Reviews by dazzleglo
Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68122
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Loving it.  I love Esme had arranged to get the chest for Bella.  

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

LOL, they all have a healthy fear of their women.  Esme is so sweet, loving it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

I'm loving this story so much.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Loving this story and I love how Esme knows them already.  Eleazer needs to be taken down.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One ~ First Blood

Loving this story already.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Wow, loving it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

Loving this story.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

LOL, when they find out Edward is Bella's baby daddy, they're going to freak.

Summary:

nudge

With a fire raging outside, and help on the way, sometimes all you need is a little nudge. 

 

Tied for 2nd Place in the Picture is Worth 1000 Words Contest: Quarantine Edition.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 609 Read Count: 805
[Report This] Published: 23 Apr 2020 Updated: 23 Apr 2020
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, loved it.

Summary:

double crossed


 


Edward Cullen was ruthless, deadly, a man whore and was damn proud of each title.  The only child of the West Coast Mob Boss, Carlise “The Lion” Cullen. From the age of thirteen, he had been groomed to take over for his father when he retired. The day before his twenty-five birthday, his father sat him down and informed him that he was ready to hand over the reins to him, that was after he performed two more acts of loyalty to the family. Edward grinned, knowing that there was nothing his father could throw his way that he wouldn’t do or could do.


 


Isabella Swan the daughter of Charlie “The Books” Swan, the accountant for the Cullen crime family for all of his adult life, as well as friend and confidant to his Boss.  Knowing from a young age what her father did for a living, she decided she wanted to develop her skills in weapons and combat so that one day she could find a place in the family. Called to a meeting with her father and Carlisle, she thought that her dreams were coming true.


 


What happens when they are Double Crossed? 


 


 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5939 Read Count: 2127
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2020 Updated: 03 Jun 2020
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO, I loved this story when I read for the contest, but had to read it again, it was awesome.

My life by Neesa Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Esme is the daughter of a mafia crime boss. She has an arranged marriage. See how Carlisle and Esme go through early married life to get to the top.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45962 Read Count: 1208
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2020 Updated: 28 Nov 2020
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh my how sad for Esme they're trying to take her entire family from her.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love Esme is coming into her own.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loving this story.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

They are getting to really know one another, so great.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They are so sweet together.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Carlisle's father is a jerk bringing that up at breakfast.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He's so loving and thoughtful.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving this story already.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it, Esme seems happy.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He's so sweet to Esme.

Summary:

Out-of-the-Coffin

Vampires revealed their existence three years ago and Bella Swan has never encountered one… until now. His presence in her life means that she and her cousin have to play detective to try and get to the bottom of all the mysterious murders that have only started since he arrived in town. Explicit lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Out of the Coffin
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56044 Read Count: 8442
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2020 Updated: 18 Apr 2021
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yay, they said ILU to one another.  Glad Jake is okay and go Rose beating the crap out of Mike.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review :) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loving it.  Oh, Jessica is jealous of Em giving Rose his blood.  So we meet Jasper!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this review. I'm so pleased you're liking this story. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Hope the calvary shows up for them.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I love wild Em showing his dominance.  Edward has faith in both Bella and Rose even though he's scared of them going in and getting hurt.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So sad, but Jake and Edward are on top of it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So sad about grandpa.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I know, but it had to happen. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Glad to hear your family member is okay.

 

Loving this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words. Glad you're enjoying the story. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, poor Bella.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story, can't wait to see what you did to it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for my first review! I'm excited for this as I think the changes make the story a lot better. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LOL, they almost dropped Em, can imagine him popping out of the box and all the havoc that would've gone with it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I thought that image was quite a funny one too 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh man, Mike has Bella.  Loving this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm a fan of HEA so don't worry too much! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loving it.  Glad Em is helping Edward out and yay, Carlisle is on the way.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loving that Esme is now here, yay, awesome story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I was so exited when it came to writing this chapter as I got to introduce Esme! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Emmett you have just been bitten by the love bug and don't even know it yet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and yes he has! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Tanya is pure evil and maybe with Vanessa being changed it's going to hurt her plans, because crap happens outside of your control.



Author's Response:

Tanya is awful! Vanessa being changed is actually part of her bigger plan... but plans don't always go the way they are meant to! So maybe something will happen. Thank you so much for your review. I hope you're doing well. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OMG and they were just all getting to know one another too.  Loving it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know, how could the author have planned it that way ;). Glad you are enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, very hot and loving at the same time.  Glad you're feeling better, it really sucks being sick and no one wants to go to the hospital on a good day, nevermind right now.



