Reviews by coryoplayer
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

S.O. & Foot

Thanks for giving me the correct site so I don't miss out on any of your amazing stories!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Your welcome honey!! we can't have a story without you being here now can we?

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

S.O. & Foot

What can I say??? Let's hope Renee can do a great acting job.

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

S.O. & foot

Tough one to read but, I'm not giving up!!!!

Question for both of you. Did you find it hard to write that chapter??? Just because I'm assuming you both have some sort of story line already planned out???

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

oh my god yes.. I still have nightmares...It was incredibly emotional for both of us.  So see..we aren't THAT crazy..... lol

thanks for not giving up...we love that

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

S.O. & Foot

Great chapter!!! A look into the mind of the "punisher"!!! You've left me wondering if we readers will see Felxi again????

Now that being said, what will Aro be doing next???? (thud)

More when it's ready please!!! Loving this!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

S.O. & Foot

Have to agree with you, that was kind of creepy!!!! Great chapter though!!!!

Glad you got things running right!!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

I know right... what a nightmare...but thank goodness...Jenn is an absolute genius.  Thanks for reading and reviewing

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

S.O. & Foot

Your two muses must just be overflowing with ideas. I'd like to get into them and find out where you two came up with the idea for this story!!!!

That being said, I wonder where you two are going to take us in the next chapter now???

Keep up the good writing. I'm thoroughly enjoying the story!!!! Kind of scaring me at the moment but, I ain't giving up!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order

S.O. & Foot

Great chapter. I was actually nervous for Bella/Elizabeth!!!!

What are your two muses going to do next????

Enjoy your Easter as well!!!!! Eat a jelly bean or two!!!! (hee, hee)

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

S.O. & Foot

The story is creeping me out but in a good way if you understand what I'm saying!!!!

Definitely looking forward to more!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

S.O &  Foot

I'm guessing you two have a plan in your muses about Bella being on "medications"!!!! I don't want any more babies for Aro!!!! But, it's up to you two gals, I know!!!!

Very much enjoying this story!!!

More when its ready please!!!!

Cory

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

S.O. & Foot

Firstly, I got to say that I absolutely love, love, love the new banner!!!!

Now the story. Still creeping me out!!! Thinking that Bella MIGHT get pregnant by Aro!!!! But I trust you two and your muses!!!!

I'm not giving up on this no matter how creepy you make it!!!! Great story telling is hard to find. So when you find a good story you wade through the good and the bad!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

S.O. & Foot

Yes, still creepy!!! And thanks god Bellas stomach growled on time!!! WHEW!!!

More when it's ready pleae!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

S.O. & Foot

You may be a little off your rockers but, you're giving us a damn good story!!!!

So please, just keep giving us this amazing story and I guarantee that I'll be there to read!!!!!

You've left me in sheer wonderment as to what Esme is going to do now!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

S.O. & Foot

I hope you two already have a plan in your minds for payback for this incredibly wicked man!!!!!

And I too, can't stop reading this because I need to know how your muses will finish this story!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

S.O. & Foot

I just died when I read that Charlie was talking with Felix!!!!! Talk about twisting the knife you just stabbed us with!!!! (hee, hee)

Need more when it's ready PLEASE!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

S.O. & Foot

You two really know how to put the fear of god into peoples!!!! (Cory is waving her finger at you two!!!!)

As for Bella witnessing the punishment. I think you said enough in the chapter as to what actually happened!!!!! (GULP!!!!)

I'm thinking it's Felix peaking in. He did have a rough journey, personally, "cleaning out" Bella's thought. And since he met Bella's dad earlier on. I'm guessing Felix.

So will the next chapter have the answer to the million dollar question of whom was lurking in the bushes????

OK bring on the next one!!!!! Because this one was fabulous!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

S.O. & Foot

So it was Jasper that saw the two of them.

What's next??????

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

S.O. & Foot

WOAH!!!!!! Jasper had to hold a knife to the throat of the woman that he loves and possibley kill her???? Not nice at all gals!!!!

And now you two have me scared s**tless that Bella is going to be in big trouble because she's remembering things!!!!

When will this madness end????? Maybe you better sign me up for those shrink sessions!!!!

I can't stop reading!!!! More please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

S.O. and Foot

WOAH!!!!! It's all I got after that chapter!!!!

