Reviews by Emo585
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Very interesting

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Omg more soon plz

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514585
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

THis Story is really good i need more!



Author's Response:

ha ha ha ha.. why thank you, that is a nice compliment.. and yes we are working on it.. but might be another week off, sorry Footroza is just finishing up her masters in the next 9 days.. I am counting down.. and we want the last chapter to be spectacular.. not rushed.. but it is planned out.. so once we get going with it.. it won't take long to put together.. we can write a chapter in a few hours.. LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43561
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Absolutly a great story

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner for TFICF

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

Damn!!! you know exactly how to write such Adventures in the bedroom... ;-)

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

NO no no no nooooo.....

Just started reading this last night and im sad to have already caught up....

more soon plz

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 21077
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is the best geek/nerd and popular/beautiful/handsome type if story I've read keep it up

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What!?!??? Omg amazing and damn you Rosalie

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Where are you I want more



Author's Response:

Hey Emo585! Thanks for reviewing! I kinda forgot about posting here, so you'll get two updates at once!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yay!!! You recently added and it was great!

Summary:


Everyone is human. Bella lived in Phoenix with her mom and Phil, she was a rebel - in trouble with the police, never going to class, getting wasted and dong drugs. After one final 'incident' Bellas' mom decided to send her to stay with her father in the tiny town of Forks. Bellas' boyfriend (Jasper) and his twin sister, who is also Bellas' best friend (Rose) decide to move with her and take over Forks. Bellas' aim is to cause as much trouble in the little town as she can. But when she runs into The Cullens, things become complicated. Will Bella and Jaspers' relationship survive when Bella comes face to face with gorgeous bad-boy Edward? And will he and his family help her in her quest for excitement in Forks, or change her life forever?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51788 Read Count: 2443
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 17 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Wankward Returns EPOV

I absolutly
love this story
CONTINUE. asap PLZ!!!!!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Wild Nights! - BPOV

Oh man already Alice is swooning over Jasper turn her lesbo quick! Lmao

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Fix it - RPOV

:-/ oh no don't be sad jazzy! And Rosalie is the peacemaker how cute!

Author's Response:

Love Rosie!

She was acting peacemaker, but she also wasn't that nice to Bella, really, the way she was doubting Bella (Rightfully so) and asking Emmett to tell on her ...

I know right! Poor Jazz!!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Confessions - BPOV

Aww that's so sweet!!!

Author's Response:

Em and Bella are cute, aren't they?! :)

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is super duper adorable!!!!


Continue! I am a devoted reader now

Author's Response:

Awesome news Emo....Thanks !

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Obsession

GOod

Author's Response:

Thanks you again !!! Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Bantering with Carlisle

Adorable

Author's Response:

Thanks this was one of my favorite chapters to write. That and the one were Bella defends Carlisle's private's...lol. Later, Diane.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad

Awww poor Carlisle! Jasper is one smart man!

Author's Response:

I would have to agree with that.....Jasper will heard from in about three or four more chapters. Thanks for the coffee cups......Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Jasper's Plea for Help

Aww this was a saddening but heartfelt chapter! :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the Review Emo.....I'm trying to get some of the reasons they're like this now in the story. ....Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Experiencing that Cullen Temper

:-0 woah!!!
And what does Carlisle want at four in the morning?

Author's Response:

lol....what do drunk men always want? .... thanks. Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl

Omgoodness

Author's Response:

Hey there Emo....thanks for the coffee. :)  Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!

:-) thanks for all your hard work

Author's Response: Thank You for taking the time to say that. :)

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice

:-( This is a very good story



Author's Response:

Hi Emo, I'm really glad your enjoying it. I always look forward to hearing from you.

 

Thanks for the coffee cups...you know I love em' :) Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex

Does Jasper get raped or molested by James?!

