Reviews by Bakergirl24
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

Holy Hell!!! Can I just say that I hope Mom is induring this also. She deserves it for being so fucking stupid!!!! Who the hell packs up and moves in less than 24 hours. Good god, I can't wait until the next chapter. How sick does that make me????

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

Holy Hell 5 weeks. Wow. Wonder what mom has been doing for the last 5 weeks. I'm betting life isn't much easier for her either. What have they gotten themselves into. Can't wait for the nect chapter. Thank you for sharing. Take care and be safe. Bg24

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

OMR!!!! I was wondering what happened to Carlisle to make him believe in the ways of that psycho. Now I realize he was completely broken and once sanity came back it was obligation that kept him there.

 

I can't believe you teased us with this chapter. We all needed this info but you are making us wait another week to hear about the little road trip that Edward took and finding out what happened to Bella. Will she be coming back? What are they doing to her? Better yet....who is doing it???? Is Carlise going to take his family and make a break for it? Is Fleix's guilt going to consume him to the point that he tells Charlie everything? It might work out to where he has outside help and inside help.

 

But somehow, with the way your two twisted minds are....I doubt it. LMAO. Thanks for sharing your twisted tale with us. Until next update. Be safe and take care. Peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I'm not real sure I find Aro hysterical. Maybe someone I would like to punch in the face. I gotta hand it to you. I am beginning to hate him as much as I did James in The Training School. I didn't think that would ever happen. Thanks for the chapter. Take care and be safe. Peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Haha. I love the questions. Good points. Can I just say that the two of you are a twisted pair. I'm trying to figure out where US the readers fit into this. WE are afterall reading it. So, I guess that makes us just as twisted as the two of you. :)

 

Do I smell disfunction in the ranks now? If I were Carlisle....I would hang father up by his nuts. With the two of you....that might be a possibility. Haha. I hope whatever happens to him that it is good and very long.

 

I really hope father isn't into watching Eilzabeth sleep. If that is the case the cat is going to be out of the bag soon. I would hate to see what he would do to her then. As far as her and Edward....I hope they will be like Carlise and Esme. The draw to each other is already there. God you got to get them out of there though. I can't get into the habit of calling Bella Elizabeth. That is just weird. :)

 

Thanks for sharing your twisted story with us. Take care, be safe, peace, and love. T.

 

 

 

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Holy fuck. Father is a twisted piece of work. Good thing she didn't have sex with someone. Wonder what would have happened then.

 

So Bella saw her Mom. Question is....Did Phil see recognition in Bella's eyes? If he did will he say something to Aro? I guess it didn't register that it was her mother but she did feel like she knew her and she hasn't seen her face yet. Is Renee as far gone as Aro said she was. When she finally sees Bella will she know that that is her daughter?

 

Thanks for sharing your twisted, fucked up tale with us. Take care, be safe, and peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Follow FELIX!!!! Holy Shit!!! Haha. Your killing us smalls, your killing us!!! I love it. If and when he finds them he needs to smack Renee. He is on leave and not a cop at the moment. LMAO. Thanks for sharing. I cannot wait for the next chapter. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

Happy Belated Anniversary. I'm still trying to figure out how I missed that the first time??? Ten years? That's great!!! I've been married to the same man for a little over 26 years now. It's not so bad. I did tell you he is pretty much comatose ddn't I?? I kid, I kid. Surprisingly we are both still alive and fully functional. I'm not so sure about our mental state? But hey...not everything is perfect. LMAO.

 

I was so relieved that Father was not having sex with these women. Not that what he is doing is right by all means. But geez....even the thought. Ick....I will say the whole dagger at the throat thing was a little much.

 

I really hope Charlie finds them before Bella looses her shit and everyone knows that her memory is back. That will be bad for Edward and his family.

 

Thank you for sharing your twisted tale with us. Take care, be safe, and peace. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Woo whoo we are lucky this week. Two chapters. Wow. I have to say when I read the first three words I had to do a double take to make sure it was the story I thought it was. LMAO. I thought there was a mix up.

 

So Felix is ex-military. I wondered where he had been. There had been no mention of him lately. My bigger question is...what the hell did he write on that note to Charlie??? Is it an address or Stop looking for here. Or...Stop looking...danger ahead. OR better yet. Aro is a nutcase. :)

 

Great chapter. Thank you for sharing your story with us. Take care and be safe in all your travels. Peace and love. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Am I missing something? New Site? I am not a writer I'm just an addicted reader. Soooooo.........

 

Seriously...subordinate? I would like to show Aro a couple of new places to put that instrument. What an ass!!!!

 

I saw a line that said....."Remember, we will be watching. There are eyes everywhere." Is there house bugged? How does he know that Jasper has been visiting? What else does he know? Has Aro been drinking the Kool-aid?