More when it's ready!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Cory,

We love your reviews.. You are amazingly supportive of all of our twisted work, and we love you for it.  Thanks so much for being such an awesome support.  We hope we continue to bring you a story that you will love. 

Your the greatest.. Thanks so much

Foot and S.O.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

S.O. & Foot

Oh god!!!! Whom is Felix writing a note to???? Aro or Charlie????

These cliffhangers kill me!!!!! (thud)

More when it's ready please!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

S.O. & Foot

Firstly, what's this about a new site?? What am I missing???

Great chapter as well!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

S.O. &  Foot

Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! (thud)

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

S.O. & Foot

Why do I have this feeling that something VERY bad is going to happen soon???

Great to get some back story on Carlisle, even though it was pretty graphic!!!

Looking forward to more when it's ready!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

S.O. & Foot

WTH???? Where is Bella?????

Oh god, more questions in my mind after that chapter!!!!! (thud)

More when you can please!!!!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

S.O. & Foot

Glad to get the update!!!!

And I'm glad that Edward might have a clue as to Elizabeth's/Bella's location.

Post more when you can!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

S.O. & Foot

Oye vey!!! Tough one to read through. But, somebody is rescuing Bella at the end. I think????

Thanks for putting the non-betad chapter out for us readers. I appreciated it muchly!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

S.O. & Foot

Pardon my french. Oh mother fucking god!!!! These cliff hangers are waaaaay toooooo much for my blood pressure!!!! (hee, hee) Damn what a good chapter!!! I hope James gets what's coming to him too!!!!

Any hints as to when the next chapter might be ready???? (Cory starts pacing the floor!!!!)

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

S.O. & Foot

Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! You stopped!!!!!!!

Oh good lord. I have good feelings & bad feelings and I don't like any of them right at this moment. GULP!!!!!

Please, please, please, PLEASE tell me you have the next chapter almost done!!!! I'm begging you two!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

S.O. & Foot

WOAH!!!! Off to read the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

S.O. & Foot

Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! You stopped there!!! (Thud)

Off to the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

S.O. & Foot

So happy to be caught up!!!!

You two are doing just a brilliant job with this story!!!

So looking forward to more when it's up!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

S.O. & Foot

Glad to have you back!!! I had to giggle that the notification system sent me 13 notices of the new chapter!!

Now that was a tension filled chapter and we still don't know if they made it out yet!!!! GULP!!!!

Can't wait for the results, which is hopefully is in the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

S.O & Foot

Glad you're back!!!!!

Edwards leg has got to be ok!!!!!!

So looking forward to the rest of this journey!!!!

Cory

Summary:

One shot written for The Age of Edward contest. Set in 1745 Scotland during the second Jacobite uprising. Bella and Edward are preparing for their wedding when they receive the news that Edward and his brothers have been called to fight.  This is the story of Bella's struggle with the news and living her life while he is away.  Will her love return from battle?  Rated M for lemon.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5656 Read Count: 749
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Love of a Highlander One Shot

Jen

Fabulous short story. Maybe you will continue???

Cory



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  I would love to write some more Kiltward some day.  I won't say it will never happen, just not in the near future.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514155
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

S.O. & Foot

Cory is now officially scared to death!!!!!

I'm hoping Jacob being there will bring my blood pressure down a wee bit!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

S.O. &  Foot

I feel for Carlisle right now!!!! I hope you two have a good plan in place for this fiasco!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

S.O. & Foot

That was a little bit of tension in that chapter!!!!

I keep waiting for the shoe to drop on the microchip in Victoria's body!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

S.O. & Foot

OMG!!!!! You left us hanging there????? (THUD) I'm taking those deep breaths like you said to. AND IT AIN'T WORKING!!!!!!!!

Please tell me the next chapter is almost ready!!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

S.O. & Foot

OH GOD!!!!!!! (Thud)

Please tell me you have the next chapter ready!!!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

S.O. & Foot

I'm worried for Carlisle now!!!!!

Edward sounds lost at the end there!!!! Great chapter!!!!!

So if I'm reading corretly, you need some new equiptment in order for everyone to get the notices of new chapters. Is this correct?? Because I keep checking daily for updates since I don't get notices.

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

S.O. & Foot

Poor Edward!!!!! He's a fraction of an inch from loosing it!!!!

I'm hoping the next chapter is almost done. Because I've lost it already!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

S.O. & Foot

Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! A cliff hanger!!! I hate them!!! I understand why writers use them. But, I hate them!!!!!

