Reviews by Lisabebe11
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 115905
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Nice

Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 15987
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved the chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh God he is just as bad as JAke.  Why doesn't he ask Bella and the Cullens to leave before her change.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

OMG - please no war with the wolves.  Let her leave and be done with it.



Author's Response:

Well that would be kind of anti climactic, don't you think?

 

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OH GOD - nasty little brat.  I am sorry - the Pack needs to mind their own business.



Author's Response:

Ha ha, killing vampires is their business.

 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good - Alice changed her.  Hopefully, no dead Edward or Cullens.  IT would be nice to reason with the idiot wolves.  Quil et al are more annoying than Sam's pack.  Sam had a couple of extra years of maturity.  Teens should not have life/death power without someone to balance them.



Author's Response:

So true.

Your EPOV is coming in a DM

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Its unfortunate.  They tried to speak to them.  The Cullens would also have Bella in a moment.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, yes it is unfortunate, but more exciting right? LOL

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

lovely chap



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh wow - Rebecca wants to find bella.  Hopefully, no more confrontations.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I can't tell you anything about what Rebecca wants. LOL

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: QPOV EPI

AWE That is a beautiful ending.  



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 75772
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

Limeade - I love the story.  I wonder if Bella knows what a horndog he is?

 

 



Author's Response:

hee hee, Edward a horndog!!!   To funny!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Wow chilling



Author's Response:

I hope it wasn't to bad for you.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - part 1

I agree with having edward wait elsewhere - heck he can sit in a nearby starbucks - smelling coffee should be ok right?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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This story takes place after Bella Swan graduates from Forks High School. She has been trying to move on from her heart wrenching break-up with Edward Cullen when he left her behind to go to Dartmouth. She has been living her life trying to move past the memories of him - her one true love -ever since.

Then that fateful night at the reunion, she sees him in the first time in ten years and her life is turned upside down when she must choose between the one man she has always loved, and her husband that she is devoted to.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114042 Read Count: 15544
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: The Chair

I am rereading the story.

Your concept is good.  Your writing style flows nicely.  I love the way you develop emotions.  I am having a hard time with Edward being such a cad .  I am used to Edward always being such a gentlemen. 

I am not a jake fan and in this story he is marginally better than edward.  I do nto blame him.  He gave 10 years only to have it tossed out the window at the blink of edward.  I would be bitter too.

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Navy Suit

HE is cruel to the core.  These women deserve better

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Hurdle

IT would appear marriage is not very important to any of them.  So they should part.  Why bring a baby into the picture?

If Jake does not love Bella anymore and Bella never truly loved JAke why bother?

Why marry tanya for the same reason.  Tanya simply needs a hunk.  Bella needs an education and a real job.

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21724
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I must admit I would have told Eddiekins were to go as well - I like.  I would never have tried to off myself - however I would have been on a date with Mike Newton the next day.  I think I would have had a picnic with Mike in the Cullens yard.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Cute - of course she accepts graciously

Summary:

Bella is on her honeymoon when a storm hits and she is tossed off the boat along with her husband. When she awakens on a desert island she is rescued by a beautiful angel with crimson eyes. Lemon included.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4808 Read Count: 891
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Honeymoon in Paradise

I love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. This one was fun to write.

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60858
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration

Her plan is starting to back fire.  Carlisle is starting to like her and may not change her Edward when the time is needed unless of course she is totally hallunicating and not in the past in truth.  The hope is that Alice or one of them realize they need to intervene with Eddiekins.



Author's Response:

Hmmm... you may be right. Of course, she doesn't want Carlisle to change him. Hope she knows what she's doing! LoL!

Thanks for reading!~

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

I am fascinated by wht is next.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Of Letters and Lauper

Wow - he is interested and um a horndog in a good way of course.



Author's Response:

Lol! Yes... a good horndog! :-)

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

oh god



Author's Response:

I know! What was I thinking? Lol!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Of Dancing and Dark Alleys

oh my

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

Hmmm - is  the JAmes incident in their time a vengence?

 

Oh God Carlisle help.



Author's Response: More on this in the next chapter... :-) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

This was awesome - I hope Carlisle timeline is not ruined.  HE deserves his family - Carlisle change them both.



Author's Response:

Yes, Carlisle does deserve it... he's the best... :-)

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

The story is awesome - one catch though - didn't carlisle move somewhere with Edward besides Ohio where he met Esme?

