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Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 29887
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: ctinaw Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I absolutely loved this story.  It makes me so wish that I could book a stay at Adesse Olympus (or something very much like it.)  Which is huge, since I'm not an outdoors person at all.  I kept getting hungry while reading the story listening to all the wonderful seafood and other delicacies.  

You seem to do a really good job with the grammar of the story (at least I didn't see anything that was cringe worthy) and really only need to find someone to do an extra read through of the story to check the flow and placement of words.  I'd love to offer services, but I'm not an author and likely wouldn't be too much help.

I can't wait to read more of your stories.  This was just so well thought out and written.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words.  I too, would love to stay there.  :P

I'm working on another story right now I hope will be equally good.  Keep checking on me.  Thank you again.  You make it all worth while.  

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 153]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20274
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: ctinaw Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper

I am enjoying reading the story, but you might want to spend a bit more time proofreading the chapters.  It might help with the flow of your story more.