I'll get that damn cock cage off of James!!! With a hacksaw and I'll take more than just the cock cage too!!! Man your two muses are sure making James out to be a VERY bad man!!!!!

Soooooooooooooooo loving this story and I've started my prayers so that the next chapter comes as soon as possible!!!!! I'm sure I'm not alone in needing to know what happens in the next chapter!!!! (Cory starts pacing around the computer room!!!)

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

S.O. & Foot

Fabulous chapter!!!! Definitely worth the wait!!!!

Just am sad that it's coming to an end!!!!

Post away when ready!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

S.O. & Foot

Man am I a bad girl!!!! I f**king loved that chapter!!!! Oh, I'm a bad girl!!! (hee, hee)

Looking forward to the finale!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

S.O. & Foot

Sad, that it's over but, I just have to remember it's here to re-read over & over!!!

Maybe one day, you'll give us the one last scene that Bella started at the end of this chapter!!!!

Great story!!!! (two thumbs up!!!!!)

Cory

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624470
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

rmcrms5

Glad I'm not alone in the figuring out how this site works!!! Thought I had you on new chapter alert but, I was wrong. Will do it the correct way after this comment!!!

Now Bella is wondering if she's pregnant.

But, wtf is Carlisle up to????

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

RC

Don't know why but, I didn't get notice that you'd updated!!!!

Good God!!! WTF is Carlise doing?????

What will Edward do???

Off to read the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

RMC

OK you've calmed me down a little bit but, I'm scared that there are cameras in the basement!!!!!!!

Thanks god Edward was just acting!!!! WHEW!!!!

Still don't understand why I never got notice that you updated because I checked my profile and it should happen.

Looking forward to more!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

Add my name to the list of needing to know if a chapter has been missed!!!!

Please let us know as soon as you can!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Cliffhanger. Very, very, very mean!!!!

I hate angst and I hate cliffhangers. I get why you writers have to do them but, that still doesn't make me like them!!!!

I will never give up on a good story no matter how many moments of angst are in them. I just hope that it's in the brotherhood of the writers NOT to torture your readers with cliffhangers in every chapter!!!! That would kill me if cliffhangers at the end of every chapter came true!!!!

Great chapter!!!

Soooooooooooooooooooooooo looking forward to the next chapter when you post it next week!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

R

I'm trusting your muse to do the right thing here!!!!

That was a barn burner of a chapter!!!! Well done, two very bad men at once, gone!!!!!

Looking forward to the grand finale of this amazing story!!!!

Post when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Rmcrms5

You had me very scared there for a while. Thinking that Bella was going to go out with someone new!!!!

Looking forward to the epilogue!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Rmcrms5

Thank you for such an amazing story!!!!!

Good luck with the book deal!!!!

Cory

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36877
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

S.O. & Foot

Don't have a flipping clue how I missed this story!!!! (Cory slaps her head)

Can't wait to see where your muses take us in this one!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

S.O. & Foot

Great first date there girls!!!! (two thumbs up!!)

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

S.O. & Foot

Glad that Edwards mom is going to help out!!!

We need to have Edward and Bella together not apart!!!!!

Post more when you can!!!

Cory

Summary:

Bella and Alice, excited from reading DefinatelyStaying’s delicious lemony fanfics, tease each other over a web cam. What happens when Jasper comes to investigate the noises? collaboration with Definently Staying

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Alice, Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2246 Read Count: 1990
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

S.O.

Loved it!!!!!

Cory

Stripped by punkfarie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward and Bella both nearly lose their lives when they lose their first loves. Can they find a reason to live in each other or will their relationship send one of them over the edge? OOC, ExB, AH. Rated M. COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245482 Read Count: 20815
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hi!!

I'm new to twcs so I'm searchinig around for stories to read and loved the preview you had for this story of yours.

Loving the story and I look forward to more when you've got it ready!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Glad you are liking the fic. 

The story is complete and I should be posting the rest of the chapters soon. There are 36 total. 

Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade.  Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2959
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

S.O. & Foot

I hope you carry forward with some type of ending for this one!!!!

Cory

Summary:

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Edward and Jasper have been together for nearly seven decades. When their blood-filled hedonistic lifestyle is challenged by the addition of Jasper's nineteen year old mental patient, who will survive? AU ExJ, JxA, ExJxA Short story, 10 chapters. Written for FandomGivesBack auction.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7460 Read Count: 799
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Jun 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Time Out

F.K.