She should level with Carlisle - so that in case something goes wrong he can change edward.  HE should know that in another life Edward was his favorite son he might help protect him.

 



Author's Response:

According to canon, Carlisle met Esme (the second time) when he was working at a hospital near where she lives. Right now she's in Columbus, Ohio... so if he's keeping track of her, it shouldn't be hard to make sure he's in the right place at the right time.

As for Edward, the reason she doesn't tell him the whole truth is because she has that niggling fear that Carlisle might try to stop her. She's said before that she's 99 percent sure he would help her... but because of that 1 percent, she doesn't want to take the risk of telling Carlisle the whole truth.

Thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

Oh wow - Edward is going to cash in his V card.............

 

This is awesome - I am dying to know is she really there or is she still halluncinating - I know read the story.  But I am dying of curiosity.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

Wow.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Sniff no more human Edward - getting close though.  The curiosity is killing me.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

This is too cute  and poigant.  i love it.  A part of me wants her to save the Masen's - they are so kind.



Author's Response:

They are really great - and E&B will do what they can to help them, I think.

Thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Wonderful chapter.  I love Carlisle's willinginess to innovate and concern for his patients.  Such a good doctor.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

I hope it goes well.  I am dying of curiosity abotu where Bella actually is.



Author's Response:

Chicago, in 1918, of course... ;-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

I love the story and this E/B.  They are a lovable couple and much healthier than Meyer's and just as in love.    I am dying of curiosity though - where is Bella.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Youur writing and the story are awesome - but the curiosity is killing me.  IT truly is one of the best vampire fics.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

OMG - I love it - was it real was it real.  Oooooo I love it.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

Awesome chapter and story.  I am sorry the story is ending but I am so happy to finally know how it ends.  It has been delighjtful

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

I love this story it is fesh and new.  In so many ways it is the epitomy of a timeless love.  The characters are so much warmer than Meyer's.  Bella and Edward were overly likeable in Meyer's story.  I truly enjoyed reading it.  I loved the way it ended - though I must admit I am glad to know how it ends - I was intensely curious.  This is one of the best fanficts out there.

Wil there be pack related issues or Victoria?

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

Thank you for writing this story.  IT has been a joy to read and the curiosity killed me for most of it.  I loved your characters and I loved the ending.

Please Please and outtake or two.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories

I truly loved this story

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12167
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1

Hmmm, I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I am glad you are loving this story. See you this weekend =)

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

Laurent is intrigued by 3 available females and goes with tanya.

 

when victoria realizes bella and james's history she decides to high tail with him.  Vickie also realizes edward is bella's mate and that they would have easily 8-12 vampires to fight she persuades james to back down.

Bella also demonstrates that edward's blood is hers as is edward himself.  

 

Vickie realizes she does not want to lose her mate or risk the volturi's wrath.

No blows are exchanged

 



Author's Response:

I absolutely love your theories. And you may be going somewhere with some of them. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and taking the time to read my crazy story.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Uninvited

Awesome chapter.  I love Edward's ability to play it cool and play human.



Author's Response:

Edward had a plan...but so did James, lol. Yeah, Edward has alot up his sleeves that we have yet to see. I am certain, however, that we will get a nice glimpse of just how vampiric he can be next chapter...hee hee hee... Thanks for the review and your support of MD =)

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Checkmate

Wow he is  very vampiric.  Bella lacked faith in him.



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward is not as innocent as he may appear. And Bella's lack of faith will cause future trouble for our love birds :( Thank you for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your support :))

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:The End

Sheesh so little faith in him.  he killed James on his own.  He was not a weak vampire.

 

though I am a total B/E I would love to see him tell her no - you can;t have another chance you hurt me too much just to see her reaction.  Of course he would take her back.  



Author's Response:

Lisa, thank you for your review...I will tell you that Bella will not get off as easily as Edward does in canon...dont get me wrong, there will be an HEA but its not going to be easy getting there. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes

You scared me for a moment - I though you might have decided to have Edward die or permanently serve Aro.

Really a good and original story.  There are so few these days.  Loved it.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words and NO I could never kill Edward...I am too TEAM Edward to ever do that! LOL!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Truth

That was AMAZING



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sticking around and reading, Lisa. So glad you liked it :))

Summary:

It's 57 years later, and Bella is alone, but working for the Volturi. Turned by Aro, she lives a life that is unique, and never heard of before. Edward, lives a life that is unique to. The passing of years hasn't meant much to him.

Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight, all characters and places etc. are not my own, only parts of the plot not in The Twilight Saga.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5124 Read Count: 776
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Visiting Again Bella?

Interesting

Isle Esme by Totteacher Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 99]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23136/images/banner.jpgThis story tella the tale of Edward and Bella's honeymoon on Isle Esme and the ensuing events of the pregnancy, and Bella's transformation into her new life.

Contains various pov's through the stories and sexual content.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110415 Read Count: 10272
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 27 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I wish BD had been more like this - sorry the JAkers POV was soooooo inappropriate



Author's Response:

I never really understood why it was done from Jake's pov.  I mean, don't get me wrong...I love Jacob...but this should have ben about Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ouch poor Edward.  What agony and humiliation.  I never understood why he would allow Jacob to be with Bella.  Hello sperm bank.



Author's Response:

It is funny how that idea never came up

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I loved hearing EDward's POV



Author's Response:

Thanks, I always felt it should have been in the novel.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved the Jasper POV - I always felt BD - should have explored the birth from Bella's POV as well as Edward and the other Cullens.  I always thought Jakers POV was wrong AND yucky.  Imprinting on a baby is yucky.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I have been reading through the story - it is awesome

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73143
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

The story is amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

Enjoyable chapter

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

Your writing is excellent.  I love the tender way Edward cares for Bella and how he can defend her in a violent situation.  I hope the allow the Cullens to aid them.  Edward is deeply intelligent.  He could really benefit from even a community college education. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Fuggiasco

Wow - is charlie a jerk,.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

I am glad to see Charlie realize his behavior was unacceptable.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

What a nice date.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

You can order a birth certificare online - for the cost of postage.  Perhaps Portland is needless.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

I love hte compromise.  They can speed a birth certificate and SSN to you.  I hope this does not have a sad ending.  This has all the earmarks of it - I fear.  It would be nice if Edward woudl get a GED and later at least an associate degree. 

I do enjoy the story - I just an not a sad ending type.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Only Exception

I hope when he awakes - it is the a healthy bella.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

I wish he would get his things and go.  Mrs E will be fine.  The best thing they can do is stay away for their sake and everyone elses.  OR the paperwork online.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Best of You

I love it.  Please keep Edward safe and free of other bad things

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing

I enjoyed the chap - they have grown together.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 295171
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

There first time was cute

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home

I would guess difficulty conceiving

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37330
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confrontation

Fascinating



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected Turn

Bella is being mean - at least listen to him.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What She Said

Ouch.  Poor Edward.  Bella has moved on and built a life with James.  Why should she care.  

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Phoenix

She is still on the wrong path



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

finally she is growing up.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: What Could Have Been

That is horrible.  Plenty of people make a mistake - it does not mean they deserve to live in misery and have every bit of salt imaginable thrown on them.  I'm sorry Carlisle and Bella are trashy for what they did.

Some things should never be done taht is one of them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64463
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40-Thank You Alice

Nice - poor Sappy Edward. 



Author's Response:

Edward seems to like him some make up sex...thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

If she is expecting whose baby is it?  Edward or Julian?

Charlie is a jerk for doing that.  Perhaps they should let her be injured - she clearly does not want them their.

 



Author's Response:

As to Bella's condition...all will be revealed in the next few chapters.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

Oh no - I hope it is Edward's.  Hopefully, not NEssie thogh



Author's Response:

Details about Bella's "condition" will be forthcoming in the next 2 to 3 chapters...I promise.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44-Not Again

Sniff - Prgenant Bella would be nice - A little Eddie would be nice jst not Renesmee what a horrid name



Author's Response:

Thanks Lisa.  I'm with you on the Renesmee thing.  Was there every a worse name? LOL.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45-Aftermath

This is nice - overall he story was quite amusing.

I am glad to see Julian gone :)



Author's Response:

Julian Yates:  May He Rest in Peace...lol

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47-The Proposal

It was a  funny story - Esme and the um thanksgiving dinner were hilarious.  Julian was a putz.

I love to see happiness.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you liked the story Lisa. I hope you will give the sequel a chance and let me know what you think of it :)

Summary:

 

 

Geeky Edward Cullen has been pining over the girl of his dreams for two years. Desperate to win her over he starts a band with his friends, hoping to play his way into her heart. Will his plan work, or will he see what has been right in front of his eyes the whole time?

