Reviews by Lisabebe11
Summary:

It's almost Christmas and Edward is alone for the first time since his transformation.  How much trouble can a mind-reading, young vampire get into?  What will he do when one act of kindness results in unexpected consequences? Pre-twilight, Canon story.

Edward's Christmas Carol banner by Coleen 561


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9208 Read Count: 208
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fascinating



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope the next chapter continues to fascinate.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

cute



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you thought so!

Summary:

afitr

 

Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Divine Miss Hale

Wow

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: An Understanding

I love their visit to the cottage and LAurent's story.  I am glad to see he decided to be a good husband and honor the life he built with irina.  Life with Irina is not eating humans. 

Loved the chapter.  There is plenty of time to talk.  They needed to embrace the passion in their love as well as building a future.  Great story.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In Which I am the Clairvoyant

I am glad to see the sisters try to stop Eddie's lunacy and even more glad to see an Edward that actual sorta acknowledges his passions.  I always thought she have seduced him after Voltera when they returned and the party night.



Author's Response:

You know, I thought so too! And for the record...I thought Edward acted very badly..blaming her for doubting his love for her. Honestly...I thought he needed to man up and at the very least take some resonsibility for his actions (which he eventually did in Eclipse). Hope you'll enjoy this version. Chapter three will be up next week!

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Bitch Slap

Awesome....

I wish they would have - that and rosalie taught bella the art of the Emmett slap.



Author's Response:

Aww...it's called a bitch slap. And I am quite sure Rose is the one who taught Emmett...repeatedly!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Beer Blast

I love it



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Into the Woods

I am glad she dumped him first.  He preyed on all of her insecurities and used them as a weapon to not be with her.

 

Sure later she uses this as a weapon against him to manipulate him.  But he started it.



Author's Response:

You're right! But he sounds like an awful lot like guys I've known in my lifetime. Hopefully Bella will teach him a few things and they'll both be stronger for it.

Thanks for your review! jayne

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: EPOV In which I find my voice

Tell her the truth.  She might forgive and yes - be a little friendly with the hands.  Forgiveness is a 2 way street.  He must forgive and she must do the same if not then part.  Let her have her dog.

I must admit a cat mouse game does not sound fun.  Those two being equals does - them arguing can be funny.

though if she does not forgive him - perhaps alice or rose should invite tanya and encourage her to enroll in forks.



Author's Response:

I think you'll find that this story is all about exploring emotions and battling with issues from both of their pasts. There will be humor but plenty of drama too!

Next week chapter 7...Broken Dreams and Broken Thongs...both POV"S!

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts and Broken Thongs

I love this conversation.  IT is perfect and leaves for a healthy relationship.

 

They start to work through it.  HE does not leave because they work through both of their fears during the weekend.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Pick-up truck pick me up

I love this story



Author's Response:

Yay, glad you're enjoying it! See ya next week! xo

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling

True it would not be.  Obviously edward kicks his ass.  Please give an out take of Emmett taking on the vickie.

They both acted immaturely.  They are both teens afterall.   Overall, they have much healthier communication the canon.  Sorry using jake not cool.



Author's Response:

With the sweets come the sours. They've been in their bubble all weekend. It was bound to burst eventually. Sigh...they have grown a LOT this weekend! 17 will be up on Thursday!

An Emmett Vickie outake? Hmmm...I'll see what I can do!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Love Letters

That sandwich has made me ravenous.  My lunch salad while yummy did not last long.  I went from hungry to ravenous.

 

I loved those letters.  Please let them work through it.  Pretty please.



Author's Response:

I know, right? LOL! Everytime I reviewed this chapter I wanted to eat a damn ham and cheese sandwich. I gotta stick to writing lemons...it's a lot less fattening!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Teddy

Remarkable.  I love the detailed account of their day.

 

Of course she says yes.  She can get engaged and set a date later in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! We'll see how his proposal goes over tomorrow!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Compromised

Eddie Eddie, she is crying because you finally overcame one of your many victorian hangups.

Hmmm She wants to get off the pill.....

Please no sick imprint and maybe a pretty name.  Renesme - cough.