Author's Response:

Things are getting ready to come out about Jasper, sweety. The next chapter I think, not sure without checking my outline first. I think I may have told another reader and I'll tell you as well. I may try to go ahead and post another chapter this week. I am ready for things to start coming out myself. Thank You for always taking the time to read and review for me Emo. It means so much to a first time writer who has started three stories at once and is still trying to get the hang of it all. :) oh and thanks for the coffee, they feel like rewards to me....Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Time to Talk

:'-( what ever you do don't kill off anyone!!!
Please

This is just to good for words

Author's Response:

You are the very first person to ask me not to kill off anyone. I am wondering if that includes James? I am sooooo glad that you like my story. Coffee, You know I'm happy! Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.

I have difficulty reviewing and favoriting this! I have it booked marked on my web browser on my I touch :-)! That does include the cups!



Just know I'm always reading and anxious for more!

Author's Response:

I have an iphone and I can hardly get my fingers on the correct letters. Thank You for letting me know you are anxious and reading. Those kind of comments keep me going. Take Care Emo. MMMM that coffee is good...lol. :)

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Plan in Action

NO!!!!!! Why noooooo I don't want him gone! :'-/

Author's Response:

There has to be drama darlin'. Carlisle is the lead hottie after all. ;0)  Thanks for the coffee, always...Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Total Confusion

Oh dear please let him make it!!!!



Go alice

Author's Response:

Hi Emo....Alice saved her man! thanks as always for the review and coffee...:)  Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 What’s Happening?

Oh my!!

Yay carlisle is alive yay

Twins shoo hoo

It's ok they'll make it out. No harm. No charge

Author's Response:

HI Emo...I wouldn't want to kill off Carlisle. I believe in HEA'ers...They wont be going through to much more now. They will have to face the legal system though. Then it will be time to wrap their story up.(along with James) I think I might cry myself at that point. Twins, yes, they run in that family and I thought it only right that Carlisle and Bella have them. I believe he would make a great dad because of the way he loves and respects his mother. Plus Bella seems to see the playful and loving side of him. Daughters would definitely wrap him around their little fingers.

Thanks for the coffee, it always smells good. Also for believing in this story and myself as a new writer. :) Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella and Alice

:'-)
Sniff sniff I'm sohappy
This chapter made me tear up

Author's Response:

:) Thank You Emo. I was wondering where you had gotten to. I guess whenever they changed this site around it messed things up. I found the reviews I was missing in my bulk mail. Take Care and I'll be hoping to hear from you next chapter.

-Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 First Jail Then Bail

Great addition to the story but I did get confused at the end with Jasper walking in what went on there

Author's Response:

Oh it dawned on Carlisle whenever Bella called him a caveman, he remembered cave. When he said cave to Jasper he understood as well. They both remembered a cave where they used to live, and thats where they think their mother is. :)

Thanks for the coffee Emo I always love hearing from you.

 

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 The Cave

Serves home right to die that way sick bastard!

Author's Response:

LOL...I would have to agree with you on that Emo! Love the coffee. Sorry my last chapter seems like it is going to be a day or two late. :) Coffee is so good girl, thank you....Diane

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle and Bella have been best friends from diapers up. But Carlisle's parents have strong beliefs and Bella doesn't fit into their plans. They step in and seperate the two just after they have started to figure out their true feelings for each other. Lots of hurt.

Special Thanks to Moonlit Wishes for the awesome banner she made for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33882 Read Count: 11585
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 10 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: I Can't Take Anymore

Carlisle parents are dueche

Author's Response:

Yeah, but their trying to save their children's souls....Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Letter

Wow

Author's Response:

Wow works for me...lol....thanks for the coffee...Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Hospital

awww!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks !

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: This is Best for Bella

:-( this was heart breaking

Author's Response:

Yep...I felt bad for even making him cry... I love me some Carlisle.....thanks for the coffee, Diane

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: It's Just Like Lunch...With More Food

Hurry up anther entry soon please

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: What a Tangled Web We Weave When First We Practice to Deceive

UPdate asap

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!!!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I'm Ready... Right?