This is going to be one interesting story!!!!

Loving it so far!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: APOV: Dreaming of Sanity

Fiberkitty

What is up with Alice???? Woah!!!!

Post more when it's ready please!!!

Cory

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303329
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

B.B.

Found this one and just couldn't stop reading!!!!

It's hot, sexy and very thud worthy!!!!!

Off to start the sequel!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752196
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

A cullen Wannabe

Just finished your amazing story!!!! And I can honestly say that it was worth the late nights up!!!!

Now I think I'll go find another one of your stories and dig in!!!!!

Fabulous story!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm so glad you like it and I hope you like the rest!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41873
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Phantom Desire

Devilish

Glad to see that your story is safe here. I would hate to miss any of it!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks for following us over here! :) 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Quicksand

Devilish

Fabulous chapter!!!!

I hope Edward, Emmett and Alice get Bella out of her little bit of trouble she got herself into!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

Devilish & Crew!!!

Great chapter!!!!!

More when it's ready!!!! And like I said over at FF. Of course real life comes first!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Dark Abyss

Devilish

Read this chapter earlier this afternoon over at FF.

But I still want to leave a positive note for you here!!!!

This is one of my favorite stories and I look forward to each new chapter!!!

Bring on more ASAP!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Torture

Devilish

I loved it!!! Oh god that's bad of me to say!!! But, I f**king loved it!!!!

Next chapter should be very interesting!!!! So much looking forward to it!!!

Post away when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Reality Check

Devilish

WOW!!! That was beyond great!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killer Sentiments

Well there writers, you've got me wondering what will happen now!!!!

That was a tough one to read. Edward & Bella are both going through their own personal hell!!!

Looking forward to reading more!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Deadly Silent

Devilish

No need to worry about the delay. I'm just glad you are all committed to finishing this amazing story!!!!

Charlie must really think Bella is in trouble if he wants Edward to go and talk with her.

Get that Edward over there!!!! STAT!!!!

Great chapter!!!! More when you can please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blazing Suns

Devilish

Commented over at FF but just wanted to leave a small one here too!!!

Fabulous chapter!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Faith

Devilish

Poor Edward & Bella. They were just about to have some real "us time" and of course some one stops the process!!!! Damn that Rosalie!!!!

After the Rosalie sppech at the end, you have me a tad bit scared now as to what Edward is actually going to do in regards to loving Bella!!!

Gret chapter!!!!

Please give Lola my best thoughts and tell her I'll say a few special words for her friend today!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Consumed

Devilish & Crew

You left us hanging there!!!!! Thud!!!! I'm down!!!!

Fabulous chapter. Please tell me you have the next chapter almost ready!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Wicked Angel

Devisish

WOAH!!!!!!!

That was fabulous!!!!! Left me needing to know more. That's for damn sure!!!!

Post the epilogue asap!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Well now!!! You writers fooled me!!!!

Great story and I really hope you all decide to carry forward in the future sometime!!!

Cory

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23675
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Where the Boys Are

A.G.W.

Putting your story on alert so I don't miss any updates!!!!

I'm loving the idea behind this story!!!!

More when you can please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks again Cory.  I had fun writing this and am enjoying the dynamic.  Hope you enjoy the other stories as well~

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Serious Talks Ahead

A.G.W.

Whew, that went well!!!! You had me worried for a second but, all turned out well!!!

Now you've got me wondering where your muse is going to take this story!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Awe...besides having fun writing and making banners for this stuff I have a brood of new stories that will be waiting in the wings for a while, but this one is the next one I plan to finish, simply because it's fun and easy to write and the chapters are short!  I hope you like where I'm going because it will definitely be interesting!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it

A.G.W.

Fabulous chapter!!! I'm excited for Bella & Edward and the baby on the way!!!!

But you've got me worried that Bella telling her job before her parents will end up badly. I hope you prove me wrong!!!

Now your note at the end has me confused. Do you have a new story started here at the Coffee Shop. I looked but couldn't find anything called "Good Sex". Hope you can clear this up for me!!!!

Looking forward to more as always!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

The job knowing first won't be the issue over christmas.  As for the confusion over the note.  This is "Good Sex" its the abbreviated chapter title I use instead of typing out the whole thing.  Sorry for the confusion.  More coming soonish!

