journey.
Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36887
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Poor Edward, he wanted to call her but can't because of her father. He should still try to contact her. He may be turning a new leaf with his feelings for Bella. Can't wait for the next ch.
Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153057
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth
Wow interesting topic. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
Very interesting story.
What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76224
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Where are we now?
Wow, poor Edward he really doesn't understand what they are both feeling. He'll get it. The question is who will make the first move thoug, Edward or Bella? As soon as she called his name out, I thought to myself he is going to take it the wrong way and he did. Very cannon Edward, always the monster. It is funny because now that I think about it Edward and Bella never see themselves clearly, in your story and in the Twilight saga.
Okay, jasper should jump on the name Quil, come on its not a common name.
I wonder if Edward will volunteer to go to the trail with her or just tag along without her knowledge? I hope he goes along for moral support because she will definetly need it.
Great story can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
hhuuummmkmmmm good point on the Quil thing. But the Cullen's have agreed to not mess with her past w/o talking to her, so while there is more than enough information out there for them to find out Bella's past they are, for now, not doing so.
Edward at the trial! hee hee. I have a huge plan for all that, but you'll have to wait and see. Let's just say a LOT comes to a head during that trial. a LOT!
You're also right (man you're good) both canon Edward and Bella never felt they were good enough for the other and both battled in self worth. Neither ever really believe in the other's love enough.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Darkest Before the Dawn
Great teaser. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Two Steps Forward, One Step Back
I love you story and that they are taking it slow for many reasons. Its amazing that Edward talks about mating but still hasn't figured it totally out. Men, vampire or human, sometimes are so dense.;)
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Two Steps Forward, One Step Back
I love you story and that they are taking it slow for many reasons. Its amazing that Edward talks about mating but still hasn't figured it totally out. Men, vampire or human, sometimes are so dense.;)
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
(HUGS) I'm glad you liek the pace, I am freaked that I am going to start losing readers soon! We're getting to the big reveals though, soon, very soon.
You're also right, men of al species are idiots, but we love them!
Thanks for your review, here's a tease of next weeks chapter:
Bella came in before anyone could say more and looked at all of us taking in our troubled and pensive faces. “Is everything ok?”
Esme stepped in saving us all. “Yes, dear, we’re fine. Emmett was just commenting about additional vampire movies and which ones would be best to show you.”
Emmett forced a smile, his thoughts consumed with Bella being in a place where she didn’t have support; he truly did see her as a little sister. “Yeah, I have to make sure your schooling is complete!”
Bella rolled her eyes. “Thanks, I doubt I would survive without more education, Lestat.” You could hear the sarcasm in her voice and there was a light of humor in her eyes.
Emmett walked over to Bella and tried to look threatening, though the corners of his mouth tugging up belied the threat. “Little human girl, are you making light of vampires while in a house surrounded by a coven of blood sucking fiends?”
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Returning Home
That's sound really good. Can't wait.
Author's Response:
that's sneaky, responing on another chapter. LOL
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Just a Little Bite
Wow, so much like New Moon, I just hope Edward doesn't do the same stupid thing though. Great chapter, can't wait to find out the mystery and for them to realize they have mated.
Author's Response:
lol, I guess it is a tiny bit like New Moon, huh? Now we have to see if Edward reacts the same way and follows through and if the Cullen's will let him!!
Thanks for the review, here is a tease for next week. This is Carlisle and Bella.
I walked slowly towards her, unsure of what her response was going to be. I gestured towards her arm. “Can I see it better now?” Bella held her arm out to me. Her shirt was in the way of some of the cuts. “Bella, can we take your shirt off so I can get a better look at your arm? You’re going to need stitches and I can’t do it with the shirt.” Bella’s already white complexion paled more. “I promise I won’t hurt you or take advantage of you.”
Bella swallowed and her heart raced, she was starting to have a full fledge panic attack. “Ok, never mind. Keep your shirt on. Since it’s already ruined would it be ok if I cut the sleeve to get at what I need?”
