Reviews by lmlx8
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

WOW!!! Sick Mother Fucker, isn't he???   Damn ...That's all I can say...

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Wow!! that was not at all what I was expecting...ummm....geez...I don't even know what to say, Dark? that is an understatement, that was like pitch black...I'm glad you got a chapter up, because I missed this little group of brainwashed sicko's... if you don't get up another one ...Have a Merry Christmas....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

he is creepy.. the chapter was good. what ever became of bellas mom..is she off with phil?

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

I knew when Edward left the compound that he was going to see one of those signs. Now what?

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

oh my freaking god...he is one sick puppy. ugh! making me shudder...yuck!  i'm think or rather hoping that is edward coming in the door....

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Geez...Aro is just so ...yucky!....and gross! and Gay ( i knew he had homo in him ) and I was wondering where james was going to come into the story. I knew he had to be lurking around there some place ...ok waiting to see what happens, because that is all I can do...thank you ladies for the update...

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

i was so glad to see this update....and they better do something to stop that horrible evil  aro before he really kills someone.....but i guess the mental stress is worse then anything...anyway welcome back ladies and i'm soooooo looking forward to the continuatipn of daddy's little girl....woohoo!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624772
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

wow....i don't even know what to say. i never read a chapter written by a dead person. and i can only suppose her plans for bella aren't going to work out.....great chapter!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

wow...bella got thown in to a world of sickness...on so many fowl levels...

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

holy hell did i say fowl before? i think i meant demented.... did

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

ah he is starting to see bella's true self...not the stepford wife ...sexbot he's trying to create



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311983
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

man o man ...bella is teasing the shit out of him...my edward would give her a spanking for that....lol....good chapter ...for a second i thought maybe bella was having second thoughts about getting married, i don't know exactly why ..but it popped into my head and then it was gone as i kept reading....have a great week sweety. i'll be waiting to see edwards reaction to the picture she sent....it would be sooooo freaking funny if alex or someone else like jasper answered his phone and saw it...lol...i know that's my sick mind....lol...louise



Author's Response:

you are sick...lol.  I wouldn't have it any other way!  Your Edward would have her trussed up with a sore bum by now...absolutely! lol.  Bella never has second thoughts..she's not thrilled with all the attention she'll get...but that's normal for her.  I just finished writing the next LRM...had quite a bit of fun with Edward.  I've said it before...i like him nervous.  Thanks!  I'll be watching for your next update also!  ---Anne aka Emmamama

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Wow!! These two are really getting their groove on...lol..then again it's like the forbidden fruit, one taste and all you want is more....Nice chapter E, they are having a great honeymoon ...thanks for writing..



Author's Response: Thank you! they needs lots and lots of practice..lol. glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

this was a sweet chapter i lol at the peen discussion that is soooo....bella...and it's great that she had someone to hang out with....btw..thanks for the rec...i didn't get to read because i didn't recieve an update notice...because stupid me was so busy reading your story i never added to favorites...i know what the f was i thinking....i got ya now though......on to the next chapter..... t



Author's Response:

Thank you!  i've been writing so much..my brain hurts.  i've been enjoying the heck out of your story! i need to go back and review the chapters I haven't done yet.  Glad you're enjoying mine too!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

holy hell...that was great and sooooo fitting withthe story and the characters.....great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

i think you hit it dead on....sweet, romantic and loving....



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  I tried!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

i don't know how i missed the update except to say that my e-mail was messed up....stupid bella should have called the hospital to check on him ..or one of the other officers.....silly girl....thanks for the update.....



Author's Response:

thanks!  i think TWCS had a wonky day last week.  Fanfic has entire wonky weeks. lol. 

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

ok...now you have me waiting to see what is going to happen and i cant wait to hear bella's thoughts...good chapter...



Author's Response:

THanks! next one up now.

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

ohhh...poor bella...first victor james terrifies her and now they want her on oprah.....lol...great chapter and btw congrats on your nominations...i'm sure you were as excited as i was....dang who would have thought...(at least that's how i felt....



Author's Response:

i was surprised too...makes all the hard work worthwhile when you know people are enjoying it.  Thanks so much!  I've been having a hell of a good time reading your fic .  until next time...

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

Hey Sweety.. The wedding is getting closer...and Mr James just will not leave well enough alone (such a prick) Great chapter and it makes me wonder what else is going to happen with the week leading up to the wedding...On a personal note. I feel for you with mother nature - she can be a tough one when she gets angry...but i'm glad that everything worked out ..we are still sorting through water soaked boxes from the basement, i'm of the mind to just throw everything out and start over ((all except for Christmas Ornaments...those are 30 years of irreplacable memories) ...have a good week...louise

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Empire Builder to the Windy City

i adore your edward he is soooooo sweet....thanks for the update it was great



Author's Response:

Thank you! for taking the time to review...I'm horrible because I've been reading yours like crazy but owe you a slew of reviews.  I wouldn't be opposed to your Edward punishing me for that.  :D