Omg!!!!! How did this happen

Second Chance by Louise Clark Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Months after the Volturi have left, there's no denying Emmett and Rosalie's marriage is on the rocks. They have grown distant because of the time she spends with Nessie. Or has someone else drawn her away?

The Cullens, sans Nessie and Rosalie, help the Quileutes with a fundraiser held on their lands. Emmett meets someone. After all, he's a natural flirt.

A second chance at love presents itself, but will he take it? Will she take hers?

Is it possible Emmett and Rosalie never were each other's true mate? 

 

photo from Twilght Eclipse and quote

 

The entire story is written in Emmett's POV. It is AU/Vamp, post-Breaking Dawn, so the story begins in late summer 2007.


Rated NC-17 for cursing and lemons. (There is not a lemon in every chapter.)

Warning: This may be difficult to read if you're a Rosalie/Emmett canon purist!

Disclaimer: I am not affiliated with or related to Stephenie Meyer, she alone owns the Twilight saga. I am just a huge fan and this story is my personal dream influenced by her characters. I am also not affiliated with or related to anyone employed by Little, Brown, and Company OR Summit Entertainment.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Since I DO own this story, please do not copy, translate, plagiarize, duplicate, or misuse my work in any way.

Thank you.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95104 Read Count: 6691
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 23 May 2013
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Oh my goodness

Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you! Woot Woot!

I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

You're the first to give me coffee cups, too!! Thank you!!

I love having a review and a rating, this is wonderful for a novice. It means more than words can say.


On that note, I'm pleased to say that the next chapter will be up soon! :)

 

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Second Chance

Poor Rosalie... I know she is bitch but with good reason... And who's sexier then emmett ?

Author's Response:

Ha ha, yeah, you're right, Emo585, she is a bee-yotch! LOL Can't wait for your response in just a couple more chapters. Cuz something is gonna happen and hopefully your jaw will drop!

Oh, and the only person sexier than Emmett would be his on-screen counterpart, Kellan Lutz!! He is soooo daaayummmmmm fiiiiine!!

Thank you so much for reviewing and rating!! xoxo

Kellan at Eclipse L.A. premiere

 

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Great job

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wonderful

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

What propositions -_-


Jerky people with money

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Aww update soon please

This was so good

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

:-)


No words needed

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

That crack whore :-(

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Love

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Oh yea

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42786
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Triggers

Sorry i didn't review the chapters before! But I just wanted to say this is real good keep it up please!!
Oh and the banner I know you didn't do it! But are you sure the "Edward and Bella" (her in yellow) is them something looks off for both people!

Author's Response:

i love any reviews i get, so thanks bunches!  i'm glad you like it!  the pic in the banner is from the Eclipse movie.  it's the end scene where they are in the meadow.  thanks again for the review!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Volturri have departed and life goes on for the Cullens and the pack. Renesme is growing up and Jacob is growing deeper and deeper in love. Their love is magical, but how with the magical world respond to it. What happens when Nahuel returns to fight for his percieved destiny? And can the Volturi survive a betrayal and a parting that will ally some with the Cullens and make others forever their enemies?

 I have the best Beta- daring2believe...You rock girl!

Thank you Moonlit-Dreams for the amazing banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50993 Read Count: 2294
[Report This] Published: 26 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Tribe-Chapter 1

What an amazing first chapter I will be reading chapter two asap! I'm now sleepy :-)!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I have really connected with the characters and wanted the story to continue. It's my first fan-fic. I hope you continue to enjoy it. I have several chapters ready so will be updating as regularly as I can.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome Home-Chapter 2

I didn't understand last paragraph

Author's Response:

Jake feels that Nessie is his home. In her arms he feels most at home.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Visions and Dreams-Chapter 3

Oh wow this is new and original in all my Nessie readings! Keep it up

Author's Response:

Thankis I am so glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Transmutation-Chapter 4

I think it could come in handy! But if she seen Claire get hurt after she was hurt it could also become a distraction!
Is this what I'm sensing?!