Bella’s eyes took a minute to focus on me. I could see she was trying to process what I said but she was so caught in her head she couldn’t make sense of it.
“Breath, Bella, breath. Your shirt stays on. I’ll just cut it. Ok?” Bella nodded with short jerky movements. I gently held her arm as I dug in my bag for a scissors. I cut her sleeve away, tearing open a few cuts that had already started closing. I washed her arm up with a rag I had brought with me when I washed my hands. She slowly composed herself and her breathing evened out.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Aftermath
A step in the right direction. I can't wait to find out what you have in store for the story next.
Author's Response:
a pretty big step in the right direction! lol lots is coming up! lots, I promise
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Being Left Alone
Great chapter, I wish that she would let Edward go but understand why she can't. The sad thing is he can't even go without her knowing because she would sense he was there because of the mating thing.
I see you left another clue that she wasn't raped.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! You are the voice of reason. I've had a few people ask if he'll be foloowing her, and he can't cause she would know! you got it!!!
Well I said THIS trial wasn't about rape, she was in 3 other trials previously and one more to come, they all dealt with rape. This specific one doesn't, does that help or make it worse????
Thank you for the review and here's a tease that should make you happy for in two weeks:
I smiled. I was mated, to Bella. I let the idea sit with me and I felt lighter and happier just thinking of it. I was mated to Bella. The phrase played over and over in my head. The more I thought on it the more obvious it was and I felt like the biggest idiot for not seeing it sooner. Bella was my mate and I loved her. How could I have not seen it? I loved Bella. Now that I considered the idea I wanted to kick myself for not realizing sooner.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Returning Home
Finally, but this is giong to be a long 2 weeks.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Mated
Finally, I can't wait for him to try to explain this to Bella, that is going to be a very interesting conversation.
Questions for Edward:
You work for the Volturi at times, isn't that going to become a problem with Bella staying human when you meet Aro, especially now that you and she are mated, its not like you can be seperated from her?
What are you going to door say to Bella if Bella tells you that she wants to be changed,with your feelings that you are a monster?
Author's Response:
I really like your questions. should be interesting what he has to say!!!
Thanks for the review! Here's a tease for next week:
I hadn’t been off the phone with Bella for long when I heard Emmett and Jasper coming up to get me for a hunting trip. I groaned before they made it to my room calling out, “I went hunting with Carlisle yesterday! I don’t need to hunt again.”
“Get up brother! I don’t care if you went hunting. We need manly brother time together. Now that you’re admitting to being mated we need to make sure you’re not going to fuck with our little sister! So get up and get moving!” Emmett bellowed as he plowed into my room.
“Language” Esme called up the stairs.
Emmett smiled. “See, that’s why we need to have this conversation elsewhere. Don’t need to upset the ‘rents.”
I rolled my eyes. “Seriously, Emmett, can’t you say parents, or better yet Esme and Carlisle? Or the best idea, ignore it all and leave me alone!”
Jasper interrupted before Emmett and I bickered and nothing got accomplished. “Just come with us Edward. We want to talk to you about a few things. I promise to keep Emmett in line.” As much as I can. He finished.
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Being Away from Her
Wow what an amazing chapter. Poor Bella and Edward did better than i would expect.
I can see we will be going through some bumpy times now.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad your are proud of Bella and Edward. It was a rough two weeks and they aren't through it yet, but things will slow down soon! I hope!!
Thanks for the review, here's a tease for next chapter. Don't hurt me!
Emmett spoke up. “Will she be ok Carlisle?”
He nodded. “She should be fine. She’s dehydrated, and has lost a lot of weight. From the look of it she hasn’t slept and it looks like her body just gave out. It happens to people that push themselves past the point . . . “
Carlisle cut off when Esme gasped and Rose called out, “What the fuck!”
I had been avoiding the thoughts of the women to give Bella as much privacy as I could, but immediately I saw what they had seen. I shot off the couch yelling. “What kind of sick sadist did that? What happened to her?”