 

OMG!!! I can't believe that Jane is sending Edward to pick up Alex. Will he see Felix or Charlie while he is there? What happens if Charlie shows him a pic of Bella? What happens if someone puts up a pic of Bella and it is listed as a missing person? Good lord. Maybe Felix, and Charlie will help them escape and together they will all bring Nut job Aro down.

 

Thanks for sharing your wonderful, twisted story with us. Take care and be safe in all your travels. Peace and love. T.

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Holy shit. Not only is Father Aro completely mental he is a Dom wanna be. Please tell us that was Edward busting down the door. Maybe we will get lucky and they will chain Father Aro's ass to the cross and beat the shit out of him. Great chapter. I can't wait until the next update. Thanks for sharing. Take care, be safe, and peace. T.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514106
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Oh my!!!! Where oh where is James. That is the question!!!!

Now that Aro knows...what will he do. I think James should think seriously about moving to another country. I can't wait to see what they do to him once they get there hands on him.

Thank you for sharing your twisted tale with us. Take care and be safe. BG24

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Where oh where is James????? Will we ever find him?

 

Great chapter, I can't believe jacob has been a cook for Carlisle all this time!!! In all his snooping he did not find Bella? Wow, some cop he is. hehe.

 

I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing. take care and be safe. Bg24

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Oh shit. I totally forgot about the microchip!!!! What the hell does Aro have to do with all of this? There is alot more to this than we all know. Unless Aro is being taken for a ride also. I remember the phone call he had with Carlisle. He said that they had both been played. I hope they find Bella and Victoria soon. Bella just needs to bite his dick off the next time he shoves it in her mouth.  I' not sure Victoria has it in her to put up a fight.

 

Wow, thanks for sharing. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Take care and be safe. BG24

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624459
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

OMR!!! He is not taking her away from Edward is he. Edward will not let that happen. He can't. I'm hoping the boys don't either. I think it is time to bury Carlisle in the garden. I can't wait until the next chapter. Thank you for sharing. Take care and be safe. BG24

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36877
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh hell, that was short and sweet!!! I wondered where he had been. I was beginning to really hate him for not calling her back. Chief Swan has issues that he needs to work out. By the way...I hope Edward does not decide to take care of those babies anytime soon. Not with Sir Swan stalking him. That could be bad!!!

 

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Thank you for sharing. Take care and be safe. Bg24

Summary:

Bella and Alice, excited from reading DefinatelyStaying’s delicious lemony fanfics, tease each other over a web cam. What happens when Jasper comes to investigate the noises? collaboration with Definently Staying

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Alice, Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2246 Read Count: 1990
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha, Don't we all!!! That was hot!!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143204
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Wahaha.....There is no such thing as bad advertising. LMAO. Yeah, I was wondering what the hell happened to you. Luckily I found out you were on here. Glad you found a spot to settle that won't give you the boot for your naughty little story.

 

You kinda freaked me out for a moment. I thought you were close to ending it. I will say....two chapters with no sex? Five years? Oh and Edward without a suit? What is up with all of that? Is the old Edward still hiding in there or has he had a lobotomy and this is the new and slightly improved Edward? Maybe he is delivering her take out. LOL.

 

Thanks for sharing your wicked little story with us. Take care and peace. I seriously can't wait for the next update. T.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Great Chapter Jada. He has her all kinds of messed up. Is she terrified to remember the old him? The old him she saw in pictures and in video? That is the reason why she ended it. She was starting to have feelings for him. For the old him. That is what I got out of it. The guy at the party...I think the reason why she didn't have sex with him was more because it wasn't Edward. Not because it wasn't rough enough. Deep down inside I think that is what she is afraid of. Afraid of letting go.

 

I am curious....What has Edward been up to? Are things better between him and his family? Did Alice tell him about the Bella they know? What does he do now? Does he still hold the same position in life or does he deliver pizza's. Ha ha. At first I thought Bella was one of many...Why do I think now that is not the case? Or was she and he has already said his peace to them? What made her so special if she was the only one?

 

Anyway thanks for sharing your twisted tale with us. Take care and peace. T.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 262605
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights

Good afternoon ladies I hope all is well. What a really good chapter. With everyone they become more and more of a family. Sooner or later they will all be living in that house permanently. Or at least I hope anyways. :) Bella took the whole No Santa thing in stride. Thank god. Nothing like squashing a dream when you're already on the ropes. She does seem to be recovering nicely.

 

On Rose, what a bitch. I can't believe a parent would let their child behave that way and encourage it. Didn't they stop to think what it would do to that person later in life or anyone they came into contact with. I don't think she is going to go away easily.

 

I do wonder what Alice is going to say about the picture. I also found it interesting that all of the photos contained the significant other or family members. Everyone but Emmett's that is. You have a bitch alert for the next chapter, I can't help think that it will be Rose. I wonder if she is going to pitch a fit about the picture? I hope she doesn't destroy it.Or bring a date for Edward. That would be uncomfortable for everyone.