Author's Response:

Glad you likes this chapter! It was horrible but I'm glad I went as it meant I got the help I needed. I hope you're doing well during this time. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loving it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loving this story so much.  Yay, Nessie is there and she's so sweet.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was so pleased when I got to introduce Nessie's character into this. I just think her and Edward can have a really nice relationship 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Tanya is an evil, sneaky twisted person.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. I'm not a fan of her either. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loving Esme so much already, she just fits with them.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I was so pleased when I got to include her in the story. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love Em and Edwards's interaction with one another.



Author's Response:

Sorry for not replying sooner! Life has been a bit crazy lately. Thank you for your comments - I love the relationship that these two have as well. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yay, they kissed, loved it.  What a wonderful date that they talked and got to know one another.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really enjoyed writing this chapter! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Em is so like Eric from True Blood, and he fits the part perfectly.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that's how he comes across! When I saw Eric in the show I could just see him and Emmett swapping places. Thank you for your continued support! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loving it, they've found a clue which will hopefully lead them to the killer.  Yay, Esme is here.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked this chapter and thank you for the review! I'm so pleased Esme finally got here too! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love it, they're playing detective.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Glad you liked the chapter! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I'm so glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

LOL, Em is such a pain in the ass but a good guy.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

They are so adorable, love it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Loving this story.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved it, now who is bursting their bubble.

Summary:

Twilight but what if Bella was born half-vampire? Bella Swan moves to the small town of Forks after her grandparents die, leaving her in the care of her Uncle Charlie who can't stand to be around her. What happens when she meets the Cullens?

 

PART OF YOUR WORLD

 

(Banner by heartfortwilight)

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1997 Read Count: 242
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2020 Updated: 23 Jul 2020
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving this story.

Summary:

ba

For all the power of Mother Nature's raging storm lighting up the night, sometimes the fiercest storms with the most damage are the ones inside us. So busy with holding back to avoid the heartbreak, we forget we're also hiding the sun and warmth. What if we just gave in to the honesty in our hearts instead? Would be be able to weather the storm, or get blown away?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 102379 Read Count: 5089
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2020 Updated: 05 Dec 2023
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Dirt Road Diary

Wow, that's some crazy heavy stuff Edward is going through because of Charlie, glad he had Jasper to talk to about it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - You Think You Know Somebody

Rose almost got it out of Bella.  Poor Edward doesn't know what to do with himself.



Author's Response:

Rose really did almost get it out of her. But it would have been wrong for Rose to know before  Edward. I promise it won't be too much longer.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter - Why You Wanna

LOL, he's trying to hide in plain sight and now has to talk to her.  Loving it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that didn't work out too well for him. LOL Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Storm Warning

Loving it already, can't wait for more.  Loving that Edward is a storm chaser like in Twister.



Author's Response:

So happy to have you along for the ride. Gonna be a bit bumpy for a bit. But hang on. Should be worth it in the long run. Thanks for reading.

Before I Die by britter18 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 422]
Summary:

 

Before Edward Cullen can become Don of The Cullen Family, he must do one thing first. Something he doesn't want to do but to become Don something he has wanted since he was young he will have to do it.

Bella Swan runs away from an abusive ex, and ends up seeing something she shouldn't. Edward Cullen offers her a choice what will her answer be?

Mafiaward/Bella

Thanks to Clo for the banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Before I Die
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319940 Read Count: 73389
[Report This] Published: 27 Sep 2020 Updated: 10 Sep 2023
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Official Part 1

Loving this story, it's awesome.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Scars

OMG, Bella has been through hell.  I hope Edward makes every one who hurt her suffer a horrible, horrible existence.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2021 Title: Chapter 14: To Russia

Loving this story, glad most of the enemy are dead, I'm worried Demetri is still alive too.  Holy crap the feds have Bella.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 27: A Bloody New Years Part 3

OMG, hope Bella is okay, and Edward gets revenge hurting Jacob and Charlie so they suffer.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Changes

Loving this story.  Glad she stood up to Mrs. Cope.  

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 26: A Bloody New Years Part 2

Edward is going to make them suffer for taking Bella, hope they make it hurt long before he kills them.



Author's Response:

Right!!!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 9: It really hits you

I hope Edward makes the traitors suffer for what they did to the girls.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Wait.. What?

Loving this story. Glad they changed doctors as I wouldn't trust them either, but sad that they ended up at the same one Alice uses and now Alice is mad that Bella's pregnant.



Author's Response:

I know right?! Thank you for your review

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2

Loving this story so much, glad they talked.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Unofficial

Holy hell Jacob is nuts, I think he's gone over the edge.  At least Edward made a nice proposal for Bella that she can remember. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Is this the Love?

Loved it.  It took Jenks long enough to get there, geez.  I hope Seth is okay.