I started pacing and was growling. Jasper put a hand on my arm to calm me. I wrenched away from him. “Leave me alone!”
He didn’t take offense but spoke in a calm voice. “Talk to me brother. What did you see? What happened to Bella? Is she ok?”
I tugged at my hair. “Yes, no, I don’t know. She’s . . . marked.” I couldn’t bring myself to say more.
Emmett came up to me. “What’d you me marked?”
I swallowed and put my hands on my hips trying to get the vision out of my head, but it was burned there and would never leave.
“On her stomach . . . it looks like she was cut with a knife . . . multiple times . . .” I took a deep breath. I couldn’t even say it.
Carlisle spoke. “What else son?”
I looked at him and whispered, “Someone branded the word ‘MINE’ over it.”
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Now that She's Home
Amazing chapter. So glad that Edward sees the mating before his eyes. I think deep down Bella knows something is there between the two of them too, because she is letting him in her world more and more.
Author's Response:
yes, you're right. Bella is not nearly as "blocked" to her emotions as Edward was. She isn't facing the same denial. That doesn't mean she doesn't have struggles to face with him but denial isn't one of them.
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Bella's Story
Wow!!! I am speechless. How could one person suffer such emotional, mental and physical pain?
I'm proud of Edward to remain calm, even though this is killing him in the inside.
Author's Response:
how do people make it through something like that? I have no clue but they do. Bella is incredibly strong
Thanks for reading, I know it was difficult.
Author's Response:
Rose kissed Emmett and told him she would be right back. As she came up to my room she was already thinking to me. "I know that had to be hard for you to hear Edward, but you really blew it!"
Huh? What was she talking about? I didn’t do anything?
Rose came in and saw the confusion on my face. "Don’t look confused. You did nothing for Bella. You gave her no comfort!"
“What do you mean?” I asked. “I was holding her the whole time! Giving her every comfort I could!” I was livid at the accusation that I hadn’t been there for Bella. Of course I had.
Don’t get pissed at me. Tell me oh supportive one. In all the rounds of hugs and comforting what did you say to Bella?
I searched through my memory trying to figure out what I’d said that had Rose so mad. As I searched the reason for Rose’s anger became apparent. I hadn’t said anything to Bella the entire time. I was so focused on not blowing up I didn’t speak to her. I wasn’t a total failure, I had given her strength through my touch, but I couldn’t believe I hadn’t spoken one word to her. I cursed myself for the idiot I was.
"I see you got it. Listen it isn’t the end of the world but tomorrow when she wakes up you had better start sucking up! Seriously, she needs to know you don’t hate her, blame her, or think less of her."
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations
All of that talking went well. She has a long road ahead at least she won't be alone.
Author's Response:
it did go well. LOL that doesnt' happen often enough in FFland! hee hee! She won't be alone, *sigh* isnt' that awesome!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What's Next?
Hope everything is going well with the you and your family.
No problem I really do see your point.
Great chapter, love the appendage rule.
Author's Response:
thanks so much. Family is good, we're just BUSY!
Stick with theappendage rule and it will not lead you astray! Just telling you!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Balancing Relationships
Great chapter. Hope everything is well with you and your family. I have truly missed you.
Author's Response:
Hey kneon!!!
Thanks. Everything with the family is good. I think we are all settling into a new normal. So that helps!
Thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Ignoring the Holidays
I like how you handled the money situation. I like how they both are growing together. Still learning about each other. All part of a relationship.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things
Your first citrus fruit was very well done and tasteful.
I know we have a long way until we get a Edward/Bella citrus fruit, because of the situation.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Writing citrus is not easy! There is a ways to go for B&E's citrus but it is a ways to go in time not chapters. Chapters will be fast forwarding in time begining with chapter 41.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds
Wow, I understand why Bella needed to do this, its part of healing herself. It would be hard to sit and watch someone you love go through something like this and doing nothing but be there for them.
Your other story sounds interesting I look forward to giving it a read.