Author's Response:

Well, not exactly, but if she only sees the danger after something has happened... Duh Duh Duh! (Cue the danger music)

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Imprint 101-Chapter 5

Adorable addition to your story!

Author's Response:

Thank you. We are heading into the Jake/Nessie relatioonship mode for a while. Enjoy.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Coupled Off-Chapter 6

I think shell be super pissed when he confess's
Cuz he could have saved her from wondering deeply even with this talk

Author's Response:

oh yeah, there are some misunderstandings coming.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Growth-Chapter 7

Fathers!!!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Heads Up-Chapter 8

:-)
Aww super mushy bromance!

Author's Response:

I have always thought that w/o the complication of Bella they would be freinds.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Crossed Wires-Chapter 9

:-)'yay now when does mr nahuel come to run the happy happy

Author's Response:

Soon... young Paduin soon!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Through Space and Time- Chapter 10

Nahuel -_-

Author's Response:

Patience, he is coming, but perhaps not as you will expect.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream- Chapter 11

What's going on!!

Author's Response:

Little cliffy. It will soon be explained. Hang in there with me, please.

 

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Sunshine Can Burn-Chapter 12

Freaking Caius!!!
And I can't wait for a Jake vs Nahuel throw down!

Yay yay!

Author's Response:

I am thrilled you are enjoying it, but you will have to wait for a while for that throw down. Please keep telling me what you think.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Whisper in My Ear-Chapter 13

Oh no!!!! In need of another chappie!

Author's Response:

I am writing as fast as I can. Keep reviewing and I swear I'll write even faster.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Science Sucks-Chapter 14

Don't worry take your time! I love this story! :-) and I need pictures of nahuel and gwen so I can put a face on these characters :-)


No more dying wolves please definatly the clearwaters

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Relationship advice-Chapter 15

:-) aww how adorable

Shove that in nahuels face and make him eat it

Author's Response:

EXACTLY.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Kisses and Committments-Chapter 16

What did bag homewrecker message over to her?!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Where-so-ever I May Go-Chapter 17

Oh my dude we need more lol

Author's Response:

I am working on thenext update, it is just a hair slow... Want it perfect for ya.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Heart Knows-Chapter 18

:-0 let's see how this plays out

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blood and Fear-Chapter 19

Burry Jake Nessie needs you!

Poor demetri

And ha nahuel what a bafoon

Author's Response:

I know, ooe Demitri; glad you think Nahuel deserved what he got. Hold onto your hat; resuce mission coming up soon.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Mountain Vistas-Chapter 20

Sorry I havent been free... School and all but nice chapter!

Author's Response:

Things here have been busy as well, I do hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/12/images/ForTheLoveOfMyObsession.jpg

He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow this is a story!
I love this plot

Author's Response:

Thanks

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106920
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Interesting

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

stories/34076/images/TrueHeartsBanner.jpg      Banner By: Rachel MS

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28908
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's totally wierd that I've read Charlie/ Tanya stories and this is completely epic


This is truely a one of a kind cuz this is the shit!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks i wanted to write something completely new and fun... I don't hate tonya, but she isn't one of my favorites. Kate on the other hand is a pistol, and i love her. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 13. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 14. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 14

JPOV

Next fuckin’ thing I know the lil fucker’s up here and in my girl’s room. He’s runnin’ away from a girl vampire like the true pussy he really is. He must’ve pushed his way past Irina to get his sorry no good fuckin’ elfin ass up here. 

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Embellishment by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

 

Bella and Alice are on an extended visit to Australia. A combination of homesickness and patriotism see them meeting up with some U.S. Military forces personnel on shore leave. An overheard conversation, a little deception, can all be forgiven?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8905 Read Count: 497
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2010 Updated: 19 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Embellishment

oh my this is good!

Hey, It's Me by Jay Beena Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

leah

A Leah story, where the characters are different from the saga. Follows Leah, through my interpretation of her, as shes faced with many obstacles and searches for her "it." Story is better than the summary. Read, Review, and Enjoy!