A.G.W.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jingle Bells

A Good Witch

Charlie didn't handle that too well at all did he???? Let's hope that turns around soon!!!!

What's next????? Looking forward to more when you post!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

No he didn't, but you're right, he will get on board sooner rather than later.  Next is some Florida "fun" and the lead up to the new sememster starting.  Thanks for the love, as always!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Feels Like New Years in July

A.G.W.

Awe!!!! Great chapter!!!! You've showed in this chapter that they really love each other!!!! (thud - that's me falling to the floor from the love!!!!)

More when it's ready please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

thanks hon, I'm glad you felt the love!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

A.G.W.

Whew!!! That was a bit of a scare there!!!!

But all's well in the end thanks god!!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

THanks I'm glad you enjoyed it and there will be more soon.  Working on it right now! 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: The Best Revenge is Good Sex

A.G.W.

A happy chapter...................I love it!!!!! Well done on Edwards part!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thanks again!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Something Worth Celebrating

A.G.W.

Glad to see in previous reviews that I'm not going crazy and missed posting a comment on chapter 9!!!

Poor Edward. Bella is making his life a little bit crazy right now!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

No, you reviewed 9 but when i reposted it got deleted.  He is going a little batty, but it's worth it and there is another one already up so go have fun!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

A.G.W.

I'm in tears here because I thought their little girl might be in trouble!!!

I can tell from your writing that Edward is pussy whipped about his daughter!!!

Great chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Too Many Opinions

A.G.W.

Damn that Jake had to show up again hey!!!!

Loved that Edward stood up the grandma's!!!! I'm not a mother but, I've watched this happen many times with my friends and their mom and moms-in-law.

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

I promise that's the last of Jake!

Edward did what I've seen friends wish they could do too!

Thanks forr the love~

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Decent Proposal

A.G.W.

Great finale!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Jailbait’s Double Standard

A.G.W.

Sad it's over but loved the story!!!!!

Cory

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195462
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

Greenaway

Just searching for a story to read and came accross yours.

FABULOUS!!!!!

Look forward to more when it's posted!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

Greenaway

Uh oh!!!!!

Please tell me you have the next chapter almost ready!!!! (Cory starts to pace)

You authors sure love the cliff hangers!!!!

Cory

 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

Greenaway

Way to go Bella!!!! She brought out her inner Rambo!!! (two thumbs up)

I hope I'm not alone in thinking that this protective at any cost Edward is hot, hot, hot!!!!! (thud)

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

Greenaway

Great chapter!!!!

Edward is in deep with Bella. Please let his "job" go smoothly!!!!!

Off to read the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power

Greenaway

Fabulous chapter!!!!

Now what journey are you going to take us on???

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

Greenaway

GULP!!! There's a mole in the clan!!!!

That was a real swithch in the story line!!!! You've got me me a wee bit worried right now for Bella!!!!

Thanks for all the updates lately!!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

Greenaway

I didn't breathe through the last half of the chapter!!!! WOAH!!!!

Off to read the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

Greenaway

OK I can breathe again now!!!! Whew!!!

Two tough chapters to get through!!! But I'm loving the story!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

Greenaway

Esme is the mole!!!!!! (Cory's mouth is wide open typing that)

And what a twist to add Charlie!!!!! (two thumbs up!!)

I think you've got quite the force going with Bella & Edward teaming up now!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

Greenaway

Man this story is too damn good!!!!

I'm anxious to know how long it will be before Edward figures out it was Esme that was the mole!!!!

Great chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

Greenaway

Please tell me Bella will win the bet????

Loved that they had such a great talk!!!!

More when you can please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

Greenaway

Loved the washing maching story!!! Pink clothes!!! (hee, hee)

Great ring choice by Bella!!!

The ending has me scared!!!!! That Demetri is certifiably nuts!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Hey Cory!

Yep, as soon as I have done the next one, you guys will have it. My beta Slyt is awesome, she does a really fast turn around!

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

Greenaway

Well it's nice to see Alice all a twitter planning the wedding!!! (hee, hee)

Loved how sly Edward was in the chapter and IMO I think it's a clue as to how Edward will be in the following up coming angsty chapter.

As for how you write your story. Of course that's up to you!!!!! Just remember us readers here need more of the story when you've got it ready!!!!

Cory