Author's Response:
Yeah Edward, who's never been around a girl weeping was REALLY out of his element but he got through. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward
Oh I'm so glad that you haven't stopped writing this great story.
Another great chapter. thank you
Author's Response:
I know how much it sucks to have writers drop a story so nope, I can't do that. I'm glad you're still reading!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing
I have a feeling that all is not as well as Edward believes.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - part 1
Great chapter. can't see what's going to happen next. I know that the trial is going to be rough. I also worry about the Volturi finding out about Bella. I also wonder will Edward change Bella eventually if she wants to be changed.?
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Getaway
Great chapter. Thanks for sharing.
These are the out takes of other Cullen's POV during the story,
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18212 Read Count: 1986
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Day the Earth Moved
Wow, Bella is so sad, but she at least senses that Edward is going to be a pivotal person in her life. she just doesn't understand what that means to her.
Author's Response:
no she has NO clue what Edward will mean to her at that point. *sigh*, young love. lol. Bella is sooooo dark and sad, it's hard to be in her head, but I know it will all get better so I don't mind to much. Thanks for the review!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett
Great day. I love how Emmett is the comic relief in every story.
Author's Response:
Emmett is good comic relief, he's fun to play with!
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Interview with Edward after Chapter 28
This was a lot of fun. I am disappointed that my questions didn't come up, but that's fine. You give Newmoon Edward for 2 weeks and she didn't have to share, now he doesn't answer my questions. I see who your fav reader is. I will go pout in the corner. ;)
Hope your mom is feeling better soon.
Author's Response:
I think I'm going to TRY to do a follow-up interview with the TWCS questions. I feel like complete and total poop for forgetting it. I LOVE your Voltuir question and can't beleive you are the ONLY person to ask that ever really and it's a great question!!!
I don't know if I can, but I am going to try to get an interview together.
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings
That would be nice thanks. I also loved your next teaser it sounds like it is going to be a rough few chapters.
Author's Response:
it will be a rough few chapters, but coming out the other side will be good, I hope!!!!
[Reviews - 340] am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41874
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Consumed
oh you girls are so mean. You leave it there. Oh god, I can't wait for the next update. This gets better and better.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Phantom Desire
Great chapter, interesting that Bella seemed to be at the library just at the same time that Edward was.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Passion and Fury
Well Edward will need to start changing his plans because he is falling for her badly.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Dark Abyss
Wow what a story and chapter. I'm glad that Jake loves money so much, but now Edward needs to save Bella from Mike.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Wicked Angel
yes, I was crying. That was such a sad ending that I didn't expect. I hope you all are planning another little story.
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Torture
Wow, that was intense. I sure hope Bella forgives Edward for his past deeds. Is that wrong that I want her with him.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killer Sentiments
Wow, I feel kind of bad for Edward. He wants to be good and change for Bella, but will he get the chance?
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Faith
Sorry to hear about the loss. You are so right rl always comes first.
I have a real bad feeling that Edward is going to get set up by Jake. I hope he doesn't leave Bella thinking its for her best.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Deadly Silent
Oh I hope Bella takes him back. He really is trying to change. I feel bad for Edward.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blazing Suns
Great chapter. I'm glad they are back together. i can't wait to see what happens next.
I was worried that Bella was wired or something to turn Edward in. That would have killed me.
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue
Loved the ending. I hope you all plan on either doing a part2 or at least another new story.
Happy holidays.
Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!
Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.
As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin. Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back. Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush. Damn, she was 26 years old. When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?
A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner
All Human/Alternate Universe
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85741
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
There is nothing like a birth of a baby especially without complications.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Yes, you did that was an amazing scene.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Great chapter, beautiful wedding and vows. Please tell me there is going to be more to this story. I love it so much.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Great chapter. I really like your story alot. This is a great take on their relationship.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Wow great chapter. Can't imagine what is going to happen next chapter.
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Very emotoinal chapter. It is a rough thing to happen for all involved. You captured it very well.
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Wow that was really good. You can feel the love.