 

Written for the FicAwesome Gift Exchange for MyEdiction.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8377 Read Count: 1855
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

what an IDIOT of a guy



Author's Response:

Aww, he is just a little blind. Give him a chance.

Summary:

These are various outtakes, written in various points of view..all related to my story How To Win Back the Love of Your Existence, which is a NM alternative ending story. Edward never came back but runs into Bella four years later....


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11944 Read Count: 1803
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)

What a unique holiday.

 

I would go wash my brain with bleach if I learned of my parents sex life.

 

Hillarious



Author's Response:

Lisa;  Was it hilarious enough to win Best Comedy at the Vampire Awards? If you want to vote for it, voting is now open.

 

The link is: http(colon)//twificpics(dot)com(slash)vampawards(slash)?page_id=198.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. PS-Chapter 44 was just posted.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle and Esme are the foundation of the Cullen Coven.  However, this love story started as a tragedy for Esme -- a loveless marriage, the death of her baby and finally an attempt at suicide.  This story traces how Carlisle and Esme eventually find each other and fall in love.  It weaves together Carlisle's and Esme's bio facts provided to Twilight Lexicon by Stephenie Meyer with some original ideas. Canon! Rated R for later lemon content.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49807 Read Count: 3981
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Honeymoon, Part I

What a honeymoon.  :)



Author's Response:

I do hope you approve!  Part II is fun too!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Plans, Prayers and Promises

Nice



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!  Hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Honeymoon, Part II

They are ummm - frisky...... Wow who would have thought.



Author's Response:

It took me a while to get there with C&E (friskiness), but they are 23 and 26 yrs old!!  And I think they have a fun, classic, romantic physical love -- I hope that came through!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Journey

Such a lovely ending



Author's Response:

So happy it left you satisfied.  I'm a sucker for a happily ever after ending....

Thank you for the review!

Second Chance by Louise Clark Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Months after the Volturi have left, there's no denying Emmett and Rosalie's marriage is on the rocks. They have grown distant because of the time she spends with Nessie. Or has someone else drawn her away?

The Cullens, sans Nessie and Rosalie, help the Quileutes with a fundraiser held on their lands. Emmett meets someone. After all, he's a natural flirt.

A second chance at love presents itself, but will he take it? Will she take hers?

Is it possible Emmett and Rosalie never were each other's true mate? 

 

photo from Twilght Eclipse and quote

 

The entire story is written in Emmett's POV. It is AU/Vamp, post-Breaking Dawn, so the story begins in late summer 2007.


Rated NC-17 for cursing and lemons. (There is not a lemon in every chapter.)

Warning: This may be difficult to read if you're a Rosalie/Emmett canon purist!

Disclaimer: I am not affiliated with or related to Stephenie Meyer, she alone owns the Twilight saga. I am just a huge fan and this story is my personal dream influenced by her characters. I am also not affiliated with or related to anyone employed by Little, Brown, and Company OR Summit Entertainment.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Since I DO own this story, please do not copy, translate, plagiarize, duplicate, or misuse my work in any way.

Thank you.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95104 Read Count: 6671
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 23 May 2013
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Second Chance

OMG



Author's Response:

Ha ha, thanks!  :)

Summary:

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Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!

 

 

 

An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6847
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Goodbye

I must say I would like to see him with Esme and her with Edward....



Author's Response:

I am so happy to get a review from you. I can't really tell you what will happen in the end. But I can tell you that this is a Carlisle and Bella story. I hope to hear from you again next chapter. Take Care, Diane.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

Your writing is excellent of course.  But sorry most of the Cullens were married men....



Author's Response:

Thank You and yes other than Edward they are married men. Carlisle is not the same now though, the bond he shared with Esme was broken when he became a human.

-Diane

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 210091
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Wow - poor girl.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Frankly, JAck has a father and family.  She found him wandering - he is not her son.  She can work out visitation - I would hope they would toss their attorney's at her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Ouch



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Oh my Edward likes her



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

cute.  I gather E/B fall in love - which I must admit - it would be convenient for all.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Oh no a bad omen. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Unexpected



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

What nerve of Victoria.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I love the Chap - Edward second guessing Bella.....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

I think she should take a serious look at Edward - he does not listen to her and inores her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Totally cute.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Oh no nothing bad to JAck Please please please....

 

Loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."