Author's Response: right??? like what was he doing lol .Thanks!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Feeling like a Prisoner

Loving it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Alice

Loving it, he's learning to be nicer.  

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 7: It Was A Lot To Handle

At least he bought a ring he thought she would like.  Em is trying to protect Rose, Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 4: The Day After

Oh, he's falling for Bella, loving it.



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Terms

Hope they both grow into loving one another.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Should've Said No

Loving this story already.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Midnight Sun

Loving this story.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 28: A Bloody End

Good rittens, that he gave them what they deserved.



Author's Response:

Right!!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2023 Title: Chapter 43: Epilogue

Loved this story and can't wait for the sequel.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Official Part 2

Wow, lots happened.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Five Stages of Grief Part 2

So glad Rose was there to facilitate them getting to a place so they could talk and Jessica helped a lot too.



Author's Response:

YES THIS!!!! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Acceptance

Such a great story, glad they're talking and trying to come to terms with what happened.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Healing

Loving this story, so glad Bella is getting better 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 36: Miami

Glad they're getting back to one another by talking and being intimate.

Entrapment by Jemster23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Entrapment

 

For Bella Swan, desperate times call for desperate measures. For Edward Cullen, family is everything. *Voted First place in the Twilight Family Affairs contest


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 180073 Read Count: 44825
[Report This] Published: 05 Nov 2020 Updated: 12 Jun 2021
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Loving it. Bella did so good, she is the perfect partner for Edward.  

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Loving it, she really fits in with the family well.



Author's Response:

She really does! There is more time in the next chapter xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

wow, loving it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, glad to hear you're liking it xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Loving it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Loving it.  Glad Bella got everything out in the open with Edward.  She needed to be with him to calm him down since he's so frustrated and angry.



Author's Response:

They're come a long way for sure. Onwards and upwards for these two. We just need to find Marcus now ... xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Loving it, nanna is a hoot.



Author's Response:

She's the best- I'm going to miss her xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad Edward realizes how wrong he was about Bella.



Author's Response:

He really does! It doesn't make what he said or did right but hopefully this chapter helps explain why he flew off the handle xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Loved it so much, they're getting back to themselves.



Author's Response:

They really are- all that has happened has only made them stronger as a couple xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Omg, evil cliffy.  Loving this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It makes me so happy to hear people are still enjoying the story xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It makes me so happy to hear people are still enjoying the story xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Damn, I love Nana, glad that she was there to support Bella.



Author's Response:

Nanna is the best! She knows how to put Rosalie and Edward in their place xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Loving it.  Edward is really trying hard and this is something he and Bella need to work through, Rose needs to back off.



Author's Response:

He really is! Just you wait until the next chapter. As for rose... she's annoyed a few people. Who do we think is going to put her in her place? Xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I loved Carlisle and Bella's talk together, I think it was helpful for Bella and Carlisle may have learned something about Marcus.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I thought it was time to bring Carlisle back into the story and it was good for Bella to hear his insight into everything that's happened xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

So much going on, loving it.  Glad Rose was there for Bella she was so frightened.  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much:) Glad you liked it .  I'd love to say this is only a small blip, but let's just say this is the start of the drama ... xx


Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Loved it, knew Edward was going to get Bella and make them pay for what they did to her.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it 😊xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So much happening between them.  Glad the baby and Bella are okay and she does have a support system with Rose and Edward's family.  Edward knows how badly he messed up and is going to have to work to get Bella's trust back which he willing to do.



Author's Response:

It really has. They need time to settle before having that all important conversation which is coming in the next chapter xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Loving it, Bella is so funny first time for everything.  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review- I'm glad you liked it :) xx

Summary:

 

What if the whole story of Santa Claus was wrong? A tale of Father Christmas and his debate on whether or not humans still truly believe or should he stop delivering presents. Maybe it only takes one pure true believer to save Christmas. HEA E/B


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2254 Read Count: 908
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2020 Updated: 20 Dec 2020
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Getting the Story Right

I'm loving this already.  LOL, the reindeer gassed up the place.

Summary:

 

Edward's lucky he makes cute babies when his impulse buy irritates Bella.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4245 Read Count: 598
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2021 Updated: 22 Jan 2021
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG, this was so good, made me smile.  The only reason any store has those giant stuffed animals is because they know some guy will come by and buy them.

Summary:

Somewhere to begin

 

Two divorces, two kids and no trust. What could go wrong? *


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200796 Read Count: 10668
[Report This] Published: 31 Aug 2021 Updated: 29 Nov 2021
Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Coincidence, I Think Not

Alec is a complete self-centered jerk.  Chelsea is a total idiot airhead.