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54396 Read Count: 1057
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Pizza Healing

Great story

Author's Response:

thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204486
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awww :'-)

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71698
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interested in reading more!!!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lol love it

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

:-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144512
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lmao

Gooooood story

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  There's a lot more fun coming your way!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Lmao


Hahahahahahahaaaaaa

Author's Response:

I take it you liked Edward's drink.  

Especially for you:

Edward's Screaming Orgasm

1 ounce Vodka

1.5 ounces Bailey's Irish Cream

1 ounce Kahlua

Shake, pour over ice, enjoy!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Lmao this is pure genius :-)

Author's Response:

Aww...that's sweet!  Thanks!  XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 58983
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul

I like how it's modern but still old fashion cuz I'm not aware of these houses for hiding pregnant teens anymore

Author's Response:

Its set during 2009 to present. I dont recall them having them anymore, but for purposes of the story it is... Ty for the review

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Common Thread

Keep it coming I'll love to keep reading

Author's Response:

next chapter is coming on wed... and we get to meet edward

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

Woooo bastard got beat and kissyface wit Edward yum

Author's Response:

ty for ur review...

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings

I'm going to say this for everyone... Edward Cullen can see my hooha any day at any given moment

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

Bi at ch

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

:-( sadly this is something that hit home

Author's Response:

so sorry. ive seen family  struggle with loss of achild and it something that changes people even after 35 years. thank you for your review

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Life goes on

Good addition...

On the 28th it would be the third year anniversary of the loss of my nephew. He was miscarried at 4 months my sister had no clue she showed no signs of pregnancy it was a shock to everyone. She got to name him, Gabriel Alejandro. It Was and still is a hard time. Our extended family made it a horrible time, but define family anyway.

Author's Response:

sorry for the loss your sister and family have gone through. My mother had a stillborn in 1975. It was her first. My sister lost a child at 12 weeks gestation. It still affects them greatly. thankyou so much for your review

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hahahahahahaha I am embarrassed for Bella but she got a little feisty at the end so all is well

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start

Author's Response:

Summary:

Stephan has lived the lifestyle of a Dominant for five years. After several rebellious teenage years, it gave him the stability and control he had been seeking after his parent’s death.

As president of a not-for-profit foundation, he knows what his future holds and what he wants out of life. All that changes when a simple lunch with his college friend and Mentor, Daren, leads him to buying a slave.

Thrust into a situation he never thought he’d be in, Stephan can’t walk away. He is compelled to help this girl in the only way he knows how.

Brianna knows only one thing, she is a slave. She has nothing. She is nothing.

Can Stephan help Brianna realize that she is much more than just a Slave?

 Slave Book Cover


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1571 Read Count: 689
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 21 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This caught my attention! Can't wait for more and who knows maybe I'll send for the book!

Author's Response:

If you interested in more general information about the series, you can visit my blog at www.findingannaseries.blogspot.com.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Departing

Waiting and wishing for more!

Author's Response:

The next chapter will be up next Saturday or Sunday. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Apologising

such a great addition

Author's Response:

Thank you!
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing

cutting out the jackasses! score!!!!

Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

 

KK

 

Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Dates & Discussions

lol it was very hard

Author's Response:

Hey there! (waves)

Thanks for the review. Sniggers. When I sent that to my beta I put author sniggers and her comment back was beta snorts and chuckles - I know exactly the line you are referring to. I almost left my comment on!

Hope you are enjoying this, it will be a bit of a rollercoaster ride for these two and I have LOTS more written already (with the beta) so please do stick with me, and thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Lou x x 

Summary:

Nerdy, studious Bella has a boyfriend... but nobody believes her.  They  all think she made him up, and give her hell for it.  Then, Edward is made aware of the situation...

Inspired by the song "Landing in London" by 3 Doors Down


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8222 Read Count: 3406
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lmAo f u lauren