 

Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 22 of His Cimmerian View.  There aren’t a lot of questions about things going on, other than the arrival of Uncle Harry and of course Sue’s return.  The story only has roughly 10 to 12 chapters left and through 26 are written and 27 is more than half way completed.  BPOV out-take is coming along nicely but man alive is it HUGE over 22K word count right now and it is for sure a tissue warning.  As for the few questions we have gotten, we have answers... We want to be clear that Emmett filed a paper that is giving Bella custody until the court hearing so right now no one can take the twins away from her, without first going to court.  We also had someone ask about the title of the story over at TWCS, it is the same as it is at FFN... however at TWCS I have found it is easier to look up the author and then find the story, the story search is not super simple like it is at FFN.  We are the same names both author name and story name at all sites we post at.  On a side and personal note, I am very sorry for the delay of this... after I posted the last chapters on Thursday morning, my mother passed away.  Unless something gets in the way the only thing that will be delayed is this review reply.  The next chapter is ready to go... minus mine and Nikky’s final read through anyway.  I want to thank you all for the kind words shared on Facebook already and thank you for the prayers and well wishes.  If you haven’t joined us on Facebook, please do so there are lots of fun discussions and of course sometimes extra teasers and info too.  Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Thanks everyone have a great week.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 23: teaser subject to changes during beta process…

It’s New Year Eve and the twin’s eighth birthday.  Seth and Leah shared a party yesterday at Chuck E. Cheese and they loved it.  Esme, Chas, and Angela all took the day off and came to help out at the party.  Aro brought Sulpicia and their son, Sammy, who is ten.  Sammy seemed to have taken a liking to Leah, as he stayed mainly with her the entire time. Esme and Zafrina both said it was cute and sweet, but all I wanted to do was kill the kid.  Bella even laughed at me and gave me a look when I let out a growl at little Sammy when he pulled Leah away while she was talking to us. I looked back at Bella and shrugged my shoulders, because I wasn’t really sure where the over-protectiveness came from.

Then there were the moms or whores as I call them.  I got hit on a lot.  Almost every mother of a child that had been invited was dressed like they were having a night out on the town, not taking their child to a classmate’s birthday party.  Some even said that I was really nice to help Bella and her kids out like I have been.  I felt like I was going to lose it as they made her sound so beneath them and that she was simply a charity case.  Thankfully, Bella kept me calm and stopped me from screaming at them.  As soon as school is back in session, I’ll be making it very clear to everyone what Bella and I are to each other. The fact that this was a place for children, and that it was Seth and Leah’s first real birthday party, stopped me from performing a very hot, public display of affection with Bella.  I know for a fact I would have enjoyed it, and I’m sure I would have made Bella enjoy it, too.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1813047
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Important tip....DO NOT hit add story to faves without sending your review first. Fuck a duck.

 

Good morning ladies, I hope all is well today. I hope ff.net gets their shit worked out today. LOL.

 

Since I can't copy and paste on this site, I know, WTF? I have to do it the long way...."Alice, fuck knows what I am doing, but he is some sort of a temple and I want to worship him. Hit me hard-so I stop staring at him." LMAO, Thats what are friends for. Ha ha.

 

I have never asked a friend to harm me. I have asked my husband to before. Sadly the only time he wants to do it is when we have our clothes on. Not exactly what I had in mind but oh well. OH, I guess I should point out that it is all in fun.LOL. I'm pretty sure if it ever came down to it I could kick his ass if I had to. LOL.

 

Name for Bella......Bootylious Belladonna or Succulent Swan. Both of those are a mouthful. Hell, I don't know. ;)

 

Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601035
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Meeting

Lets get this party started. Daddy has nothing to worry about now. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.



Author's Response:

The party is getting ready to happen...

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think James is going to be an issue. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace.T.

Summary: Past Featured Story

devil

Some people will stay in your heart even after they leave this earth. It's getting them to remember that's the problem. Devilward. Quick read.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12685 Read Count: 8733
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2016 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Rut Row. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, he made it seem easy. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh damn. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, we get to meet Alice. Betting Jasper is going to want her. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It will really freak Bella out if that information shows up at her house. That lady doesn't even know her name much less where she lives. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm assuming Bella had EVERYTHING to do with that storm. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wonder why she never married? Also is she some sort of shield? Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well where is he going? Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Guessing her father killed her instead. Thanks for sharing. Peace. T.

Summary:

Arbitratrix Diaboli Banner

A 3-Shot. Three short stories that tie together to tell you about the Devil’s Mistress and her eternal life as the first night creature. Despite her many creations and lovers, none were worthy enough to stay…except one. Dark Vampella & eventual Dark Vampward. Rated M for non-canon/canon lemons, blood/dark themes. AU. B&E POVs. Separate summaries for each shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26452 Read Count: 2035
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2016 Updated: 27 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Devil's Mistress

Interesting start. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I hope to see you back for the next chapter! 

-K