 



Author's Response:

I will promise you a decent HEA...I am a big ole sap when it comes to that. I'm not going to say whether this includes a baby, but I will say this: As God is my witness, there will NEVAH be a child named Renesme in my version. Good lord!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Tears for Lottie

What a lovely chapter though it is sad.



Author's Response:

Thanks! It is sad...but very necessary to the central theme of this story.

Chapter 15 will post soon!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Simple Man

I love Emmett.  Everybody needs someone who is brutally honest and loving at the same time.  He has the perfect combination of both.

I love Edward because he such a gentlemen, well read, devoted, passionate, and handsome.  But he is such a boy in so many ways.

Emmett is a gent; he is obviously well educated by now, but he lacks Edward's refinement.  He also does not have Edward's arrogant streak.  He is hte brother I wish I had.  I am an only child.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Guilty as Charged

They are drama queens. I have heard the term tally whacker.  It is an amusing term though.



Author's Response:

Yep, but they are also teenagers! I just love the teenage angst! Tally Whacker is a very funny term, isn't it? Wonder why it fell out of fashion?

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Bed Time Stories

charlotte - do tell.  This was such a touching chapie.

 

My son's nickname is teddy - he is theodore though.  He is a tiny little rascal - he is 17 months old.

 

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Promises

I am glad she will not be using Jakers or Mike.  I would love to see them announce their engagement later in hte year.  To see the reactions fo Forks HS. 

 

I love the mature communication.   I love hte angle you take to Twilight.  She could have taken that path and done more with nessie sans icky imprint.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I promise that there will be NO jake (unless he goes to the wedding as the son of a family friend). Remember...she KNOWS where her loyalties lie!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23:Forever part one

I loved this story.   

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

wlb


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159782
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it so far.  AH right?



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Yes, AH

Healing Rosalie by Vaneria Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Healing Rosalie

“I’ll never sit on a porch somewhere, with him grey-haired at my side, watching our children play.” What if someone actually talked to Rosalie about her experiences? What if they made her look at things another way? One-Shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1544 Read Count: 62
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 08 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish someone would have said that to her - she would have made different choices.

Summary:

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It’s a one shot starting when Laurent is leaving the Cullen’s in Twilight. Just a naughty thought of how I saw his introduction to the first Denali.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1272 Read Count: 97
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2011 Updated: 09 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was um an intense lemon.  I always pictured the Denali girls to be very passionate like this.  I always considered Laurent to lust Irina but not love her - why do a favor like that for Victoria knowing what the Cullens meant to Irina and her family.  That to me is not love - it is using her.

You did capture him well.  I do wish he had loved her - if he had been a good boyfriend/mate/spouse whatever he wanted to be he would have stood beside Irina when the Volturi came and they would have come due to Edward's spring break trip. I always thought it should be been Victoria to go to the Volturi and not Irina.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

fs

MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I hope you will continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh Please Let Rosalie at him.  It will be ugly probably uglier than Edward.  The Cullens can keep her safe.

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I admit - I owuld love to see one of the Cullen Women kick his ass.  Esme I would bet could be one scary chic.  She is not portrayed like that but.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hate rapists.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

though JAkers should maybe rot in prison.....

OR have a counseling session with rose or esme or some many people .....

The worst part about Edward killing again is that it is yet another time he has to kill and more to weigh on his shoulder.  More burden for him thus letting another cullen do the honors might not be the worst thing. or better still the pack executes him.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Billy and jakers need to share a jail cell.  Can they send for some of hte denali clan to help babysit?

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He is such a bastard.  He and his daddkins belong in jail to suffer. 

I hope someone comes to help Edward nad Bella.



Author's Response:

Jacob certainly is, but why do you think so badly of Billy? Billy had trouble accepting what his son did, but now that he sees the truth he certainly doesn't condone what his son did.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So there was a fight or simply the rain.

Jake should have been killed he was a supernatural being with a criminal inclination.

Summary:

While out in her garden, Esme has a heart to heart with Bella after she returns from her honeymoon.  Canon. 

garden
By twilightcakes at 2011-01-19


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Esme (non-slash)
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2260 Read Count: 163
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Esme.